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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandymore

Awsome prt,geet thought she was talkng wid her babji so cute
so dat langur arjun sabotaged their project welldone maan punch ki barsaat krni chaie us gaddhe pe
oh babji parcel me kya h.jaldi update karo piya

Thanks Pooja yes maan ko uss langoor ki ghulai karni chahiye thi par aisa abhi nahi hua toh future mein zarur hoga...parcel mein kya ho sakthahai...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you dear friends for your love and support. I have replied to each of your comments thanks a ton it is really a very big encouragement to me. Here is the next part I hope u will like it.
PART 43
Maan: Maan ki Geet ko Maan k rehthe hue koi bhi musibat choo k bhi nahi guzarsakthi
He takes Geet and goes away from there
Arjun: Iss MSK ki itni himmat k wo mujhe sabke saamne insult karke chala gaya
Arjun: Mujhe toh laga tha k presentation dekhne k baad isse shaqh ho jaayega k Geet ne mujhe saare details diye hai
Arjun:Shaqh toh dur ki baat hai ye toh usse Maan ki Geet kehkar apne saath le gaya mera plan iske bharose ko zara bhi dagmaganahi paaya
Arjun: Thik hai main bhi dekhtha hoon kab tak ye uss ladki ka saaya bankar uska saath detha hai aakhir apni aakhon par toh vishwas karna hi hogana usse
Arjun dials a number
Arjun: Wo Parcel MSK tak paucha dho
Arjun: Ab dekhna ye parcel kya ghul khilatha hai
Meanwhile,
Maan is driving the car
Geet is lost in her own thoughts
Geet: (thinking) Arjun ne exactly wahi presentation kaise sabke saamne pesh kar diya kaun ho saktha hai jisne uss tak ye details pauchaye
Maan was observing Geet
Maan: (thinking)Lagta hai uss Arjun ki wajah se phir se pareshan ho gayi hai
Maan: (thinking) Ab kya karu itne mushkil se toh maine iska darr bhaga diya tha
Geet: (thinking) Main Maan se baat karti hoon
Maan and Geet together : Woh...
They share an eyelock
Maahi...Maahi...
Maan and Geet together: Wo main keh raha/rahi thi...
Both started smiling
Maan: Tum pehle bolo Geet
Geet: Maan wo main soch rahi thi k wo project
Maan: Geet uss project ko bhool jau aise kayi saare projects hume aage mil jaayenge
Geet: nahi Maan aap samjhe nahi main ye keh rahi thi k uss Arjun ko...
Maan :Geet tumhe uss Arjun se darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai main hoon tumhare saath aur waise tumne dekha na usne tumhe choone ki koshish ki magar maine usse pehle hi uska muh tod diya
Geet: Maan wo toh hai magar...
Maan: Magar kya ussne mere aane se pehle bhi tumhare saath batameezi ki toh tumhne mujhe bataya kyun nahi main abhi jaakar uske haath pair tod detha hoon uski himmat kaise hui meri Geet ko haath lagane ki
Geet: Maan aap meri baat sunenge
Maan: Nahi bilkul nahi tumhari baat sunne ka hi nateeja hai k wo kamina aaj zinda hai warna main kabka usse uski sahi jagah par paucha detha
Geet places her finger on his lips
Geet: Chup bilkul chup
Maan felt a shiver as her finger touched his lips
Maaneet eyelock
He could not resist himself and immediately planted a kiss on her finger
Geet removed her finger and her face was completly red
Maan was admiring her he loved the look on her face whenever she blushed
Geet: Aap aise kya dekh rahe ho?
Maan: kuch bhi toh nahi jaanti ho Geet jab bhi tum sharmathi ho toh bilkul "WO" lagthi ho
Geet: "WO" ye wo kya hai
Maan :Kabhi fursat mein batunga filhaal tum kuch keh rahi thi
Geet: Maan Arjun ne jo presentation diya wo exactly jo humne taiyaar kiya tha waise hi tha
Maan :Sirf presentation nahi Geet balki tender mein jo quotation tha wo bhi wahi tha jo k humne quote kiya tha
Geet: Haan Maan magar iska matlab hai
Maan: Iska matlab toh saaf hai Geet k Khurana constructions mein koi gaddar hai jisne uski madat ki hai
Geet: Wo kaun ho saktha hai Maan
Maan: Wo jo koi bhi ho uski sachhai jald hi sabke saamne aayegi
Geet: Magar
Maan: Magar wagar chodo Geet mujhe bhook lagi hai aur mujhe kuch khana hai
Geet: Bhook lagi hai yun achanak?
Maan: Ab bhook kya time dekhkar lagthi hai bus mujhe kuch khana hai
Geet: Ab yaha aapke Italian dishes toh nahi milenge haan magar main ek jagah jaanti hoon jaha par pethpuja ho sakthi hai
Maan: Toh batau kaha jaana hai?
Geet: Chaliye yaha se left lijiye aur phir...she gives him the directions
Geet: Bus bus yahi rukh jaayiye
Maan: Geet ye tum mujhe kaha le aayi ye toh pura roadside food hai main ye sab nahi kahaunga
Geet: Khana toh aapko padegahi aur waise bhi bina khaye aapko kaise pata chalega k kaunsi cheez achhi hai aur kaunsi buri
Maan: Wo sab mujhe pata hai
Geet: haan aakirkaar MSK k paas divyadhristhi jo hai haina
Maan: Geet tumhe toh main...
Geet: Aap mujhe baad mein dekh lijiyega chaliye filhaal kuch kha lethe hai
