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Posted: 13 years ago
Seems very interesting.

Not free right now
but will read when I get time.

I love reading things related to forensic.

Also huge fan of CID
MG + Abhi = Awesome!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
Ok Shivy this is the first time I am reading a Geet FF as I don't watch the show but must say its really interesting. will love to read more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nyce update
piya abhy saved geet
maan getng doubt abt geet's eyes
maan bichara bdi musebaton mein padta rehta hain
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh no maan kidnapped 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww great ..loved it ..
thnxx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update shivu dear
amazingly written
but maan kidnapped yar usko zyada chot na lagwana please
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting for an update Shivu
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Posted: 13 years ago

This time...couldn't send individual replies...next time...pakka... thread jaldi finish karne mein help kar do na...please

Part 23

Geet: firauti?

Abhijeet: haan, dekho.

To
CID Mumbai,
Aapke chahete Maan Singh Khurana humare kabze mein hai ACP sahab. Waise aap ko pata to chal hi chuka hai ki Maan Singh Khurana ne nahi maara tha us aadmi ko…aur main aapki takleef kam kar doon… us khoon mein humara haath tha… Maan Singh Khurana ko phasane ke liye… aur haan kal Maan ka accident bhi hum hi ne karwaya… dekhiye ACP sahab aapki kitni madat kar di…ab ek kar dijiye… lekin pehle aapko yeh to dikha de ki Maan ka hum kitna khyaal rakh rahe hai… letter ke saath ek photo hai use dekh lijiye aur phir aage padhiye
Achcha khyal rakha na humne? Kyun ACP sahab?? Chaliye ab kaam ki baat. Humein Hindustan ki sarhad paar karne ke liye kuch paisa aur helicopter chahiye…aur Air Authorities ki permission… uske baad hum Maan ko chhod denge
When Geet finished reading… she was burning with anger, pain and guilt. How could she let go Maan when she knew he was in trouble?
Abhijeet: aapko turant Bureau bulaya hai

Geet: yeah… chaliye
*~*~*~*
The situation was gross in CID Bureau… India's most influential socialite had been kidnapped. Savitri Devi was in the bureau. Abhijeet entered handing over the letter to ACP sir followed by Geet who entered slipping her hand into the doctor's white coat. Savitri devi and Geet's eyes met and she got up from her chair. Geet wanted to hug her; take her blessings; and do whatever it took to pacify her when her grandson was kidnapped… but Geet couldn't. Daadima was just going to call Geet by her name but Geet signaled her not to do so.
Geet: Good Evening Sir!

ACP: Geet, Mr. Khurana tumhare ghar se kitna baje nikle honge?

Geet: sir I have no idea! Main to Abhijeet ke saath coffee peene gayi thi. When I came back… he was not there

Daadima: Maan Geet ke saath the?

ACP: haan, kyun Mrs. Khurana?

Daadima: nahi, kuch nahi…

ACP: hmm… Geet, jao… blood ka DNA sample Mrs. Khurana ke DNA sample se match karo…pata to chale yeh khoon kiska hai!

Geet: Abhijeet, can you come with me?
Abhijeet looked at ACP.

ACP: jao Abhijeet, may be she needs help.

Abhijeet: ji sir! Chaliye Geet
*~*~*~*
Sardar: Khurana!! Uth
He shaked his head. Maan was really weak now. He couldn't even open his eyes. Moreover, his eyes were injured and swollen badly.

Sardar: uth, le paani pi!
Maan opened his eyes in response to water. But the chief spilt water on his face rather than making him drink it. Maan closed his eyes to bear the pain because of cold water being splashed on his wounds.
Maan: Geet, yeh
Geet was walking to her lab when she heard Maan's voice again.
Geet: Abhijeet, aap Daadima ko lekar jaiiyye…main aayi!

Abhijeet: kahaan jaa rahi hai?

Geet: bas do minute!

Abhijeet: hmm…
Geet: Maan, mujhse baat kijiye…main aapko sun sakti hoon.
Sardar: Mr. Khurana, yahaan machliyon ke siwa koi nahi hai jo aapko sun sake…aap kis Geet ko baar baar pukar rahe hai…?
Maan (thoughts): Geet…

Geet: Maan boliye…kuch bhi?

Maan: yahaan, machliyan… Geet

Geet: machliyan… aur kuch?
Sardar: waise in toote phoote jahazo mein aapko kaun dhundne aayega Khurana?
Maan: Geet… wrecked ships…

Geet: wrecked ships? Machliyan… DOCKYARDS…

Maan: Geet, yeh log mujhse paisa lena chahte hai…

Geet: Maan, main aa rahi hoon…

Maan: geet…
Geet banged in her lab where Abhijeet was sitting with Daadima…
Geet: Abhijeet… mujhe jaana padega!

Abhijeet: kahaan…?

Geet: ek kaam yaad aa gaya hai…bahut zaruri hai…

Abhijeet: lekin abhi to aapko blood sample lena hoga na?

Geet: Abhijeet, blood… abhi kuch dino se…I am not feeling good when blood is near…to aap sample le lijiye… Heparin zarur daal dijiyega…please

Abhijeet: Geet! Lekin aap…

Geet: sorry Abhijeet!
Saying this, Geet rushed out… Abhijeet was confused…
Abhijeet: Geet…blood…problem? What's happening…mujhe Geet ka peecha karna padega hi…
Abhijeet: Mrs. Khurana, aap yahin rukiye…main aata hoon.

