Do It Now! Tomorrow Never Comes: Pg 26 (25/05/12)

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Hi Everyone!! So am back with an OS, a general one but I know since you all and me too love imagining the whole scene with the picture of our favourite personality in our mind's eye, so I'll try to have it in different versions. Namely in SR, AR, ArSh, ArHi, RaDev... I thank Pranishta from the bottom of my heart for helping me post the FF whenever am unable to..

Chapter 1: The Acquisition


Chapter 2: Promising Future?


Promo: (SR)

Chapter 3: Fragile Eternity
Part 1: Robbed of his Shadow
(SR/AR/ARSH/ArHi)
(RaDev)


Part 2: Drawn by death's charm

Installment 1:


Installment 2:
SR Version

Part 1: The Acquisition


Patient: "May I come in, Ma'am?"

He knocked at the glass door, peered through it and glanced at the lady in. Beautiful, he amused. She was busy conversing on the phone, he noticed at one glance.

Doctor: "Yes, come in!", she gestured him to have a seat while she was saying her last words in a hurry, with a second lasting blush before putting the phone down. "Call you in a few, bye" She look up to the patient, "Yes?"

Patient: "I've been suffering from fever for the past few days."

Doctor: "Did you take any medicine?"

Patient: "No, I didn't. I've got a cold too."

She nods and examines the young man.
"Your body temperature is 102' F. You must take medicines for at least three days." She got busy writing on a piece of paper, which allowed the patient time to think.

Patient: "Can I attend office?"

The doctor chuckles, he so reminded her of someone. "You shouldn't. You must take rest"

Patient: " What about the diet?"

Doctor: "You should be on liquid diet."

Patient: "Should I see you again?", asking with a smile.

She looked up at him, doubtful with his choice of words, "You needn't. But, if the fever persists for more than three days, come to the hospital." Fumbling on her words, trying to be as formal as she could.

"Thank you, Ma'am" He utters the kind words with a wide grin and a sweet tone leaving the doctor staggered.

Amazed, she managed to voice the words forcing a fake smile on her face, after a second or two, "You're welcome."

He leaves the cabin with a smile, but not before turning to throw a last glance at her. He was left disillusioned for she was way too busy with her mobile to notice him.

Pressing his number on her phone, she honestly made a silent prayer that she was not disturbing him.

Scene Changes:

Clad in a 3-piece aristocrat looking dark blue suit, a white shirt with single-lengh French cuff links and a silk grey-purple tie, Siddhant Modi, almost beginning the presentation with the B1-LED-PICO projector.
"As Chair, it is my pleasure to introduce to you Mr Atul Joshi, our new Executive Vice President. Everyone is present, so we can skip the apologies. We will commence as soon as the last person signs the attendance sheet."

"Let's get started, I'd like to share some thoughts on" he was about to commence his presentation, when a clear tone was heard echoing in the room. Contemplating on who could be giving him a call on his private number, he excused himself out of the conference room.

Upon seeing the Caller's ID flashing on the screen, he accepts the call with a melancholy tone and wearing a genuine apprehensive look on his face, " Hey Love!"

The sweet voice of a lady replied, "Sorry, actually there was a patient who came over," hearing no reaction she continues, "I didn't disturb you, right?"

Smiling against his will he adds, "No, nothing like that sweetheart. Well, i was just to start the conference but.. Anyway, you wanted to tell me something?"

After a meditative moment, she decides upon the words to be used to explain to him her sudden approval, "Uhh, actually, i pondered on what you suggested last night and.."

As if by telepathy, he could tell what was going in her mind. She was not going to pay lip-service to his words and he, was for one second so gratified to the fact that she might have abided by his proposal, "Oh My God, Love, you've accepted it.. right baby?" He leaned on the door with his back, anticipating a yes

She laughed for she could actually imagine him jumping in happiness, "Yes, you were actually right you know. And now you moron, don't be late. Come and fetch me. Okay?"

A chuckle left his mouth as his eyes were now moist, "Am coming right now, I can't wait to take you home!"

As realization dawns upon her, she voices her feelings, "No Sid, use your brain sometimes, look, there are formalities to be completed here, so it will take a while na? But I won't make it more than an hour. And why are you SOOO bent on bringing me home? I want to have a classy dinner in an open air restaurant, with my husband s'il vous plait!"

