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Posted: 13 years ago
killer update dear 😉it was so heart wrenching 😭maan believed in those photos 😕and accused geet for cheating him 😲poor geet 😭 felt so sad for her 😭poor soul got punished for some mistake which she never did 😕maan's anger completely made him blind with betrayel which never allowed to see her plead of asking to trust her once it was so painful when your love don't trust you 😭oh no maan said her to go away 😕 maan is gonna repent big time for his stupid act for sure but u know as u said to be positive and trust maaneeet love i am also happy thinking the other sideany guess 😉 ofcourse our dumbo king arjun 😆he played with fire as that moron tried to separate maan from his jaan 😈so arjun dear be ready to count your broken limbs soon 😆all iz well for me as arjun babu ne apne barbadi ko kud invite kiya he ab 😆
eagerly waiting to see him getting dulai by maan 😉 😈 kya karu evill me love it 😆
maaneet is always meant to be together 😳 hope they will surely pass this test of their love 😃
and hopefully this will strengthen their bond to face any challenge in future 😃
thanks for the pm and replying the comments dear , it's so sweet of you 😳
please continue soon dear 😳
Edited by udeshi91 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...

but maans words were way tooo harsh to easily forget n tht too infront of whole off...


i felt bad tht dev n adi has more faith on geet at tht moment...though maans situation is diff but still he cud have ctrlled b4 staff...


when geet tried telling him 1st hero was in full romantic mood...n know full angry mode...
anyway looking forward for the next track...GEET THE FIGHTER...n really want to know how maan can take back the immense pain caused by his words...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan only trusted Geet this much 😭 waiting for the next part anxiously!! thanks for the pm! amazing part,, full of action drama and suspense 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update
ye to hona hi tha na
par the way u wrote was superb
pehle to even i was confused ki maan parcel dekhe ga ya nahin
par the way u potrayed the scene was just fab
felt bad for geet yar par m sure jaldi hi sab thik hoga

maan geet ki aankhon mein pyar nai dikh raha tha kya
y did u do that???
par m sure jab sach bahar ayega to maan wont leave that arjun

jaldi se rona dhona band karwake please give us lively moments back
or lastly sorry yar m damm late in commenting
par cant tell u itna busy schedule chal raha hai
sorry yar
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really LOVED this FF
add me in ur PM LIST
Pls continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
Piya will you be updating
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zaara2212

Piya will you be updating

iska update chahiye ya DMG ka whatever u say choice is yours will update tomorrow
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Posted: 13 years ago
Done will update tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
to yahaan aap res karo...main aage res karti hoon...aap usi ko edit kar dena... phir main first ho jaungi!
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 45

Khurana Mansion

Dadima: Maan ne ye thik nahi kiya unhone Geet par itna bada ilzaam laga diya ek pal k liye bhi ye nahi socha k Geet k dil par kya beet rahi hogi

Dev: Unhone ek baar bhi Geet ko apni safai mein kuch kehne ka mauka tak nahi diya bus faisla suna diya k wo galat hai aur usne Bro ka vishwas toda hai

Annie: Vishwas toh bhai ne Geet ka toda hai kitna bharosa karti thi wo unpar galat toh bhai hai ek baar bhi unhe Geet ki maasumiyat nazar nahi aayi

Maan arrives

Maan :Maasumiyat nahi Annie chalaki kaho badi hi shatir ladki hai MSK ko bhi bevakoof bana diya hmm' main toh sahi mein uspar bharosa karne klag gaya tha magar'

Dadima: Magar kya Maan hume toh laga tha k shayad aapko apne kiye par pachtava hoga magar nahi aap toh Geet k khilaf ab bhi bole jaa rahe hai

Dadima: Agar itni kadwahat bhari baate aap yaha kar rahe ho toh najaane aapne office mein kya kuch kaha hoga

Dev: Sirf kaha nahi Dadima Bro toh Geet ki bejathi kar rahe the wo bhi pure office staff k saamne inhone toh uske charitra pe bhi sawal uthaliya

Maan: Maine kuch galat nahi kaha Dev aur waise bhi mere paas sabut the jo k cheek cheek kar keh rahe the k Geet mere bharose k layak kabhi thi hi nahi

Annie: Sabut galat bhi toh ho sakthe hain na?

Maan: Haan ho sakthe hai lekin Geet wakai mein begunah thi toh phir ussne Arjun se milne ki baat mujhse kyun chupai

Dev: Iske peeche shayad koi wajah hogi

Maan: Ye sab bahane hai Dev aur waise bhi main tha na uske saath mere rehthe usse kis baat ka darr tha wo bejijak mujhse koi bhi baat kar sakthi thi

Dadima: Baat toh wo tab karti na jab aap unhe bolne ka mauka dethe aaj bhi toh aapne bina kuch sunehi apna faisla suna diya

Maan :Aaj jo kuch bhi hua mujhe uska koi bhi afsoos nahi hai aur main nahi chahtha k iss ghar mein uss ladki ka koi bhi zikr kare

Dadima :Maan..

