Ye Ishaare Hawaon Ke..! THREAD 1

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

loved it...

loved the way maan said sorry to her...

now its her turn to realized it

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TanuDDian

@TanuDDian

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Ohh how sweet...maan's pacifying is so cute...loved it

do continue soon...

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

awww i luved the way maan apologised...it was very sweet n cute...
that sorry song sequence was super cute...
lets see how maan pataofies geet...

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Abreshmina

@Abby-GC-Crazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

hellozzz my dear people... 😃
here's another update for you guys... 😊
Plzz don't forget to press the like button & comment... 😉

A SPECIAL MENTION
Ritzy di - thank you so much for your encouragement & boost... i wouldn't have written it without you...
thank you... love you...!!!! ❤️ 🤗
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Part 6

Party went on really well...there was good music.. Good food.. Everything was perfect..

Suddenly all the lights went out..

& there from the spotlight appeared Ash King..

Ash: hey guys.. I hope you all know me.. I'm going to sing my song 'I love you' from the movie bodyguard.. I hope you all enjoy it & to enjoy it better..please everyone get on the dance floor with your partners.. 😊

Maan held Geet's hand..

Maan: you're gonna dance with me..aren't you? 😊

Geet: of course.. I won't get a better dance partner... 😉

with that both head towards the dance floor holding hands..

Maan: Geet..what style are we going to do?? 😕

Geet: ummm... I don't really know...Aaahhh... Let's do Bollywood duet.. 😃

Maan: yeah.. That would be perfect.. 😊

& the song started..

Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai

Jaane kya kar gaye

Jaise andhero mein tum

Chandni bhar gaye..

Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai

Jaane kya kar gaye

Jaise andhero mein tum

Chandni bhar gaye

Kar chaand taaron ko

Mashoor itna kyun

Kambakht inse bhi khoobsoorat hai tu..

I love you

Tu ru ru... Unnere..yeah yeah...

I love you

Ooo.. ye.. ye.. yeah yeah

I love You

Ooo..

Maan swung Geet right & left.. Making her swirl.. Making her look even more pretty with the swirl.. Picking up each beat..having his hand on her waist.. Maan brought Geet closer to him.. So close that they could feel each others' breath fanning their faces.. Holding her from the waist.. Maan twirled Geet around on her toes & then held her stable pushing back towards him again..

Kabhi kabhi main khud se hoon yeh poochta

Main tere kaabil bhi hoon kya

Maan bent on his knees & held her hands & twirled her around...

Itna toh mujhe hai maloom

Milke tujhe Behtar main insaan ban gaya

Maan got up again & held her back making her bend down & twirled her back around..

Thoda thoda tujhse sikha

Pyar karne ka tareeka

Maan kissed Geet's hand..

Dil ke khuda ki mujhpe inaayat hai tu..

I love you

Maan bent on his knees again & stretched out his arms..

I love you

I love you

He got up again.. Held her hands.. & their feet moved back & forth with the beats..

I love you

I love you

I love you

By the end of the song...everyone was cheering & clapping & shouting to appreciate Maan & Geet's performance.. They smiled & thanked everyone for their appreciation.. & headed towards the drinks counter..

George: wow.. Geet.. Maan.. You guys were incredible.. What chemistry.. What moves.. Tum log to chaa gae yaar...

Maan smiled & blushed slightly..

Geet: thanks yaar George.. It had to be good yaar.. After all its me.. Geet Handa.. 😉

George: ya ya.. Chalo I'll go attend others.. 😊

Rest of the evening, Maan & Geet spent chatting & getting to know each other..

Geet: you're a nice guy Maan.. Who the hell said 'First Impression is the Last Impression'.. Your first impression is definitely not the last impression.. 😉

Maan: owww.. . Thanks Geet...Geet ...its quite late now.. Would you like me to drop you..??

Geet: yeah Maan.. Thanks a lot..

Maan: ohh you're welcome.. Let's bid a goodbye to George & leave..

Both went to George..

Maan: hey George.. We are leaving.. Thanks buddy for such an awesome party... [:)]

George: ohh cumon dude.. I just threw the party.. But it were you guys who made the party.. & for the last time in the evening.. You too were sizzling... 😉

Geet: yeah thanks George.. 😃 bye...

Maan: bye George...

George: bye guys... 😊

Maan dropped Geet home & bid her a goodnight & went back home.. He freshened up quickly & laid down on the bed..

Today.. He was happy.. Delighted.. Happiness which was new to him.. A feeling that was his first time.. He felt elated.. He couldn't stop thinking bout her smile... Her moves.. Her curves.. Her hair.. Her innocence.. Her chatter... He was thinking possibly everything about her.. Suddenly he felt like penning down his feelings.. He opened his diary & wrote..

I've got the girl of my dreams,

she's the only one it seems..

She has got me bound to her charms,

now I just wanna feel her in my arms..

I feel blessed having her here,

will never let her eyes escape a tear..!!

We are not yet together,

but I'm sure soon I'll feel her feather..

She's like my pretty angel,

and our hearts seem to mingle..

Girl you've got to be mine,

coz baby you're my lifeline..!!

Feeling contended of expressing his feelings.. He closed his diary..kept it aside..& dossed off into the world of his dreams...!!!

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1793981/ff-daily-updates-thread-1-see-page-91?pn=34

okay.. that's it for now people...
I hope you like the update...😊
Plzzz do press the like & comment on the part... i really really love to see them.. it makes me feel good... 😊
Honestly I'm very disappointed by the number of likes & comments.. not that I expect very much.. but still with the amount of PMs I do... I'm just getting half of the responses... 😔
It makes me sad.. so plzz people do press the like button at least...

Thank you very very very much to all the people who have liked my post & commented on it.. i really love you all... Your comments mean a lot... Thank You...!! 😃 ❤️ 🤗

Edited by Abreshmina - 13 years ago

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Yaaayy...Me first me first...
Arey sandwich bhi ho gaya!!
Hurray!

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

awesum...

thankgod geet has changed her opinion about maan..

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

beautiful update...Maan got chances to dance with her... Geet as she is actress is self obsessed...

thanx for pm

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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cloudflower

@cloudflower

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#169

beautiful update 😳really loved your song selection for maaneet 😊

the way maan expressed his thoughts was awesome

thanks for the pm

please continue soon

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#170

very nice update dear...bas thoda sa chota tha...

dance and chice of song was very good...it is an amazing song and i love it. but for me the best part was the poem Maan penned down in the diary. It so beautifuly described his feelings and yearnings for Geet.

Guy is in deep love. Kaash ki gal ko bhi kuch kuch ho jaye...

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