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Posted: 13 years ago
Updating in 30 mins 😊
arpitaji thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you all for your support, likes and lovely comments. 😊

Please please more likes and comments, kindly don't remain silent

Please continue to shower your love

But Why so less likes

I have a surprise, i have created a VM for their passionate dance, link below, please watch it and let me know how is it. (it is my first VM 😊)
Chapter 17
They were about to exit the jungle when Geet spoke.

Geet: Maan, let's start afresh, can we be friends?

They continued on their journey both feeling content to be moving ahead in life, towards their happiness. As they came out of the jungle poor Maan had to cut short his drooling sessions so as to avoid any accident and concentrate towards driving through the crowd.

Geet: Maan

Maan: Hmmm

Geet: Could we please visit the orphanage first

Maan raised an eyebrow getting surprised.

Geet (continued): Nahi, woh… actually, Anant was feeling very depressed about the whole MMS fiasco he did and he would feel better if you could comfort him.

Maan: Sure Geet, let's go to the orphanage first then. Though what he did was wrong but his intensions didn't mean any harm.

Soon they reached the orphanage. Both went inside. All were happy to see their Didi and Bhaiya smiling together. Anant held his ears and went down on his knees.

Anant (tears rolling down his eyes): I am really very sorry. Please mujhe maaf kar dijiye.

Maan held his shoulders, lifted him up and hugged him.

Maan: It's ok Anant but promise me you will never ever do such a thing again. Also be careful in choosing your friends.

Anant (breaking the hug): I promise Bhaiya, I will never repeat my mistake, but please forgive me.

Maan: Anant, you should ask forgiveness from your Didi, she is the one whom you hurt the most.

Anant went to Geet and held his ears, he was about to go down on his knees when Geet held his shoulders preventing him from doing so.

Anant: Didi, I am really very ashamed of what I did. Please forgive me.

Geet: I forgive you beta, but be careful in future, ok? (Anant nodded his head and Geet wiped his tears) Now don't cry, all's well that ends well.

All the 3 smiled. All the kids were very happy and they all enveloped Maan and Geet hugging them.

Geet: Kya hua Bacho?

Anamika: We are very happy today, Didi. We have one request.

Geet: Bolo beta.

Anamika: Will you both agree to do the couple dance at our annual day, pleeeaseee

Geet looked at Maan. Following her gaze all the kids looked at Maan, making puppy sad face with droopy eyes saying "Pleeeaseee"

Maan (twinkle in his eyes, oh… how much he would love to dance with his angel… but): Ahem, if it is ok with your Didi.

All kids turned towards Geet (together): Didi, please say yes, Didi, please please

Geet glared at Maan for putting her on the spot. He chuckled slightly, but his titter was cut short by her frown. If looks could kill, Maan would be so dead today. Maan tried to maintain a straight face as if saying "What could I do". Finally Geet agreed owing to the kids pleading.

Geet: Ok

All kids: Yipeee!!!!!!

They danced like they had conquered the world. Both Maan and Geet were happy that they could do something for the kids and decided to participate in their celebrations.

As the days passed by Geet was starting to warm up to Maan. She realized that he was a good person with a golden heart. She decided to put the past behind her and not judge him anymore for that one night, maybe it was just an accident. Her heart convinced her that there must have been something wrong with his car that it skidded and so maybe he was not at fault at all, that it was not even his negligence that caused the accident. She could never confront him though because of a fear buried deep within her soul that, what if it was his error, his carelessness, his rashness that caused the accident, what if he was drunk. She would die a thousand deaths if it turned out to be his mistake, she couldn't bear to see him at fault. Hence she just believed her heart and went along with it or maybe she knew that he could do no wrong.

Slowly the annual day approached. All were busy in their practices. Maan and Geet where rehearsing for their dance along with training the kids. The passion in their dace was slowly increasing their closeness or was it that their closeness was being reflected as passion in their dance, no one knew, but all were happy.

Finally the day of the annual function came. It was like a dream come true for Maan, he was dancing with his angel… hayee… while Geet was feeling butterflies in her stomach. All were very excited. The kids performed very well. Now it was the time for the couple dance. Maan and Geet sizzled the dance floor. Geet was feeling very strange and nervous today. Though they had been practicing the dance and its close moves but today she felt different. His mere touch was sending shivers down her body today. Oh God… she was falling in love with her perfect charmer.

Link of my VM 😊
Labon ko Labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao
Labon ko Labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao

Tod do khud ko tum
Baanhon mein meri
Baanhon mein meri
Baanhon mein meri
Baanhon mein meri

Tere ehsaasson mein Bheege lamhato mein
Mujhko doobati tishnagi si hain
Teri adao se dilkash khatao se
In lamho mein zindagi si hai
Haya ko zara bhool jao
Mere hi tarah pesh aao

hone do khud ko tum meri tum
Raaton mein

Labon ko Labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao
Labon ko Labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao

Tere zajbaaton mein mehki si saason mein
Yeh to mehek Sangali si hai
Dil ki panahon mein bekhri si aahon mein
Sone ki khwasish jagi si hai
Chehre se chehra chupao
Sene ki dhadkan suno
Dekh lo khud ko tum

Annkhon mein meri

Labon ko Labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao
Labon ko Labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe abb batao

Here Dev had landed and he came to know that Geet was performing with a guy. He was burning with jealously and rushed there just in time to see Maan and Geet burn the dance floor. Dev's eyes spit venom on seeing Maan touching, lifting ad swirling Geet. If looks could scorch, Maan would have been ash by now. He crushed the glass in his hands vowing to destroy their relationship. He pledged to take his revenge with Maan who had dared to touch his Geet

Precap: Dev poison's Geet's mind against Maan

An appeal of all my readers, please don't remain silent. Please press like and write comments… They motivate me. Me waiting…

Edited by arpitaji - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh no maan and geet just now became friends pls let not dev spoil it
Edited by zaara2212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

wonderful update but nw scary precape pls don't create mu btw maaneet nw pls n continue soon

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem maneet dance and this dev i want to kill him
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rrs1391

awsem maneet dance and this dev i want to kill him

even i also want to kill him or maan bit him balck n blue that will be awsome to watch it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update!!!
agrhhh..Dev want to kill him
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi i am amrutha bk...
nice update dear...
really awesome...


but precap is very scary...
continue soon...

Edited by maaneetmaahi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyy Arpita
Swri bwt last time..I read d update on my phone n d like button dint wrk
But it did tday.
An awesome update.. Loved d whole thing
Cnt wait for d nxt one..let's see if geet believe maan or dev
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update... Felt a little sad about the precap... More misunderstandings?...

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