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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi All,
As promised, here is the next part.
I am going to type more parts today but will update only when I get my expected number of likes and comments.Please friends, that's what motivate me to give 2 updates in a day.
I will try to reply to most of you this time.
Note: Friends I will try to give you all nice Maaneet story full of maaneet moments but you will have to wait fot it ... that will take time buddies...
Till then please enjoy the progress
--Anu
part 10
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Meanwhile as Geet is waiting for Maan, Dadima visits her

Dadima:"Geet' how are you beta' I hope Maan ne aapse kuch bura bhala to nahi kaha"

"kuch nahi kaha' and that's weird"

"nahi Dadima' unhone kuch bhi aisa nahi kaha'. Aap aram se rahen'"

"Dadima' see beta' now you both are husband and wife so you both need to make this relation a successful one' I know sab itna achanak hua but now you both are married' right'.."

"Ji Dadima"

"Dakhiye Maan ko hum samjhayenge' knowing his nature he may take sometime but app to iss rishte ko badhane kee koshish ker saktee hain'. "

"Ji dadima" Geet thought dadima was right'. She have to try, she just can't give up'.

Geet is waiting in her room for Maan' it is almost 11 at night when Maan comes'He had a peaceful and a productive day

he sees Geet waiting for him'. Just seeing her there in his room, going no where' no fear of her going anywhere a kind of peace runs within him' he takes his cloth and goes to change'..

He takes his laptop and starts working on it "itni raat me aayen hain' abb bhi kaam karenge"

"Maan' who mujhe aapse kuch puchna hai"

"I am busy' baad mein" "its important' please' " "so you think what I am doing is fun" "Nahi, aisa main kaise sooch saktee hoon'. Bass ek baat"

"Kitnee saree baat puchnee hai' what ek baat ek baat ker rahi hai Geet"

"Ok' make it fast" "who'. main puch rahe thee" "can you make it fast please"

"Haan' who who' main jahan job ker rahee hoon'. Is it OK if I continue"

"Its your life, your career, your job' do whatever you want' faltu sawal ke liye mera time kyun waste ker rahee hoo"

He starts looking into his laptop.. "Maan' who' one more thing" "Ohh Really'. How many does your one mean"

"Maan' please" "Maan'.apne mujhse Shadi kyun kee"

"Ohhh' so you need an explaination'. right" Geet doesn't understand what to say

"nahi naa' aisa nahi hai' who achanak"

"kyunkee mujhe achanak laga mujhe tumse shadi karnee hai'. If you had problem then you should have said NO' I did not force you'. Tumse puch ker kiya tha maine'."

"But you don't love me" "Love you??? " he gave a sarcastic smile, making Geet feeling humiliated

"Did I ever claim that I love you when I was proposing you'"

Geet had no words' she felt very humiliated and that was what Maan was intending to do'.

"Now only if you can let me concentrate on my work"

Geet got up with heavy heart to get ready for sleep which she knows is not going to come soon'.

She went to the mirror to straighten her hair' while she was combing her hair' Maan's eyes goes on her back' bare skin as her kurtee is all tied up with just dori at top'. Her hairs aflowing as she is combing them'. She then bands then and starts putting cream on her hand and legs' Maan's eyes is following the direction of her fingers on her skin as they massage her skin'. How easily they are playing with her beautiful skin' Geet then drop one box by mistake which breaks Maan's trance'

He gets irritated with himself, keeps the lapotop aside and doses off to a peacfull sleep'

Geet keeps thinking for hours' and then same as the day befor goes to sleep at around 4 am' so when Maan wakes up he again sees Geet'. Today he only get to see her face' his eyes are trying to find something beyond but Geet has covered herself till neck today'.

He comes out of her and goes back to his daily routine'.. Maan is at peace' today actually he enjoyed the view

"Isme galat he kya hai'. She is my wife, main kyun nahi dekh sakta usse' I have to punish her not myself'. Aise halat hogee Geet tumharee kee tum toot toot ker mere pass aaoogee"

An unknown maddens had taken over his mind'.

Maan leaves after breakfast' Geet was hurt by Maan's word' earlier it didn't hurt that much' but now she was his wife' he had proposed her for marriage' they were husband and wife so his words now gave a different pain to her'.

Geet needs to divert herself' She finds Annie who was at home that day'

With Annie's non stop talk her day flew by'.

