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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 41

Maan: Haan Geet main hoon tumhare paas humesha humesha k liye
Geet: Hmm...ek baat kahu Maan
Maan: Bolo Geet
Geet: Aap mujhe ice cream khilanewale ho na?
Maan: Haan Geet tumhari farmaish ko main mana kaise kar du?
Geet: Achha itna khayal rakhthe ho aap mera?
Maan: Koi shaqh?
Geet: Shaqh nahi pura yakeen hai k aapko meri koi fikr nahi
Maan: Ye kya baat hui Geet
Geet: haan yahi sach hai agar aapko meri fikr hothi toh aap yaha abhi tak baithenahi hothe mujhe kabka icecream khila chuke hothe
Geet: ab wo icecreamwala kya apna shop bannd karne se pehle iss baat ka intezaar karega k kab MSK apne royal andaaz mein uske icecream parlour mein entry lega aur kab usse aapki kidmat karne ka mauka milega
Geet: Nahi na, dekho abhi bhi bhoot bankar baithe hue hai aisa bhi nahi k abhi utkar mujhe icecream khilane le jaaye
Maan was simply smiling
Geet: Ye lo abhi bhi aapar koi asar nahi hua baithe baithe yuhi muskurarahe ho
Geet: Chaliyena maan utiyena mujhe ice cream khana hai
Maan: Geet jab tum itne pyar se mere godh par baithi ho toh main kaise utt saktha hoon
It was then when she realized that she was sitting on Maan's lap
She tried to get up but Maan pulled her towards himself
Maan: Geet jaanti ho tum jab yuhi apne hi dhun mein baate karti ho wo bhi mere godh mein baitkar toh bilkul wo lagthi ho?
Geet: Kya lagti hoon?
Maan: Kabhi fursat mein bataunga filhaal mission icecream important hai right?
Geet was blushing
Maan lifts her face by holding her chin
Maan: Geet humesha yuhi muskurathe rehna aaj k baad tumhe kisi bhi baat ya kisi bhi shaksh se darne ki koi zarurat nahi hai main har pal har haalat mein tumhare saath hoon
Geet: Ab chale
Saying so she tries to get up
But Maan once again stops her and picks her in his arms and takes her to the car
Maan: Maine kahana mere rehthe hue tumhe kisi bhi baat ki chinta karne ki zarurat nahi agar tum kaho toh main tumhe yuhi humesha apne baho mein uthakar le jau
Geet was too shy to say anything
Maan was happy that Geet is back to her normal self
Maan: Achha batau kaunsa icecream khana hai
Geet: Main jo kahungi wo aap mujhe khilauge
Maan: Yes Madam aap kehkar toh dekhiye
Geet: Pakka wala promise
Maan: haan pakkawala promise
Geet: Toh chaliye icecream parlour mein chalthe hai wahi bathathi hoon
Maan: Ok Mam
Maan stops in front of the biggest icecream parlour and opens the door of the car for Geet
He looks at her with mischief
Maan: Mam kya aap khud utrengi ya phir main aapko utakar le chalu waise second option bura nahi hai right
Geet: Maan aap bhina ab shararat bannd kijiye
Maan apna haath aage badatha hai aur Geet bade hi pyar se apna haath Maan k haath mein de dethi hai
Maan: Geet yaha tumhe har flavour ka icecream mil jaayega
But before he could complete his statement his mobile started ringing
Maan: Geet main abhi aaya tumhe jo kuch bhi chahiye mangwalo
Geet: Ji
After finishing his call Maan comes back
Maan :Geet ye sab kya hai?
Geet (busy eating) Ofho Maan ye kya bachoo jaisa sawal hai ye icecream hai
Maan: Haan Geet wo toh main jaanta hoon par itne sare icecream
Geet: Kya Maan maine zyada kaha mangwaya hai har ek flavour ka ek icecream bus
Maan: Geet ye sab tum khaogi
Geet: Sirf main nahi aap bhi aap k liye bhi har flavour ka ek mangakaya hai
Maan: Geet tumhe nahi lagta k ye kuch,...
Geet: Kum hai don't worry kum pad gaya toh dubara mangwalenge wo kya hai na aap hi ne kaha tha k ye yaha sabse best icecream miltha hai toh maine socha ab aap roz thodi na mujhe yaha lekar aaoge toh kyun na aaj hi hum dono baitkar sab icecream taste kar le
Maan: Geet main tumhe agle baar zarur lekar aaunga
Geet: O wow ye toh aur bhi badiya hai abhi ek kaam karte hai saare flavours taste kar lethe hai aur agli baar jab hum aayenge tab sabse best taste karnewala icecream hi order karenge
Maan :Geet magar
Geet: Baitiye na maan icecream melt ho jaayegi
Maan had no other option but he had to pay heeds to her demands
Geet: Khaiye na Maan ye kafi achha hai
Maan was busy admiring her innocence
Geet: Ofho aap toh kha bhi nahi rahe ho
Geet: Ye lijiye
She offers him her icecream
Maan happily accepts it
Geet: Ofho ye maine kya kar diya
Maan: Kya hua Geet?
Geet: Maan ye toh mera jhootha tha
Maan: Toh kya hua waise bhi apno ka jhootha khane mein koi problem nahi hothi Geet
Maneet eyelock
Maahi...Maahi...
Boy: Sir aapko aur bhi kuch chahiye
Maan: Haan wo ...Geet tumhe aur icecream khaogi?
Geet: Nahi Maan bus itna kafi hai
Maan: Nahi agar tumhe aur bhi khana hai toh kha lo waise bhi tumhara khayal toh mujhe hi rakhna padegana
Geet and Maan start laughing
Maan pays the bill
Maan: Ab bolo Geet tumhari koi aur farmaish
Geet: Haan haina mujhe ek romantic movie dekhni hai
Maan:Kya?
Geet: (smiles) Main mazak kar rahi thi ghar chale
Maan holds her hand
Maan: Chalo
KHURANA MANSION
Maan: Good night Geet
Geet: Good night Maan
Maan was about to leave when geet called him
Geet: Maan...
Maan: Kya hua Geet tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai na bukhar toh nahi hai main doctor ko bulatha hoon
But before he could complete his sentence
Geet placed a kiss on his cheek and immediately turns her face to the other side
Maan slowly lifted her face and looked at her lovingly
Maan: Geet kuch kehna chahthi ho?
Geet: Maan aaj jo kuch bhi aapne mere liye kiya main aapko bata nahi sakthi k usse mujhe kitna sukoon mila hai
Maan: Geet tumhare dil ko sukun mil gaya bus mujhe meri daulat mil gayi tumhari iss muskurahat k liye main kuch bhi kar saktha hoon geet
Geet was overwhelmed to hear this
She once again kissed him on his cheek and also placed a kiss on his forehead
Maan gently careesed her face and kissed her eyes
He held her hand and took her to the outhouse and opened the door
he then kissed her forehead
Maan:Good night Geet
He gave a sweet smile and closed the door
PRECAP 1: AND THE DEAL GOES TO😭😲
PRECAP 2: Maan: "Geet ko akela samajne ki galthi mat karna Arjun main geet ka saaya bankar uska haath thamkar humesha uske saath khada rahunga"😳😳😳
ok guys now everyone happy with the precap😊
pls press d like button ndo comment
love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome again yar...u keep telling me ki main har update awesome kehti hu
its because u give an exceptional update everytime dearie