Maan: Dadima mujhe neend aa rahi hai main sone jaa raha hoon Good night.

Maan goes to his room and locks the door

Dadima: Inhe toh zara sa bhi afsoos nahi hai magar hum Geet ko inki zindagi se yun dur nahi jaane denge

Annie: Hum kar bhi kya sakthe hai Dadi

Dadima: Hum Geet ki begunahi saabit karne mein unki madat karenge ek baar sach bahar aa gaya toh Maan ko apni galti ka ehsaas zarur hoga aur wo Geet ko puri izzat k saath iss ghar mein le aayenge

Dadima: Dev aap ek kaam kijiye kal Adi ko lekar Geet se miliye aur pura mamla samajne ki koshish kijiye hume yakeen hai k koi na koi raasta zarur bahar aayega

Dev: ji Dadima

After some time

Everyone goes to sleep

Maan takes his car and goes out

He stops his car at one place and looks at the moon

Pls listen to this song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bY5-xqBhPxE

Jab jab tere paas main aaya, ik sukoon mila

He picturised Geet's beautiful face in the moon' her smiling innocent face which gave a new life to him


Jise main tha bhoolta aaya, woh wajood mila

He wanted to caress her angelic face right then' he wanted to kiss those magical eyes of hers which gave peace to his soul

Jab aaye mausam gham ke, tujhe yaad kiya o...o...

But slowly her smile vanished.. her eyes were reflecting pain.. she was going away from him.. Maan immediately directed his hand in that direction to stop her from leaving ...but

Jab sehme tanha pann se, tujhe yaad kiya

Geet goes and stands near the window

Hmm'Dil sambhal ja zara Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Geet too was recollecting the incidents where Maan was her pillar of strength' his promises to be there for her forever and ever' As she recollected those beautiful memories she started smiling

Dil yanhi ruk ja zara Phir mohabbat karne chala hai

But soon she realized how in a fraction of seconds her dreams were shattered'

Aisa kyun kar hua, jaanu na main jaanu na

It was raining outside each and every thing was reminding him about Maan

oo...Dil samal jaa zara phir mohaabat karne chala hai tu

Maan was also trying to locate Geet in these moments. He remembered their first rain dance'she was looking so innocent and pure while dancing in the rain


Dil, yenhi ruk ja zara Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

She remembered the way Maan had carried her in his arms as she was unable to walk

Jis raah pe, hai ghar tera Aksar wahan se haan main hoon guzra

Maan went ahead and tried to touch her but then realized that she was not here


Shayad yakeen, dil mein raha Tu mujkho mil jaaye kya pataa

He went ahead and saw a stall. He remembered the way Geet was eating golgappe


Kya hai yeh silsila, jaanu na main jaanu na

He was happy to see the childish antics of Geet


Dil, sambhal ja zara Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Geet took a piece and offered it to him


Dil, yenhi ruk ja zara Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

He opened his mouth happily to accept it..but then tears started rolling down his cheeks'she was not there'she was not there


Kucch bhi nahin, jab darmiyaan Phir kyun hai dil tere hi khwaab bunta

Meanwhile Geet goes and opens the fridge to remove water



Chaaha ki de, tujhko bhulaa Par yeh bhi mumkin ho na saka

She sees an ice cream pack in the freezer. Again she remembers the face of Maan and their ice cream date



Kya hai yeh maamla, jaanu na main jaanu na

She takes a spoonful of it and looks lovingly in a direction


Dil, sambhal ja zara Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

But soon she realizes that she was all alone


Dil, yenhi ruk ja zara Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Her Maan had left her all alone


Dil, sambhal ja zara Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

She goes to her room and removes the saree that Maan had selected for her to wear at the function. She hugs it and goes off to sleep

Meanwhile Maan too returns back but instead of going to his room he goes to the outhouse and finds a photo of Geet

He hugs it and goes off to sleep

Now this part is a dream

Maan: Mujhe maaf kardo Geet... apne Maan ko maaf kardo

As soon as he uttered these words Geet's sleep was disturbed

Geet: Maan.. mujhe aisa kyun laga jaise k wo mujhe bula rahe ho..

Tears started rolling down her cheeks

Geet: Maan aap thik hai na


Maan: Haan Geet main thik hoon par tumhe kya hua tumhari aawaz mein ghabrahat kyun hai

Geet: meri aawaz mein ghabrahat ho bhi toh ab aapko isse kya aapko toh mujhse koi bhi matlab nahi haina ?


