Maneet SS 'Love is Blind' NOTE page 151 - Page 60

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Part: 12

Getting closer and closer

Geet catches his smile and says, " What did you think I will leave you alone with your fireplace after finding about how you guys had a "thing" behind my back. Oh no meri hypo first I will deal with your fireplace and then with you" she says running her index finger along the side of his face with a hint of naughtiness in her eyes.
Poor Maan he was inviting disaster into his own life he thought. How was he supposed to control now? She was drunk and has something cooking in her mind. "Oh God please help me tonight" he silently prayed in his head

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He tried starting the car, but the piece of machinery just did not want to start! He tried and tried, but it was being stubborn. Geet just looked on getting kind of bored now.
She murmurs, "Hypo. . ." but he ignores.
She screams out louder, "HYPOOO!" Right next to his ear.
An irritated Maan blurts out, " Kya hai?"
Geet: The car doesn't want to start.
" I can see that for myself too and if you can see that you might also see that I am trying to start it" he says through gritted teeth.
" okay when it starts give me a call. I am leaving before I freeze to death" she says walking out of the car.
"wait'roko. . . where are you going at this time of night?" he yells out after her.
Geet: I don't know. . . to find some hotel to stay for the night. At least it will be warm there.
Maan: Wah Brown eyes! This whole night you used your brain for once. Okay let's go.
" thank you hypo" she says smiling.
Maan just shakes his head and they both head out looking for a hotel.
After about 15 minutes they manage to find a hotel. They go inside toward the hotel receptionist.
Maan: Hi I would like to book two rooms for tonight please.
Geet gives him a confusing look for why two rooms?
The hotel receptionist: I am sorry sir there is only the honeymoon suite left.
Before Maan could say anything Geet blurts out: That's perfect! We will take it".
She quickly goes and grabs maan's wallet from his behind pocket and takes out his credit card.
Geet: here charge it on this. oh and keys please.
Hotel receptionist gives her a weird look but hands over the keys.
Geet: Thank you.
Maan just looked on shocked. . . no words able to come out of his mouth.
Geet: Hypo let's go.
Hotel receptionist gives him a poor look like "I feel so bad for you" look and Geet takes him away.
Geet opens the door and Maan was lost somewhere else.
He was thinking to himself: Oh God how do I control myself now??? in a honeymoon suite??? Why is this happening to me?
Geet: oyee hellooo? Hypo go inside already.
An irritated Maan grabs her and pushes her inside the room the door closing by itself and corners her to the wall.
Maan: You said that you would only go with your husband so why have you decided to come with me all of a sudden? Why was it necessary to book this room hain??? Bolo meri jawab doh!
Geet: kyun. . . aapko meri saat akele dar lagta hai?

Shock runs through his face. It was the truth for the first time Maan Singh Khurana was scared. Scared that he wouldn't be able to control himself if stuck with her in one room that too a honeymoon suite. She wasn't even in her right state of mind! For god sakes he just met her how could he . . . he doesn't even finish his thought.
Geet: And too answer your question. . . The way you came back for me, the way you look at me, the way you touch me, the way you arouse these unknown but yet familiar feelings in me, even the way you bear my craziness tells me you love me, but I am not that crazy to walk away from a person like you," she whispers meaningfully gazing inside his eyes.
"You love me and you know it. You are just fighting it," she whispers again as she inches closer to his lips.
" I want you. Make me yours!" she whispers seductively.
Maan was fighting a lost cause. When Geet wasn't near him he turned back and came for her, so how in the world could he control himself especially being in a position like this with her. He wanted her and when she was inviting him that how could he turn around and say no. He closes in the gap between their lips and gives into her plump lips.

Geet's body goes on fire. . . on fire with burning desire. She was hungry and been deprived and wanted as much of Maan as she could get because who knew if she would ever get this chance again. She wanted him closer wanted him all over. . . wanted to feel him all over. Her hands had a mind of their own! Maan deepens the kiss, slipping in his tongue, and becoming more aggressive. Geet was the first to break away in order to breathe.
A smile creeps onto her lips seeing the love that was overflowing from Maan. She kisses his neck going up to his chin and then before coming back to his lips she pauses moaning out, "I love you". That was it! Those 3 magical words. Those three words was just enraging the hunger in Maan, causing him to want her more.

He picks her up not being able to take it anymore and pushes her to the bed filled with rose petals causing the petals to bounce up into the air and sprinkle down on these two lost passionate lovers. The petals fell over her face and wet body sticking to her slim figure. Maan drove up his fingers along her navel, her curves, and lips removing the red petals slowly torturing every nerve and fiber in Geet's body.

Geet moans out in desire "ohhh" and rips his shirt and pulls him closer letting herself explore every inch of his body and abs that were only hers, while Maan planted wet kisses along her arms and neck. Maan not being able to take it anymore starts to slip her blouse down her shoulder. Maan's phone accidently falls out of his pocket and onto Geet. She annoying flings it away hitting the wall and it tumbles to the ground.
The bang brings maan back to his senses. He abruptly gets off Geet and runs a hand through his hair. What was he about to do. . . . ? Oh god he would have gone all the way if it weren't for that. Geet feeling cold as the warmth of his body against her was missing. She opens up her eyes to find him facing away from her. She couldn't see what his face was expressing as his back was towards her.
She thought he may be shy. She giggled inside herself. She thought that was her job. . . to be shy. She decides to help him a little she naughtily thought.
She wraps her seductive fingers around his waist and up his chiseled abs and places her head against the side of his neck hissing inside his ear, " why did you stop? This is one rule that people blindly follow," she laughs naughtily.
Maan could feel himself hardening and losing himself to her sweet and seductive voice. He quickly yanks her arms off him and stands up saying, " I can't do this with you". He heads toward the window and just looks out to the dark night.
Rejection coursed through her body. He didn't want her'? No wait a better question who ever wanted her. . . who was she ever important to? This was more than just a physical need right now.

