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Posted: 14 years ago


Interesting update Shivangi...

Abhijeet and ACP have doubts on Geet...Geet wants to kill them...😲...but if Geet can kill humans then why Maithili can't...
why Geet is annoyed with Maithili then...

Maan again comes in front of her...she can't kill him because of love...

Precap interesting Maan will come out innocent from murder case.

thanx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 19 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing will b waiting 4 d nxt prt
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful and Excellent update
Cant wait for next Update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet is going to kill cid hmm and maan uska kya hoga do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update dear
please try and give some maaneet scenes dear please
overall lovely update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

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hmm...so meri shivu ko mujh par daya aa gayi mere budde hone se pehle update de diya
ok as usual a dhamakedar update but maneet scenes nayi the ... abhi aur kitna wait karna padega kuch maneet romantic scenes de do na yaar
ok so abhijeet ne geet ko ACP sir se toh bachane ki koshish kar li par anjaane mein geet ki asliyat k kafi kareeb bhi pauch gaya
hmm...geet wants to kill acp and abijeet abhi sir aap phir bhi bach jauge par acp sir ko toh bhagwan bachaye
o maan sirf tali hothe rahoge ya geet ko manane ki koshish bhi karoge
good precap chalo maan innocent hai ye jab jaan gaye
continue soon
love-Piya

bahut saari pharmaishein aa chuki hai...to I will try ki next Update full on Maaneet ho!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww dear that's superb update...
can't wait for the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 20

Note: Hey Guys! I know the Precap was to continue with the goons take over Maan and CID but since my very close friends: Piya, Silky and Sneha di have requested a Maaneet Sequence. So this part, dedicated to Piya, Silky and Sneha di! Hope you like it! I am not that good in romantic scenes…
*~*~*~*
Geet: Milind, Maan ko hotel chhod aao! I am going home!
Milind: yup!
Maan (still in clumsy state): No!! I'll go! No one needs to worry about me! Main khud chala jaonga!
Geet: then go to hell!😡
Maan: whatever!
Geet (thought): aa gaye na apni asli aukat pe! Ek pal ke liye bhi maine soch kaise liya ki yeh sudhar gaye honge! Kutte ki pooch kabhi seedhi ho hi nahi sakti! Main hi ghalat thi!
Maan: what did you call me?
Geet: go to hell Maan!
Saying so, Geet leaves.
*~*~*~*
Few hours later, Geet's Residence:
Geet was sitting on her table preparing the Forensic Report. It was just an excuse not to recall Maan. When suddenly she heard a loud noise of the door closing and smelt Milind home.

Milind: GEET!! Get your first-aid kit down!
Geet: first-aid? Yahaan kisko zarurat pad gayi?

She reached downstairs swiftly in her Vampire speed. She was shocked to see Maan bleeding from head to toe.

Geet: Maan!

She ran near Milind's arms which were holding him and then placed her hand on his forehead. Her eyes were flushed with pain; pain of loosing him.

Milind: He had an accident. A car almost crushed him

Geet couldn't hear further. She stretched her hands. Milind handed over Maan to her in her arms without cross-question.

Geet took him swiftly to her room.

Ayesha: why did you? Geet control nahi kar payegi!
Milind: I know! Geet will control herself. She knows what she's doing Ayesha! Don't worry!
Ayesha: hum bhi chalein?
Milind: nahi! Use akele rehne do!
*~*~*~*
Her heart was paining; her heart was weeping; her heart was dying seeing the reason for her heart's beating, Maan in such a condition. Maan was bleeding; he had two serious injuries on his forehead; the car's bonnet had hit him hard near his chest. There was a big bruise which was swelling every minute. He was groaning with pain. His forehead was sweating profusely… His hand was unable to move; the accident must have broken the arm bone. Geet swiftly injected the drip injection on the back of his palm and connected the glucose drip. Now she started cleaning the wounds trying hard to control her tears. Suddenly she felt his pulse dropping. Maan started breathing heavily and noisily. Geet got terrified and she placed her hand firmly on his hands. Geet also tried to give him anesthesia but he wouldn't take it…
When she found no other option to save her life (of course…Maan was her life) she took a deep breath and then used her powers to cure him. She first placed her hands on his forehead and then swiped her hands over the wounds. They were all gone altogether. There was no sign of the wounds there. Geet smiled weakly. Now she kissed his chest bruises and even they were gone now! Now she held his broken hand and fixed them in a fraction of second. This way she caressed and cured every smallest injury of her Maan. Ayesha and Milind stood near the door with Milind's arms around Ayesha and smiling watching Geet.

