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Posted: 14 years ago
Jiger!!
I am BACKK!! .. 🤗

Okay so read the last two parts together. ❤️
So, Mayank had a disturbed childhood and nupur is burning green over his GF. Intresti9ng revelations and progress.,

Needless to say that can't wait.
Continue soon.

P.S - I missed NMG! .. ❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aysha_mayur

Shiviii🤗

That was fantastic🤗...After two sad sad updates...finally we got a lovely update😃😃
Awww Nupur understanding Mayank😳😳...finally her view about him have changed unlike in the starting...well thats the start of the feeling called "Love😳
and...Kisss...makeup...HOT...*hem ahem*..I was dying to pinpoint those naughty words from past few updates🤣
and Nupur finally realising she is falling for him😍...awww😍...can't wait for Mayank to realie it soon...and some lovely moments between the two😳😳
AND PLZZZ UPDATE SOON😳

here u go again Ayeshu
ROFL
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 18anila1

🥳yyyaaayyy🥳 me 1st

wow u updated...😲
thanks for d PM...😆

its good dat Nupur didnt avoid him dis time n faced him...😃
bt goddd why on earth Mayank had to wait for dat Belle...😡
gosh i wanna kill dis Belle cum Billi...😡😡
whyyy cant she jst leave my Mayank for Nupur...😡😡😡
n why Mayank smiled wid her dats nt done...😡
wen he is gonna hv some feelings for Nupur?????????😕😡😕

nice update...👏
continue soon...😃
love ya...🤗



such cute reactions😆
thanks anila😳

Originally posted by: You-Know-Who

Ding and we have an official guy problem! Sigh.

A lesson learnt in time - Dont vouch for the good looking guy. He only becomes your hero in dreams n stories like these. :P

Likey!



😆...it's just a story...gud luking guys may not always be bad;)
thnks:)

Originally posted by: sumonetolub

why do guys make us girls go crazy?...once again, the just friends game begins...and of course he stuck with the airhead (well in comparison to nupur)...its good nupur at least rectified her mistake...if she didnt always put her guard up, she wouldve been in bella's place...but then who said bella's here to say 😈



lets see wht becomes of her:)

Originally posted by: mayurlove

nice update.👏

So this was the reason Mayank's visits in hospital.
I liked Mayur conversation.Bt this Isebelle.😡
Now i m waiting for Mayur love story.
Nupur is falling for mayank bt when wil Mayank have some fellings for Nupur.😍
Thnx for pm dear.😊



thnaks:)



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur

It was a Beautiful Update Shivi...😳...unless n until that DING DONG BELL came... 😳🤣
no Seriouslyyy...i was just luvinggg there Convo...Nupur Really Understand him Well...😳
n there talk after that...lolzz...makeups...kiss...u r Hot...kick Boxing ...wrestling... u r Cute saxena...😳😆
everything was Going Perfecttt...😍
but then...DING DONG BELL...😳🤣
i had actually the same reaction...wot nupur had...when he said he was waiting 4 that BABY GIRL...😳😡😆
i literally stopped reading ...when he said BABY... 😳..but then had to read it...😆
i hate her the same...as i hate when People have any Samrat Gunjan scene in there MAYUR FF...
🤓 🤣...no seriouslyyy...i mean wots the need...😕...but u have NO Samrat...No GUNJAN...in ur FF...😳
Phewww...😆n i don't want them in Future too...let me remind u...getting it na shivi...😳🤣
well...just Continue soon...so eager to read next...it was a beautiful Update...😳👏
Luv Ya...❤️🤗
Annu😳

P.s NO Sorry 4 all the Rofling Comments...😳🤣



🤣🤣🤣

u call her DING DONG BELL🤣

thank u di...love ya
🤗

Originally posted by: immayurfan

Nice ff

Could u pm me when u updae



sure:)

Originally posted by: aysha1989

Oh how much I hate this Isabelle uhhh...
she spoiled the whole thing I so hate her...
Thank you so much!!!



thnks:)

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Beautiful update Shivi
mayur convo was very nice
but belle- yaar i cant tolerate her...



thnks:)



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Posted: 14 years ago


thnks:)

Originally posted by: kirti123

nice part

loved nupur mayank convo
hope that bell is out soon😊



thnks:)

