FF- Shaadi Mubarak! IMP NOTE pg. 83 - Page 15

omg! i love ur story linee!! keep goingg! want moreee!! :)

Lovely update

the drivers questions them... it was fun to read

hmm ... he sings ... little Fb but still i felt bad .. poor guy

nice conv between frndz

continue soon.

nice update

Hey Afiya

Fantastic update,,,,,,,,loved it.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Ok so shanak finally found taxi that too having Indian Cabbie 😊 & khanak noticed shaan singing.😲 & she asked shaan & gets to know that he was a real Rockstar in his collage,😃 loved the way u described when shaan stops khanak for paying for Taxi.😃 Shaan gets lost in past memories,😍 Ekkksss U included Hua hain Mann Bawara here……that's nice,👍🏼 But can I tell you one thing frankly pure update mein I couldn't imagine that sequance,😕 Coz jab bhi ye gaane ke bare mein sochati hu I can only see SHANAK.😳(sorry if i disappoint you)

Waise I always loved the way u describes their convo.👏 Its natural.😊 Plus frandly & routine.⭐️ I always gets connect to the dialogues described bu you.👏 Coz they are mostly the same way we used with our friends,😍 kudos to you for making it look so real.👏 So lehar & everyone comes to know that shaan sings beautifully.😊 But he refuses to sing. The House tour was a real fun & best part of the update was their discussion on Roomies.😆 I am loving this Arjun & Arohi.😆 Hey now please don't make shaan feel bad & sad in every update,😳 He should be the one jo Sangeet mein rang jama de. Bus ho gaya yaar Natasha ko yaad karna,😳 full to sadness se bhara hua lag raha hain Shaan, please make him Enjoy.😃

Please make him Sing on Sangeet…..please.😳 😳 😳 😳

Loved the update, waise see this time I commented jaldi jaldi so ab I want next update bhi jaldi jaldi……what say? 😉 😉 😉 😉

Waiting for the next part……….jaldi dena,🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Love

Pranjal.

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Hey Afiya

Fantastic update,,,,,,,,loved it.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Ok so shanak finally found taxi that too having Indian Cabbie 😊 & khanak noticed shaan singing.😲 & she asked shaan & gets to know that he was a real Rockstar in his collage,😃 loved the way u described when shaan stops khanak for paying for Taxi.😃 Shaan gets lost in past memories,😍 Ekkksss U included Hua hain Mann Bawara here''that's nice,👍🏼 But can I tell you one thing frankly pure update mein I couldn't imagine that sequance,😕 Coz jab bhi ye gaane ke bare mein sochati hu I can only see SHANAK.😳(sorry if i disappoint you)

Waise I always loved the way u describes their convo.👏 Its natural.😊 Plus frandly & routine.⭐️ I always gets connect to the dialogues described bu you.👏 Coz they are mostly the same way we used with our friends,😍 kudos to you for making it look so real.👏 So lehar & everyone comes to know that shaan sings beautifully.😊 But he refuses to sing. The House tour was a real fun & best part of the update was their discussion on Roomies.😆 I am loving this Arjun & Arohi.😆 Hey now please don't make shaan feel bad & sad in every update,😳 He should be the one jo Sangeet mein rang jama de. Bus ho gaya yaar Natasha ko yaad karna,😳 full to sadness se bhara hua lag raha hain Shaan, please make him Enjoy.😃

Please make him Sing on Sangeet'..please.😳 😳 😳 😳

Loved the update, waise see this time I commented jaldi jaldi so ab I want next update bhi jaldi jaldi''what say? 😉 😉 😉 😉

Waiting for the next part'''.jaldi dena,🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Love

Pranjal.

Thanks Pranal! I know everytime I hear Maan Bawara, i think about Shanak too, but, it's also the only song that suits shaan the best during his college days :) and slowly shaan's opening up, so by the time the sangeet comes, he shall forget about Natasha, and think only of Khanak :D, next update may take awhile :/

Love,
Afiya

Originally posted by: shonai

nice update

khanak rockz with her dialogus..👍🏼."*Khanak thinking to herself* God, this Shaan is the King of awkward silences, and I thought he was opening up, Khanak pouted. "

luvd their convo wid the taxi driver

stop shaan feeling bad 4 natasha & just let her b a part of his past soon...waiting 4 shaan,have feelings 4 khanak

update soon

Pyaar toh dheere dheere hota hain! :)

Hello Fellow Shaadi Mubarakians!! I have a small update for you guys, but the next update will be tomorrow and it will be much longer!! Now, I know you guys all hate me for not breaking up the Shaan/Natasha sequence, but just give Shaan a little more time, I'm trying to make this FF realistic, and it's always hard to forget your first love, right? :)


Part 7-

Jaagi Jaagi soyi na mein saaarii raaat, tere liyeee, bheegi bheegi palkein meri udaas, tere liyeee!! Do do dod do'. Arohi sang wholeheartedly

Arohi!!!, Shut up!! Khanak yelled.