To be continued...

Am having a real tough time posting from mob.. I'll update it soon(not like my FF lol) 😆 , for it's a message to someone really special.. One more thing, JO DIKHTA HAIN WOH HOTA NAHIN, AUR JO HOTA HAIN WOH DIKHTA NAHIN..

Please remember to keep your comments and criticism pouring in or at least Like if you genuinely like the OS😃. It might help me amend my OS.. Do tell me if you don't like any particular thing😊

Love
Liashna

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Everyone!! So am back with an OS, a general one but I know since you all and me too love imagining the whole scene with the picture of our favourite personality in our mind's eye, so I'll try to have it in different versions.

AR Version

Part 1: The Acquisition


Patient: "May I come in, Ma'am?"

He knocked at the glass door, peered through it and glanced at the lady in. Beautiful, he amused. She was busy conversing on the phone, he noticed at one glance.

Doctor: "Yes, come in!", she gestured him to have a seat while she was saying her last words in a hurry, with a second lasting blush before putting the phone down. "Call you in a few, bye" She look up to the patient, "Yes?"

Patient: "I've been suffering from fever for the past few days."

Doctor: "Did you take any medicine?"

Patient: "No, I didn't. I've got a cold too."

She nods and examines the young man.
"Your body temperature is 102' F. You must take medicines for at least three days." She got busy writing on a piece of paper, which allowed the patient time to think.

Patient: "Can I attend office?"

The doctor chuckles, he so reminded her of someone. "You shouldn't. You must take rest"

Patient: " What about the diet?"

Doctor: "You should be on liquid diet."

Patient: "Should I see you again?", asking with a smile.

She looked up at him, doubtful with his choice of words, "You needn't. But, if the fever persists for more than three days, come to the hospital." Fumbling on her words, trying to be as formal as she could.

"Thank you, Ma'am" He utters the kind words with a wide grin and a sweet tone leaving the doctor staggered.

Amazed, she managed to voice the words forcing a fake smile on her face, after a second or two, "You're welcome."

He leaves the cabin with a smile, but not before turning to throw a last glance at her. He was left disillusioned for she was way too busy with her mobile to notice him.

Pressing his number on her phone, she honestly made a silent prayer that she was not disturbing him.

Scene Changes:

Clad in a 3-piece aristocrat looking dark blue suit, a white shirt with single-lengh French cuff links and a silk grey-purple tie, Armaan Mallik, almost beginning the presentation with the B1-LED-PICO projector.
"As Chair, it is my pleasure to introduce to you Mr Atul Joshi, our new Executive Vice President. Everyone is present, so we can skip the apologies. We will commence as soon as the last person signs the attendance sheet."

"Let's get started, I'd like to share some thoughts on" he was about to commence his presentation, when a clear tone was heard echoing in the room. Contemplating on who could be giving him a call on his private number, he excused himself out of the conference room.

Upon seeing the Caller's ID flashing on the screen, he accepts the call with a melancholy tone and wearing a genuine apprehensive look on his face, " Hey Love!"

The sweet voice of a lady replied, "Sorry, actually there was a patient who came over," hearing no reaction she continues, "I didn't disturb you, right?"

Smiling against his will he adds, "No, nothing like that sweetheart. Well, i was just to start the conference but.. Anyway, you wanted to tell me something?"

After a meditative moment, she decides upon the words to be used to explain to him her sudden approval, "Uhh, actually, i pondered on what you suggested last night and.."

As if by telepathy, he could tell what was going in her mind. She was not going to pay lip-service to his words and he, was for one second so gratified to the fact that she might have abided by his proposal, "Oh My God, Love, you've accepted it.. right baby?" He leaned on the door with his back, anticipating a yes

She laughed for she could actually imagine him jumping in happiness, "Yes, you were actually right you know. And now you moron, don't be late. Come and fetch me. Okay?"

A chuckle left his mouth as his eyes were now moist, "Am coming right now, i can't wait to take you home!"

As realization dawns upon her, she voices her feelings, "No Armaan, use your brain sometimes, look, there are formalities to be completed here, so it will take a while na? But I won't make it more than an hour. And why are you SOOO bent on bringing me home? I want to have a classy dinner in an open air restaurant, with my husband s'il vous plait!"

