FF#TUM KAISI MOHABBAT KARTE HO ch# 26, pg 69, 1/6 - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
nice update
luv premeer scenes
Shub😡 poor heer
thanx 4 PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
awesome update ...
premeer was sooo cute...
waiting for the next part ...
please update soon ...
and thanks for the pm ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi

The part was really really nice... loved it..THANK U😃

hate this shub he wants to stop heer's college study!! bur prem is there so i have no fear.. hehehe..
RIGHT😃

looking forward for the next chapter!!

continue soon!!

thanks for the pm!!

p.s. i m a little busy with my college now a days so wouldnot be able to give long comment...sorry!!😒 NO PROBLEM, I LIKE THIS ONE ALSO😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: repunzell

OHH MYYY GOOODDD!!!!


it soo interestinggg👏!!! REALLY! THANKS

loved the way heer n told talked abt the college thing n the way prem supported her⭐️!!!

best dialogues: prem: mera thanks sunay ka kaan kharab hai soo sweet of himmm👏!!! 😃

i hope thiz shubh doesn't create nay problem😡!!!

and who is at prem's back!!!!


plz plz update soonn!!!!

O.K I TRY . AJJ NAHI TOU KAL PAKKA UPDATE KARUN GI.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: priyahmt

aww...awesome update yaar...👏

prem and heer r so cute ...❤️
this shub...😡
thnx for pm😃
update next part soon...😃

THANK U SOOO MUCH😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_28

nice update
luv premeer scenes
Shub😡 poor heer
thanx 4 PM

THANK U 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Oblivious

awesome update ...

premeer was sooo cute...
waiting for the next part ...
please update soon ...
and thanks for the pm ...

THANKS ALOT TO U😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98

CHAPTER 7 ( U MAKE ME SMILE)



kali turn and saw.
Kali: tum? U idiot jaan se jati abhi main.
Taj (smiles): aacha hota at least is ghar ki news before correct time se pehle tou nahi phelengi. By the way aap batana pasand karengi k ye totally phapha kutni wali aadat tumhari shuru se hai ya kisi se boro ki hai?
Kali: O u shut up. How dare u tum ne mujhe phapha kutni kaha?
Taj: yap! Idhar ki udhar karne k elawa koi or kaam kahan karti ho.
Kali: computer classes jati to hun, college jati hun. Or...
Taj cut sentence: or dosron k persnals ki information collect and likage karna.
Kali angerily: go to hell.
And walk out.
------------------------------------------------ Heer jumping bcoz of lots of happiness. After listening good news that shub's objection is rejected. And now no one can stop heer's educations.
Taj: yeee wohoo dhinka chika dhin. Geo anmol bhaiyya.
Anmol smile and whispering to prem: thanx jani ye sab teri wajah se hua and creadit also urs. Geo prem rathod.
Prem smiling: thanx bhai. (in head) ab dekhna ye hai k shub kiya karta hai?
Anmol shoutly ask: sab set hai?
Chorus reply: set hai ji set hai.
( ye anmol ka makhsus dialouge hai for chearing, conformation and other emotions).
Anmol: bas phir khair hai.
A tension free smile on heer face.
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PREM NIWAS;


Shub ki evil smile ek dam hi ur gai jab usay ye pata chala k heer ki education continue rahegi.
Shub: lekin jab maine mana kar diya tou sab ko pareshani kya hai?
Anmol: jab tak wo apne baap bhai k ghar main hai tab tak tou wohi hoga jo wo chahen ge.
Shub: its impossible wo meri fiance hai.
Anmol: honay wali, and most important tumhen yahan sirf itna bataney aya hun k plz heer ko hurt na karo. Larkiyan phool k tarah nazuk or sensitive hoti hain halki si sakhti unke nazuk or hassas dil ko bohat choat pohchati hai. Chotay chotay sapnay, khusiyan or khwahishen hoti hain inki, infact tumhen to chahiye k tum heer ki wishes or khusiyon ka khayal rakho.
Shub: plz apna ye lecture apne behen bhaiyon ko dena. U r not my brother and cousin so plz. Agae mujhe samjhanay u know wat u r a biggest idiot in world. Aap ne kisi k jazbat ki qadar kar k jo kya us se aap ko kiya faida hasil hoa? U r foolish. Yahan apna jhoota koi kisi ko nahi deta or aap ne... Mujhe samjhanay aye hain. Jaeye jaeye apna kaam karen or unhi ki life main interfere karen jo aap jaise idiot ko bardasht kar sakte hon.
Anmol k chehre pe ek rang aa raha tha or ek jaa raha tha. Uski nazren jhuk gaien thin, dard or karb se uska chehra lal hogaya.
Anmol: i m sorry main bhool gaya tha k tum prem nahi ho extremly sorry next time galti nahi ho gi.
Anmol left from room. Purva jo shub se direct baat kar k us ki problem jannay i thi sab kuch sun k shocked reh gai. Uski ankhon main ansoo agae.
Purva (in head to anmol): kab tak akhir kab tak dosron ka kiya bhugto ge, kyun? Aapke sagey behen bhai aap ko nahi samajh paye? Kyun hua wo sab? Kyun?
Usney apne ansu saaf kiye.
" Lekin main aap ke heer, prem, preet or purva ko aap se dur nahi honay dungi. I promise".
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AGNI VILLA;

