NewFF Maaneet Tujhko jo Paaya Thrd1 Upd pt8 pg 133

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

unknown.

@unknown.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

nixe concept
do cont soon :)

harneet <3

Quote

ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Congrats Piya on a new FF.

Prologue sonds really good and I am sure you will do full justice to the story.

Waiting eagerly for the update

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

i love the concept...n i acn already tell u Pihuuu that it wil be an awesome ff...i cant wait for the update...

Quote

Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

wowww loved the concept

plzzz continue soon

Quote

Mehek25

@Mehek25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Piya the concept sounds very interesting.

So here Geet is the arrogant one.

Nice to see a different version of Geet.

Just hope that there is a very good reason for her being the way she is.

I have faith in ur writing talents and am sure this will also turn out to be a gr8 FF.

Pls continue soon.

Thanx for pm dear.

Quote

Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Character Sketch

Maan Singh Khurana

A successful businessman settled in USA. A humble, genuine hardworking and down to earth person. He might have reached the peak of success but is still rooted to his family values. Lives a luxurious and happy life. His heart beats only for his childhood friend Geet

Geet Handa

The only daughter of the Handas. She got everything that she demanded money,status, a luxurious lifestyle almost everything except for her Parents love and time. She eventually landed in a bad company of friends and now has become a total spolit brat. She loves betting and always ends up on the winning side. For her life is an adventure and she no longer believes in relationships and does not care about anyone's feelings. She is totally selfish and will not think twice before hurting anyone

Aditya Singh Khurana

Younger brother of Maan. They share a very beautiful relationship more than brothers they are great friends who can share every deep secret with each other

Dev Singhaniya

A rich and egoistic Guy. Loves to play with the life of girls. Current boyfriend of Geet

Savitri Singh Khurana

Grandmom of Maan and Aditya and very good friend of the Handas

Mohinder Handa

Geet's dad and owner of the Handa group of industries.

Rano Handa

Geet's Mom and wife of Mohinder Handa

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

Quote

Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

PART 1

Khurana Villa (USA)

Dadima: Adi ye Maan kaha reh gaye subah se nazar nahi aa rahe?

Adi: Dadima jabse aapne ye faisla liya hai k hum humesha k liye India jaa rahe hai tabse Bro saatve aasman mein hai... kal se packing kal rahe hai abhi tak khtam nahi hua

Dadima: Packing toh humne kar di thi ab Maan kya pack kar rahe hai?

Adi: Ofho Dadima humne toh sirf kapde aur zarurat k saaman pack kiye the magar Bro toh abhi apni yaado ko sametne ki koshish kar rahe hai

Dadima: Iska matlab Maan storeroom mein hai

Adi: Ab aapne bilkul sahi kaha

Dadima: Itne saal hogaye hume India chodkar par Maan ne kabhi bhi apni yaado ko dhundla hone nahi diya hume ab bhi yaad hai kitna tadpe the wo jab humne unse kaha tha k hum humesha k liye desh chodkar jaa rahe hai

Adi: Magar tab haalat hi kuch aise the na Dadi hum aur kar bhi kya sakthe the

Dadima: jaante hai bete par Maan ki aakhon mein jo dard saaf jhalak raha tha wo hum jhutlabhi toh nahi sakthe thena... wo yaha toh aa gaye par apna dil apna sukoon wahi India mein chod aaye

Adi: Issliye toh aaj jab hum humesha k liye India wapas jaa rahe hai Bro itne excited hai

Dadima: Haan Adi aur excited ho bhi kyun na apne bachpan k pyar se itne saalo baad rubaru honge toh khushi toh hogihina unhe

Adi: Ji Dadima

Dadima :Chaliye Adi hum apni packing kar lethe hai

Adi :Waise Dadima aapne Uncle ko toh bata diya haina k hum wapas aa rahe hai

Dadima: Ji bete bata diya

Meanwhile,

Storeroom

Maan was removing his childhood toys

Maan: Main wapas aa raha hoon Geet tumhara Maan wapas aa raha hai

He takes out a photograph. It was the childhood photo of Maaneet

Maan: Main jaanta hoon Geet tum bhi utni hi tadpi hogi jitna k main tadpa hoon tumse milne k liye. Itne saal beet gaye par maine tumhari har ek yaad samalkar rakhi hai

