Tera ...Hone Laga Hun ... (MG OS)

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Hello Friends,

i have been a silent member of Geet forum ...n i appreciate all ur work .

u all are grt writer.

now, m going to post something form my side.

n its first thread of mine in Geet forum.

plz...tell me if u r not interested.





plz scrool down ...

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Tera ... Hone Laga Hun ...



Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean,

come and feel me...oh feel me...


Maan looked at her playing and jumping across the waves. To him,she looked even more beautiful than ever ….. ever than their marriage night. He remembered how nervous she was that she forgot her own name.

Chuckling, he again looked at her. The sun was setting …. Less than half visible on the horizon, making everything red …. The sky … the ocean … the nature. Red!! He sighed. Red is her favorite color and he used to hate red, ye to khoon ka color hai …. He used to say that, but now red become his favorite color too.

She was looked breathtaking on red lehenga on their wedding. It had been just two months they were getting married and today they are in Goa for their honeymoon.

Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean,

come and heal me...oh heal me...

he again chucked the thought of honeymoon. How romantic it sounds na? but he was never bother for something like 'honeymoon' in whole life …. Off course, he was thinking about his college life ….. being a topper, he usually found peace on books, not in girls. His best friend Samrat always teased him for this, "tera bookshelf to Girlfriend se bhara para hai!!"

The day when they heard about my marriage, OMG!! I cant forgot their facial expression ... uff!!! "kya teri shadi ho rahi hai??" they shouted, their expressions were beyond to expressed in words ... they were shouted first in shock, then in joy. "hay … iss padaku ki shadi ho rahi hai, aur mujh jaisa hot n happening guy reh gya!!" Samrat said dramatically only to earn his angry glair.

"oye, tera ye sadu look USS pe kaam nhi karenge."

Grinning of his old memories, he again looked at her. She was jumping across the wave and giggling like little kid ….. she was looking beautiful under the rays of setting sun. he chuckled as she slipped and fell on the wave ….. immediately got up, she started wiped off wet sands from her cloth, when murmured something under her breath. Maan was sure, she was cursing herself. She was completely wet, white kameez clung on her, showing her perfect shaped figure.

She was his wife ….. his best friend …. His soul-mate …. She was his Geet!!

Ho aja tumhe mera,mera,

tera jo ikraar hua...

To kyun na main bhi keh dun,keh dun,

hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua!!

Geet vigorously rubbed her dress to wipe off the wet sand and cursing herself, "thik se khara hona bhi nhi aata tujhe!!" suddenly her eyes feel on Maan. He was gazing her even without blink. Her heart shivered as her black eyes locked into his brown one. She felt her cheeks getting warmer due to his intense gaze. Her cheeks were pink and he lowered his eyes automatically. She felt a starange emotion brimmed over her heart.

This was the same emotion which she felt after saw him on their marriage night. He looked extremely handsome in cream-color sherwani. Her friends sighed in sorrow after they saw Maan. She was really felt happy to made her friends jealous.

She smiled her own thought. She looked up and see his intense gaze still on her.

Her heart started beating faster and she turned into opposite direction to hide her blush.


Tera...hone laga hun,khone laga hun,jabse mila hun...
Tera...hone laga hun,khone laga hun,jabse mila hun...


Maan watched intently as the blush crept her face and she turned. A hope rose in his heart ….. may be she ….!!!! He started walking towards her.

Just two months before, they were complete stranger, but now they were couple …. Newly married couple. He was less spoken person, he could only communicated with his gang beside of his mother. After their marriage, Geet completely changed the atmosphere of their house. The house used to clam and quite, now filled with full of noise.

With his most surprise, his gang adore Geet more than him. Samrat was one of her biggest fan, he usually asked her for owing her Gunjan, sometimes his mother too joinGeet Nupur and his mother, sitting on the couch and talking something about serious matter …. But their serious matter was just one, how to oow Gunjan??


Waise to mann mera,pehle bhi raaton mein,

aksar hi chahat ke,sapne sanjota tha,

Pehle bhi dhadkan,ye dhun koi gaati thi,

par ab jo hota hai,wo,pehle na hota tha!!


he was stood beside her, looked at her ….. his heart skipped a bit to see her shy smile, she was fiddled with her dupatta. There was something was changing …. Surely changing between them. They are husband-wife by ritual, but now they are not just bound with ritual, they were something more ….. something more beyond ritual …. They were bound by heart.

His hope rose high …. The strong pull that he felt towards her wasn't new. He had felt this since they met. Their marriage, their distance, their first talk, their friendship, their first eye-lock ….. Maan smiled at those memories, but today was something else. Her blush, her eyes spoken to him …. Spoken volumes.

Waves crashed down under their feet.

