FF:-ENTWINED SOULS{maaneet)ch-18 page-37 Oct9/11 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved it ..i loved it...read it at one go...i really liked ur title..thats wht caught my attention...nd i read ..nd i fell in love with the little devil nd his angel..awww they r just adorable😍...nd u hv portrayed thr emotions so well 👏 ..i really liked it..do continue soon..plzzz add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello people
I am so sorry for not updating the ff
But it Is just that my computer has got a little problem
It will be hopefully fixed till this tue or thursday
😭 😭 😭
Sorry but will give u a extra long part when I am back
Edited by miki14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter-16
Oops...the new trouble
 
Maan was so angry he couldn't believe his father has asked him to stay away from geet his geet
 
He walked towards Geet room smashing and kicking all the things coming in his way
 
Savitri Devi was just stunned such aggression from his 11 yr old grandson was totally unimaginable for her
 
Maan ruko beta savitri devi called him but maan didn't stop
He just entered Geet's room and locked it from inside
He was so disturbed he just wanted her at that moment
no one can take her away from him
 
He just looked towards the bed
She was still sleeping
Maan calmed down a bit seeing her
Her calm expression and that sweet smile just mellowed his anger
He quietly walked towards the bed and  sat beside her
 He pulled her into his arms
Nothing can take you away from me Geet nothing
He whispered holding her close to his heart
Geet snuggled closer to him
Hmm she mumbled
Maan chuckled
 
Maan beta darwaza kholiye
Savitri devi knocked on the door for the umpteenth time
It has been more than an hour and maan has not opened the door of the room
Savitri devi was really worried
She had no idea what has happened between Abhi and Maan
Maan beta please humse baat toh kariye ek baar
Maan heard his daadi but he was no were convinced all he knew was even his dad wanted to keep his angel away and he didn't liked it a bit
 
Maan a sleepy voice called
Hmm geet
Daadi bula rahi hai
Maan hmm tumhe daadi ke pass jana hai
Geet just nodded with her sleepy eyes
 
Maan just sighed and got up from the bed and opened the door
Maan savitri devi just said taking a sigh of relief
Maan didn't uttered a word and just moved in
Savitri devi just entered the room
Geet lovingly got up and hugged her and said
Daadi maan aap ko bahut pareshan karta hai na
Daadi just looked at geet lovingly and kissed her
Nahi beta aisa kuch nahi hai
Maan bas thoda sa naraz hai humse
 
Maan just looked at daadi he just came and hugged her
Daadi plz dad ko kehiye na geet doesn't need a nanny
Nanny daadi was surprised
Maan just nodded
Kya ho gaya hai abhimanyu ko geet ke liye nanny rakh rahe hai
Wo bhi bina kisi se puche
Maan just hugged her tighter dad wants me to stay away from her dadi
He literally cried while speaking those words
Nahi Maan  aisa nahi hai your dad can never do such thing
 
Geet just looked at maan his pain just made her cry
 
Maan just heard her low whimpers
Geet he said and just came and hugged her
Will you stay away from me Maan Geet asked in her innocent voice
No Geet never
Savitri devi smiled seeing their love
Why will abhi appoint a nanny for Geet she thought?
 
But her thoughts were disturbed when nakul informed her of someone's arrival
Memsaab wo koi ladki aayi hai
Keh rahi thi ki Geet betiya ki nanny hai
 
Savitri devi was shocked
Abhimanyu indeed has appointed a nanny for geet
Savitri devi looked towards nakul
Unhe bethao hum aate hain aur haan abhimanyu saab ko bhi bata dena
Nakul just nodded and walked out of the room
 
Dekha daadi Maan said
Dad ne Geet ke liye nanny rakh li hai
Taki hum unke saath jyada na reh sake
Savitri devi just looked at her grandson who was fuming in anger
Maan aisa nahi keh te
Hum khud aapke papa se baath karenge
Humein yakein hai unke faisle ke peeche koi wajah toh hogi
 
Savitri devi walked out of maan 's room towards the hall
A slim lady in a short red dress was sitting there
Savitri devi looked at her completely not liking the way she was dressed
Toh aap hai Geet ki Nanny
Savitri devi said to grab her attention
Yes Ma'am the lady said as he offered her hand for a handshake
Kritika Khanna she said
Hmm hum savitri devi hai Abhimanyu ki Ma aur Geet humari poti(grand daughter) hai
Oh pleasure meeting you ma'am kritika exclaimed
 
Abhimanyu just entered the hall
Hello Ms.Khanna he greeted her
Hello Mr.khurrana
Please seat
Kritika just sat in front of him crossing her legs which made her dress move little more up
Savitri Devi noticed it her keen interest in his son definitely didn't go unnoticed by her
And she did not liked it at all
 
Precap-
Maan meeting the Nanny
Ms Kritika Khanna
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..amazing update.
love it.
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww after each nd every update i just adore the little devil nd his angel more...so pure😍...nannyyy😡...ye krithika kuch teek nahi lag rahi ...thanks for the pm...do continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan is so sweet and possessive. Humain Nanny bilkul achi nahi lagi😒
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
awww luved maan's cute possessiveness... 
hmmm am sure dadi will help him..
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
love maaneet unbreakable bond they
share
but dont like ms khanna already send me
bad vibes
i hope maan kick her out soon
thnx so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb!
 
loved it!
 
conitnue soon!