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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: ytanuja
Awesome waiting for the damaka when the deal is announced, precap looks interesting,

Dhamaka toh zarur hoga

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minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#202

awesome VM
roopali dear superb job
matlab time aane wala hai na

u scaring me piya
but roopali has done a fab job i swear
well done

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ritzy09

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Posted: 15 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: piya-

Di mujhe bhi ice cream khana bahut pasand hai mera bhi dil ek ice cream se nahi manta hehe

Regarding Maan pyar toh ache acho ko badal detha hai aur apna maan itna bhi dhust nahi hai yes he cares for Geet. Regarding ur guess one is right and the other one is wrong

tujhe bhi ice crea pasand hai...what's your fav flavour?

trust wala guess sahi hona cahiye...baaki chalta hai

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: ritzy09

tujhe bhi ice crea pasand hai...what's your fav flavour?

trust wala guess sahi hona cahiye...baaki chalta hai

My fav flavour Butter skoch and chocolate

Di kaunsa guess sahi hai aapko aaj k update mein pata chal jaayega

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

Thanks dear

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: crazydevil87

Kya romance bhara update tha piya...
Luved it!!
Geet's appetite really made me laugh...
:D precap cleared all my fears
luv u 4 dat yaar...main to abhi se wait kr rhi hoon...

Ab maneet ek saath honge toh romance toh hogahina thanks for commenting

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: mandymore
Hayee,such.cute n sweet prt
maan is so caring abt her,thnxs 4 pm
2precap is grt,1is scary

Yes Pooja Maan has changed a lot he cares for her and cannot see her in pain

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: mandymore
Poor geet shes so scared of dat devil
hope maan hamesha uske saath rahe.luvd it

Geet is not scared of Arjun but she does want to see Maan in any trouble

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#209

Thank you for ur love and Support. I love each one of u

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#210

Thank you for your love and support dear friends. I would like to dedicate this part to my dear friend ROOPALI. Thanks Roops u r busy with ur exams but still u made a VM for me. Love u loads dear and thanks once again

PART 42

He kissed her forehead

Maan: Good night Geet

He gave a smeet smile and closed the door

Next Day

Geet wakes up her eyes are still closed

Geet: Good morning Babaji

Maan: Good morning Geet

Geet: Babaji main humesha aapko Good morning kehthi hoon magar aaj se pehle aapne kabhi bhi reply nahi kiya kahi main sapna toh nahi dekh rahi aakhein khol kar dekthi hoon

Geet: Nahi..nahi kahi aap chale gaye toh itne saalo k baad aaj aapka mood bana hai apni iss bachhi se baat karne ka hum aise hi baat karenge magar mujhe pata kaise chalega k ye sapna hai ya haqeekat

Maan: iska solution hai mere paas

Geet:Achha jaldi bataiye kya solution hai

Maan: Abhi batatha hoon

He goes and pinches Geet

Geet: Aah...

She opens her eyes

Geet: Maan aap?

Maan: Haan Geet tumhe laga tumhare babaji hai

Geet makes a puppy dog face and nods her head

Maan could not control his laughter she was looking so innocent

Geet: Aapko hasi aa rahi hai mujhe kitna dard ho raha hai pata bhi hai

Maan: Batau zara main bhi toh dekhu

Geet: hatiye pehle ye bataiye k itne subah subah aap mere kamre mein kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: Aapke liye garma garam Bed tea laya hoon Madam

Geet: Maan aapne khud...

Maan: Yes Madam maine khud apne haatho se ye chai banai hai wo kya haina kal raat maine kisi se promise kiya tha k ab se main uska khayal rakhunga

Geet was smiling

Maan: Hmm..waise bhi kal raat kisine itne saare ice cream kha liye the k mujhe laga subah subah usse ek achhi si chai piladu

Maan: Ye lijiye

Geet: Aap nahi lenge oh main toh bhool gayi k aapko toh wo kadwi black coffee pasand hai haina?