Hua hai tujhe jo bhi,jo bhi,

mujhe bhi iss baar hua,

to kyun na main bhi keh du,keh du,

hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua!!

Corner of her eye, Geet could saw Maan get up from his spot and approach her. Her heartbeat rose faster and faster as he come closer and closer.

He stood behind her …. She could sensed his radiating heat which warmer her cheeks more. Although he was her husband, but she couldn't understand what made her so nervous!! So excited yet scared …. But she was happy in same time. It was a strange feeling!!

What is it??? Is it love?? Her asked herself.

Maan caught her shoulder and turned towards him. she gasped on his touch …. She caught her breath and shut her eyes tightly …. Her lips were trembling. Maan smiled at her innocence. She looked no less than a fairy.

"open your eyes Geet" he said huskily.

Before she could react, its start raining. The beach was empty within a minutes, leaving behind this two.

Tera...hone laga hun,khone laga hun,jabse mila hun...
Tera...hone laga hun,khone laga hun,jabse mila hun...



Maan looked at her. Her eyes were still shut, and eyelids were fluttered.

He slide down his hands through her arms, making her gasped …… he rounded his arms around her waist and pulled her closer …… she collided on his chest, and in reaction her flicked open her eyes and looked up.

He looked into her big, black, beautiful eyes, which seemed to saying thousand things to him. the color of her cheek deepened as she slowly looked away. He gently pulled her little closer. The sight of her face was angelic ….. pure rain slipping down from her hair, which glued on her right cheek blocking her angelic face from his view.



Aankho se chhu lun,ki baahein tarasti hain,
dil ne pukara hai,haan,ab to chale aao...



Maan placed her hair behind her ear. Rain slipping down from her flawless skin …. Tiny raindrops rested on her eyelashes and slipped down with a blink. He pulled her more closer ….. they could hear their heartbeat, which racing faster than time.

He caressed her cheeks with his knuckle ….. she squzzed her eyes, when cheeks turned crimson.

"Maan" her trembling lips whispered.

"sshhh" he placed his finger on her soft wet lips, his fingertip was rested longer than necessary. Her breath was quickened and his too …. It seemed so difficult to keep themselves steady.

Aao ki shabnam ki boondein barasti hain,
Mausam ishara hai,haan,ab to chale aao!!



Cupping her face with one of his hand, he looked her …. Without any hesitation he said, "you are beautiful Geet ….."

Geet slowly looked up and found two dark brown ocean ….. and no time she could sink in it. Maan bent his face closer to her …. Their breath mingled …. No one of them wanted to break this eye-lock.


Baahon mein daale baahein,baahein,

baahon ka jaise haar hua,

Geet slided her arms around his neck while her face broke into beautiful smile.

Slowly parted form her, he sat on his knees and looked up …. Her eyes were shining in tears as her soft lips curved into a hevenly smile.

He took her hand and looked directly into her eyes, "I don't know, how you feel about me …. But all I can say that …. That I love you." The tears wre threatening her eyes long, now they makes their way on her cheeks. He could distinguish between tear and rain.

"I love you Geet …. I love you very very much ….. my life is nothing without you …. You complete me …."



Haan maana maine maana,maana,

hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua...


Geet controlled her from long time, now brusting into tears of joy. She could hardly believe her eyes that Maan was kneeling in front of her and proposed!!!

Did he actually propos???

Did he actually fulfill her dreams???

Oh yes, say something Geet ….. he is waiting!!

"I – I love you too Maan …" her voice trembling with emotion.

Maan quickly get up and embraced her tightly, "I love you Geet."

The rain was become havior.

Tera...hone laga hun,khone laga hun,jabse mila hun...
Tera...hone laga hun,khone laga hun,jabse mila hun!!!

Maan placed his hands on her waist and lifted her from ground. Geet was first shocked, then her expression changed into happiness. He twirled her around, when she welcomed the rain with open arms.

He gently placed her on the ground. Her face was glittering like diamond.

Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean,

come and feel me...oh feel me...

He took her into his secure arms before placed his lips on her cheek. She gasped and closed her eyes tightly before clenched his shirt. She could felt her skin brunt under him touch.

"Geet, can I?" he asked between his uneven breath.

Without opening her eyes, she pulled herself closer and freed every control of her body. He pulled her closer, almost sqeezed her, before placed his lips on her.

The rain was still drenching them, but they showering each other in pure love.

Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean,

come and feel me...oh feel me...

Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean,

come and heal me...oh heal me...

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so sorry for spelling & grammatical mistakes ...

plz leave ur honest comment ...


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow loved it very much superb update
Amazing :))))))))
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i loved it !!! dont say u r writing this first time ... do write some more ...
abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely and mind blowing os
write some more dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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haaaye..main mar jawaan...it was ausum dear..write more plzzz...!!

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