FF:ArSh: obession Chapter 4 pg 22

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Obsession: a love that crossed limits Dangerously
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Character sketch

The Maliks

Armaan Malik: 29yrs old senior doctor he is Reckless, edgy , arogant , his arroagance is what makes girls drool over him, enjoys the being the hung of the hospital ' he is the hard to get type ,he loves taking risks a very talented and great doctor ' he think he owns sanjeevni and can do whatever he feels like just because his father Dr.shashank is the head of Senjeevani' he is very close to his loved ones weather it is his family or friends once armaan get attached to anyone he is very protective of them, gets jealous very fast ' he has a dark abusive past due to his over protectiveness that only his brothers and best friend atul knows ' doesn't know how to control his temper acts very rash in anger''. But then again he is is like a dark knight

Rahul Malik: 27 yrs old Senior doctor he defines the saying punjab ka Sher , a real sona munda..is a real charmer a total flirt ' fun loving has a great sense of humor his wicked one liners and wise crakes are sure bring a smile to ones face ' is own for his sry pick up lines that some how work on girls except his gf muskaan '. Unlike his big bro armaan he doesn't in fact he makes sure he doesn't act up when ever his dad is around ' he also loves his family and friends a lot he to has the protectiveness in him but only diffrence is hethinks knows how to control him self unlike his big b armaan' or does he ? he gets jealous very fast

Siddhant malik:25 yrs old last yr inter in sanjeevani youngest son of dr. shashank .. that's why he is the most spoiled he is used to getting his way or all hell breaks lose a total kid at heart.. just like his big bros armaan and rahul he too is gifted with great look and awesome personality ' he is basically a mix tyre of armaan and rahul put together flirting is in there blood so it comes natural to him' infact he doesn't know when he is even flirting he is so use to doing it ' yet he has a innocene in him that touches any girls heart'sweet ,caring and kind hearted ' yet he is like armaan when it comes to family and loved ones very protective '.not in a good way .. he too has the jealous streak in him which is not good ' when he gets J he loses controls his temper just like armaan'. he hasn't learned from his armaan bro mistakes has to learn to control his anger..cant stand riddhima they always fight but some where deep down he knows he cares for her and is falling for her .. he cant bare her talking to any other guy .. he feels like beating crap of them always keeps a eye on her to see where she is and with who' and they aren't even a couple yet '. If they do then what else will sid demand out of riddhima

Khannas

Atul Khanna: 29 yrs old senior doctor armaans and raul best friend since childhood and like big bro to sid ' he is the oldest in the gupta family very close to his family loves his 3 sisters a lot he is the best brother any sister would ask for he is more like dad to his sisters then a bro very cool and laid back trust his sisters to make the right choices .. married to his college sweet heart anjali his friends tease him and tell he is a total joru ka ghulam but his sisiter say no he isn't he just a sacha jeevan saathi ' loves his wife madly the best hubby any girl would get ' he is very blunt and open ,he tell what ever is in his heart straight to your face he never means to hurt anyone not even by mistake but because of his innocence he sometimes says the the wrong things at the wrong that makes every burst out in laughter in very compromising moements'. Loves his best friend armaan a lot knows about his past supports him ' but for how long what will happen when he finds out armaans dangerous eyes have been laid on one of is sisters will there friendship stay the same will he give his sister to him even after knowing the real armaan?

Anjali Khanna:28 yrs old senior doctor aka known as hitler in sanjeevani because when comes to being a doctor and patient lives there is no compromises .. she is a pefect example of class and elegance, woman of today..confident, responsible'smug at times..she is beautiful and knows it because of that atul fell for her she 'fells lucky having a hubby that dotes on her 'he treats like a queen.. she has the upper hand in marriage it her way or the highway' she is very close to her SIL's they are like her sisters 'she has a mind of her know she always belives what she sees ' she will tell you exactly what she feels ..she either likes you or hates you no middle way 'she thinks with her mind not heart.. she thinks malik bros are good guys but feels sumthing is fishy but doesn't want belive it is close to malik bros there her friends'.. will she support her hubby or SIL's , or friends when it comes to knowing the truth abt the malik bros and her SIL love life'.is expecting her and atul first baby '.always been moody but now her hormones are running even more wild .

Shilpa khanna 28 yrs old senior doctor working in new York coming back to india and working in sanjeevani. She is exactly 15months younger to her big bro atul ' very close to her family she is the woman of today ' modern , confident , independent when she wants to be knows the way of the world is a big girl she thinks she can handle herself in any stistuation she is put in that is till she meet armaan she is not use to people controlling her she only listens to her bro no one else , close to her sisters and bhabhi / best friend anjali

'. She is the type of girl who loves to feell lady like very comfortable in western clothes.. she loves her freedom she ' knows how and when to work her girl charm ' she makes a lot of guys heads turn when she walk in a room loves to be the eye candy of the guys ' wants to fall in love but doesn't realize what she is getting to when she falls for armaan was her bro right for warning? '

Muskaan khanna :26 yrs old full on Punjabi ki sherni '. She is the kind girl who will make one dance to her tunes' full of masti and fun total bidass' luv to worry her bf rahul ' she is the type of girl who will say anything to anyone very blunt but doesn't hurt anyone'. Modern yet desi at heart'total kid '. Finished her internship doing her residency ' she is a great doctor'. Loves to joke around close to her family ' her and her bro are the laughter track of the group ' never a dull moment when she is around'loves to fight with rahul'feels she feels he his jealousy is just his love but ' till what limt? She cant understand why her bro doesn't like her dating rhaul ' he always says there is much more to the malik bros then us girls know be careful but why ' rahul is a gem of a person.

