Love Kicked the Way

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Love Kicked The Way
Author: Francesca
Hello, my name is Music_girl also known as Frankie. I was trying to start a fanfiction on KTH, actually it's now playing in my country. I am hating Piyush guy to no extent! Poor Sujal! He was kicked out of the house! 😭😭😭 He makes me cry. So this is a short story to "tortue" 😆 both Piyush and Kashish...
What do you say? I know that the forum for Kahin To Hoga was locked. But I have a vivid imagination 😆 if I don't share it, it will kill me and will keep torturing me. 😆 Anyone reading this please leave their comments.
Story line: Piyush & Kashish darling are living happy ever after kicking poor Sujal out of the house. No news about Sujal until...
**❤️I love her smile...I love her vibe...❤️**
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Prologue
"News for London Breakfast Channel says that big bussiness man from India - Mr. Sujau Garewal died in an accident for acceding 150 km/h. He was very injured and died yesterday in Sir John Carter London Hospital" Inspector Robbert said.
"NO!" CG cried breaking down...Veena looked shocked...Rishi was speechless, as if he had just received a blow...
Hours later
"Archie! What was Sujal doing in London?" CG roared. Everyone was gathered, with miserable faces. "Woh...uncle" Archie started scared. "What Archie! What?" CG said, couldn't hold his temper. "Dad, please" Rishi started. Archie broke down crying "uncle, Sujal was enough, enough of everything, the matter went so far that he tried to commint suicide..." CG and Veena had a shocked face. "Kya?" Aman said. "Haan, it's true. I persuaded him for a holiday trip to London so that he could come back fresh evergreen" Archie mumbled between her snobs. "My son is dead! It's all my fault... No, Lalit, it's ALL your fault... YOU and YOUR son and YOUR daughter-in-law" CG cried. Lalit shut his mouth. Veena's face was drenched with tears. She quickly left running upstairs. Archie seized the opportunity to fill rubbish in CG's mind "uncle, when someone is so crazy in love, he does anything, whether good or bad" her gaze going to Kashish. Everyone noticed it.
Corridor
"Auntie, please" Kashish tried to console Veena. Veena was enough of her goody-goody. "Stop it Kashish! Enough IS enough! You knew Sujal was madly in love with you, didn't you?" she shouted. Kashish backed. "I am sorry...I didn't mean to scream... so much have been happening lately...I know his ways were very bad...sorry" without another word, she left. Kashish turned and saw Rishi looking at her murderously. "I will not let you live happy. I will destroy all your happiness" he threatened her. "Look - Rishi, you're not fine". "Shut up! You just shut up! You killed my Brother, my big B, he was everything to me...he was the only one who scolded me, cared for me...but you eversince you stepped in my Big B's life, he had suffered, you only gave him sorrows... and I will never let you live in peace...NEVER...this is Rishi's promise. This time, it won't be your sisters, it will be you, Kashish, YOU" Rishi screamed. "Rishi!" Piyush shouted "Kashish is your sister-in-law, talk with her with respect." "Respect! You have a lot Piyush brother...Oh, you would be happy to know that my Big B has left you live in peace and harmony...he won't trouble you now...You losers! I will make you in such a state that you will not be in a position to beg". Piyush tried to block him with his hand but he struggled and left.
Kashish & Piyush bedroom
"It's all my fault, Piyush, today Sujal died because of my stubborness...never ever I will be able to forgive myself..." she sniffled. "Don't say this, he got was he wanted, who can change fate..."
Leap of 8 months (to be continued...)
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Chapter 1 Veena stared outside the window desperately. Chetan entered the room and told her "let's go to the party". "I am not in a mood" she replied trying to brush her tears. "We've come to England so far to relax a little bit, Veena so come on" Chetan cheered her up. Party
Everyone was enjoying - almost everyone. The Garewales looked miffed up and wounded. There was no chance of enjoying a party after the recent death pf their son. Even Rishi was in a bad state. He was neither flirting nor boasting about himself, he was rather quiet.
He hated this silence of his parents. His eyes filled with tears and he walked out. He was already in an abnormal state. He bumped into someone and looked shocked.
"Big B" was the word that came from his mouth out load.
Everyone turned to see around and were shocked.
Was that a ghost of a dead person...?
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Chapter 2 Rishi got the shock of his life. "Big B" he said aloud shocking the core of everyone present there. Sure, the back looked like his brother. Aman jogged to Rishi and without looking at the person's back he said "sorry, he's still in the shock after his brother's death".
"No, it's my brother and I know him", Rishi shouted pushing Aman and trying to make the man to turn.
"Look Rishi, behave" Piyush explained to him. Chetan buried his head on Veena's shoulder. Vasundhara was enjoying the scene while Lalit and Varun stared speechless at both Rishi and Aman.
"Shut up, can you" Rishi thundered to Piyush. "It is because of you and Kashish" he screamed.
"Give it a damn, okay, Sujal is dead and dead and..." Piyush got angry because Rishi had dragged Kashish into the matter as usual. Piyush reckoned that they had nothing to do with Sujal's death. "We are all sad about..." he started when Aman cut off his brother angrily. "Brother...please". "Duh, losers" Rishi rolled his eyes and turned to Varun "want to join it".
Rishi glanced at his parents and turned to the man who had not move a single inch with all this discussion and fight. Rishi slowly made the man to turn and...
Again, was the dead back to live...? These questions remained unanswered...
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Coming up: The Dead back to life...
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Chapter 3 Rishi made the man to turn. Of course, the person had no chance as both Aman and Rishi had their hands on his shoulder, making him to turn. The man pursed his lips, muttering and praying... Everyone stood still, motionless, deadly and cold. "Sujal" Veena said recovered. "Big B" Rishi voice trembled. "Mom" Sujal said perplexed. Veena walked over furiously and gave him a tight slap. "Mom? What did I do?", Sujal asked. "What you did? Asked what you didn't do? Making us to mourn over an alive person" she said, tears rolling down her cheeks, washing away her blush and mascara. "But..." Sujal protested but no chance as Rishi dragged him away from the party. "What you people are doing here in Nottingham?" Sujal asked for an explaination. "What do you think - trying to know who the idiot told us that you were dead in a car accident" Chetan roared at his son, ready to kill him in no time. "Hey, don't ever call me stupid, okay" Sujal protested to his father. Chetan smiled and said "what are you doing here?" "Dad, I live in London". "Oh? So - we don't have to stay in a hotel then when the son of our house is here" Vasundhara chipped in. "Are you living in a cottage or hut or what?" she asked curiously. "Vasu" Lalit reprimanded. "No". "Then what are we waiting for, let's go" Rishi said dragging Sujal, followed by Aman. Piyush and Kashish stared at each other, Piyush put his hand around Kashish's shoulder and moved along, following the others...
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res:) i shall be edit my commend later
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Chapter #4

