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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20

hey the part was nice...

it seems only armaan n ridz are the only sensible people here...

and what abt that little boy... i feel.. something here is a miss... i smell kripa's deed in it.. but whatever it is cont soon

thanks.😊
nope, kripa has nothing to do wid da boy ...YET!!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

PART 6

KHANNA HOUSE:

Geet and riddhima are in love with the baby boy. they are fussing over him. In less than a day, the boy had stolen both geet and riddhima's heart. Geet is holding the baby while ridz is cooking.

R: yeh angad kahan hai?

G: pata nahin. He told me he is going to some disco with some friends.

R:what???!!😡 Angad kabhi nahin sudraega. Baby ko ghar mein aaye ek din nahin hua aur woh party karne chala gaya!

G: chodh na! woh Bandar besharam hi hai!

At the same time, angad is in a disco. He was so upset 😭that he wanted to distract himself. He called armaan but armaan had said tht he was busy with arohi. He called maan and maan said tht he and arjun cant come because they have some work. So he had come all alone to the disco and ended up getting drunk.

Angad( thinking to himself): main iss situation se kaise niklu. 😕Ek taraf geet hai jo itni stubborn hai ki who kisi ki nahin sunti aur doosri taraf riddhima hai jo cunningly apni baat logon se manva leti hai. Aur inke koi tactics na chale, toh dono milke emotional attyachar par uttar aati hai.main kya karoon??!!

Then suddenly he gets an idea. If he took the child without anybody seeing and left him in a safe place like a church or temple then he would be rid of the kid and nobody would blame him for the kid's disaaperance. He grins 😃and then puts his plan in action.

SAME TIME.IN THE MALL

Arohi: armaan, hum mall mein kya kar rahe hai?

Armaan: shhh. Just relax and follow me.

Armaan takes arohi to a clothes shop, wanders around, finds what he is looking for and comes back to arohi with some clothes in his hand.

Armaan: yeh lo. Yeh kapde try karo.

Arohi: kyun?

Armaan: i told u. we are going to change your look.

Arohi (hesitatingly) : ok…

She goes in the dressing room and after 5 mins, comes out wearing a red strap dress which comes till her knees.

Arohi : kaisi lag rahi hoon?

Armaan ( with appreciation) 👏: u r going to knock arjun's socks off. He won't know what hit him. U look absolutely gorgeous.

Arohi, who had been nervous, gives him a thousand-watt smile 😃and goes back in to try the other clothes.

Meanwhile,angad had got into the baby's room through the window.he takes the baby,who is sleeping peacefully, and gets into his car and drives away. But what he doesn't realize in his drunk state is that he dropped his wallet in the room while getting out of the window. He drives to the temple, leaves the baby there and goes.

Simultaneously, armaan and arohi are returning to their car with many shopping bags from clothes shops, shoe shops, jewellery shops, etc.

Armaan: hum aisa karte hain ki tum mere saath mere ghar chalo, wahan pe u can change into one of your new dresses and get ready. So that when arjun comes home, he will see your new avatar.

Arohi: ok. Fine. If u say so. But r u sure this will work?

Armaan: pakka sure. But u have to follow my instructions.

Arohi: ok.

Armaan and arohi reach the malik house and arohi goes to change into her new clothes.

Meanwhile, in the temple.

Kripa is in the temple when she suddenly hears a cry. She looks around and sees the baby.

K (to herself) : arey! Itne chote bache ko yahan par kaun chod kar gaya.😲

She picks up the baby and soothes it. The baby stops crying. Kripa finds the baby very adorable and doesn't have the heart to leave the baby, so she waits for 2 hours for the parents to come but nobody appears. Finally, she writes a note and leaves it in the baby basket and leaves from there with the baby. She is going towards the singh khurana house when she realizes that maan won't let her keep the baby in the house. So she calls maan.

Maan is talking to arjun when his phone starts ringing.

Maan (picking up the phone) : hello

Kripa: maan. Mujhe tumhe batana tha ki main kuch dino ke liye hamare farmhouse mein rehne wali hoon. Mein roz wahi se college aa jaaungi

M: lekin kyun?

K: woh..aise hi. I want a change of scene.sirf thode dino ke liye. Ok?

M: theek hai. Be careful.

K: I will. Bye. Luv u. arohi ko bata dena.

Kripa disconnects the call and turns her car in the direction of the farmhouse. Maan keeps the phone down and looks at arjun

M: haan, toh main kya bol raha tha?

A: tum woh….

Arjun gets interrupted when his phone starts ringing.

Arjun: hello?

Armaan: hey! Tu ghar kab aa raha hai?

Arjun: bas abhi das minute mein nikal hi raha tha.kyun?

