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Posted: 14 years ago
Friends thank u all for bearing me and liking my updates

but sorry to say that my school started and i will be busy again but will try to update bith intezaar and pyaar ki ek kahaani once in a month but u will get some updates in these two days and after that i will be updating it monthly.

hope u won't ki;ll me😉


for today no update but tomorrow i assure two updates each for pkek and intezaar
now happy

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PART-16 "kya tum dev se pyaar karte ho"

R%adhika rushed off from the class room in tears. Dev was about to follow her but as the next teacher arrived he sat down silently.Radhika who was at parking area got a phone from vaishali. seeina vaishali's name on the caller id she rubbed of her tears and took the phone with a normal tone.

"hello"

Vaishali:"hello Radhu its me vaishali"

Radhka:"yes maa"

Vaishali:"vo u have to do me a favour. tum apni car vishaka ko dena hain

Radhika:okay

Vaishali:i know u will accept but sorry radhika. main kuch nahi kar paata ammaji ne kaha tha aur main mana nahi kar paya tha

Radhika:koi problem nahi maa

Vaishali:okay dear bye

Vaishali cutted the phone and Radhika looked around for the watchman

Radhika:"sundar kaka"

Watchman:"jee beti"

Radhika:"wo mujhe tora sa sar dard hain main jaa rahi hun, aap jara ye keys class emin jakar vishaka sharma ko deejiye na"

Warchman:"thik han beti!lekin ab tu kaise jaavogi"

Radhika:main taxi lekra jaavungi

Watchman:teri tabiyat to thik nahi hain na

Radhika:koi baat nahi kaka main jaavngi

Radhika ggave keys to the sundar and came out from college, took a taxi and reached home

Vaishali who was cuttign vegetables saw Radhika and asked her "radhika, tumm, kya hua, itnni jaldi kyun aaya"

Rdhika:"wo kuch nahi hain maa bas tora sa headache hain"

Vaishali:kaise aaya han beti

Radhika:taxi mein


Radhika seeinga worried vaishali asked "daadi aur didi kaha hain"

Vaishali:maa saab toh vupar teri kamre mein hain, mrinu toh koi programmes hain aaj isl.oiye chala gayi

Radhika:kya main kuch madad karo

Vaishali:chp rako, head ache ki wajah se college se aaya tha ab mujhe kya help karogi, jaakar aaram karlo

Radhika:thik hain, main sovvungi, mujhe kisiko distrub mat karne do na

Vaishali:thik hain, waie main aur daadi shaam ek bhajan par jarahe hain, raat der aavenge

Radhika:irju bhaiyya hoga na koi baat nahi hain

Vaishali:thik hain

Radhika went up and throwed her bag aside and came onto bed.

Daadi who was sitting there adjusting radhika's clothes asked "kya hua radhu, college se itni jaldi kyun aaya"

Radhika:bas rehne ka man nahi hua daadima

Radhika will hide wihy others but when comesa to daadima she will say all truth

Daadima:"waise radhu main ek baat poochu"

Radhika:haan

Daadima:kya tum ... Dev. se pyaar karti ho

Radhika who was drinkign water suddenly startled and lokead at dadima "jee"

daadima;"kya tum Dev se pyaar karti ho"

Radhika;"aapko aisakyun laga"

Daadima:"bas waise hi pochne ka man laga that. Poochne ka toh adhikaar hain na"

Radhika:"nahi aisa kuch nahi daadima lekhin achanak ye prashna aapke man mein kyun vuta"

Daadima:"no radhika, I know u since child hood but only a gap of 5 years was there between us. I doesmn't know u remember or not, but i saw u from chilhood.U are a bubbly girl in ur childhood who never cried or felt pained for the actions of ammaji or vishala or ranjeev or any eklse."

Radhika was listening silently tryng to understand.

Daddima;"lekin when i saw u during mrinau's wedding then i noticed some etra charm and also a confusion in u, But after mrinaini's weddin neither i found a bubbly radhika nor a happy radhiKa, what i found is a gloomy radhika always lost in her thought.But after five years i again foun my Radhika back, vo bhi aftef the return of Dev and i also find some extra charm in ur eyes when u saw Dev thats why i asked u."

Radhika kept silent remembering what happened on the day of mrinalini's mariage those wods of Dev nad the words of Vishaka today were deciphering in her mind.

Daadima;Agar aisi koi baat hain toh mujhe batao Radhika, Dev se main baat karrongi.

Radhika: Mujhe vo pyaar, vyaar ye sab para nahi hain. What i know is de is my best friend thats it.