"Mom, dad, this is my house" Sujal said throwing his coat on the sofa. "Sir, Sanvi Ma'am had phoned" a servant said. "Okay, you go, Albert" Sujal said "and oh yeah, meet my parents, open the outhouse". Albert nodded "you all will stay in my outhouse." Vasundhara kept looking at the mansion; it was more than a mansion; it was a grandiose castle, white and shiny marble and others sculptures with different old paintings, still prestigious for the country, and lots of idols and vases, expensive curtains. This mansion was far thousand bigger than their house. "Big B, you live here" Rishi said dreamily. "Yeah" he said without paying any attention to others, he picked up a file. "What are the facilities?" Rishi asked still surprised. "Horse-riding, there's a pool over that side and other than that Albert and Maggie will assist you in your daily work till you're here. You will not stroll in the private headquarters and Maggie will make sure of that. Is that understood? No one in my private quarters" he said sternly. "Whooa" Aman thought. "Sir, the outhouse is already opened" Albert said. "Follow Albert, tomorrow we'll talk okay. Albert, bring them to the outhouse and provide every facility they need". "Good night" Sujal said without even looking at Piyush and Kashish. "Breakfast at sharp nine in the western wing garden, Albert'll bring you there" he said still serious. "Mom, you want to talk to me" Sujal said gazing at his mother's yearning eyes. Veena nodded slowly. "Come" Sujal said leading her inside a corridor. "Ho ho, wow, Big B owns such a big place, wish I'd live here with him, it'd be so cool, right Aman, I'll try to talk to him about staying here" Rishi said. "If you are making plan of staying here, do get a visa for me too" Aman winked. "Sir, Ma'am, this is the outhouse, if you need anything just ask the guard outside, he'll bring it for you and please to wander here and there at night especially the private areas" Albert said. "Okay" Chetan said surprised why Sujal was treating them as normal guests when they were his family. "Sujal, what's this?" Veena asked her son. "Mom, my house" Sujal replied. They were seated in a room, on the sofa. "Why don't you come home?" she questioned. "Mom, which home, the one which I was kicked out, no mom, never again and anyway I have my full business divisions here and I am doing really great here" Sujal replied confidently. "I hope the idea of living alone is the best you have". "Good morning everyone" Rishi said cheerfully, looking around and sitting down. "Good morning, sir, you're three minutes exactly late" a lady said. Rishi stared at her. "I am Maggie, the main and head servant here". "Hello Maggie, don't you get bored being so serious" Rishi asked. "Sir, Sujal Sir will arrive in some minutes, thank you". "What?" Rishi said shocked. Soon everyone was seated and having breakfast. "So, how is your company called?" Piyush asked. "Sir, please let Sujal sir eat, he has loads of work today" Maggie interrupted. Sujal shushed Maggie up and said "SG Company Limited" he replied "glad you've asked". "Sir, Sanvi Ma'am is coming here" Maggie told Sujal. "I thought it was a private area" Vasu said. "It is, Ma'am" Maggie retorted. "Sujal, do you have any brain" a girl said walking over them. She was wearing red t-shirt and black jeens with red heels and had brown hair. "Actually Miss Sanvi..." Sujal protested...

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amazing update frankie .i loved to read thats
pleased keep writing
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loved the start
but wished it was sujal n kashish
not sujal different n kashish with piyush

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