Daadima: yeh ho kya raha hai…?
*~*~*~*
Geet rushed in her house.
Geet: MILIND…yahaan se sabse paas dockyard kahaan hai?

Milind: kyun?

Geet: jitna pooch rahi hoon…utna batao Milind…please…

Milind: hmm, yahin kuch 21 km door…kyun?

Geet: ek minute…Maan ki car, wo bhi 21 km dur hi thi na?

Milind: haan shayad…

Geet: matlab Maan ko wo gunde…wahin le gaye hai…

Milind: yeah right Geet…we should get going…

Geet: yeah we do… Ayesha, Leher, Abeer…WE GOT A BUNCH OF GOONS TO HUNT…!
And she showed her fangs and snarled…
Ayesha grinned: That's gonna be mealtime…!

Leher: yeah it is…let's go…
Abhijeet was listening to their convo…rather watching it… and he could only understand dockyards…and nothing else… he decided to follow them. But he had to take the highway while Geet's family took the jungle route…
Geet smelled all the way to get some hint.
Milind: Geet, we need to finish them all…do we?

Geet: yeah we do… (she had fury in her eyes) how could they even touch my Maan!

Milind: Geet, I thought you hated him?

Geet: yeah I 'hated' him Milind… and it's not 'hate him'…right?

Milind smiled: yeah…

Geet: Ayesha, you are taking the care of giving them as much pain as you can give them…you're eyes should spill blood!

Ayesha: yeah they will Geet… all of them…!

Geet: leher, We won't give them another chance…

Leher: yeah we won't!
Geet: Maan…main aa rahi hoon…is baar Maan aur Geet ko koi alag nahi kar payega…
*~*~*~*
Abhijeet: yeh Geet humesha Maan ko lekar itna serious kyun rehti hain? Pata nahi kya baat hai…
*~*~*~*
The coven reached the dockyard when it was quite dark and dusk had heavily fallen over it. Moreover, being near the coast…it was covered with a minor fog. Geet stopped and then took a huge lump of air.

Geet: Milind, I am going in through the main door.

Milind: Geet but?

Geet: I AM THE BEST!!

Milind: yes you are… chalo…let's go.
There were 4 of them guarding the main door. Geet took out her fangs and her steel chain. One of them was near the pillar so Geet swiftly exterminated him by choking his breath with the chain. Similarly she brought down one more. And then… her body thirsted for meal and so she hunted on the other 2 guards and left their blood drained bodies on the door.
Geet: 4 khatm… lekin bhook abhi bhi hai… let's see…
She came inside without a noise and looked around the place. It was dark and hazy for human eyes…but for Geet everything was as sharp as a knife. There were 2 gun-man on the upper floor so she leapt up and succumbed them to death.
Meanwhile, Milind and Ayesha brought down the leaders near the room where Maan was kept.
Sardar: kaun ho tum log?

Ayesha: your death!
Sardar: main itni jaldi nahi marne waala…
OH REALLY…tujhe to main marungi saale…
He looked around and saw a deadly creature standing. The eyes were blood red but they even shined to blue sometimes…
Sardar: yeh kaun hai…

Geet: same old same old questions… wait…let me answer you…
Milind: GEET!!! Look there… MAAN! Tum jao…go to him… I'll take care of this moron…
Geet: Maan…
Maan moved violently to open his eyes… he looked up and saw a hazy vision of his Geet… he was not tied…he tried to get up and move but then he slipped and fell on the ground hurting his head.
Geet: MAAN!
Geet stooped and held him in her arms. Abhijeet had been watching from the corner… lekin he was so much in love that he didn't notice… he was all shocked…
Precap
"I am and will always be Geet Maan Singh Khurana"
This was Part 23… will send individual replies this time…so please comment…

Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES...
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Look Shivu once again I m on time😛😛😛
Okay now the update Geet is so concerned abt her maan really love this part
I loved their telephatic convo the way geet found out where maan was is really cool
oh wo CID team kya kar rahi thi waha Geet chakar bhi Savitri k pair chu nahi payi
Abhijeet pyar mein deewana ho gaya hai warna itna sab dekhne k baad bhi kuch na samajna ye baat gale se nahi utar rahi
Geet kya nafrat hai dear agar ye nafrat hai toh pyar kise kahenge
"Tumne mujhe dhoka diya jab mujhe tumhari zarurat thi
Ek sunsaan andhere raah mein chod diya jab mujhe tumhari zarurat thi
Socha tha k tumse jab milungi tab tumhari zindagi tehes nehes kar dungi
tumhare chehre se muskurahat tumhari zindagi se khushiyaan cheen lungi
haan main tumse nafrat karti hoon par najaane kyun tumhe yun tadapta hua nahi dekh sakthi
Shayad aaj bhi kahi mere dil mein tumhari ek dhundali yaad basi hui hai
Shayad aaj bhi mujhe tumhare hoto se apne naam ki gunj sunne ki aas lagi hui hai
Magar main tumse nafrat karti hoon... sochthi hoon kya ye wakai sach hai
Kyun main khud ko dhoka de rahi hoon...kyun main ek jhooth ko sach maan rahi hoon
Haan main aaj bhi tumhse mohabbat karti hoon
Aaj bhi mera dil tumhare liye dhadaktha hai
Yahi mere zindagi ka sabse bada sach hai...tumhi mere wajood meri pehchaan ho
Tum ho toh sab kuch hai warna kuch bhi nahi"
Wow waiting for the Precap Shivu
I hope u won't throw ande tamatar on me for this poem
love u always my ladli
- urs Piya Di
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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