It was evening' Maan was actually coming home early today, his work was done for the day' something was just making him eager to come home early'.

Dadima:"Geet bete'. It's one of rarest chance that Maan is coming home today at normal hours'. Apka asar lagta hai"

"Mera asar kitna hai yeh to unhone mujhe kal bata diya" she thinks

Dadima:"Geet' bete aap apne haath se Maan ke liye koi snacks aur coffe kyun nahi banatee'. Dekhiye aisee chijoon ka kya asar hota hai'"

Geet thought of why not give it a try'.. She can try to make Maan happy with her'.

Geet knew Maan's taste'. She made his favorite sandwich for him and his flavor of coffee'

Maan had come and went to his room directly'. His eyes searched for Geet but not finding her waiting for him he got little irritated'.. he loosened his shirt and was relaxing in balcony when he heard her bangels'. A smile formed on his face but as she approached him he made his face straight'. Geet placed the Sandwitch and Coffee on the table and was standing there'..

"who snacks and coffee" she tried to break the silence..

"I can see that'. So why are you standing at the top of my head"

Geet went inside but was watching him eat from within the curtain'. Maan knew Geet was watching him and he was enjoying it "abhi to shuruwa hai Geet"

The moment he was done Geet came to pick up his plate

"Did I call you'. Tumhe koi kaam nahi hai mere piche parne ke alwa'."

"Nahi who aisa nahi hai'. You were done so'."

"so ' so what' send Nakul and leave me alone'. I need some peace"

Geet heart felt heavy again'. A newly married wife, bringing snak for her husband and no compliment' compliment is far away she gets rejection' "this had happened earlier too'.. why its hurning more now" shies Geet'.

She leaves the room'..

Maan had actually relished the snack' he is actually relishing his descision of marraige'. His mind is at peace'. Only thing hauting was the humiliation he had to go thru' he had to bend in front of Geet and for that he had decided to punish her'..

This was astrange kind of stubbornness that had surrounded his mind' not letting him realize the truth'..

"per unhone breakfast banae pe shout to nahi kiya'. I can do that for him'"

So days went by' Geet started doing things for Maan, Maan enjoying her care but returning a humiliation in return by his unusual comments like

"Why don't you stop interfaring'?" etc etc

His works is going on well as he is giving his 100% there'. He continoues his eyes treat with Geet's beauty at night and morning'.. he but is not ready to accept he loves her' he is admant that he hate her for making him do what he never would have done'. He never answer her any question without putting her under humiliation'..

Geet was getting broken from inside'. She kept on trying but was breaking down like a slow poison was making some effect on her

It's Monday, Geet leaves for office that day' she had tried to inform Maan about it but he had just ignored her'. She somewhere was getting suffocated by his ignorance'. In same room, husband and wife and whatever she said she get a reverse answer or no answer or ignorance' she was really happy to rejoin he office'.

Geet had left early as she was an employee and her timing was from 9 am. At breakfast table Maan did not see Geet as she had already left' in these days he was getting used to her attention even if he avoided her'. She had prepared breakfast for him, but today when he took the first bite, he knew it was not made by Geet'.

Dadima observed him

"bete Geet aaj se office rejoin ker rahi hai' apko to pata he hoga'. and her timing starts early to who pehle he chalee gayee' aaj ka breakfast bhi hamare chef ne hee banaya hai'."

"haan bataya hain na Dadima'. I know that'"

He was completely irritated'.

Next to be continued

Part 11

Precap: Geet joins her office

Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome but i don't know why but its really painful eagerly waiting for next update

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great updates.. I just hope he does not break her so much that when he tries to mend the relationship, she could not return the affection.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bhakbhartifan

Great updates.. I just hope he does not break her so much that when he tries to mend the relationship, she could not return the affection.

ya right then it will be impossible to make their relation happy then only there is pain n only pain
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Posted: 13 years ago
both the parts were awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
so superb update
thanks 4 this double
update. can't see when
maan will give up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan acting like a fool. But i love this story. And maan, geet both...nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
nicely written! I hope to see change in Maan though!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
i hate that stupid maan...grrr...😡
poor geet...😭.but
loved the update..
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Edited by mishty..sakii - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesomeee part👏👏
ab aayege maja😆😆
office k bahane hi sahi geet will ignore maan
& she don't hav gone through his stupid humilisation
hey plz can u make maan J. i want to see him J.😍😍

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