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

nyc update shivi!!
MN's convos wr really nyc!!!
but dat isabelle!!argh...😡
cont soon!
luv ya!🤗



thnks🤗

Originally posted by: capricornFA

awww my mayur convo was so cute 😳 😳

luv ya shivi🤗 🤗



luv you too fari🤗

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

I HATE BELLE!!!!!😡
Please kick her out soon and put some sense into Mayank's head



lets see:)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aysha_mayur

Shiviii🤗

That was fantastic🤗...After two sad sad updates...finally we got a lovely update😃😃
Awww Nupur understanding Mayank😳😳...finally her view about him have changed unlike in the starting...well thats the start of the feeling called "Love😳
and...Kisss...makeup...HOT...*hem ahem*..I was dying to pinpoint those naughty words from past few updates🤣
and Nupur finally realising she is falling for him😍...awww😍...can't wait for Mayank to realie it soon...and some lovely moments between the two😳😳
AND PLZZZ UPDATE SOON😳



ayhsu meri jaan🤗

chal u finally got to fulfil your dil ki tamana
🤣

thank you
🤗

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

i dunno whether i m overreacting or being too much emotional,but mayank's repugnant attitude towards nupur is making me feel way too humiliated...somehow my perception is now when nupur is assured of mayank's fine health,she should herself maintain a distance 4m him, if not harshly then atleast in a distant conventional way...until n unless mayank realizes his feelings 4 her...bcos sumhow showing over interest in him,and nothing but mere formality getting bk in return,is way too depressing...continue soon dear😊



u do seem emtional pallabi:)
thanks:)

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

very nice update.

inspite of all sadness she cant away from mayank.
it was good.
i hope, mayank ll knw her emothion soon.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.



thanks:)



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Posted: 14 years ago


bhulakar😆

Originally posted by: Payal-15

Wow great update again...👏

i love it how u use "kasse hue words" that makes all their convos so interesting😳
n Mayank...ahh why does he have to be so sweet when he is not supposed to be...😍
our Nupz is all game for him now...😆
btw i hope Nupz doesn't have to regret it big time and he falls for her too😳
but actually guys like Mayank never change for one particular girl... hope Nupz doesn't end up all with un mendable pieces of heart😕



thank u so much pallu🤗
yeah i try to keep it crisp :)

well keep reading further to gauge mayank😳

Originally posted by: Fantasia.

Jiger!!
I am BACKK!! .. 🤗

Okay so read the last two parts together. ❤️
So, Mayank had a disturbed childhood and nupur is burning green over his GF. Intresti9ng revelations and progress.,

Needless to say that can't wait.
Continue soon.

P.S - I missed NMG! .. ❤️



welcome back fantu🤗...missed you❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 15

The concrete buildings blurred past me as I jogged ahead. Just three blocks more before my morning sprint is over.

I paused at the roundabout to catch my breath.

"Saxena."

"What the…."

"Hey!"

"What a co-incidence. You here. Hey Mayank!"

"Nothing is ever co-incidental. Everything is pre-destined Miss."

"Sure. What are you doing here early morning?"

"The flowers at Bremen's are the best in this area. Plus its the only one who opens at this hour. Need to get some."

I turned around to look where he was pointing. A small cornerstore was decked with some of the most gorgeous flowers I hadn't seen.

"Those are lovely."

"And good to see you working out early morning. Last time you were heavy."

"Mayank!"

"Mayank" he imitated me in a shrill voice.

"Dog." I laughed. "You are up so early to get flowers. Must be having the time of your life..eh?"

"You bet. It's 7 AM and I am still learning how fanciful and whimsical girls can be"

"That's the problem with you guys. Always blame the girl. You all never really understand what a girl wants."

"I fail to understand what girls look in flowers when they can have me instead."

I rolled my eyes.

"Which one you like from these?"

"No…thank you but I don't want any flowers."

"I was asking for help to select me one."

"Oh..yeah…."why do I always get myself embarrassed infront of him.

"You think orchids would work? Can I get a bouquet of orchids please?

Orchids. You gave me one in the park. The dried petals are still lying inside my notebook. Get something else for Isabelle. I know you are just my friend. I m trying my best to deal with it but the wounds are still raw.

"Sorry we have run out of stock. How about these lilies Sir?"

"Phew!" thankfully no orchids he was giving her.

"What?"

" I….I was taking in the fresh air. Early morning the air is so cool and pure."

" Huh" he turned back to get a bundle of white lilies.

"Nupur! Hey Nupur Saxena!!!"

I turned around to locate who else was shouting out my name.

"Aman………..It is you?"

I was shocked. It was none other than Aman Mehra. My high school senior. The nerd with those huge ugly specs who had a crush on me. Who had asked me out on our school's farewell on which bowing under my peer pressure I had gone. How on earth he was here?

"Hello…Nupur…Wow…you haven't changed at all. Pretty as ever."

I turned to look at Mayank who seemed puzzled.

"Nor have you. Except for the specs. They are gone. Nice to see you here."

"I knew you'd be happy to see me," he beamed.

