SURROGATE RELATIONS Thread 3, part 27 updated 16/9 - Page 86

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Posted: 13 years ago
bindu re... end mei bataya ki shaadi ho gayi...when I read abt brij visiting maan, main toh samjhi aaj brij ki haddiyon se maan bridge banane ke mood mei hai... 😆
n I was scared that brij moved faster than maan...but thankfully he did pull the right strings to get the spl. marriage license...
liked the phone call...the fact that maan wondered about how from a reluctant employer he had turned into a needy one, who couldnt go even a day without geet's coffee...n refused to adjust to anything that used to be geet's signature work(the coffee thing you mentioned)
I simply loved the fact even in this whole tension, geet n maan were fighting for baby's gender n cutely so!!!
tumhare yaha toh friday aa gaya...kab update karogi??
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: somakazmi

very nice update dear...👏
loved it...😳
Maan missing Geet in office...😃
Maan and Geet phone conversation...😳
Maaneet fight over baby's gender...😆 me waiting to know who is right...😍
Geet confused with Maan's behavior...
brij insult...👍🏼
Maan calling Geet "My geet and his wife"👍🏼👍🏼
it looked like Maan had slapped brij by handing him file...👏
update soon n tnx 4 pm...
🤗



i too am confused as to whose side i shud be!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrs.MSKForever

bindu re... end mei bataya ki shaadi ho gayi...when I read abt brij visiting maan, main toh samjhi aaj brij ki haddiyon se maan bridge banane ke mood mei hai... 😆
n I was scared that brij moved faster than maan...but thankfully he did pull the right strings to get the spl. marriage license...
liked the phone call...the fact that maan wondered about how from a reluctant employer he had turned into a needy one, who couldnt go even a day without geet's coffee...n refused to adjust to anything that used to be geet's signature work(the coffee thing you mentioned)
I simply loved the fact even in this whole tension, geet n maan were fighting for baby's gender n cutely so!!!
tumhare yaha toh friday aa gaya...kab update karogi??



ab toh friday ho hi gaya...aur bachom ko bhi school bej di...patidev kumbhkarn bane he...
update karne mem koi problem nahi😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bangalores



ab toh friday ho hi gaya...aur bachom ko bhi school bej di...patidev kumbhkarn bane he...
update karne mem koi problem nahi😃



kya baat kar rahi ho!!!! u wasted the precious update typing time in replying to me... kaash iss post ke reply mei tum update hi post kar deti!!😆
I know ekdum greedy hu na main... but kya karu tumne update roka hi aisi jageh hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART26

27. Tricked

Brij threw down the file in anger. "I don't believe this. This is trickery. I know you are not married to Geet.

"Believing or not is up to you ...but I no longer want you anywhere near my family." He pushed forward another document, "Restraining orders ...you are not to come anywhere near my Geet, if you don't wish to be back where you came from."

"You, you ..." Brij stood toppling the chair with the force.

"Voice down!" Maan commanded and looked towards his lap top as if dismissing him." Now you may..."

"Okay may be she is your wife now." Brij fought back his anger and rushed on not wanting to let go of an opportunity to grab some money. "But you have to understand she is still my niece. I had plans for her future. Is it too much to expect your children to support you when you become old? I accepted her and her mother into my home after my brother's death. Took care of their needs, their food. You are a businessman you should understand that when you invest money on something you expect results, profits. Is it wrong to expect that once she grew up I could reap the benefit of my investment? I found a suitable match for her thinking that all my troubles will be taken care of. Now you have destroyed all that. You will have to compensate me...I promise I wont go near her, she wont even have to acknowledge me after all I did for her."

Something dangerous sparked in Maan's eyes as he lifted it to Brij's,"You are seriously misspoken. It was to her, not for her. What you don't understand is that I'm compensating you right now!"

"What..."

Maan continued to speak as if Brij never spoke, "I'm compensating you by not getting up and coming over there and snapping your head off your worthless body with my bare hands."

"Are you threatening me?" Brij loomed closer.

"Indeed not," he continued as he rose slowly with a slight smile, "I'm explaining to you how I am restraining myself from doing what my mind screams for. Believe me, my self control amazes me,but it is fast loosing it's grip. My hands itch to close around your neck for what you did to my wife when she was no more than a child."