Daadima:lekin

Radhika:daadima Mujhe aap ko ne bahut pyaar diya tha. Mohan babuji gave me a familu which was retained by Raj papa. I am always indebted for al that. But how much love u give e and hoe much close i am to uu i ca never forget my limits nor i can never foget that i am an orphan.U people gace us all, and i like this more than my self. but i don't have any over desire like to be the dil of this family. Hope u understand.

Dadima with tars in her eyes.:koun kaha tum anath ho, tujhe hum sab hain. Shayad tum hume apna nahi hoga lekin hum saab apko humari poti,bachi,behe,saali aise hi samajhte hain. Tum humesha purohith,sharma parivaar ki bachi ahin aur rahoge.
\Ye mat bhulna

Radhika was having tears in her eyes and the wods of Vishaka was deciphering in her ears

Seeing Radh's in tears Daadima thought that it was because of her questions so asked her to rest and she left away.

After a while radh came from room and said "daadima, main thodi der bahar jaake aavungi"

Daadima:"lekin betakaha jaarahi ho"

Radhika:"mandir tak"

Daadima:"thik hain"

Radh went out and took her scooty and went towards the vrinadavan. At the start of vrindavan she too a turn into the mudroad and went towards the mountains. As she reached a place she stopped the scooty and went inside

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh so dadima knew a little bit and as rads answered in twisted way,may be she tries to understand more after thinking.and wheather this vishakha and car giving is going to create some problems for dev?am sensing something odd.
but again hari it was very short.
its ok but hope soon we are going to radev telling each other about their love.

thanks a lot.
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PART 17: Radhika-ammaji encounter
At 5:00 pm in the evening

Radh came home , she went inro her room staraight and saw her clothes taken out from wardrobe and lying on floor. She was confused and look arouynd and came out,. Just then Amma came there.

Radhika was shivered with fear at the very sight of her.

Ammaji;"eh chori"

Radhika approached her with shivering

Ammaji: Eh kamra meri vishaka logi , tum kuch aur kamra dekho

Radhika:Jee amma\

The next minute Radhika felt a hard slap on her face and a strong hand on her hair , "eh chori!tumhe kitne baar batana hain, tere manhoos mooh se mujhe amma mat kaho. main tujhe amma kaise hoga haan, mujhe maalkeen kaho.Mujhe marne ka tumhe bahut bada shok hain"

Radhika with tears in her eys "m..a.in/.. ky..un.aisa ..so..ch..un.gi."

Ammaji:"ye natak band kar,mujhe toko ache se maaloom hain"

Radhika:"a..i.sa. ma..a..ne ..kay ...ki..y..a "

Ammaji:ye jaaa, jaakra terui saaman bhi lekar aa, teri manhoos mukh mujhe jyaada samay mat dikha

Radhika weeping took her things silently from that room and went ti a room which was next to the steps and was indeed adjacent to the dev's room from otherside but radh didn't notice it.

Ammai:ekk minute, ye room mujhe dikhna hain

Ammaji after checking the room being satuisfied of the small room "thik hain jaavo"

Radhika silently took her things and went into the room. But she liked that room becoz it has a wide balcony which had steps to go nto thje garden.

She came down and walked around to find birju

Radhika:"birju bhaiyya"

Birju:"haan radhika ji"

Radhika:"bhaiyya aapko kiyni baatr keha ki mujhe Radhika nulavo"

Birju:nahi Radhika ji, main toh iss ghar ki naukar hun aur aap is ghar ki beti hain

Radhika:acha ye naukar maalik kla drama band karo,

aap toh apni dil se hum se bhi ache hain aur bade bhi

Birju:lekin

Radhika making a kiddish face "main aap se chote hun agar bade chitin ko kuch gaurav se bola toh chote ki aayu ko problem hoti hain"

Birju:na ana radhika main humesha aapko radhika hi bolunga

Radhika:that makes a good boy

acha chao meri kamra set karna hain


Birju:aaki kamra set karna hain, vuski kya jarorat thi apki kamra humseha cleany weeny hoga na

Radhika:"haan lekin meri kamra badal gaya tha, aur naya kamre ke liye aaka help chahiye"


Birju:wo kyun

\Radhika:vish di took my room aur mujhe iss room mein jaana pada

Birju noticed and asked "okay chalo hum aapko help karenge."

Radhika took birju to the room and birju seeeing it said "oho aap kahi bhi jaayiye, conneting rooms ke buna nahi hoge"

Radhika:"aisa kya hua"

birjju took off a old curtaion and showed a door "ye kya jaante ho, connecting door to dev's rom"

Radhika:ohhh

toh kya main nahi open karungiu

Birju:okay

They both sstarted cleaning ti and gave it a completely new look

Birju:aap bhi na, aap ka taste toh lajawab hain, kitni gandi kamra ko kitna acha banadiya

r; mujhe ye kamra bahut acha laga i can enjopy nature fully.

