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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#561

edited my comment on PG 88 :)

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Naina

@sumonetolub

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#562

such a perfect scene that is so nupurish...i really wish there was such a scene because especially what was said really defines their relationship...great os 😛

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#563

Beautiful

U stole my heart dear

Thanks for pm

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#564

Subtle has always been your forte! N i love u for it fanta!!

🤗

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Mitali

@...Mitali...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#565

it was a sweet n cute os...

thnx for the pm

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Pradnya

@Prada_176

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#566

Aww Kinzu🤗

It is sweet and simple OS

Your writing and Mayur make it beyond beautiful

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#567

gr88 prt

thanx 4 d pm

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Jessie

@jes_jade

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#568

Kinza..this OS is awesome !!👏👏

It was so magical...fabulous indeed !!⭐️⭐️

Loved it !!

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#569

I don't know whether to name it as a poem or some free verse, but it is just a piece of my heart. A piece explaining helplessness in love.
and It's alright, i already expect very few LIKES and comments, bcz this is surely something you all will not enjoy, and i am sorry for not coming with something entertaining this time,

A piece of heart.

Walking by the side of shore,
I am crying more and more.

Thinking of the past times, thinking of the good times,
I am becoming a complete mime.

People say, hold onto the rope
People say, keep the hope.

But people don't know ..

how it hurts!, how it feels!, how it pricks!, how it shatters!, how it corrodes!,
how it dismantles!, how it tears apart!, how it destroys!

What do i do when everything passes my mind.
What do i d when the smile crosses my eyes.
What do i do when the giggle tingles my heart.

Nothing is all I did, and nothing is all I can do.

Just wait, wait, wait and wait.

Walking by the side of shore
I am crying more and more.

Thinking of the past times, thinking of the good times,
I am becoming a complete mime.

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago