Gratitude & Love.. Maaneet FF-- Ch 3 Teaser

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Hi Ppl ..

This is my 1st FF in this forum. Please comment.

Few liberties :

1. geet belongs to a vry rich family. Her father owns almost everything in the town.
2.She has 1 younger sister... plz suggest a name guys..😉

Teaser

1995...

Little Geetu was lost... today was the worst day of her 6 yr old life...
First she was woken up at 7 am morning by her mom and grandma for a Puja at her house..as per her daddy "the princess can sleep till 8 am "... her sweetest daddy did not even scold her mother today for comitting this "PAAP"..😭
2ndly... her second round of her mom's dosage came when she accidently 😉ate the mithaai kept separately for puja by her mom... come onnn Gulabjamuun was her fav.. the best thing in the world after Barbie.. which none of her Std 1 frnd had..
3rd ly ... the 3rd star of her day came from her grandma.. when she dragged her out of the mudpool outside her house... saying that if she does not behave like a lady her father will never get anyone willing to marry her 😭😡... poor geetu had so much dreams abt her marriage... she had already choosen the pink fairy dress which she was going to wear for her "function" and "school holiday"
4th... after seeing her cry.. her fav uncle .. Singh Uncle who used to work in papa's office took her n brij bhaiya to local mela ... and got her colourful ballons...brij bhaiya's ballons were still der... but phatt phattt... there goes her last ballon..
5th... baddest part😭... she went out searching for her uncle ... and was unable to find him ...which prompted another flood of tears

But she then she saw her savior 😳😊😃
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Character sketch :

Handa Family

Geet Handa : Was a Spoilt daughter of one of the richest man in the country till the age 16. But then something very tragic happened in her life which changed her outlook on life completely. At the tragic moments of her life she was always saved by her savior but she was the one who let him down when her savior needed her the most... no prizes for guessing who will be that saviour

Brij Handa : Elder brother of Geet. Is very arrogant, spoilt and exhibits heinous anti social tendencies at the age of 17.

Pari Handa : the baby of the family . Lot more spoilt then Geet .

Rakesh Handa :Geet's father . Is one of the richest man in India. Owns a very big company and has a lot of employees working under him who are very loyal to him. Has an illegitimate daughter apart from Geet.

Rano Handa : Mother of Geet . Extremely devoted wife and mother

Sameera Handa : illegitimate daughter of Rakesh handa. Lives in the employee quarter alongwith her Naani. Hates the Handa Family but also craves for their love and acceptance.

Yash malhotra : Geet's best frnd and secretly loves Geet.

Singh Family

Sukhpal Singh : One of the most loyal employees of Handas. Considered as a family member by Handas. is aware of sameera Handa but still guards this secret.

Maan Singh : Son of Sukhpal Singh.Same age as that of Brij Handa. Does not like Handa children as he considers them show off. Very self-righteous person. Has lot of self respect.Is very hard working. Good in both studies and sports. Has a keen sense of business from a very small age. Loves Sameera but sameera does not admit her feelings towards him due to her background.

Anwesha Singh /Anni: Sister of Maan. Has a crush on Brij but Brij uses her in a most heinous way.

Vicky singh : Youngest of Singh siblings . Almost 7 yrs gap between Maan and Vicky. His mother died giving birth to him.

Khurana Family

Raghav Khurana : Rival businessman of Rakesh Handa. Is the best friend of Sukhpal Singh. Treats the Singh family as his own family.

Sandhya Khurana : Wife of Raghav Khurana . was the best friend of Maan's mother. Treats Singh children as her own.

Arjun Khurana : Son of raghav and Sandhya Khurana. best friend of maan singh. Had a crush on Geet initially but later fell in love with Anwesha /Anni. Both Arjun and Anni have not yet told this to Maan.Their love story is very tragic.

Sur khurana : Arjun's sister . Of the same age as Vicky.

