Tribute to Baba & Babu for their 1st Anniversary

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Everybody, Because the CVs havn't shown anything to celebrate the 1st anniversary of Kriya's marriage and their SR, maybe we should celebrate it. I have written a poem for their love story. Lets write more poems or anything else to celebrate!!! :)
I hope you guys will like it
Here is a glossary as some words are hardcore Hindi.
Tyaag - leaving the relations or world. So I am trying to tell that Krishna is ready to leave his near relations for Pratigya. He had also been ready to leave the world for Pratigya when he took the snake poison from her.

Prayag - is the ancient name of the city of Allahabad. This is the city where both Krishna and Pratigya are from and live there too.

Sangam - Sangam is the confluence of three rivers at the ancient city of Allahabad, also which is called Prayag. Here I'm trying to compare the coming together of Krishna and Pratigya with the confluence of rivers Ganga Yamuna in Prayag.

Satkaar - means giving respect to elders

Radharani - is the lover of Hindu God Krishna.

Log Laaj - Society's norms, Pratigya does not care that Krishna is not educated, she loves him because of his character. In Hinduism, Radha also didn't care about log laaj for Krishna.
Ehnkaar - ego
Sansaar - World
Humara sundar Krishna Baba

Kare humari Pratigya se Pyaar

Uski Mohabbat sabse sachi

Who hai sacha dildaar.

Apni Pratigya Ke liye

Usne Kiya sabka tyaag

Milan unka Sangam Jaisa

Jisse sab log kehte hai Prayag

Pratigya Rani sabse Sayani

Sabka Karti Satkaar

Woh hai humare Krishna ki Radharani

jisko prem ki woh layi bahaar

Krishna Ke liye usne log laaj ko chora

Bure logo ko usne sabak sikhaya baar baar

Krishna ne badla apni zindagi ka rukh

Aur chora apna ehankaar

Dono ki zindagi badli

Ab dono dete hai ek dusre ka saath

Yehi toh sachi shaadi doston

Isi se hi banta hai ek acha sansaar.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gr8 👏⭐️i love it explanations and poem😛 Ati sundar 😃⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow thats soo great yaar soo meaning full poem love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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a great effort... awesome lines... keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Great Poem Zooni.Bahut hi shresth Rachna hain aapki.CVS dekho aap Kriya ko bhul sakte ho Hum fans nahi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash_huti

a great effort... awesome lines... keep it up

agreed 100%...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wao...what a lovly poem👏.good effort👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks everybody for the appreciation. 😃
it feels good to write in our native languages..even if it is something simple as that. 😊
We should all learn proper Hindi and Urdu as these languages have given us so much. 😊
Zooni
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mitaly..

Gr8 👏⭐️i love it explanations and poem😛 Ati sundar 😃⭐️⭐️

Itne pyaare Thank you ke liye THANK YOU! 😃

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