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harianjana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: ak4423766463
thanku very much for ur pm and nice update👏but can u please try to do most of the dialogues in english because i cannot understand some lines😊eagerly waiting for next part😃

sory and thanks from next onwatrds it will be more of english only, u knwo why i do more in hindi becoz i love reality and i can't show an indian swaamiji talking in english r a common indian housewife talking to a swamiji in english na so i gave those i hindi hope u understand

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harianjana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: ekta-avinafan
lovely update
and in today's uppdate my confusion is cleared hari.ya now next ,why devki will talk to radhika about death?
loving curiousity here.
will wait for next and thanks for the pm.

thanks dear and ur one confusion was cleared i am glad for that

and u had another doubt now it will be also cleared soon

but i don't wish tht u throw chappals to me with this beco radev may have a lot of pain in this

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harianjana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: palak13
hey i loved it that was awesome so radhika angry on dev coz she found his real name, y would devki talk about radhika death, but loved the whole part im glad devki is going to the purohit house now cant wait till the next part and when radev have grown up, so their love story wont be easy there will be some problem hmmm update soon and thanks for the pm

thnx palak and yeah radh was angry on dev but she will never tell dev that she know who he was nor dev tell radh that he know her real name (according to thopught of dev) and this one was more based on the confision u know na

and devki tell radhika i too don't know why but we has to see😉

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harianjana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: anu17
hari thanks aha...love it gr8 work...

thanks di

and ur pic was really cute u gave me a pic like this at begin of intezaar and i wish to see pcs like this from u always i loved it a lot

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harianjana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

@myra thanks a lot dear

@thuja: thanks and hope that u will try to keep it with on

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harianjana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

friends,

may be from the next part u will land into my mad land means the real part of my ff... there may be a lot of twists i know and at any part if any one of u tell me tha u don't like this i will wrap it up in the next part it self.

feel fre to blurt it out wether it is bad or good, but u have to bear me a lot if u didn't blurt it. so i am warning u for ur good sake feel free to blurt out any time

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suwin

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Thanks hari for the update..looking forward to next update ...

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harianjana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Devki went to pb along with Vaishali

Vaishali entered inside first and saw RP talking on phone with some one.

"suniye"

Raj:"bhai saab main baad mein call karoongi"

He cutted the phone and looked at vaishali in a questioning look.

Vaishali:"aap ke liye ek mehmaan aaya tha"

Raj:"mehmaan aur mere liye, kaun ho vaishu"

Vaishali:"mere saath aayiye "

Vaishali took him to the maindoor and saw devki standing there . Raj had tears in his eyes and said "devki!!!!!!!"

Devki:"bhaiyyaaa"

There was a strong silence for some time.

Devki only breaked the silence "kaise ho bhaiyya"

Raj rushed to devki and hugged her saying " meri pyaarii behen ke bina main kaisi hunga"

Devki: bhaiyya aise mat boliye, bhaiyya teri devki humesha tera saath hi hain

Raj:mohan bhaiyya ko pata hain

Devki nodded her head.

Raj released her and said toh jaavo.

Devki:"bhaiyya vo badal gaya hain vo ab mujhe tumse milne doonga"

Raj:nahi devki jab tak d=jiju mujhe tum se milne ke liye nahi kahoge tab tak main tumhe apna nahi sakta tha.

Devki:bhaiyya, aapki jiju toh aapke ghar mein aakhra aap se mila na

Raj:vo apni beti ke liye mere pass aaya tha , mujhe vo kshama nahi kar diya tha,

Vaishali who was standing behnd was having tears in her eyes, "suniye , devki yaha aap ke liye aayi hain aap vunse iss tarah aatein nahi karte hain na"

Raj: mujhe pata hain vaishali lekin main jo vaada jiju ko diya vo vaada nahi thod sake hain

Vaishali:lekin

Raj:ab bas karo

Raj with a heavy heart to devkki: devki, jiju jab tak mujhe nahi apnaoge tab tak main kuch nahi kar sakta

Devki : mujhe maaloom hain bhaiyya aur mujhe poora yakhin hain ki aap ki jiju jaroor aapko aur bhabhi ko apnaoge.

main ab jaati hun bhaiyya, lekin muhe jaroor yakeen hain ki kal main iss ghart mein meri pati ke saath aavunga

Raj : kanha se yahi prarthana karoonga

Devki:chalte ho bhaiyya

Devki went off

Viashali asked raj who was standing at door steps:"ghar ki beti ghar mein aagayi aur vunhe ghar mein nahi aane diya tha aap"

RP:main meri vaada ke saamne sir jhukhana hi pada tha

The next day...

Both the sharna's family and purohith's familyreahced the temple.

Pandit ji: " kanha ne aap donom parivaar k milne ke liye hi ye mandir banwa rakha tha."

Devki saw mohan who was looking At raj and vaishali

All of them silently completed the rituals of sthaapna.

Pandit ji :"ab kanha ki morthi ko sthapna karna hain, Sharma ji"

Mohan: ji

Panditji:lanha ki moorat aapki ghat se hi aa raha tha na kaha hain

Mohan:haan meri beti le aa rahi thi.

Radhika came with vishaka and mrinalini having Kanha moorthi in her hands.

Radhika:"pandit ji ye hain kannayya ki moorthi"

Pandi looked at her with smile and said "sada keethe raho beti."

Radhika loked at pandit ji and said "ji meri kanha ko bahut achi tarah dekh naa"

Pandit ji and every one resent there laughed at the cute talks of radhika and said "jaoor radha rani aapki kanha ko main achi tarah dekh loongi"

Raj was all the way seeng radhika with a lot of admirance.

Pandit did the pratishta of kanha and then said "ab radharani ki morthi ki staapna karna hain, Rajpurohith ji"

Rajpurohith nodded his head and rp couple gave the Radha devi statue to pandit ji."

The sthaapna f radhakrishna moorthi was done in between the vedamantra with all rituals given in rigveda.

After the completion of whole rituas the pandit said both the families to spend a night in the couple according to tradition.

At night...

Devki:suniye mohan ji

Mohan:yeah devki

devki: donb't u think that the time arrived for the taking back of ur promise.

MOhan:I knnow.

Devki: toh jaakar baat toh kar sakte hain na

Mohan: he can come and talk na'

Devki;My bro is standing for his promise'

Mohan: thik hain main hi jaakar baat karoonga

Devki:lekin radhika ko mat jaane de, if she kniw i don't know how she will feel..

MOhan:main sambhaoongi

Mohan and devki went to the place where othrs were there and saw Radhika pleaying with vaishali

Mohan smiled seeing it.

Devki:maami aur beti achi tarah khel rahe hain na

Mohan noddeed.

Mohan came to ambaa and said "amma mujhe Raj se kuch baat karna hain, aap , maaji radhika ko lejkhar yaha e jaa na"

Amma nodded her head and said "sharada, mere saath aavo na , yaha ki kuch dhoor mein ek water fall hain vuse radhu ko dikha denge."

Sharada looked at confusion to amba and after understanding it she nodded and they both went taking radhika.

Mohan:raj jiju

Raj: mohan ji aap hi hume bola tha

Mohan:haan jiju ab tak maine bahut saara kiya tha , aur ab meri vaada ho waapas le raha hun.

Raj didn't believe it and looked at vaishali and asked "is it true"

Vaishali:aankhon ke saamne ho raha tha sach hi tha

Raj:jiju aapko mujhe yaa aapi behen par koi khrod nahi hain na

Mohan: mujhe kyun ghussa hoga tha, main aaj tak wrong kiy tha jab paapa ne aap donom ki love marriage ko accept nahi kiya tab hi main papa se bola tha lekin main aisa nahi kiya paapa ki baaton mein aakhar ek aisa waada liya that jiske wajah see aap sab ko 15 years miss kiya'

Raj : jiju aap ne hume maaf kiya yahi toh bahut hain

Mohan: iska kaaran aapki behen hi tha , agar devki ne shaadi i iss dus saal mein mujhe samjhaya nahi hoti toh main kabhi nahi badal jaane wali hun

Raj: do u think that we boht need this jiju jiju callings hum apne shaadi ki pehle jaise best frinds ho ab bhi kyun nahi ho sakte hain

Mohan:aakhir rajpurohith ho aap, aap ki jo judgement hain hum palan karenge

Raj:bas karo mujhe aur thanka matt do

Vaishali was looking at Mohan and raj with tears in her eyes, Devki who noticed went to Vaishali and asked her "bhabhi kushi ke samay mein ye rona dona kyun ahin"

Vaishali:"ye aansoon kush ki hain, mujhe humesha ek guilt feel hain ki mere wajah se h do best friends alag ho gaya that vo aaj se nahi hain "

Devki:bhabhi aapki shaadi se jo rishta bigda tha meri shaadi se aur bigda tha, lekin humne jo prayatn kiya vo aaj safal hogaya tha"

Vashali nodded to devki with a sile on her face.

The whole day was spent by them happily.

next day mng...

Radh after going to temple and decorating his lord beautifully came to home and opened her pc. She looged on her mail id where she found a mail from Her kk

"hi Bitto, i thnk i beeter say u bitto. I launched here beofre an hour and was compeltey enjoying london. Hope u are fibne there."