Golu/Gambhir Khurana : Youngest of all Khuranas and Singh .. 10 yrs of diff between Arjun and him.

The characters will progress with story.. 😊..

satisfied with the character sketch ???😳

shall i continue ??😕

Edited by maaneet_michi - 14 years ago
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Hey guys..

Please find the first chapter below.. Since i am a big fan of MICHI.. i have taken few incidents from Michi thread aslo.

Chapter 1 : The Begining


1986:

Handa House :

Rakesh Handa was in a worst form of fix. His life was standing in an intersection of his life where any path taken by him will change the fate of lot of people involved.

Rakesh was from a traditionally rich family...involved in labor extensive work. He knew with the talk of Indian economy opening he will have to diversify to survive. His thought was broken by his yr old son Brij. His mother was very happy as he had given her a waaris but he had secretly admitted it to her wife that he always wanted a daughter.

Now his wife has just told him that she was expecting again. The thought of having a daughter should have excited him but the problem was that he had come back home to tell his mother and wife that he was done with this arranged relationship. He wanted to be free and go and settle with the love of his life Naina.

Khurana Household :

Sandhya Khurana was very happy that her best friend Sachi Singh was pregnant. She desperately wanted a daughter. She still could not forget how she lost Arjun's twin sister during their birth . It was decided that the new child , if a daughter , will be a daughter for both Singh-Khurana house hold.

Singh Household :

Sukhpal just came home early from his office today and Maan wobbled up to him. He had started speaking a bi and called every1 "MAMA". While coming he saw Naina .. looking at him expectantly.. looking for any signs of decision which his boss could have taken about her. The latest rumour afloat in their employee quarter was that Naina was expecting. But now he had important stuffs to worry abt like his preggy wife .


Next Part : Junior Maan and Junior Geet meet ...an maan hates geets😊

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)Chapter 2(a) : Princess and Pauper

1995

Maan did not like Brij.everyone hated Brij but Maan hated him a bit more than others.. even Arjun.Welll Arjun disliked no one and no one disliked him.. 😕..Arjun always ignored Brij's comment unlike Maan.

Maan POV :
Today there was a intra class cricket match . No prizes for guessing he was not in Brij's team.
After losing the match Brij started making comments about everyone that how his father practically owns everything and they are his servants.

Brij also dared to make a comment about Anni which got me very angry. Anni is my younger sister . Apple of eyes of both my family and Khurana Aunty. She might be bratty sometimes.. even he would be if elders always ignored his mistakes and scolded his siblings for that..
.. but still she was Maan's sister.. and no one messed with Maan's sister. he was told since childhood that he has to protect his younger sis against the world.

Then he looked at me and said that since my dad is his dad's personal secretary... I am his personal servant..
On listening to this I was ready to fight.

maan's team went overboard in celebrations after winning which irritated Brij more and hence he started making mor vile comments and the fist fight on cricket field erupted hence the audience also increased.

As far as Maan was concerned with Sameera and Anni in attendence he had to have the last word to make an impression.Maan was winning the fist fight with Brij.. when out of nowhere , Brij's bratty sister came and threw mud/dust/sand in Maan's eyes😉 and the tide turned.😡

Then Anni and Arjun also came to Maan's aid but Brij pushed Anni off and she fell down.Arjun left Maan and rushed to Anni to tend her . But this tim was enough to distract Brij and Maan gained the upper hand again.😆

Geet's POV

Geet has finished her lunch break when news broke out that a fist fight is happening in the cricket field.She got very excited and ran towards the school ground as fast as her tiny legs could carry her.These were the few exciting things in her boring school life. Once she reached the field she saw 2 boys fighting with each other. She started cheering up for the winning guy (Maan😊) until she saw the boy who was getting beaten up. On seeing Brij bruised, her HANDA blood boiled and she picked a handful of sand and threw it at the winning boy.She did not knew who was the boy nor she cared .Might have been her dads employees son . After all geet handa was a princess and not suppose to know commoners (as per her grandma and Brij ).