loved the whole ice-cream wala sequence yar...
the way both of them were feeding each other...
or maan ka ye kehna ki main apno ki jootha kha leta hun
superbly done

i actually love the way u carrying the story
acha abt the precap m sure ki maan ka contract chala gaya hai
par usse zyada khushi tab hogi jab maan usse gadhe arjun ko karara jawaab de
waiting for that

lovely update sweety
continue soon

ab finally me the first again for reserving,,,,,,,but the delay is so so long na...
agli baar agar muje dubara mauka mila to ill comment it there and then raelly hope tab koi or kaam na aa jaye😉
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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update is superb di...
awesome...
icecream wala part sabse acha tha...
and at last geet ki kisses😳...
hay me maar java
kudi dino sin daler hundi jandi a...ja kehlo fir pyaar wich pandi jandi a😳
maan geet ka itna khyal rah ta hai...ooho..
to make her happy bechare ko icecream ke sare flavour taste karne pade
cont soon
loved u more than anything..
ur's khushi
Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
2nd precap is so good...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely. Did Geet rEally eat all Ice Creams? Precap se dil ko sukoon mila.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful update...👏
Maaneet romantic moments😳 so nice...👍🏼
1st precap is interesting..2nd precap is happy 😛...
I think Maan found out the arjun's plan ...
interesting..Can't wait
Continue soon..
Eagerly waiting for next😊
Edited by srirad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
A big kisss and huggg goes tooo...
PIYA
Love u piya superb update really really loved it xxx
Plz plz plz cont soon
Precap Dekh kar sukoon mil gaya xx
Cont soon
Waitinggg
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mind blowing update...
loved their romantic moments...
precap ...is very interesting...and the 2nd one is simply awesome...
please update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
superb!
loved maneet moments!...
that was so sweet!
continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
woowww... cute update
loved it a lot...
i was petrified about the preacap... but the 2nd precap gave my soul some peace... now i dont care whoever get that deal... our maaneet will be togather... 4ever...

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