We Can Be The Best!#2 COMPLETED (18thNOV) - Page 32

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Posted: 13 years ago
very very happy that you finally updated this...sunshine was very good too...
now can you please update and finish the other 3 ffs of yours...i just love all of them and have been waiting eagerly for their updates.
we can be the best...
fate...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally thank you for the update 😊
maya and sonny married great 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u di 4 update. Hav missed WCBB very much.
Lovely update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb part
Loved the way Maaneet repaid Sonny for his kindness
Geet is surely next in line
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shruti 🤗...thank u for the lovely update...glad u are updating this FF again... Sonny and Maya are together now...waiting for Maaneet wedding now...plz continue...TC 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, beautiful part
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 40

Maaneet finally became one, as Maan applied Sindoor on her forehead she closed her eyes with delight and as his fingers traced the back of her neck while clasping the Mangalsutra she shivered, his fingers rested a way too much, NT smiled an patted his elbow and pulled his ear lightly, Geet blushed being caught enjoying his touch after so long. When the priest asked her to keep her palm in his palm, her toes curled, he gently squeezed her palm and she shivered, Rajji knowing very well what was going teased them making both crimson with embarrassment.

It was night after their reception in Delhi, a much imagined SR, NT made her comfortable on the bed as she sat there with her folded legs hugging her knees, with a long veil covering her face, Myra stood blocking the door, when Maan finally came with Yash, she asked for gift for both NT and herself

My: entry tax

M: what tax? This is my room.

My: was your room, now it is Geet's

M: so she should ask for tax, why you?

NT joined the ladies club

NT: if you want to enter give the tax or you may find some other place to sleep

M: ok, what my sweet bhabhi's want?

NT: let me see, hey Myra have you thought of something

My: no, but tell me think

M: hurry up

NT: what's the hurry, tell us think, hey Yash suggest something

Y: some jewellery

My: no

NT: something unique

Y: some car

NT: no

Y: some dress

My: no

Y: some utility item

NT: no

Maan was getting frustrated.

M: make it fast

My: so desperate

NT: ok seeing your desperation I think, wait hey Myra listen

Then NT whispered something in Myra's ears and she blushed

My: hey Yash Bhai, why don't you leave?

Y: oh, ok Maan all the best and remember what I told you

NT: so Devar ji we want someone to, we mean a living toy for our kids within 9 months

Maan gave them a confused look

My: remember in 9 months

M: but what?

NT (hitting his arm): ask her she will tell

My: go, all the best and don't scare her

NT: or don't get scared by her her

Both laughed and he blushed hard entering the room

so another update.. what do you think the ladies asked for😳

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part41 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/48719751
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Super sweet part.
Maan was so restless
The bhabhis are so sweet
Its better if Maan really gets to work right away.
So that their baby can join the other kids
Waiting for the next part

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