Riddhuma Khanna:24 yrs old 1 more yr of interning in sanjeevani then going to to her residency she is the baby of the family 'her bro and sisters n bhabi have protected her a lot from the real world ' she is till very innoncet'only sees good in people trust people very easily'she is different from her sisters she is more comfortable in Indian clothes but when its need she knows how to become a glam doll and turn heads beauty is in her bloodshe too is very pretty' she best fits the defition desi girl'even thought she is sweet caring and kind hearted .. he too hasa fun side to her' loves to joke and play pranks on people knows how to let lose and have a good time .. cant stand sid malik who always irrates her they are always at each others throats ' but every love story starts with hatred then becomes love ' will she fall for him and if so is he the right one for this delicate darling who isn't use to having her life controlled she is use to freedom but for some reason she always has to let sid know where she is and with who and he is just a friend but he demands it out of her.

Side roles

Maan khurana: 27yrs oldsenior doctor muskaan friend cares for her a lot

Prem juneaija: 29 yrs doctor shilpas friend from NY

Arjun Punj:24 yrs old intern ridz bestfriend

Intro

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Love a four letter word that means much more what is love exactly' Some say its sacrifice ,friendship, or even Junoon 'the saying goes is everything is fair in Love and War is it really fair? Till what limit is it morally right'.. what happens when young love becomes much more to a point where it becomes obsession and over protectiveness .. when loves reaches such a leave when gets a point to be dangerous and suffocating for the other person what does one do .. this exactly how Shilpa and her sisters feel and what they go through'it was as if she was under his love spell she couldn't see how unhealthy the relationship had become 'she was starting to get a uneasy feeling in her as if something is terribly wrong..but was in total denial .. not only her but her 2 sisters were also getting trapped in the malik bros love

TEASER

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How could he this cant be happening not again why cant he control himself he thought'he loved her was this his love. No it couldn't be if you love someone then because of you they wouldn't end up in a ICU at a hospital.

Outside ICU

Doctor comes out

Armaan: how is she now

Atul: don't even dare to say my sisters name from your mouth im there for here 'there is no need for you to care for her Prem how is shilpa

Dr. Prem: please yeh hospital hai this not the time for this bpth of please calm down ' Atul bhai shilpa is fine don't worry there was a lot of loss of blood but she is stable now but I'm so sorry we couldn't save the baby' she had a miscarriage we will have to keep her under bservation for a few days she is still very weak .. you all can see her now .. but please no stress

Armaan is about to walk in the room

Atul: no don't you dare stay away from her after what you did I will not allow you near her '(looking at rahul and Sid) and not even your two brothers they too better stay away from muskaan and ridz understood.

Armaan: atul I know you are upset at me and you have every right to be but please let me meet her please and for my fault why are you making rahul and Sid stay from muskaan and ridz. I need to meet her please

Atul: no armaan you've only seen my good side don't make me show you my ugly side im warning you stay away from my family all of you .

Rahul and sid walk near muskaan and ridz

Anjali comes in front: didn't you her my husband stay away from us got it

(walks to armaan slaps him) this just a small trailer if you or you bros come near shilpa , muskaan or ridz there will much more then that.. I cant beleiv I trusted you more them atul he was right you boys aren't what you show to be .

Atul(moves anjali behind him): ange don't be near him we cant lose our child either says atul

They all go in side except for malik bros

Armaan walks in sid rahul follow

Shilpa see him

Shilpa(yelling top of her lungs): you stay away from me bhai get this killer away from me he killed my baby get out leave gooo

Armaan: killer shilpa what that was my baby to i didnt mean

Atul: leave now

Shilpa: bhai you were right he is a monster he killed mt babyyy we done I don't ever want see this murderer again

Index
Cs, tearser pg 1
chapter 1pg 11

chapter 2 pg 16

Chapter 3 pg 20

Chapter 4 pg 22

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow, very interesting character sketch and teaser!!!!!!!!!!
loved it.
can't wait to read more, so please update soon.
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the teaser is awesome plz continue soon 😃
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Wow yaar...ur cs was really descriptive..it seems u really understand the characters that u have made...the teaser was superb!!!too gud..plz plz mw when u update...
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wowww
loved da cs
interesting
awesome concept
loved da teaser
poor shilpa lost her child
cant wait 2 read more
what did armaan do
what is da secret with da mallik brothers
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Sounds interesting great start so far

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Wooww!! Haaa...totally luuv the concept! It looks sooo goood!! Just can't wait for the update!cont. Supeer soon! And do PM me:)
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Sounds very good. Post a part soon. :)
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very interesting concept
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Heyyy ammmaaazzziinngg update dear...luvd the char sketch n teaser...cont super soon😃

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