"Nupur won't you introduce me to your dear friend?"

"Sorry. Aman this is Mayank and Mayank this is…."

"…Aman. Hey dude. She is a hard nut to crack. Best of luck."

"I love challenges. Thanks though. Hello Mayank." He shook his stretched hand.

"Mayank he's my senior from high school. My friend."

"That's even better. High school sweethearts." He winked.

I am going to kill Mayank if he doesn't stop right now.

"Wish I could say that dude. But it's better late than never."

"Nupur you are good at hiding things. But Aman is too large to hide."

They both laughed. It was useless to explain to Mayank.

"Aman are you visiting here? Or some business brings you to New Jersey."

" You can't say it is business. It's a matter of life and death. I am here to meet my future wife."

"Wife?" The horror finally dawned upon me. It was the Aman mom had talked on phone that day. He was supposed to visit me with Aunt Rita this weekend. And freak today was Saturday. Never had I thought she might be talking about this Aman Mehra. Too bad I had forgotten to ask his surname from mom.

"ummm….where is Aunt? She was supposed to come with you here." I have a lot of talking to do with her.

"She must have reached your apartment by now. We were on our way there when I saw you here. I couldn't wait to meet you so I came out of the cab."

"I am really surprised to see you here. I mean after 5 or is it 6 years we are meeting again."

"5 years 6 months 17 days to be exact."

"You'd been counting the days??" my jaw dropped.

" Nope. Just got some good memory. Are you buying some flowers for me?"

"What?..No…it was Mayank who………."

I looked sideways. There was no sign of him. He had left without saying goodbye.

…………………………………………………………………………………………………

'Mom how can you do this to me?"

"Do what? I can't believe you doubt my honest intentions."

"It's not that! Why didn't you tell me it's Aman Mehra.?

"What difference does that make?"

"He is my high school senior"

"Superb beta! You already know him!"

"I don't like him. He was a nerd."

"That was high school. Now look at his pay- he has a job in Microsoft. I don't get what are you talking about. Rita send me his pics. He is tall, dark and handsome. He comes from our society too. "

" It's not that I dislike him coz he was a nerd. He was just so clumsy back then. Yes he has changed. He looks better now. But still he is the same clumsy nerd for me."

" Now stop it Nupur. He is such a wonderful guy. He is decent looking with good job and family. I m trying to secure your bright future and you don't even want to co-operate."

"Maa….no need for you to get sad. We can leave this emotional drama out."

" You call this emotional drama? Can't a mother expect this much from her daughter."

"Fine!..I am meeting him."

"You are my sweetest girl."

"Nupur hurry out of the washroom." Aunt Rita banged the door. Gosh no peace even in the washroom!

" Maa..I'll let you know."

" I'll be waiting. I want to hear yes as an answer."

"Where is dad?"

"He has gone to Delhi to meet Rahul in his college."

Dad I need you the most now!

" Okay then. I'll talk to Dad and bro later. Bye."

"Nupur come out dear. Aman is waiting for you."

"Just two more minutes Aunt."

I went to shower myself deciding not to take less than half-hour to come out.

…………………………………………………………………………………………………..

"Aman I don't think this is the best place. We can go to a caf or some mall."

"Nupur I heard this is the place which is happening with hot chicks."

"Excuse me?"

"I meant this is the most happening disc in town. And for long those chicks haven't faced solid competition. You need to be inside."

"Ummm...Let's hurry up then."

Grr……..who was I stuck up with this whole evening?

I saw a familiar red bling SUV parked outside as we made our way inside.

My heart started to pound loudly. I did not want to meet him again. His sudden walk off and his uncanny voice change suddenly in the morning had been so strange.


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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved it...😃
i loved it...lodsss😊😃😊
aweome update ya...👏👍🏼👏
so nw Mayank behaving weird...😉😆😉
good...i feel so gr8888888 😈😆😈
he shud feel wht my poor Nupur felt while seeing him wid dat Belle cum Billi...😈😈
wowww Mayank n Nupur in d same disco...ab bht maja aye ga...😈😈😈
eagerly waiting for ur next update...😉
continue super soon...😊
love u...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww sumthing is burning 4 sure..😳 u wont believe shivi but this was the thing i was waiting 4...a man breaks down completely and comes out of his carefree shell once he gets to see his girl with some other man..his possessiveness as well fear of losing his love comes out flatly...n probably this is the thing which a man despises most...mayank had started to take nupur 4 granted,thinking as if she wil always b there behind or beside him...i guess this was the only way to make mayank realize his feelings towards nupsi...love u 4 this shivi...amazing turn...😃continue soon...pretty soon..😛
Edited by palz_ArTi4ever - 14 years ago

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