*Unaware of Khanak, Arohi danced around the room singing* Tere Liye, Jhoomo deewane banke tere liye!!! *Khanak turned the Ipod off, closing her ears* Te' Khanak, why'd you turn it of?!!

What the hell Arohi, I'm trying to sleep, and you're blasting Atif Aslam!! What's wrong with you? Khanak asked annoyed.

Dudee, it's 9:00am normal people are awake by now, Arohi said, taking her Ipod off the dock, and plugging it into her ears.

Normal?! We're on a vacation, who acts normal? And where are you going? Khanak asked.

*Arohi grabbed Khanak's Shoulder* Babe, we're in Australia, Beaches, Blue water, hot guys, I'm going for a jog! Arohi exaggerated.

Hmph Jog! I'm going to bed!, Khanak yawned, while Arohi threw a pillow at her and left

Same Time at the guy's room

Zzz, Zzz' Hmm.. OI KAUN HAI?!?! Arjun yelled jerking awake


Tere Liye, Jhoomo deewane banke tere liye!!!

*Arjun slammed his pillow against his ears* God yeh ladkiyan! Jeena haram kar diya! * Arjun looked over at Shashank who was sleeping peacefully, cuddling his pillow* Shashank, abbey uth! Arjun yelled, throwing a pillow at him.

Huh?! Kya yaar, soone de, Shashank whined.

Soone de? Tujhe yeh bakwaas sunaayi nahi di? Arjun said.

Bakwaas ? *The music had stopped* What Bakwaas? Shashank asked.

Idiot, pehle who kaano se cottons nikaal! Arjun said while Shashank removed his ear plugs.

Oh yeh, woh kaal raat tu bohot kharaate mar raha tha.. Shashank said sheepishly

What shit! I don't snore, Arjun huffed.

Shaan walked into the room, yawning, rubbing his eyes

Shaan! You tell us, doesn't Arjun snore? Shashank asked.

*Shaan scoffed* Snore? Dude, he's like an elephant, Shaan said.

What, no I don't! I don't snore!! Arjun said.

Whatever yaar, *Shaan yawned* what was that, Atif Aslam? Shaan asked.

I don't know, Saale ne jaage diya, Arjun said getting up from bed.

*Shashank had fallen back asleep, seeing this Arjun and Shaan both grinned at each other and leapt for Shashank's bed* What the hell guys?! Shashank yelled.

*Abeer walked into the room* Uhhh something you guys wanna tell me? Abeer said eyeing the guys on Shashank's bed.

Brotherly love, Arjun said aiming a kiss on Shashank's forehead.

*Abeer laughed* You guys are SOO weird, but I love youuu *Abeer jumped on Shashank's bed* _____________________________________________________________________

Good morning everyone!! Khanak said joining everyone in the backyard for breakfast.

Morningg!! Preeti and Leher sang, while Shashank threw her an apple.

Eew, I hate apples, Khanak said throwing it back to Shaan

*Shaan looked at it for a couple of seconds, and then bit into it* I like apples, he said.

Alright dosts, what's the plan for today, any ideas, girls? Speaking of which hasn't Arohi woken up yet? Abeer asked.

*Khanak smirked* Woken up?! The Atif Aslam you heard this morning, was all her, she said.

Oh God!! That was her, pagal ladki! Arjun exclaimed.

*Preeti laughed* She went for a jog, she should be back now, she said.

Let's hope she never comes back, Arjun thought to himself.

Abeer, mummy papa wanted to have a lunch party, remember? Leher said.

Oh yeah, we're going to plan more wedding functions and arrangements and stuff, Abeer said.

Abeer, aren't you going to show us around your beloved Australia, mate? Shashank said.

Of course buddy, okay so after lunch let's drive around or something, maybe go sightseeing? Abeer said.

Sounds fun, Shaan agreed.

Just the Arohi jogged up to them

Morning Everyonee!! She said.

Hey Arohi, had a good jog? Shashank said handing her a water bottle.

Ahh, wonderful, Sydney is soo preety, Arohi said.

Mmm, okay so how about we all get ready to go to the party, Abeer you and the guys can decide on where you wanna go first, or what ever we're gonna do afterwards, Leher said.

Gals, we need to plan our outfits, Khanak said.

Exactly, see you guys in a few, Preeti said, while Shashank blew her a kiss.

*Arohi walked across Arjun* Thanks for being the obnoxious DJ this morning! Arjun yelled.

You're Welcome!! Arohi yelled back, while Arjun looked annoyed

Alright, so what do you guys wanna do till they get back? Shaan asked.

*The guys looked at each other smiling* GAMEROOM!! They sang in harmony.


Arohi's Wake-Up song for everyone

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_nPbWAHyJcg[/YOUTUBE]

Loved the guy's conversation! Keep it up! :)