Maan: Aisa nahi hai Geet tum mujhe galat samaj rahi ho


Geet: Aisa nahi toh phir kaisa hai Maan..aap hi kaha karte thena k aapko mujhpar bharosa hai toh kya itna hi bahrosa tha aapko mujhpar jo itne aasani se tuth gaya


Maan: Aisa mat kaho Geet.. main aaj bhi tumpar utna hi yakeen karta hoon jitna k pehle karta tha magar...


Geet: Magar...mujhe toh aisa nahi laga aapne bina meri baat sunne mujhe ek hi pal mein apni zindagi se bedakal kar diya..kya yahi neev thi humare risthe ki?

Maan: Humare rishte par sawal mat uthayou Geet..Tum soch bhi nahi sakthi k tumse kahe hue har ek galat labz ne mujhe sekdo maut de di hai


Geet: Maut toh aaj mere naseeb mein hai Maan.. aapki baate mere dil mein teer ki tarah chub rahi thi..aaj meri halat kuch aisi hai jaha pe naahi hi main zinda insaan kehla sakthi hoon aur naahi ek laash


Maan: Aisa mat kaho Geet main jeete jee mar jaaunga mere rehthe tumhe kuch nahi ho saktha

Geet: Yakeen toh mujhe bhi tha iss baat ka magar aaj haalat kuch aise hai k aapko mera saath gawara nahi hai


Maan: Geet haalat chahe jobhi ho main tumhe kho nahi sakhta main jaanta hoon aaj shayad tumhe meri baate khokli lag rahi ho magar mera vishwas karo Geet tumhare bina main adhura hoon


Geet: Vishwas karna chahthi hoon Maan par...


Maan: Jaanta hoon shayad tum dubara mujpar yakeen na kar pau magar maine jobhi kiya wo zaruri tha kyunki.

Geet: Kyunki?


Maan: Wajah main tumhe abhi nahi bata saktha Geet par kaash tum kuch pal k liye mujhpar yakeen kar paathi..kaash


Geet: Mera yakeen dagmagaya hi kab tha Maan jo k mujhe usse dubara khada karna pade

Maan: Geet kya tum sach keh rahi ho?


Geet: Maan najaane kyun aaj bhi mera dil aapke khilaf gawahi dene ko raazi nahi hai..aaj bhi yahi lagta hai k aap dur hokar bhi mere paas ho


Maan: Inn duriyon ka zimedar bhi toh main hi hoon kaash main uss waqt ko wahi rokh paata


Geet: Kaash aaj ka din humari zindagi mein kabhi aata hi nahi


Maan: Kaash main uss Arjun ko humesha k liye humari zindagi se dur kar paata toh shayad


Geet: toh shayad aaj aap mere paas hothe mere dil k kareeb


Maan: Tum bhi toh mere aakhon k saamne hothi


Geet: Kya ab hum dubara kabhi mil paayenge?


Maan: Bharosa rakho Geet ye duriyoon ko main jald hi khatm kar dunga bus ho sake toh thoda yakeen zarur rakhna apne Maan par main aaj bhi apne baat par kayam hoon main tumhara saath kabhi nahi chodunga..kaash tum yakeen kar paati


Geet: Yakeen hai ..khud se bhi zyaada..haalatho ka rukh badlane ka main intezaar karungi Maan.. aapki Geet aapka intezaar karegi Maan

Maan: Apna khayal rakhna Geet..main jald hi tumhe lene aaunga

NEXT DAY

Maan left KM early in the morning but he did not go to KC

He went to meet someone secretly

Meanwhile,

Dev and Adi come to meet Geet

Dev: Geet Bro ne tumhare saath jo kuch bhi kiya uske liye main tumse maafi maangta hoon

Geet: Maafi maangni ki koi zarurat nahi hai Dev haan ye baat sach hai k mujhe unki baato se tesh pauchi magar iss baat ki khushi bhi hai k wo mujhpar itna bharosa karte the k wo iss baat ko bilkul bhi bardassh nahi kar paaye

Adi :Geet ek baat batau tum Arjun se kab mili?

Geet: Adi sir Arjun se meri mulakat uss din hui jis din main tender k documents submit karne gayi thi

Dev: Magar documents submit karne k liye Bro bhi toh tumhare saath aanewale thena

Geet :Haan wo aanewale the magar ussi waqt hume information milithi k kisi site mein koi problem ho gayi hai aur kyunki aap dono bhi office mein nahi the issliye Maan khud site par chale gaye

Adi :Magar uss din toh kisi bhi site mein koi problem nahi thi tumhe ye information kisne di?

Geet: Ye information toh usne di thi..

Dev: Kisne Geet naam batau

PRECAP: And the traitor is😡😡😡😡😡

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Love- Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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