After her sand throwing bravado the winning guy stared her angrily as if he would have killed her there itself.Geet also saw Anni who was lying on the floor.Both of them were in the same class.She liked Anni as Anni did not use to even look at her Barbie after Geet refused to even let Anni touch her Barbie.
But she did not like the boy who was staring with demon eyes.. the same eyes which were going to eat her up if she did not behave (as per her grandma)

guys please comment if you liked this... and if u want me to proceed..

Edited by maaneet_michi - 14 years ago
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Thanks means a lot😊
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Part 2 (b).. A Good Groom for Geet😆😉

Both maan and Brij were standing in the Principal's office following their fight. There respective parents were also called.Since Brij's father owned the school, his note stating that he wont be able o come to the school was approved but Maan's dad was forced to come.

When Geet saw sukhpal she went and hugged him and was then formally introduced to his angry son, Maan . Maan was forced to shake hands with geet on his father's insistence which worsened his mood further.😡

Maan POV:

Maan could not understand why he was the only one getting lectures. Afterall Brij was also involved in the fight. And there he was smirking as if a nice comedy movie was going on. Then his eyes fell on the bratty and spoilt sister of brij. He has seen her possessive behavior once when she had not let Anni touch her Barbie .He had not liked it. That day he had talked with Anni and convinced her that when he starts earning he will buy her a 1000 barbie dolls but now Anni was not suppose to look at Geet's barbie. Anni had agreed to him.

Then his eyes fell on Sameera who was standing next to his sister with tears in her eyes. He felt good on seeing that sameera was crying for him.😊 He often wondered why all the girls in this world are not like Sam or .. Anni for that matter. He knew that as siblings one should protect each other but not blindly. Many times he has supported Arjun over Anni as Anni being a girl was not suppose to to do boys' stuff.

Then he saw Geet hugging his dad and his dad picking her up. And then that chudail starting complaining how he beat up her brother . The expression on his Dad's Face made it clear that Maan was going to get a nice dose from his dad this evening. Maan aways felt that he was the adopted or step son of his dad and Geet was his dad's real daughter😡.His father was quiet strict with him unlike Arjun's father who was quiet friendly.He also knew that Arjun was just trying to cheer him up when he said that he felt the same way about Khurana Uncle.


Little Geetu was lost... today was the worst day of her 6 yr old life...

First she was woken up at 7 am morning by her mom and grandma for a Puja at her house..as per her daddy "the princess can sleep till 8 am "... her sweetest daddy did not even scold her mother today for comitting this "PAAP"..😡

2ndly... her second round of her mom's dosage came when she accidently 😉ate the mithaai kept separately for puja by her mom... come onnn Gulabjamuun was her fav.. the best thing in the world after Barbie.. which none of her Std 1 frnd had..

3rd ly ... the 3rd star of her day came from her grandma.. when she dragged her out of the mudpool outside her house... saying that if she does not behave like a lady her father will never get anyone willing to marry her 🥺.. poor geetu had so much dreams abt her marriage... she had already choosen the pink fairy dress which she was going to wear for her "function" and "school holiday"

4th... after seeing her cry.. her fav uncle .. Singh Uncle who used to work in papa's office took her n brij bhaiya to local mela ... and got her colourful ballons...brij bhaiya's ballons were still der... but phatt phattt... there goes her last ballon..

5th... baddest part😭... she went out searching for her uncle ... and was unable to find him ...which prompted another flood of tears

Then She saw Sukhpal Uncle's son .The same boy on him she had thrown sand. He had a few bruises on his face. This gave rise to a fresh set of energy and she hawled😭 . She ran upto him and hugged him very tightly. Maan was shocked to be hugged by someone so suddenly . After seeing that it was Geet who was hugging him so tightly, he remembered what she did to his eyes a day before and started to push her off but Geet hugged on to him very tightly. She kept crying and saying that she wanted to go home.