She forces him to come out
Geet: Wah wah kitne saare chatpate cheeze hai yaha ab kya khaye...
She starts looking here and there and then
Geet: Golgappe...
She was holding Maan's hand and she pulled him and started running towards the stall
Maan: Geet... Geet ye kaha bhaage jaa rahi ho
Geet: Maan hum golgappe khayenge
Maan: Bilkul bhi nahi chalo yaha se
Geet: nahi main nahi jaaungi mujhe toh yahi khana hai agar aapko meri parwah hai toh aap bhi mujhe khane se mana nahi karoge
Maan: Jab bhi dekho emotional blackmail karti rehthi hai
Geet: Kya kuch kaha aapne?
Maan: Nahi kuch bhi toh nahi meri itni mazaal k main tumhare saamne kuch kahu
Geet: Phir thik hai bhaiya jaldi se golgappe dijiye aur haan ekdum theekha alu bhi daaliyega
Man: Ji
He starts making the golgappe and Geet's excitement was going on increasing
Maan was bowled by her innocence
Geet started relishing her favourite food
Maan was simply admiring her
Geet: Maan aap bhi khiyena sach mein bada achha bana hai
Geet: Bhaiyaji inhe bhi dijiye
Maan was confused whether he should eat it or not
Geet: khaiye khaiye sharmana kaisa iske hum paise denge inhe muft mein thodi na kha rahe hai
Maan: Geet tum bhi na
Geet: Ofho chodiye bhaiya aap mujhe dijiye
She takes a piece and feeds it to Maan
Without a moment of hesitation he took the piece in his mouth
Geet: Aap toh keh rahe the k aap nahi kaoyge ab kaise kha rahe ho
Maan: Geet tumhare haath se main zeher bhi haste haste pee lu toh ye toh bus
Geet covers his mouth with her hand
Geet: Ye kaisi baate kar rahe ho aap?
Maan: Main toh bus..
Geet: Mujhe kuch nahi sunna aur naahi mujhe ye golgappe khane hai main aapse naaraz hoon jaaiye main aapse baat nahi karti
Maan:Are geet suno toh
But Geet goes and sits in the car
Maan pays the bill
Maan: Ab kya karu Madam toh gussa ho gayi hmm...
He gets an idea
He goes and starts the car
Geet does not look at Maan
After some time
Geet: Maan ye hum kaha jaarahe hai
Maan: Kyun tumhe mere saath darr lag raha hai
Geet: Nahi aap baat ko ghumane ki koshish mat kijiye bataiye hum kaha jaa rahe hai
Maan: Mera batane ka mood nahi hai
Geet: Aisi baat hai toh jaaiye mujhe bhi sunne ka koi shaukh nahi hai
Maan: Nautakibaaz
Geet: Kya? Kya kaha aapne dubara boliye
But Maan stops the car
Geet: Ye aapki car humesha kharab ho jaati hai
Maan: Geet maine car rokhi hai
Geet: Maan ye toh multiplex hai hum yaha kya kar rahe hai
Maan: Swimming karne aaye hai
Geet: kya?
Maan: Geet hum yaha movie dekhne aaye hai maine suna hai hai k kafi romantic movie hai
Geet: Aap movie dekhoge?
Maan: Main nahi hum wo kya haina kisine mujhse farmaish ki thi k usse koi romantic movie dekhni hai bhale hi mazak mein hi sahi par main uski har baat ko pura karna chahtha hoon phir wo mazak hi kyun na ho
Geet was very happy
Maan: So Madam movie dekhne chale
Geet: Ji
They go inside the multiplex
After 3 hours
Geet: maan movie kitni romantic thina ?
Maan :Mujhe kya pata main movie kaha dekh raha tha
Geet: Movie nahi dekh rahe the toh kya dekh rahe the
Maan: Main toh tumhe dekh raha tha
Maaneet eyelock
Maahi...Maahi...
Maan: mera matlab hai abhi toh tumhara gussa thanda ho gayana
Geet: hmm...
Maan: Aur koi farmaish?
Geet: haan haina magar baadmein batungi filhaal ghar chale
Maan: Hmm...
Next day
Khurana Constructions
Everyone was discussing about the project
This was the first time that KC could not grab a deal
Maan enters his cabin
Maan: Iss sajish mein jis kisne bhi Arjun ka saath diya hai usse toh main dhundkar nikalunga
Just then he sees a parcel on his table
Maan: Parcel? Issmein kya ho saktha hai aur kisne bheja hai bhejnewale ka naam bhi nahi hai issmein
He opens the parcel
Maan is totally shocked and is fuming in anger
PRECAP: TERI MERI PREM KAHANI HAI MUSHKIL😭😭😭
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PART 44: PAGE 85
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Me first...again...yippieee...


like always am gonna say it was awesome once again...and then the best is that you started it with the line that i really liked from the last update...


oye Mr arjun...i mean...at least now you need to get a life...cant u understand that she is maan ki geet...and defnitely you cannot shake that trust he has on her...of course he will not doubt her because of your silly tricks...i thought after so many failures you might have learnt your lesson...but no...you are again up to something...that parcel...grrr...you are making me hate you more and more...


i guess i need to stop thinking about that Arjun...like maan wants geet to...btw...kya compatibility hain...both talking at the same time...thatsy they are perfect for each other...hihi...


