Maaneet FF ~ Kasak THREAD 3 ~ Last Pt 60 Pg 27 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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great ff cont soon n plz pm me on d next part
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Originally posted by: dmg_roks_antara

great ff cont soon n plz pm me on d next part



Thanks a lot..
Will PM u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrazz 4 new thread. Awesome update. Update soon
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Cngrats 4 new thread ...awsm updt cntinue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrazz 4 new thread. Awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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have catch up with 52 till 57 all the parts were very nice cont soon and thanks for pm
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PART 57

She twisted her lips & drifted into deep sleep holding his hand. He also dozzed off with her.. didn't knew when.
Last day was not easy for him.. spl without his jaan. Nobody could understand how he has managed the last day. But it was for the sake of his jaan, so how could he deny Mr rathode.

Maan opened his eyes only to find her sleeping peacefully in his embrace. He caressed her face lovingly. A smile instantly touched his lips as he got lost in her angelic beauty. Soon she opened her eyes to feel his hot breath fanning on her neck & then a slight blow over her face. He tucked her hair locks behind her ears. She closed her eyes feeling shy. He started to shower her with kisses.. first all over her nape & then moved to her face & at last his lips slightly brushed hers. She parted her mouth anticipating whats next. He took her lips in & entered inside.. their tongues playing in their own rhythm. She responded him with the same fervor. The kiss grew more wilder & passionate. They were kissing each other like no tomorrow until they finally broke apart feeling breathless.

He caressed her face & looked at her ever so lovingly. She hid her face in her palms feeling really shy & conscious.
Maan' acha ji.. tho u can do all that but mai tumhe sirf dekh raha hun tho u r shying.. wo sab karte hue tho aati nahi sharam..
Geet' maan.. plz
Maan' acha theek ha.. jayo get ready.. we have to go to dr na
Geet made a face' maan kal chalte hain na
Meanwhile dadimaa came there
Dadi' nahi nahi geet.. bete jo kaam hain.. wo sab aaj hi nipta lijiye.. kal time nahi milga bete.. kal se aap dono ki shaadi ki rasmen shuru ho jayengi..
Geet looked down & blushed. Maan chuckled seeing her blushing.

They reached hospital by 7 in the evening. No one could be seen there. She pulled him by his sleeve.
Geet' maan.. yeh hospital itna khali kyun hai??

He just smirked.
Geet'
that means aapne pura hospital book kiya haina
He nodded..
She hugged him sideways' maan aap mere liye itna sab kyun karte ho..
Maan' jaan.. tumhare liye nahi karunga.. tho aur kiske liye karunga..
He pulled her in a hug. Soon they broke apart hearing a voice. Geet could see tension building up on maan's face. The person came forward & shaked hands with maan. Maan reluctantly did so.
Maan' mr rathode what r u doing here..
Mr rathode' mr maan I know u r not that dumb so why r u putting up such a silly question.. arre bhai ek insan hospital kyun aayega..
Maan' mr rathode I think u haven't checked with the management.. this whole hospital is booked for my wud be wife.. he put his hands around her waist authoritatively.. so plz just leave us alone..
Geet was really shocked & now tensed to see this much anger in his eyes.. who was this mr rathode.. she was sure something was really fishy.. it was pretty evident from maan's face.

PREV- Part 56 NEXT- Part 58

Hi guys..
All chappals are most welcome.. I know I've not updated since a long time..
But kya karun.. exams r there na..
And in this whole month today is the one vehlapanti day I have got..
So today updating both the FFs.. as my b'day treat..
And yah.. don't forget to give me my comments & likes
Thanks a lot for all the love & support
Love u all loads..
Mahima

Edited by mahimak - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Happy Birthday Dear..
Finish wxam first..we will wait for u..
love small update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR...MAY GOD BLESS U...& GIVE U ALL THE HEALTH, HAPPINESS & SUCCESS IN UR LIFE 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsum. Ab ye mr. Rathod kaun hai

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