MAANEET SS;Destiny or Faith..Thrd 2..upd Pt25 Pg71 - Page 25

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
our hero msk had to cum to save his geet
loved their cute talks
aww geet jealous just loved it
i think its a maaneet date
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Ji...😉..

most 1stly...me 4 PM.😛..
u done a
&
..⭐️👏..
4 this ..👍🏼..
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so much ..dear..😛..
4 this update..👏👏.
tons of 4 u dear..🤗...
again said ..😊.
really ..dear...😛...
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...me only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...me tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
Note:
guys...me sad...me PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕
me said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials me don't watch but me read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...me really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...me never pm u...4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...me know just few..but me updated for them surely...but that surely me said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanku so much for ur encouragement and support on part 20-21

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Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
NOTE:

M so sorry friends... m unable to thank u all individually but seriously m going through very hectic schedule these days...!!

please forgive me for that

m really thankful to each one of you...ur encouragement has really motivated me to write...!!

thanks a ton for ur appreciation...!!!
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
u r here...does it mean u r updating😍
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Posted: 13 years ago


PART-22

Well this update is dedicated to muydearest friends Sai, Piya and Khushi

Hope i live upto your expectaions guys


Geet is thinking to ask someone about maan but her cell suddenly beeps and its maan's message

Maan(message): geet tum kafi late ho chuki ho ab aisa karo ki reception pe jao or hall ka rasta pucho hum tumhari wait kar rahe hai

Geet(self-thought): meeting or hall mein ye ho kya raha hai'..muje samaj nai aa raha'.. aisa karti hu reception pe jaakar puchti hu or phir pata karti hu baat kya hai

Geet: sir kya aap muje bataenge ki apke hotel mein hall kidhar hai

Receptionist: ji madam par aap kaun??

Geet: ji main khurana technology se aayi hu geet'muje vo maa sir se milna tha vo kisi hall mein hai na

Receptionist: arrey aap geet madam hai ji ji chaliye'hum to kab se aap hi ka intezaar kar rahe the'..

Geet: mera intezaar??

Receptionist: madam please aap late mat kijiye aapki kab se wait ho rahi hai

Geet: chaliye aap muje bataiye main chali jati hu

Geet was really shocked as everything unusual was happening with her''she was unable to understand what was actually happening.

Receptionist: madam vo hai hall'..

Geet: thanku

Geet enters the hall and it was completely dark'..she didn't felt as a meeting was taking place'..but now she was getting worried'..

Geet(self-thought): yaha par aisa to lagta nahin ki koi meeting chal rahi hai lagta hai main kisi galat jagah aa gayi hu 'dubara jakar reception par puchti hu

She was about to leave as she hears a voice

"Geet tum bilkul sahi jagah aayi ho"

Geet: kaun hai waha'or yaha par itna andhera kyu hai???

She again hears a voice

"pehchano geet main kaun hoon??"

Geet: dekhiye mere pass apki faltu baat ke liye bilkul time nahin hai'mein meeting ke liye der ho rahi hu waise bhi

"geet maine kaha na tum ekdum sahi jagah aayi ho"

The door of the hall closes'..and all the lights are back'..but what she sees after getting the lights back was a real surprise for her'..

The hall was full of geet's pics''each and everywhere she could see only her pics'''..suddenly her eyes caught attention of a moving video'..

The lights were again off''.

The video begins''.and its all geet and maan's pics going on'..their fights'.their happy moments''geet's confession'everything

Well friends I have tried changing the lyrics of the song a bit according to my situation

Here it goes

Ek ladki thi deewani si


Ek ladke pe vo marti thi

Najre juka ke sharmake office mein guzarti thi


Chori chori chupke chupke mujse wafaye karti thi

Kuch kehna tha shayad usko

Par hamesha hi jhijagti thi

Ek sawaal rehta tha uski aankhon mein

Par phir bhi pyari si lagti thi

Or main kuch nahi keh pata tha

Lekin

Dekha Jo Use Pehli Baar Khub Suarat Lagi Bahut
Aankhon Mein Chehra Tha Uska ,Dil Mein thi Mohabat

Par aaj main uss ye kenha chahta hu

Aaankhen khuli ho ya ho band deedar sirf or sirf tumhara hota hai

I Love u geet

The video halts at geet's face who is in a bridal get-up'..its animated geet's pic'..

(sorry could nt get animated)

Geet is all in tears listening this'.it felt as if she has won everything in her life today''''.

Geet: maan kaha hai aap?? Please saamne aayi'..ab mujse or intezaar nahin hota''..please maan kaha hai aap??

Maan comes from behind stands right behind her'


Maan: geet kaisa laga surprise??



Geet is speechless'..and just hugs her'''..

Maan: kya hua geet'.kya tumhe mera surprise pasand nahin aaya kya?? Muje to laga tha ye sab dekh kar tumhe kafi khushi hogi'lagta hai maine tumhe upset kar dia

Geet: nahin maan aisi baat nahin hai'..main nahin jaanti thi ki aaj ka din meri zindagi mein itni khushiyan lekar ayega'..muje to vishwas hi nahi ho raha ye sab dekh kar,,,,,thanku maan'.muje to samaj hi nai aa raha ki main kya kahu?

Maan: tumhe kuch kehne ki zarurat nahin hai geet'..tum jaanti ho tumhare meri zindagi mein aane se pehle muje kabhi nahin laga tha ki main kisi ladki se kabhi ye sab keh paunga

Maan: tumne meri zindagi ke mayane badal diye hai geet''main bata nahin sakta ki tumhari meri zindagi mein kya ahmeiyat hai''har waqt bas tumhara hi khayal rehta hai''tum hasti ho to hasne ko maan karta hai tum roti ho to main pareshan ho jata hu geet

Maan: tumhare bina meri zindagi ekdum adhuri hai geet'..kya tum meri zindagi ka hissa banogi???

Geet: ye kya puch rahe hai maan'main to kab se apni zindagi apke naam kar chuki hoon''agar apki zindagi meri bina adhuri hai to meri bhi apke bina maan

Geet: bas dil karta hai ki har waqt aap mere aas pass rahe'jab aap mera pass nahin hote to ek ajjeb se bechani rehti hai muje

Geet: apke bina zindagi kuch nahi maan

Maan: chalo geet aaj tumse ek waada karta hu ki zindagi ki har subah tumse shuru hogi or har raat tumse khatam


Geet holds her hand and promises'.

Geet: zindagi ki har subah aapse shuru hogi or har raat aap hi par khatam

Both of them share hug

Maan: I love u geet'.mujhe chod kar kabhi mat jaana main jee nahin paunga

Geet: I love u too maan''main apse waada karti hu ki chahe kitni bhi musebate a jaye hum dono ek dusre se kabhi alag nahin honge'..


Precap: maan and geet decides to tell everything to beeji..😉😉

Well how was the update friends'??? I know m not good at writing romantic parts'but I tried my level best'..hope u too enjoyed'please come up with ur feedbacks so that I can improve on'😕😕

Do comment will be waiting''😳😳



Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

u r here...does it mean u r updating😍



yes im updating today
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


u need to wait a bit m still working on it
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW awesome. ...i love confessions...u did a good job...nice update

I loved the fact I could tell u anything
I loved the way u looked at me
I loved talking to u
I loved ur eyes ur smile ur whole body
I loved it when we had our little talks
I loved it when u told me u loved me
I loved the way u told me I was perfect
I loved ur attitude and personality
I loved it when we were together
I love u for u and hope u love me too and I love u for so much more but words could never explain!!

I always will love you...tc😊

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