To be continued...

Am having a real tough time posting from mob.. I'll update it soon(not like my FF lol) 😆 , for it's a message to someone really special.. One more thing, JO DIKHTA HAIN WOH HOTA NAHIN, AUR JO HOTA HAIN WOH DIKHTA NAHIN..

Please remember to keep your comments and criticism pouring in or at least Like if you genuinely like the OS😃. It might help me amend my OS.. Do tell me if you don't like any particular thing😊

Love
Liashna

Edited by Liashna - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Everyone!! So am back with an OS, a general one but I know since you all and me too love imagining the whole scene with the picture of our favourite personality in our mind's eye, so I'll try to have it in different versions.

ArSh Version


Patient: "May I come in, Ma'am?"

He knocked at the glass door, peered through it and glanced at the lady in. Beautiful, he amused. She was busy conversing on the phone, he noticed at one glance.

Doctor: "Yes, come in!", she gestured him to have a seat while she was saying her last words in a hurry, with a second lasting blush before putting the phone down. "Call you in a few, bye" She look up to the patient, "Yes?"

Patient: "I've been suffering from fever for the past few days."

Doctor: "Did you take any medicine?"

Patient: "No, I didn't. I've got a cold too."

She nods and examines the young man.
"Your body temperature is 102' F. You must take medicines for at least three days." She got busy writing on a piece of paper, which allowed the patient time to think.

Patient: "Can I attend office?"

The doctor chuckles, he so reminded her of someone. "You shouldn't. You must take rest"

Patient: " What about the diet?"

Doctor: "You should be on liquid diet."

Patient: "Should I see you again?", asking with a smile.

She looked up at him, doubtful with his choice of words, "You needn't. But, if the fever persists for more than three days, come to the hospital." Fumbling on her words, trying to be as formal as she could.

"Thank you, Ma'am" He utters the kind words with a wide grin and a sweet tone leaving the doctor staggered.

Amazed, she managed to voice the words forcing a fake smile on her face, after a second or two, "You're welcome."

He leaves the cabin with a smile, but not before turning to throw a last glance at her. He was left disillusioned for she was way too busy with her mobile to notice him.

Pressing his number on her phone, she honestly made a silent prayer that she was not disturbing him.

Scene Changes:

Clad in a 3-piece aristocrat looking dark blue suit, a white shirt with single-lengh French cuff links and a silk grey-purple tie, Armaan Mallik stood, almost beginning the presentation with the B1-LED-PICO projector.
"As Chair, it is my pleasure to introduce to you Mr Atul Joshi, our new Executive Vice President. Everyone is present, so we can skip the apologies. We will commence as soon as the last person signs the attendance sheet."

"Let's get started, I'd like to share some thoughts on" he was about to commence his presentation, when a clear tone was heard echoing in the room. Contemplating on who could be giving him a call on his private number, he excused himself out of the conference room.

Upon seeing the Caller's ID flashing on the screen, he accepts the call with a melancholy tone and wearing a genuine apprehensive look on his face, " Hey Love!"

The sweet voice of a lady replied, "Sorry, actually there was a patient who came over," hearing no reaction she continues, "I didn't disturb you, right?"

Smiling against his will he adds, "No, nothing like that sweetheart. Well, i was just to start the conference but.. Anyway, you wanted to tell me something?"

After a meditative moment, she decides upon the words to be used to explain to him her sudden approval, "Uhh, actually, i pondered on what you suggested last night and.."

As if by telepathy, he could tell what was going in her mind. She was not going to pay lip-service to his words and he, was for one second so gratified to the fact that she might have abided by his proposal, "Oh My God, Love, you've accepted it.. right baby?" He leaned on the door with his back, anticipating a yes

She laughed for she could actually imagine him jumping in happiness, "Yes, you were actually right you know. And now you moron, don't be late. Come and fetch me. Okay?"

A chuckle left his mouth as his eyes were now moist, "Am coming right now, i can't wait to take you home!"

As realization dawns upon her, she voices her feelings, "No Armaan, use your brain sometimes, look, there are formalities to be completed here, so it will take a while na? But I won't make it more than an hour. And why are you SOOO bent on bringing me home? I want to have a classy dinner in an open air restaurant, with my husband s'il vous plait!"

To be continued...