Milind: jo ladki aajtak logon ki jaan leti thi! Usi ne aaj ek jaan bachai!
Ayesha: aakhir aaj Geet 'ki jaan' ko khatra tha! Woh kaise nahi bachati apne Maan ko!
Milind kissed her forehead: chalo! Dono ko akele rehne do!
*~*~*~*
Maan's injuries were gone now but he was still under a little influence of anesthesia. He mumbled something every now and then and Geet enjoyed his cute mumbling smiling every now and then watching him. He was recovering fast. Maan was holding Geet's hand tightly. She clutched his hand near her chest and kissed it very frequently.

Geet: jab tak aapki Geet zinda hai! Aapko kuch nahi ho sakta!
She held Maan's hand closer to her and felt them with her cheeks and lifts…
She held his hands with both of her hands and kissed them
Maan mumbled: Geet! Mujhe kabhi chhod ke mat jaana Geet!
Their hands were interlocked together…
Geet wiped off the sweat on Maan's forehead and then stood up to leave when Maan's hands stopped her. She turned back and saw that Maan was opening his eyes and gaining consciousness.

Maan: Geet! I love you!
Geet closed her eyes hearing this and tears dropped from her eyes. She had been yearning to hear this since past 2 years. Of course she had heard it from her colleague Abhijeet but it didn't have that enchantment as Maan's. Maan slowly opened his eyes though Geet knew he was still under the intoxication of the anesthetic. His eyes were half-open and he stood up trembling. Geet looked at him with concern.
Maan came near and placed his hands around Geet's waist and jerked her near him. Geet slipped her hand on his shoulders.
Jab Jab tere paas main aaya,
Ek sukoon mila…
Jise main tha bhoolta aaya…
Wo wajood mila…
Jab aaye mausam gham ke
Tujhe yaad kiya
Maan removed Geet's curls from her right shoulder and kissed them right side of her neck. His lips shivered touching stony and freezing Geet but it didn't stop him from caressing her.

Jab sehme tanhapan se
Tujhe yaad kiya…
Maan tried to remove Geet's shirt from her shoulders and kissed them…
Dil… Sambhal ja zaraa…
Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu.

Dil…yahin ruk ja zara…
Phir Mohabbat karne chala hai tu!!
Geet tried to stop him and she stood up to leave but Maan stopped her and pulled her back to him.


Geet! Aaj to ruk jao! Tumhe kho chuka hoon! Ek aisi yaad de jao! Jise lekar main saari zindagi guzaar doon!
Geet turned back in amazement: aap apni Geet ko bula kar to dekhiye! Aap jahaan se pukarenge Geet wahin chali aayegi! Parchhayin ki tarah!
Geet apna haath Maan ke gaalo pe pherti hai. Maan use pakad leta hai. He kisses the hands and places them on his waist.

Aisa kyun kar hua
Janoo na main janoo na!
Tears drop from Maan's eyes. Geet stretches herself to kiss them away
Geet: Please come back to me... I need you




Dil…Sambhal jaa zara
Phir Mohabbat karna chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir Mohabbat karne chala hai tu…
Maan makes Geet lie below him. She closes her eyes and stops her breath. Maan's warm breaths brushes against Geet's lips just like the warm wind brushes against the leaves just after rains.

Jis raah pe hai ghar tera
Aksar wahaan se haan main hoon guzra.
Maan licks Geet's neck and places his head on her chest.
Shayad yahi dil mein rahaa!
tu mujhko mil jaaye kya pata
Maan notices tears in Geet's eyes.
Bahut aansoo diye hai tumhe! Shayad isiliye aaj un saare aansuon ki sazaa kaat raha hoon. Bhagwaan ne mujhe tumse door karke un saare aansuon ki keemat chukwa rahe hai!


Geet whispered: Maan!

