FF:Tell Me Your Dreams- Part 9-pg 24 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71

Loved it
nice update
like how khushi is in this fic
pm me when u next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
this was really an interesting part.
Waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
akash and khushi's conversation was best
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Heya Niha!

Its crazily gud! Khushi is hugging Arnav 2 make Akash jealous & presenting cactus😆

Hayee! If Arnav murmurs Hey Devi Maiyya everything inverse Arnav thing will b complete!

And Precap Arnav looks with innocence?!😉😆 O...M...G! Ahaaa! Khushi has 2 do everything?!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
Loved it, its so different! Sab kuch ulta hai. Superb. Awww khushi said arnav anyday. Yeah! Waiting for next part. Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Oye ladki this is the craziest OS I have read!

and now dying for an update you get me???

LURVVEDD ITT ❤️🤗

Can you get me an update like ASAP? PEEJ? 🤔

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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
hai niha , os is so interesting and intriguing . loved it and great going .can u plz pm me from next update .
Edited by acjanfeb1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
My roomie is still sleeping, so while she takes a nap, i write to you guys !!! Hope you like this part...

Part 4: Its always been You!


she had been sulking by the pool side wetting her feet in the water, when Arnav walked in with her favorite choco chip cookies...
tumne try toh kiya na .. and this is for making an effort ... he tells her...
Khushi cant stop frowning as she is mentally preoccupied ...
arey kya ho gaya baba ... !! akash ne fir se kuch kaha tumse he asks her almost worried ...

Kh:can you believe it ... ( she says with tears swimming in her eyes) .. can you actually believe, he asked me ... (sniffs hard in anger ... making all kinds of faces ) ...

Arn: ab kaho bhi Khushi... tumne ussey sorry kaha ????

Kh: are you mad? main sorry kyun kahoongi kisi se ... main toh bas ... par .. par ... (getting angry again)

Arnav knows if Khushi is this irked there had to be a reason, or she would be fuming this way .. the otherwise motormouth was now suddenly so lost for the right words that he knew he would only have to get the story out of her some how?

Lemme guess... usne tumse sorry kaha hoga ... aur ... tumne usey maaf kar diya hoga, aur ab fir se wahi kahani ... right kyunki you have had another one of those ridiculous fights? dont tell me this time its about your new hair cut ... (he joked with her looking at the length of her hair that was a little shorter this time) ... dont worry ...baal hi hai, badh jayenge ...

Kh: just shut up Arnav ... !!!

Arv: chillalo ... jitna chillana hai ... chilli lo ... you will feel better ...

Kh: aarrggh !!! i cant believe this... tum bhi mujhe irritate kar rahey ho ... I am going, shayad main apne ghar main hi shaant se ...
She gets up to leave when Arnav holds her hand and stops her ... She pulls her by her hand and makes her sit next to him by the pool side ... dekh maine tere liye, tere cookies oven main thoda sa garam kiya hai .. wow the chocochips will melt in your mouth the way you love it ... aur ... yeh Tom uncle ke cookie box main se last bachi cookies hai ...

Khushi ... picks up the cookie and eats it, just cos Arnav likes them that way and not cos she wanted it ... but to her the fact that he had let go of his last share of cookies for her sake was what touched her the most ... she slowly sat down ... and bit more into the cookie ... over the years she had gotten to acquire the taste for the stuff he liked .. but jalebis were one thing she couldn't stand !

Arnav is silent, waitin for her to speak cos he knows she will begin any moment now .. she just needed a change and a diversion of mind ... which she did get ... and now she would blurt, this was typical Khushi .. his Khushi .. the girl he had known for years .. the girl who had become such an important part of his life, that he hadnt ever found the need to befriend anyone else .. and even if a girl did cos he was a good lookin man, Khushi would always make fun of the girls, and drive them away since she thought none o them were ever worth Arnav ... But to Arnav, it had always been Khushi ... he knew no other girl .. that could be a part of his life ... he had never been romantically inclined towards anyone, but he didnt know what he felt for Khushi either ... he just knew, he had allowed her to go out with his brother because he thought thats what she had told him had made her happy ... at times he wouldnt like the idea of driving them around, lying to Amma, sneaking her out of the house under the pretext of some story or the other, but he had been more than happy being around her .. for most of the time Akash and Khushi hung out with him, but when Akash would want to spend time alone with khushi he would always request Arnav through a signal and he would make an excuse and go away .. even Khushi didnt know about it ...

Now refilled with life and spirit, again, Khushi began ... "can you believe he actually asked me to pick ... like i would ... huh ..."

Arn: Pick what ?

Khu: duffice, he asked me to choose between himself and you ...

Arn: Kya ...??? he asked ... gulping down nervously ...

Khu: can you believe that man????

Arn: aur tumne kya kiya ...( tensed )

Khu: Obviously picked you idiot !!!

Arnav for a second cant believe his ears ... but knowing Khushi this wasnt going to be totally impossible ... there was sudden hope in his eyes ... but he checked himself soon enough ...

Arn: pagal ho kya ????

Khu: nahi ... sensiible hoon ... nahi toh tumhe kya laga, he would choose him over you ??? no way !!! agar tumhe aise lagta hai .. toh tum aur tumhara woh stupid bhai .. dono mujhe nahi jaante ...

I cant believe you think i would choose him over you ( agitated) ...

Arnv: (intensely thoughtful) toh iss main galat kya hai Khushi... tum ussey pyaar karti ho na ...

For a second Khushi has no answer .. and the she see's him with totally different eyes ...!

Precap:


Arnavs House:

Akash: Arnav, Tumhe Khushi ke zindagi se door jaana hoga ...

Arnav is shocked ...

Ak: please mere liye tumhe yeh karna hi padega ...

Khushi's Home:

Garima: Khushi beta ... jadli se uth jaao ... Rakesh uncle aa rahey hai ... woh chahte hai ke tum unki ghar ki beti bano ...

Khu: kya???? shaam se shaadi ??? ( sits up in her bed shocked)


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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
arre ye kya tha... abhi shuru hua bhi nahin ki khatam bhi ho gaya 😕
zara lammmbaaa likho Niha ji... 😊
Rest comments will come post tea 😛

Cheers,
Monsi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
awsum update yar!
luved ArHi scenes! cnt wa8 2 wht happens nxt!
Precap seems shockin! Aks askin asr to leave Koko n othr side her marriage wid shaam??? OMG!??
thnx for d pm dear! :-)

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