Am having a real tough time posting from mob.. I'll update it soon(not like my FF lol) 😆 , for it's a message to someone really special.. One more thing, JO DIKHTA HAIN WOH HOTA NAHIN, AUR JO HOTA HAIN WOH DIKHTA NAHIN..

Please remember to keep your comments and criticism pouring in or at least Like if you genuinely like the OS😃. It might help me amend my OS.. Do tell me if you don't like any particular thing😊

Love
Liashna

Edited by Liashna - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res...edit soonish
Muahhh 🤗

wow really nice start princess!!! so my jungli blli, wats up?? lol...

Wow, really philosophical title...hmm..., !!! IT's Awesome...truly said Do It Now, Tomorrow never comes!!!!!

hmmm nice, patient n doctor...so who's the doc??? n the patient??? mystery huh...well we'll wait for the complete part then ...
"Beautiful"...n "Should I see you again?", asking with a smile. Aww...at first sight...wow!!! wonder what is awaiting us...can't wait for the whole part!!!!!!!!!

i know the mob doesn't let post the whole n unlike ur FF which u're nt updating right now, u'll soon update this one..i mean hope so warna hum dekhe rahe jayage aur yuh hi reh jayege!!!.😆...ok u know i'm jokin'in my 'not-so-good-hindi'!! right now, trying to be a lil'😈, ab aisa mauka kab ayega!!!


Cont soonish

Take care
ILY
Muahh
🤗

Edited by ARKJ_4EVER - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyya

nice strtt dear bt which ff it is i mean arsh ar which if its arsh den m really in it

if nt den srry

bt plz js request make it arsh dear would luv to read such a beautiful story

plzzz clear d suspense which ff it is who ws d patient n who ws d doc

cont soon

luv

Bipin


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARKJ_4EVER

Res...edit soonish

Muahhh 🤗

wow really nice start princess!!! so my jungli blli, wats up?? lol...

Wow, really philosophical title...hmm..., !!! IT's Awesome...truly said Do It Now, Tomorrow never comes!!!!!

hmmm nice, patient n doctor...so who's the doc??? n the patient??? mystery huh...well we'll wait for the complete part then ...
"Beautiful"...n "Should I see you again?", asking with a smile. Aww...at first sight...wow!!! wonder what is awaiting us...can't wait for the whole part!!!!!!!!!

i know the mob doesn't let post the whole n unlike ur FF which u're nt updating right now, u'll soon update this one..i mean hope so warna hum dekhe rahe jayage aur yuh hi reh jayege!!!.😆...ok u know i'm jokin'in my 'not-so-good-hindi'!! right now, trying to be a lil'😈, ab aisa mauka kab ayega!!!


Cont soonish

Take care
ILY
Muahh
🤗



Hey, I finally posted it but i realise that's this a an ocean to be drunk😆. Oyye, Khankhajure, Got a scratch from a certain cat today!!😃

Aha!! Told you na, Jo hota hain wo dikhta nahin, and patati patata... U're mistaken... Mystery Mystery... Keep reading you will know.. It's not over yet..

😡My Mobile... I'll kick it in the bin... lol... But that's my mini heart so can never dare so...😉

Haan haan, be as much😈 as you want, very soon you will see...Teri to beeep beeep😉
About my FF... Having a writer's block... Am stuck with the party scene...🤢

Regards
Liashna
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: arsh4life

heyya

nice strtt dear bt which ff it is i mean arsh ar which if its arsh den m really in it

if nt den srry

bt plz js request make it arsh dear would luv to read such a beautiful story

plzzz clear d suspense which ff it is who ws d patient n who ws d doc

cont soon

luv

Bipin



Hi, Thanks a bunch..

As for whether it's an ArSh FF, i mean OS, i have just posted it, so you can opt any of the three...😃

Uhh, who's the doc and patient, well keep reading, you will find out😉

Cheers
Liashna
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very Nice OS dear 👍🏼
I thoroughly enjoyed reading all versions be it SR/AR or ArSh!

You have done outstanding job !!

Keep it up 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You r very clever my dear😉 😆 same os going to all fans bt version changes😆😆 nice idea...since i hv read sr version so i loved it...thank u so much 4 pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start!!!!!!
waiting for next part!!!!!!!!!
please continue soon and add me to your pm list.

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