Maan gets up to leave, this time Geet stops him: aaj un aansuon ki keemat chukane ka din nahi hai! Aaj to sab kuch bhula ke…
Kya hai yeh silsila!
Janoo na main janoo na!!

Dil…Sambhal jaa zara
Phir Mohabbat karna chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir Mohabbat karne chala hai tu…

Maan: I am sorry! Please mujhe maaf kar do!
Geet: aaj nahi Maan!
Kuch bhi nahi! Jab darmiyaan!
Phir kyun hai dil tere hi khwaab bunta…
Geet: aaj mujhe yeh lamha jee lene dijiye!
Chaha ki de…tujhko bhula
Pur yeh bhi mumkin ho na sakaa…
Kya hai maamla…
Janoo na main janoo na!
Geet opened Maan's shirt and licked his chest.
Dil…Sambhal jaa zara
Phir Mohabbat karna chala hai tu
Dil yahin ruk jaa zara
Phir Mohabbat karne chala hai tu…
*~*~*~*
Abhijeet was still busy working on Geet's computer. He looked shocked; amazed; afraid and several mixed feelings emerged from his heart.
Their speed; unmatchable
Abhijeet: nah! Wahi to! Geet's not fast! *phew*
Stony skin, impenetrable
Abhijeet: yeh to kabhi dekha nahi! Lekin dekhu bhi to kaise!
Detesting human food!
Abhijeet: of course Geet relishes human food. She has coffee with me! And besides unhone apne birthday ke din cake bhi khaya tha!
Don't mind drinking human drinks… (Eg. Coffee)
Abhijeet tried to lie to himself: nahi! Aisa nahi ho sakta hai! Geet cannot be!
Ability to erase serious wounds…however serious they may be!
Abhijeet's heart accelerated: kahin Geet ne hi to… no! nahi ho sakta! Impossible…
*~*~*~*
Geet lay on Maan's chest with her eyes closed forgetting her Vampire life and enjoying every human experience she could!

Maan (mumbling): Geet! Maine wo khoon nahi kiya!
Geet: I know! I'll get you out of this! Pakka!
Maan: I know!
He kissed her forehead.
Maan: why are you so cold?
Geet's eyes fell wide open. She recalled her life, where she was designed to kill; the life which was exacted on her because of Maan. She left his chest. Maan opened his eyes and looked amazed. Geet got up; cleaned her dress and then went away banging the door behind her.

Maan: Geet!
Geet came down and held Milind by the collar: you knew!
Milind: what?
Geet: you knew this would happen!
Milind: what?
Geet: Milind! Don't act smart! Aapne mujhe kyun nahi roka!
Tears formed in her eyes. Milind wiped them off!

Milind: tum rukna chahti thi?

Milind had hit a very sensitive part of her heart. She couldn't answer him back.

Milind: bolo Geet! Tum rukna chahti thi!

Geet clung to him tightly and wept bitterly.
Ayesha: hey! A Vampire crying! Not fair Geet! Come here to me!
Milind: 😉Ayesha! Yeh meri aur meri behen ke beech ki baat hai! Stay away!😉
Ayesha: achcha ji! Jaiiyee! Hum bhi aap se baat nahi karte!
Milind: haan! Jaiiye!😉
Ayesha: kyun! Main kyun jaun? Yeh mera bhi ghar hai!
Milind: achcha! To main chala jaon?
Ayesha: your wish!
Geet laughed: oh stop it you too!
Precap
Geet proves Maan innocent…
Piya, Silky and Sneha di! Hope I lived up to your expectations to some extent! I tried really hard! Please lambe comment chhodna!
Leave bada sa comment on your dabbas and don't forget to press LIKE Button!!
Love,
Shivangi

Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

mast update tha romance womace apun ko itna samj mai nahi atta lekin accha tha, aur ha aaj ki philosophy Healing kisses vampire male de ya vampire female , maja to audience ko aata hai, aur vampire hone ka yahi to fayda hai therpy ke naam pai romance bhi karte hai, 🤣

ek aur philosophy cid ke pas vampire ka case jaye to wo lov vampires ki alag defination bhi dhud hi lete hai, use cid effect kehte hai 🤣
Edited by pratiksha2009 - 14 years ago

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