Radhika then reminded that it was Dev who was her kk "hi kishankannayya, i can't call u that long to so i call u kk waise hi happy that u landed safely and i miss u"

Radhika then wrote in her diary"kameee khadoos dev , u said me ur wrong name na i will say u what the firend shiop is. an how loyal we ahs to be to our friend"

Radhika then went off to her daily work , at the same time dev in london before going to bed "vishaka u said me that ur name is radhika and tried to play with me, i will call u as bitto becoz i don't want to call ur name radhika becoz foe me vishaka is my friend and even i doesn't want ti change ur name. thats why calling u as bitto"

In india,,,,,,,

Devki:bittooo

Radhika:haan mumma

Chal tayaar ho ja

Radhika:okay mumma

Radhika went to temple and was praying the god with the bhajanof "o palan haare"

After !5 years

Pandit ji came to the temple...

He saw a girl doing the Decoration aroubd statue of kanha

Just then a woman came to pandit j and asked "pandit ji , ye aap kya kra rahe hain ek saadha ladki mandir mein jaka kanha ki pratima ko aisa touch kar rahe hain"

"aap is vrindavan ke liye naya hain na isliye aap isko nahi jaanet hain, ye kanha hi vus ladki kaa hain, Aap jaante hain vo ladki koun hain"

woman:"nopeee"

Shastriji:Ye hain Radhika sharma, Mohan sharma ki beti hain

Woman:kyaaa, lekin mai ne suna ki Mohansharma ki beti 8 baje tak vutegi nahi, bahut ahankaarei hain aur bahut arrogant and a perfect rich woman hain"

Shastriji:aap ne galat suna, vo sharmaji ke beti nahi hain bateeji hain, vo vishaka hain sharmaji ki ek distant relative ranjeev ki beti hain:

Lekin vo maine suna ki vo sharmaa ji ke ladki hain

Shatriji:haan , ranjiv ki marne ke baad sharma ji ko teen ladkiyan hogaya hain, mrinalini,vishaka aur radhika. Mrinalini aur Radhika toh bahut saadha hain lekin vishaka toh bahut garvi hain

Woman:ridiculous, Ek baar is ladki ke baare mein bata na

Shastrijii;ye ladki, is ladki ko kya kahuu, ue ladki is kanha ki sahi tarah kio Radha rani hain aur Is kanha ki pratista bhi isne hi k hain, kanha ko apni 3 saal ke umar se hi pooja karte aayi hain aur 8 saal mein iss mandi ki sthaapna ki hain, vus din se aaj tak kabhi is mandir mein aakar pehli pooja karna bhooli nahi.

Woman:lekin lagti hain anpad(illiterate)

Shastriji:nahi nahi btech architecture padi hain aur vuske baad Ibm mein MBA padi hain. IBM ki goldmedalist hain aur 98.7% ki record marks laakar Ibm, ki history mein ek naya record likhi hain.

Woman: lekin IBM toh delhi mein hain , aur aapne bola ki ye hardin yaha aati hain

Shastriji: Ye hardin yaha se Delhi jaati hain.

Woman:shastri jiii delhi yaha se 3 hrs hain

Shastriji: ye ek best driver bhi hain yaha se delhi 1.5 Hrs mein jaati hain.

woman was shoced :kitni accident kiya hain

Shastriji:ek bhi nahi ki hain aur aisa saath saal aate jaate reh rahi hain

woman: shastriji ye ek ladki hain iski maa baap is se kuch nahi kehte hain kya

Shastriji:aap ek baar inse baat karke vuske baad humse ye bolo

Shastriji said "Radhikaaa"

Radhika who was turning to a side turned this side, she was wearing a yellow colour chudidaar having a beautiful smile on her face.

Radhika smiled at him and said "jee kaka"

Shastriji:"pooja ki tayariyan shuru hogaya hain"

Radhika:kaka sirf shuru nahi khatam bhi hogaya hain bas aap aakar aarthi dena hi baakhi hain

Shastriji: beti ye yaha naya aayi hain, hindi bolne mein isse thoda sa takleef hain aap isko kuch sahaay karte hain kya

Radhika:jaroor kaka

Radhika:aunt tell me do u have any problem

Woman who was starrin at her "yeah i need to meet Mr.sharma

Radhika:sure but can i know for what

Woman: yeah i need to get soem work from his industry

Radhika:he's my dad and i will let u meet hm for sure, but for now u please carry on with the aarthi and pray kanha that u should get ur job

woman:thanks

The woman was stunned by the polite behaviour of Radhika and wanna talk with shastriji but as the devottees start to come she shut her mouth.

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fatssrilanka

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Wow! Hari,lovely update. When will Dev return from London? Waiting for raDev first meeting..Pls update soon.

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ekta15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#80

SWEET UPDATE hari
waiting for next and radev first meet,whom he is going to consider his childhood friend and whom he is going to fall in love.latter answer we know but first is really making curious.
i was thinking it to be like mujhse dosti karoge but then there pooja knew that she emailed with teen's name so before meeting ,she told all but here thats not the case.
all and all waiting for next.
and thanks for update and pm too.