Armaan: aise hi poocha. 10 minute mein kyun? Take your time yaar. Do ghante aur baat kar maan ke saath aur fir aaram se ghar aa jana.

Arjun:😕 huh???!!!😕

Armaan: acha chal.i am busy. Tujh se baad mein baat karta hoon.

Armaan disconnects the call and arjun is staring at his phone suspiciously.😲

Maan: kya hua?

Arjun: pata nahin. Something fishy is going on.

M: why u saying that?

A: armaan was talking very weirdly. He doesn't want me to come home right now.

M: what do u think he is upto now?

A: I don't know but I am going to find out. Main abhi ghar jaa raha hoon

M: theek hai. Anyways, mujhe apni girlfriend se milna hai.

Arjun and maan part ways and arjun is driving his car and wondering what armaan is upto, not realizing that he had just walked into armaan's trap.

At the malik house

After disconnecting the call, armaan looks at arohi and winks.😉

Arohi: kya hua? Is he coming?

Armaan: I am sure he will.

Arohi: woh kyun aayega? U just told him not to come home for another 2 hours.

Armaan: tht's just it. Don't u get it arohi. He will always do what I tell him not to.😊

Arohi:ohh….

5 mins later, Armaan and arohi are talking when they hear a car outside.

Armaan: arohi, jaldi jao mere kamre mein.

Arohi: haan theek hai.

So saying, arohi goes to armaan's room. Actually, this is the next part of their "mission arjun". Armaan and arohi are going to act as if they are in love, to make arjun jealous.

Arjun enters the house and looks around for signs of armaan's mischief. Everything seems to be normal.

Armaan: arey arjun! Tu itni jaldi aa gaya. Tu toh thodi der baad aane waala tha,right?

Arjun (suspiciously): haan, woh maan ko jaldi jaana tha isliye I came home early.

Armaan pretends to be nervous and says " oh.tu apni girlfriend ke saath bahar kyun nahin jaata? Itna accha mausam hai!"

Arjun: armaan…sach bata tu kya chupa raha hai?

Armaan (with an innocent face): main? Kuch bhi toh nahin.

Arjun: armaan, dekh…..

At that time, arjun hears a girl's voice coming from armaan's bedroom.

Arohi: armaan!!

He turns to see who the girl is and sees arohi. He is mesmerized. She was wearing a white tube top and black mini skirt and white heels. She had left her hair open and had worn silver loops as earrings and a cute little nose ring. Armaan had told her that black and white was arjun's favorite combination.

Arjun is stunned 😲by arohi's new avatar. He just keep staring at arohi.

Kaise kahe humein kitni mohabbat hai….haan mohabbat hai…….kitni mohabbat hai...

Armaan is amused by the way arjun and arohi are staring at each other.

Armaan: kya hua arohi?

Arjun and arohi snap out of staring at each other.

Arohi: umm…kuch nahin. Actually..its getting late toh main ghar jaa rahi hoon.

Armaan: ok. I will call u later.

Arjun: WAIT A MINUTE!!! 😕 Yeh ho kya raha hai? Arohi tumhare bedroom mein kya kar rahi thi?

Armaan: arjun!!can u pls not talk like this in front of a lady? Kuch toh sharam kar. Arohi, tum jaao nahin toh maan is going to be worried.

Arohi kisses armaan on the cheek, which makes arjun furious 😡, and goes.

Arjun: explain.

Armaan: what?

Arjun: yeh kya ho raha tha? U barely knew each other and the next thing I knew, woh tumhare bedroom se bahar nikal rahi thi.

Armaan: actually..tere jaane ke baad, I and arohi started talking. I like her and I guess she likes me too.

Arjun: par woh tere bedroom mein kya kar rahi thi???

Armaan: I took her there…

Arjun: 😕what???!!!😕

Armaan: to show some of my photographs. Chillax arjun. Humare beech aisa vaisa kuch nahin hua..yet. anyways, mujhe neend aa rahi hai. Main sone jaa raha hoon.

Armaan goes to his room, leaving a very angry 😡and confused 😕arjun behind. He doesn't understand why he got angry when arohi kissed armaan. He does not understand that the feeling is not anger but jealousy.

PROLOGUE: riddhima ka ghussa😡, geet ka pyar.😛 arjun ki jealousy 😕aur angad ka guilt.😳

that is the next part of my ff. hope u like it.

plsss leave comments😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
awesome update!!!!!
wow!!arjun's jealousy!!!!!!!!!!!1
i hope soon he will realize his love for arohi.
nice precap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please continue soon.
Edited by fri42911 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
part 6 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
tht was soo awesome love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
i also love your all parts up to 5 and part 6 i already read

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