Magar kya ussne mere aane se pehle bhi tumhare saath batameezi ki toh tumhne mujhe bataya kyun nahi main abhi jaakar uske haath pair tod detha hoon uski himmat kaise hui meri Geet ko haath lagane ki


maan in full possessive and angry mode...what geet...this was the perfect occasion...couldnt you have tell maan that you had had an encounter with arjun that day...


Nahi bilkul nahi tumhari baat sunne ka hi nateeja hai k wo kamina aaj zinda hai warna main kabka usse uski sahi jagah par paucha detha

this was true...me too was waiting so much for maan to beat him black and blue...if geet wouldnt have come in between arjun would have been a deadmeat by now...haha...


earlier maan's favourite line was chup bilkul chup...and geet used to shiver when he would place his finger on her lips...but yeh kya hain...it's the complete opposite...i guess it's the effect of being together all the time...- a complete reversal of gesture...haha...


again Piya...you have mentionned it but still you didnt let us know...me so eager now...what is with this 'WO' of maan...plzzz telll us...and also like them...me too wondering who could be the one cheating them in KC...


Geet: Bhook lagi hai yun achanak?

Maan: Ab bhook kya time dekhkar lagthi hai bus mujhe kuch khana hai


see i told you...maan has started behaving like geet...


everytime i read about golgappe...but to be frank till today i havent even tasted a tinyminy bit of it...so...keep it in mind...Piya...whenever i shall come at ur place you have got to feed me this...hihi...


Geet: khaiye khaiye sharmana kaisa iske hum paise denge inhe muft mein thodi na kha rahe hai

finally geet to her usual self...i thought ke maybe she has really started behaving like maan...haha...this was typical geet handa...telling maan that they were not eating freely...lol...


heyyy...maan took her for a movie...he is taking all her farmaish seriously...geet...couldnt u have made a farmaaish for marriage as well...kabka mrs khurana ban gayi hoti...hihi...


geet drooling over maan suna that...but here maan was drooling over her...ok not really drooling...but still he said that he was looking at her all the time...for 3 whole hours...


oopsiess...maan received the parcel...but this time me not gonna be scared...coz i know that you definitely must be having an awesome idea about this as well...anf finally...my so long awaited song sequence gonna be in the next update...me so happy...


oops...again forgotten...my favourite line for today goes to:


Geet tumhare haath se main zeher bhi haste haste pee lu toh ye toh bus


this was the best for me today...maan trusting her blindly like this...awww...i loved it...


continue soon and thanks for the pm...


i guess today also i couldnt have waited for my return after tuition...so decided to read before itself...haha...


P.S. me not knowing what is divyadhrishti...


Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏

as usual awesome post
too good,,,,,maan has been so caring and affectionate all the time
took her for golgappa treat
how sweetly he said na tumhare haath se to main zeher bhi kha lunga
loved it
and Mr. maan singh khurana for a movie...great
waise movie ho ya circus maan nu ki farq pehnda hai jab geet uske saath hai

superbly written
nd finally the parcel
god this arjun na...bure chitter khaega maan se
i know what is gonna happen so will keep shut
continue soon dear

superbly written

👏
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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me third..dinka chika dinka chika he he he..
sukar hai babaji ka ke me late nahi...😆
update
starting with MSK ke sweet sweet dialogue se...maan ki geet😳uff
arjun ko acha jatka milla..very good...usne kya socha tha ke maan geet pe shak karega...hat bebkoof..asa kabi bi nahi ho sakti...
i thing ke us parcal me geet aur arjun ki pics hogi jab vo use takraya tha😡..baki pata nahi...
maan kiss geet finger😳...ajj ek kiss to mil hi gai...aur muje lagta nahi ke maan ko sach me bhook lagi hogi wo to topic change kar raha hoga..geet ka dyan hatane ke lia...
oo golguppe..muh me pani a gaya...di muje abi golgupe chahia...
fantastic update..rocking
Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
so now maan had seen the parcel dear
what ll happen now
i hope he ll make geet to leave the kc
i think this ll be dear
or he thinks that this the plan of the arjun
dont no but the precap is scary dear
hope everything ll be alright
pls update the next one tommrow dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update. thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
well written update...👏.
I really enjoyed the entire things except the last few lines...
precap 😭😭😭...I know 🤬 Arjun is the main culprit...but want to know who 🤬 is helping him from the KC...please update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hayee eatng golgappee so sweetly
parcel arjun ne bheja h pr usme kya h

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