Birju:waise aapne bed kyun nahi laga

Radhika:oho common i had sofa cum bed na thats enought waise hi iss room mein hi hum ab apni presentation ko prepare karna hain, hagar aisa nahi laga toh room mein bhi conjusted

Aap bhi na radhika , choti choti baaton mein badi badi kushiyan kholte hain

Radhika smiled and said "agar humara man acha toh sab kuch acha hi dil=kehega birju bhai"

Birju nodded and went to prepare food, Just then Rpji came, Radhika seeing him rushed to him and asked "papa papa mujhe aapka help chahiye"

Rpji:"kya hua"

Radhika;wo kal mujhe presentation hain, meri presentation sunkar mujhe help do na

Rp:thi hain, lekin abhi nahi ek hour ke baad.

Radhika cutely:okay

Radh went to her room and was abt to call asmi when the guys returned from colege,. seeing Vishaka itself ammaji showed her her room and Vishaa went in,. Dev who was fed up with the Vishaka's nuisance in college was feeling head ache and thinking that he can meet Radh later on he went off to her room.
Radh's friends found radh at the new room and asked the reason.

Radhika:"pehle tum sb andhar chalo:

they all came in and zradhika closing door explained them all the situation and arshad and asmi were angry but Radh calmed them some how and they all sat discussing with presentation.

After and hour...

Rpji went near the Radh's old room as usual; and seeing the room very dirty with clothes here and there Rp got angry. (rp was a person who gives a lot of concern to clean ness""radhikaaa"

Hearing the cal Radhika and his ffriends came out worriedly, and Rpji who saw the there was confused and asked "tum waha kya kar rahi hun"

Mean while Dev to came out and confused seeing Radhika there

Radhika:wo drsaal Vishaka didi ko vo rroom chahe toh main ne iss room per shift kiya

Rpji:oh chal, tum ne kuch hep chaha tha na

Dev wholistened this waS almost shocked and went into room, felt a relief and said "thank god, Agar maine vus raat ke samay Radhika ke room samajhkar vus room mein gaya toh, pata nahi mera kya hoga. Kanha thanks for protecting me. Lekin ye Radhika toh Dad se kya baat hain, chal dekhenge"

Dev went out but found the door closed, so he went near the connecting door smiling himself and peeping through hole saw the presentation going on so shutted himself and came bacj

Dev;'s friends came and they too started discussing abt their presentation and later After Rpji went off, Dev and co went to Radhika and co and asked for their help and they all started regarding dev's presentation.

In the meanwhile dev was stealing glances at Radh ,but Radh tried to avoid him and concentrate on the project.

Dev sighed with dissapointment and concentrated on his work.
-Shankar- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful updates hari!
like the story, nice job
ekta15 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
yeh hui na baat hari
thankyou thankyou,now i felt i had read ur ff.
ok coming to update,that amma na but whatever rads and dev both got benefits.
i didn't understand one thing,rads is staying at pb due to mrinalini but why this amma and vishakha there,all in one house.why?


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ekta-avinafan

yeh hui na baat hari
thankyou thankyou,now i felt i had read ur ff.
ok coming to update,that amma na but whatever rads and dev both got benefits.
i didn't understand one thing,rads is staying at pb due to mrinalini but why this amma and vishakha there,all in one house.why?


sorry dear i made u feel once as i am updating from mobile i can't add more than 5000 words so gave a short update and from today on wards i will updating from mobile because there is no net connection to me as i am moving to schools, so u may have two updates at a time. please for give me but i am help less yaar,

coming to story u will get ur explanation in next part which is coming up tomorrow😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Friends u all may wionder why i am giving two short updates, but i am updating from mobile, where i can't type more than 5000 words at a time. so indeed u had to bear me like this, my schools started and i has to do this.

Indeed my accident was the reason , becoz of my accident my army medical college throwed me away from the college telling i am unfit now, so again i had to go to coaching for medical entrance. That makes me a tough time as i am going from next week. so hope u bear me and don't mind even if i give short updates, but i promise, how many short updates i gave i will continue with my ff's and try my level best not to discourage u😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: harianjana

Friends u all may wionder why i am giving two short updates, but i am updating from mobile, where i can't type more than 5000 words at a time. so indeed u had to bear me like this, my schools started and i has to do this.

Indeed my accident was the reason , becoz of my accident my army medical college throwed me away from the college telling i am unfit now, so again i had to go to coaching for medical entrance. That makes me a tough time as i am going from next week. so hope u bear me and don't mind even if i give short updates, but i promise, how many short updates i gave i will continue with my ff's and try my level best not to discourage u😊

i feel so bad for you. good luck!
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh i feel sad ,hope n pray dat u do good n thanxs for the pm n lovely update.tc

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