Maan: Waise ab lagta hai kuch aadathe badalni hogi mujhe kabhi kabhi zindagi mein mitass bhi zaruri hothi hai

Saying so he takes a cup of tea and starts drinking it

Geet was fully aware that Maan was doing this for her happiness

Maan: Geet ab jaldi se taiyaar ho jau yad haina aaj wo deal announce honewali hai

Geet: Ji

Maan:Thik hai main tumhara intezaar kartha hoon tum jaldi aa jaana

Maan was about to leave when Geet holds his hand

Maan turns around

Geet: Thank you Maan

Geet leaves his hand but this time Maan holds her hand and takes it close to his lips

He places a soft kiss on her hand

Maan: Sorry Geet maine tumhari chimti li toh tumhe dard hua hogana toh uski barpaayi mein ye kiss

Geet started blushing

Maan: Main tumhara intezaar kar raha hoon zaldi aana

Maan goes away from there

After sometime

Maan: Chale Geet

Geet : Magar Adi Sir aur Dev bhi humare saath aayengena

Maan: Wo dono waha pauch jayenge unki chinta mat karo chalo hum chalthe hai

Geet: Ji

CHOPRA CONSTRUCTIONS

Man: Welcome Sir

Maan: Meeting time par hi start honewali hai na

Man: Ji Sir main aapko conference room mein lekar chaltha hoon... Mam aap bhi aayeye

Maan holds her hand firmly

Geet was surprised by his action

Maan: nahi hum khud chale jaayenge

Man: As u wish Sir

Maan: Chale Geet

Geet nods her head in approval

Conference Room

All the big industrialist were present each one of them wanted to grab this deal

When Maneet entered the meeting had already started the room was fully dark

Mr. Chopra: Friends hum ek ek karke sabke plans aur tenders dehkenge jobhi best hoga ye contract ussi ko milega so let us start

One by one different construction firms started explaining their plans

Man: Ok toh ab Rathore Firm k maalik Mr. Arjun apna plan pesh karenge

Maan and Geet were shocked to hear his name

Maan was fuming in anger as he recollected the unfortunate incident

He immediately grabbed Geet's hand and brought her more close as if assuring her that he is there for her forever and ever

Geet placed her other hand on his and gave him an assuring look

Man: So Mr. Arjun aap shuru kijiye

Arjun gives an evil look to Maan and Geet

Maan: (thinking) Dil toh karta hai k isse yahi dafhnadu meri Geet par buri nazar rakhne ki himmat ki isne

Geet: Maan shant ho jaayiye pls mere liye

Maan nods his head

Meanwhile Arjun starts explaining his plans

Maan and Geet get the biggest shock of their life coz the plan what Arjun was explaining was exactly the one that Maaneet had planned

Geet: Maan ye toh...

Maan: Chup Geet main jaanta hoon ismein bhi iski koi chaal hogi

The tender was also the same

Mr. Chopra was very impressed with this plan

Man: Ok so next presentation would b from Khurana Constructions

Geet: maan ab hum kya karenge

Maan: Sorry Mr. Chopra but we r not interested in this deal

Saying so he takes Geet and goes out

Geet: Maan aapne ye kya kiya hum unhe bata bhi toh sakthe the na k ye plan humara tha uss Arjun ka nahi

Maan: Geet bina kisi saboot k hum ye ilzaam nahi laga sakthe waise bhi main jaanta hoon ye zarur uss Arjun ki chal hai aur ye wo akele nahi kar saktha zarur iss plan mein kisine uska saath diya hai

Geet: Par Maan

Maan placed his finger on her lips

Maan: Shh...Geet ismein itna sochne ki zarurat nahi hai ek deal hi toh gayi haina chalo main gadi nikaltha hoon tum dho minute yahi wait karo main nahi chahtha k uss insaan ki parchaiyi bhi meri Geet par pade

He caressed her face and kissed her forehead

Maan: Main abhi aaya

Maan goes away

Geet: Magar ye kaun kar saktha hai

Arjun: hi beautiful

Geet: Tum

She started walking away from him

Arjun tried to grab her hand but before he could manage that he was welcomed by a powerful punch

Arjun was lying on the floor his nose was bleeding

He looked up and realized that Maan was back

Maan had taken Geet in his safe embrace

Maan: Project toh tumne dhoke se haasil kar liya par agar tumhari parchayi bhi meri Geet ko chuthi hui gayi toh wo din tumhari zindagi ka aakiri din hoga

Maan: Geet ko akela samajne ki galti mat karna MSK geet ka saaya bankar humesha uska haath thamkar uske saath khada rahega

Maan: Maan ki Geet ko Maan k rehthe hue koi musibat choo bhi nahi sakthi

Maan:Agli baar agar Geet k aas paas bhi mandrathe hue nazar aaye toh apni halat ka zimedar tu khud hoga

He takes Geet and goes away from there

PRECAP: PARCEL FOR MAAN

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Edited by piya- - 15 years ago