It was getting very embarrassing for Maan now 😳. He was a big boy now and big boys do not get hugged by their parents and specially not howling girls like Geet.

Geet : Maan help me.. mujhe ghar jaana hai.😭😭

Maan : Geet kya hua .. tum roh kyu rahi ho?

Geet : Main Singh uncle ke saath aayi thi. unhone mujhe gaadi mei baithe rahne kaha tha. But tabhi ek baloon wala aaya .. n mujhe pink colour ke ballon chahiye the... toh main uss balloon wale ke pich chalne lagi... par ab gaadi n ballon wale dono kho gaye..😭

After saying this Geet started crying more loudly.😭

Maan : Ab rona band karo.. main tumhe gaadi tak chod dunga..

On listenning to this Geet gave him a toothy smile with tears still in her eyes. maan wiped the tears off her face and both of them started walking towards his father's office car. But Geet still kept hugging Maan. maan prayed to God not to send Anni and Sam in his moment of embarrassment.😳

Geet saw a begger on the way and she got scared and hid behind Maan hugging him even more tightly and suffocating him.

Maan: Kya hua Geet .. tum darr kyu rahi ho

Geet : Woh bura aadmi mujhe apni jholi mei bhar ke le jayega

Maan : kyu

Geet : Kyunki main buri ladki hu and bado ka kahna nahi maanti.Aise bure bacho ko yahi sazaa milti hai. Pata hai daadi kahti hai ki main agar buri ladki bani rahi toh koi mujhse shaadi nahi karega and mere papa pareshaan ho jayenge mere liye ladka dhoond kar.

Syaing this she started crying again.😭 On seeing her like this Maan felt bad for her .

Maan: Aise pyaari ladki ⭐️se toh har acha ladka shaadi karna chahega.

Geet becomes very happy. After a min she nudged him again

Geet : Kya tum ache ladke ho?😊😃

Maan answered defensively , completely forgetting his words spoken a min earliar.." haan . Ab kabhi rona mat.. ".

At that moment Geet Handa decide that she will get married to "GOOD BOY" Maan Singh 😉, when she grows up to be a big girl and she herself will make her dad's job easier👏. And it will be her big secret. 😃😛...



Hey people plz comment if u like this part...😃

Edited by maaneet_michi - 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

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Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


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Teaser for Part 3 : Teen Years..

Geet :

Here comes the princess... coolest attitude😊.. but very spoilt 😲...
Does not hesitate to insult or demean any one she does not consider fit enough to talk to her.😡.. Has to pay very heavily later for this attitude...😭
Has tried recreational drugs once
Planning to Date Yash.. her current best friend..
Has completely forgotten about her childhood secret of getting married to Maan



Maan :

Pretty confident that he will not work under Handas like his Dad.
Has decided that he will join Khurana Uncle's Biotech company and learn...
Has a major crush on Sameera.. but understands her hesitation..
Had seen Geet insulting Anni once ... and hates her to the core..😡

Arjun:

Not interested in Joining his Dad's buisness..
interested in Arts..
Had a crush on Geet .. but on seeing her treatment of Anni... avoids her

Anni :

Has fallen for Arjun.. hook line and sinker
Is scared of Brij.. because he behaves very strangely with her.. bjt afraid to tell Maan

Sameera :

Wants to avenge her mother..
hates Geet.. and finds her responsible for their father not marrying her Mom
Loves Maan ... but is scared .. what if she will end up in the same way as her mother

Yash :

Geet's best friend
born with a silver spoon
does not like Geet's attitude sometimes but anyways support her
Wants to date Geet bcoz he loves her.. but knows that Geet would want to date just for the fun..


Disaster lurking in the corner for Geet😲
Life shattering event in both Singh and Khurana household.😭😭




Edited by maaneet_michi - 14 years ago
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AMAZING YAAR.LOVED LILGEETU N MAAN ALOT.KEEP IT UP DEAR.

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