"I just have one question and maybe if you answer it I will set you free forever" Geet says with a certain pain in her voice, but Maan didn't turn around and just kept looking out into the dark looming night.

" Can you tell me what it feels like to be loved?" She pauses and than completes it ". . . Be it a significant other, your parents, your family, or even friends? How does it feel to mean and be important to at least one person in this world?" She says as tears start to well up in her eyes.
Maan's world felt like it was crashing down with that simple yet innocent question, full of suffering and pain. His heart felt like it was getting ripped into pieces hearing her anguishing pain.
Geet: You may think it's a stupid question. I don't blame you. I have always been judged my whole life. But I only had one dream, one desire, one need. . . one request.
And it was to be loved. Never getting the love of parents, family, or friends I was left with only one option left to be loved by my significant other. To be in the arms of the one who cares for me, who would shield me away from the world inside his arms, who would spoil me, who would tease me, who would fight with me, but then try to make up with me after a cute effort of manofying me. That is all I asked was to be with the person who showers me with his love and for that love to never die out. But I never do that this one request of mine would be too much to ask for?
She says as a tear escapes from her eye.
Maan winces in pain and his hands were unconditionally turning into fists. He couldn't bear to hear her suffering so much.
She had fresh tears welling inside her eyes. She looks at Maan longingly with her pain stricken eyes, but he never turned around.

"You don't need to answer. I set you free" Geet says as a tear spills out from her right eye than her left eye.

She turns around to leave, but Maan grabs her wrist, her head jolting up in shock. Someone was actually stopping her from leaving!
He walks up to her and wipes her tears away with his fingers and moves his head to the left and then right as if saying, "no don't cry".
Maan: I never meant to hurt you. Believe me somebody would be crazy to be rejecting you. I just. . . I just can't do this to you when you are not in your right state of mind. You are probably drunk right now because of the pain you are drowning in and I don't want to take advantage of that. You are important. You are important to me brown eyes and I can't see you like this. I can't." he says as he hugs her and tries to take away some of the pain that was eating her up.
Geet returns the hug with the same passion. Crushing herself on to him never wanting to let him go. She tries controlling her sobs, but she just couldn't she had to get it out. She was just so happy someone was caring for her trying to soothe away her pain it was hard to believe.
Maan let her cry. . . let her get it out. Then he gently picked her up in his arms and puts her on the bed.
" Get some rest brown eyes. You sleep here and I will sleep on the sofa," he says turning away when she grabbed his hand and his body stiffens within her touch. Gosh he just met her and already she had such a deep affect on him.
" Please don't leave me hypo. Please I want to cuddle against your sexy body. It is only fair since you don't want to sleep with me in that sense" she says innocently pouting her lips and giving him a baby face.
Sweet lord she was so innocent and yet so naughty and mischievous at the same time. How could that even be possible? The main reason he wanted to sleep on the sofa was because he needed to control his thoughts and desire that was still running through him. If Geet cuddled up against him than how could he possibly control? Why was she testing the little self- control that was left in him?
But Maan just couldn't say know to the angelic beauty that was pleading to him. He gives and jumps inside the bed. In just a blink of an eye she wrapped her hand inside his and placed her neck against his chest. Although it was torturing every cell and fiber in Maan's body he wouldn't give this up for anything in the world. He cuddled closer against her beautifully sleeping form until his eyes drifted away into the most peaceful and sweetest sleep he has ever had in his life. For tonight fate had done its work.

Pre-cap:
Geet was so numb with shock she had no idea what was happening. Maan starts to lean for a kiss and that is when " Powww" the sound of the slap echoed through both their racing hearts. Maan holds his right cheek and brings his shocked and questioning eyes to meet hers. She was flaring angrily trying to hold back her tears.

(Maan and Geet showdown will move the story a little forward).

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Edited by zeynab111 - 13 years ago
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You love to make me smile,
Every time I've been sad for a while.
The feelings are growing.And they are showing...

Please tell me.
How you feel.
So I know.
If it's real...AWESOME UPDATE...THANX FOR THE PM...TC

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res phew i made it im second😆
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You didnt even gave me a proper warning😲😲
THIS IS HYPERVENTILATING☺️
IM GONE
omg omg zeee katil update
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I love the kindaa ness in the update🤣

SOO SEXYY AND HOTT
omggg they kissed and they were gonna do that but the phoneee😲🤣
BUT ZEEE the way u descirbed the scene just made me blush hayee
SO FREAKING HOT
awhh poor geet is thinking he is dev.. :(
maan will be broken..he already falled for her

what will happen when she will know..well in next update
omg maan
you better not make it sad zee.. :(
THANKS A LOT FOR THE SPECIAL TADKA UPDATE
Cant wait for Nextt
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Originally posted by: Bloomysunday


You love to make me smile,
Every time I've been sad for a while.
The feelings are growing.And they are showing...

Please tell me.
How you feel.
So I know.
If it's real...AWESOME UPDATE...THANX FOR THE PM...TC


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Hey darling,
It was an amazing update.
Loved it v much.
Geet being in so much pain and maan being able to soothe some of her pain
Opps morning time...pata nahin kya hoga...i m pretty sure geet will forget whatever happened in the nite...
Please update soon...please...

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