Maan: Mujhe ab bhi yaad hai jab main tumse aakhiri baar mila tha tab tum kitna ro rahi thi aur baar baar mujhse keh rahi thi k mujhe chodkar mat jau aur main chahkar bhi tumhare aasuo ko rokh na sakha

Maan: par Geet ab main wapas aa raha hoon tumhara Maan ab tumse dur kabhi nahi jaayega

He kisses her photograph

Maan :Waise Geet ab toh tum badi ho gayi hogi haina... sochtha hoon kaise dikhthi hogi tum... ek baat tumhe batadu tumhara Maan kafi handsome ho gaya hai kaafi saari ladkiyaan marthi hai mujhpar par maine kabhi bhi tumhari jagah kisi aur ko nahi di Geet...

Maan: Main jaanta hoon tum bhi behet khoobsurat ho aur dekh lena main tumhe pehli nazar mein hi pehchaan lunga

Maan: Tum puchogi nahi k kaise pehchanunga?

Maan: ye toh mere liye kafi aasan hoga maine bhale hi tumhe na dekha ho par aaj bhi tumhari wo maasum aakhein mujhe yaad hai aur ye toh main dave se keh saktha hoon k tumhari jaisi pyari aakhein iss duniya mein kahi aur nahi hogi bus unhi se tumhe pehchaan lunga

Adi :bro jaldi bahar aaiye Dadima aapko bula rahi hai...bhabhi se baad mein baat kar lijiyega

Maan started smiling

He took all the things and packed it in his bag

Same time in India

Mohinder: Rano aaj Dadima wapas aa rahi hai kitni khushi ka din hai aaj

Rano: Haan itne saal hogaye unse mile hue

Mohinder: Jaanti ho Maan ka naam top k businessman mein gina jaata hai

Rano: Haan garv hotha hai ye sunkar

Mohinder: Waise Geet kaha hai usse bataya k nahi k uska dost wapas aa raha hai

Rano: Wo kabhi bhi hume batakar nahi jaati k wo kaha jaa rahi hai yun kaho humara hona ya na hona ab uske liye koi maiyne nahi raktha

Mohinder: Iss haalat k zimedar bhi toh humhi the na...hum hi paise kaamane mein itne busy ho gaye k apni bachhi ko kabhi apna pyar aur time nahi de paaye

Rano: Haan magar hum se sab ussi k liye kar rahe the kya pata tha k jiske liye ye sab kar rahe hai wohi humse dur ho jaayegi

Mohinder: Maan wapas aa raha hai toh thodi umeed si bannd rahi hai shayad humme humari maasoom si beti wapas mil jaaye

Rano: Umeed toh mujhe bhi hai kitni gehri dosti thi dono k beech mein agar Maan yaha hotha toh Geet kabhi humse dur nahi hothi

Mohinder: Khair ab beethi hui baato k baare mein sochkar khoon jalane se achha hai hum aage ki soche

Rano: Ye baat aapne thik ki

Mohinder: Chalo ab kuch kaam kar lethe hai

Rano :Aap kaam kar lijiye main zara kitchen ho aathi hoon Dadima k liye unka favourite khana banalethi hoon

Mohinder: Thik hai

Meanwhile

Shasha: Ye shart tu puri nahi kar paayegi haar maan le yaar

Geet: Geet ne kabhi haar maanna nahi seekha ye sharth tho main yun chutikyon mein puri kar sakthi hoon

Shasha: Soch le Geet main tujhe warn kar rahi hoon

Geet: Tujhe dar lag raha hai toh jaakar kisi kone mein bait mujhe tang mat kar

Geet: Listen u Arjun mujhe tumhari shart manzoor hai

Arjun: Agar tum haar gayi toh tumhe mujhe kiss karna hoga yaad haina

Geet: Kiss wo bhi tum jaise loser ko sapne mein bhi nahi kyunki main haarne nahi wali jeetungi toh main hi aur haarne k baad tum meri jhoothi par apni naak raghdoge

Arjun: Done

PRECAP: Maan's arrival and Geet's bet

Pls press d like button n do comment

love-Piya

Part 2: Page 28

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1926300/newff-maaneet-tujhko-jo-paaya-thrd1-upd-pt8-pg-133?pn=28

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

163

Quote