"Party party we want party"
Kunal, preet, taj, kali shouting. Heer cover her ear from her hand. Prem quietly saw them.
Prem kunal ko khenchtey hue dosri taraf laraha tha.
Kunal: party party we want... Kiya takleef hai?
Prem: un ka tou samajh ata hai tu kis khushi main party mang raha hai?
Kunal: batadunga tou maaroge.
Prem: nahi bataeyga tou bach jaega kya?
Kunal: toss karte hain. Heads aya to nahi pucho ge, or teals aya to main bataonga nahi. Done?
Prem quickly: done.
Suddenly he realize wat kunal says.
Prem: u celever. Ruk teri tou.
Kunal laugh and run.
Prem smile as ye nahi sudhrega.
Preet: chalo sarson i mean heer party do.
Heer: kis baat ki party?
Preet: college continue rehne ki or kis baat ki, mujhe tou party chahiye.
Heer: awaen aye baray party chahiye. Infact party tou mujhe milni chahiye.
Heer dad intrrupt: lo yahan tou ulti ganga beh rahi hai.
Heer: paa aap ko pata chala k...
H.paa: han paa ki jaan sab pata chala or apni beti ko or apni beti ki taraf se in sab ko ham party denge.
Heer: wow thank u paa.
H.paa: my pleasure beta.
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All r busy for party preparations. Heer calling sanskiriti.
"Hello main ithey hai"
heer ne awaz pe palat kar dekha. Sanskiriti khari thi.
Heer quickly: agai tu, kahan thi? Tujhe kitna miss kia or tera phone off kyun tha?
Sanskiriti: han agai, ghar pe thi, miss u too, sab tmhare us kharoos bhai ahem ki wajah se. (phir usnay sara qissa sunaya) abhi main sirf anmol bhaiyya k bulanay pe i hun warna tmhara bhai..., aaann.
Heer: uffo ek tou tum dono har dusre haftay larne khare hojatay ho. O.k o.k ahem bhaiya pin karte hain khush, arey ghoorna tou band karo.
Sanskiriti: agar anmol bhaiyya na hon tou tmhara wo bhai mujhe ghar main bhi ghusnay na dey.
Heer change topic: party k lye dress lai ho?
Sanskriti: han ye dekho.
Heer: haye kitni sundar hai. Meri dekh abhimanyu bhaiyya ne di.
Sanskiriti: wow pink, trouser pe bhi kaam kara hai or ye light dark shed ki long shirt lovly yaar.
Heer: thanx waise secrate bataon help maa ne kari thi unki.
Sanskriti: i know yaar, colour bhai ki or design maa ki right.
Heer: yap. Lets ready.
On other hand.

Preet and kunal fight for perfume.
Preet jo har perfume ko smell kar k rakh deta k iski khushboo achi nahi hai or kunal chant chant k perfume la la k rakh raha tha. Purva enter.
Purva: kunal k bachay mere perfums to wapis kardo.
Kunal jo preet pe najane kon sa perfume spray kar raha tha ruk gaya.
Preet: wat di aap k perfums?
Purva: ji mere. Aey de wapis.
Kunal: sure ye len.
Usne ek do utha kar or apne hath main pakra hua perfume bhi dediya. She left.
Preet: ye...ye perfume tou tmne mere lagaya tha.
Kunal: wo main check kar raha tha.
Preet: you...
Kunal runs toward prem's room.
Prem: ye tum bhagtey hue kyun aarahe ho. Oye neechay utar bed pe jootay le kar charh gaya.
Kunal: sorry yar. Hi di.
Purva smiles.

HEER ROOM;

Preet want enter in heer's room. Both r shouting.
Heer: ham ready ho rahe hai so get out.
Preet: koi zarurat nahi ye leepa thopi kar ne ki.
Sanskriti: uffo aap k yahan anay ka maqsad?
Preet: heer u know wat os P.B k os dost ne mujh pe ladies perfume spray kar diya.
Heriti laugh too much.
Preet: stop it both of u, help me naa. Ye perfum smell.
Heer: don't worry kisi ko pata nahi chalega, tum is pe man's perfum spray kar lo.
Preet: o.k i try but usko main choron ga nahi.
On other hand.
Kunal: party hai kahan?
Prem: mughal darbar, dinner kar k wapis. Waisi party nahi hai jaisi tu soch raha hai.
Kunal: ye kaisi party hai?
Purva: ye mama ji ki di hui party hai. Agni house ki young parties aisi hi hoti hai only anmol bhaiya ki party main odham hota hai.
Prem: means?
Purva: gana, bajana, naachna, games and lots of fun. Lekin gana, bajana khud karna parta hai.
Kunal: that's great. O.k main chalta hun.
Prem: di apko pata hai shub ne party main janay se inkaar kar diya.
Purva thinking.
Prem: kya soch rahi hain?
Purva: nothing! Ready ho kar ajana o.k. I leave.
prem apne room k saath banay chotay se passage pe agaya.
Prem: shub or kitna hurt karoge kya chahte ho? Ek aastha ko panay k liye or kitno ko takleef pohchao ge.
Prem boltay boltay ruk gaya usay laga k us k aas pas koi hai tabhi uske peechay se koi guzra, prem panic for a while.
On other hand heer ready honay k baad apni mail check karne lagi.
"SOULMATE" ye naam inbox main phir se dekh k usay bohat koft hui. Usnay mail kholi...
On other side
prem turns...


Precap;
Heer ne wo phol prem ko pakraya.




Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
Sorry couldnot give a long comment i an very busy since few days with all the festivals...😒

The part was simply awesome...

Loved it..

can't wait for the next chapter..

Continue soon..

Thanks for the pm!!

tc..

Edited by zigzagway_sadi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyceee😃!!!

thank God shubh failed in his first task😡!!!

more premeer scenes please!!!

update soon!!!

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