Arhi Romantic SS: 'Am i forgiven?' Part3 on Pg12 - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: ---Pari---

First of all, I wanna tell you that i loved reading your detailed comment, Thanks a lot !!!
Ok, I've gotta say, I was smiling through the entire part!
I am glad that my task is accomplished to bring smile on my reader's face 😊
When will we be able to see ArHi like this yaar? I'm just waiting for this day!😳
Same here, even i am waiting for that.
Arnav is so sweet even though he's a workoholic! And the rain dance! Lolll! I was blushing like an idiot when I read it! Sounded so romantic yaar! and could totally picture the entire thing!
Thanks for appreciating 😳
The last part was my favourite though! We got to see Arnav's concern for Khushi! (How cute!) And then the hug! Hey Bhagwaan! That was too awesome! Got the shivers just reading about it!šŸ˜†
Its really nice to know that you enjoyed it thoroughly 😊
Overall, I truly loved the part yaar! And now u must continue asap, ok?!😳 And be sure to include cute/romantic scenes like u did in this one! Thanks a ton for the PM! :D
With loads of love,
Sanju
You really inspired me to write the next part 😳

Edited by Meenakshi_Dhane - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: desigirl_18

Awww very sweet and cute!! Just loved reading it!!

Its really nice to know that you enjoyed it thoroughly 😳
Thanks for the pm and keep up the awesome work!
Thanks for appreciating 😊

Edited by Meenakshi_Dhane - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Amazing!! Loved it :) so cute they are!! Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Hey dear loved it
nice continuation loving it the way u are taking it enjoyed it really
do continue soon will be waiting
Thanks for the pm darling😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aquablue17

Amazing!! Loved it :) so cute they are!! Thanks for the pm

Its really nice to know that you enjoyed it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: muskaan_cute19

Hey dear loved it
nice continuation loving it the way u are taking it enjoyed it really
do continue soon will be waiting
Thanks for the pm darling😳

Thank you so much for lovely comment Embarrassed
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aw! dat was so sweet! thnku so much for pmin me..!!
Awsum luved ArHi scenes! <33
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: divya4salmanyk

aw! dat was so sweet! thnku so much for pmin me..!!

Awsum luved ArHi scenes! <33

Thank you very much 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey, thank you very much for appreciating my writing. 😳 So here goes the 3rd part.
Its 8 a.m. in the morning. Arnav gets ready and goes down to have breakfast. Khushi is already there serving all. Arnav reaches the table and sits beside Nani's chair. He gives a teasing glance to Khushi remembering their yesterday night's wonderful moments. Khushi blushes and her face is turning pink, 😳 but she tries to concentrate on her work. Khushi serves parathas to all and sits down on the chair opposite to Arnav. Nani is yet to come on the table. Everyone starts eating. Khushi is touching his leg by hers below the table, tickling and teasing him and yet keeping her face straight, of course she has learnt this from Arnav. šŸ˜‰ Arnav is now glaring at her and saying through his eyes, "Stop doing this or you'll pay for it later." šŸ˜›
Then Khushi stops as Nani comes to dining table after completing her pooja and sits down to have breakfast. Now again Khushi is tickling Arnav and controlling her smile, Arnav is trying hard to tell her to stop doing that. Nani turns to Khushi and says her, "Khushi bitiya, ye humara pair hai, chhotey ka nahi jise aap.. " and starts smiling. šŸ˜† Khushi is very embarrassed as Akash and Anjali are laughing loudly knowing the whole situation, she blushes and runs to her room. Arnav says that he's getting late for office and rushes out of the house without meeting anyone's eyes. 😳
In the afternoon, Khushi calls Arnav to remind him that he has to come home early today as its saturday. Arnav says that he remembers and assures that he'll reach home on time. Arnav shakes his head in amusement remembering from when it all started. šŸ˜
~ Flashback ~
Arnav had finished his work early, so he came home around 2 pm. He reached his room just to give Khushi surprise, he knew she'll be beyond happy seeing him at this hour. He was shocked as he couldn't find her in the rom. He went outside and finally saw her sitting on the garden swing with payal. He stops there looking at her. She is looking so happy teasing her Jiji, as Akash and Payal are engaged and will be getting married soon.
Payal said her changing the topic, "Khushi tu bata, yaha tu khush hai na?"
Khushi: "Haan Jiji, sab bahut achhe hai, lekin main kabhi kabhi purane din miss karti hoon. Jab hum lucknow main the, toh kahin bhi apni scooter pe ghumne jate the, chaat khate the. kitna mazza aata tha na Jiji? "
Payal: "Offo Khushi, tujhe to bas khane ki hi fikar rehti hai."
Khushi: "Nahi Jiji, sirf khane ki baat nahi hai, mujhe scooter pe ghumne ka bahot mann kar raha hai."
Payal: "Khushi, kya bol rahi ho, Arnav Jiju itne achhe hai, tumhari har khwaish puri karte hai, ye jhoola (garden swing) bhi unhone tumhare liye banvaya hai. Aur ab tumhe scooter chahiye. Unki itni badi gadi hai na ghumne ke liye?"
Khushi: "Haan, gadi toh hai, par scooter pe ghumne ka mazza hi aur hai." Khushi said smiling widely.
Payal: "Tu bilkul pagal hai.", Payal said finally.
Arnav was amazed with the way this girl's mind works.

On Khushi's Birthday, Arnav closed her eyes and brought her out of the house and then she saw brand new bike in their parking lot. She was so happy.

Arnav said, "I could have brought scooter, but the way you stumble everywhere, i can't take that risk. I will take you for ride myself."
Khushi hugged him and whispered "Arnav, I love you." and kissed him gently. After that, it was a deal between them that they'll go for ride on every saturday.
~ End of Flashback ~
Arnav reaches home, Khushi is ready to go who is wearing light blue jeans and white t-shirt which Arnav has brought for her. She is looking very pretty with her hair open, Arnav is staring at her girl. He goes near her, "Hmm.. bahot pyaari lag rahi ho." 😳 and kisses her on her forehead and whispers, "Chale?"

Arnav and Khushi enjoy the ride a lot. After they come home Khushi is very happy not only because she got what she wanted, but because she is slowly bringing Arnav out of his own shield and making him enjoy his life to the fullest after a long time. 😊
Thats it for now. I hope you enjoyed reading it. šŸ˜› Sorry for updating so late, but i get time only in weekend.
Edited by Meenakshi_Dhane - 13 years ago

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