"So Geet has opened her mouth again. But she is my niece. Why can't a man enjoy the fruit of his orchard," Brij sneered. "Your empty words don't frighten me."

Maan's phone buzzed and Maan flicked his gaze to the screen, 'Arjun'. Time to end the show, he thought.

"You disgust me!" Maan slowly walked towards Brij, his eyes never leaving the other's, a menacing smile playing on his lips. "Do you know what could be done with the snap of my fingers? On your way back from my office you can meet with an accident just like that" Maan snaped his finger. "... and your worthless existence would come to an end...but then it would devoid me of the pleasure of doing it myself." Maan tilted his head as if in contemplation.

"You dare threaten me? Me, Brij Handa? You don't know who I am 'raise sade'." Brij advanced with a threatening finger. Maan gripped Brij's hand and bend it behind him in a flash. And spoke near his ears, "give me a reason, just give me a reason!" then flinging him away called, "security!"

As Brij was escorted out amidst the staff who had gathered, Maan talked quickly to Arjun. Then he called out to the security to stop. He walked towards them and slapped the restriction order on Brij's hand, "Remember if you come anywhere near my family you will be back in jail where low lives like you should be."

Brij crumbled the paper and threw it away. "If you think a piece of paper will make me stay away from Geet you are wrong...she needs to learn the lesson that she shouldn't have gone against me. She will pay, I will make her pay. You don't know what i can do. If you think you can stop me you are wrong."

"Preying on those who trust u that is what u can do...forcing yourself on a child may be that is what u need to do to convince yourself that you are a man!"

The implication was so strong that Brij pushed the security away with an angry shout. He suddenly grabbed the knife from his pocket and slashed it towards Maan. Maan let the knife nick him and then deflected to slam Brij's hand against the cabin wall, making him drop the weapon. Angry beyond limits, Brij tried to hit Maan again, giving Maan the perfect excuse to fight. Maan trashed him along the corridor, deflecting whenever Brij tried to punch, towards the entrance. Then dragged Brij whose nose was bleeding profusely towards Arjun and said, " I know you or your kind, the monsters who prey on innocents. Criminals like you should never be out of jail." Shifting his eyes to Arjun he said, "Officer take him, as you can see he entered my office armed and attacked me."

Not sparing another glance at the man who was now shouting profanities, Maan walked towards his cabin with a victorious smile.


THREAD 4

PART 28

a short update to finish of the encounter...hope u liked it...i am new to writing fights...may be i shud start watching some fight scenes😆...but r u happy by the way Man handled the encounter? let me know...

PS: weekend is here so next update after that...and i have to give a bit attention to the OS😳

Edited by bangalores - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yoepiii.. i loved it... me first... :)))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Posted: 13 years ago
tum toh badi fasttt nikli... maine post ka reply kiya n tumne update kar diya!!!
😆
ab issi speed se ek aur update de daalo shaam tak toh bhagwaan tumhara bhala karein!!
dekho fir bann gayi na main greedy!!!... anyway ab jaati hu update padhne!!


padh liya update... khatam ho gaya itni jaldi... *pouts like a small kid*
ab main kya karungi weekend ko... ??
mujhe OS anhi padhna... mujhe issi ka ek aur update de do na... plzz plzzz!!


Edited by Mrs.MSKForever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
part was Good
Fight sequence was nice but missing maanet Flash back as u told
I want to see how Geet Confess and a bit curious about her condition

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the way maan handled everything... Tactfully.. I understand how much he had to control himself that he doesn't raise his hand so that he can prove brij trying to kill him in front of the officer.. So is the brij chapter finally over.. Maaneet scenes along with baby in upcoming update.?
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was a smashing update..mind blowing...haha...i cud picture Maan with that smirk when he walked back to his cabin...after he asked Arjun to take brij away...haha his evil smirk...😈

thank u...for the update...but missed Maneet...

Anything to worry about, since Brij said he will not leave Geet...he will teach her a lesson for opening her mouth???
Edited by Water. - 13 years ago

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