La Bechari,ASR Kans bhyankari,KKG kyabaathai thari

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I am tired after the cleaning n the cooking ...so am writing this crap to cheer myself up 😆...
my phrend whose post i hijack is enjoying in her home town to i have to make a seperate thread alas

Sorry Guys u have to bear this ..🤣


ASR- LA ka live in dimaag pe chaaya
ki sapne mein bhi wohi aaya
La bani bechari
Asr bana atyachaari
Khushi the judge pe jalebi bhaari
and Buaji ko banaya staue of justice
Hey khushi ji kya baat hai thaari
Zulmi ASR pe de dala tumhein verdict
But kya ASR ka reaction kiya tha tumne predict
Jo usne tumhein daraya ,zara sa dhamkaya
arre sapne mein bhi usne tumhein satayaa
Lavanya ji hain bechari,
badi galat reading hai tumhari
isliye Lavs pe aaye pyaar
Aur ASR se bachke rehene ka bhoot hai sawaar
ASR ko khushi ki condition na bhaaye
yeh ladki uske hi ghar mein ussi pe hukam chalaaye
Dono na chahte huu bhi came face to face
the rakshas and the what the were the ace
Shyamwa banaye kheer
trying as usual to chalao pyar waale teer
Janamashtami ki story khushi ji ne sunai
usmein mein bhi kans mein ASR ki shadow nazar aayi
Hai hai Khushi ji aise na karo ASR pe sitam
Show ka villian nahi hero hai woh samajhlo tum
Anjali apne chotte ki asliyat bayaan karen jaaye
hai uski achai dekh khushi ji ka dil fisal na jaaye
Kans ASR nahi par wo hai jisse sab samjhe hain shyam
ASR to wo cheez hai jisse dekh is dil ko aaye aaram
Is week to CV's deserve a pat on the back
Because the story is solidly back on track
There was everything action ,drama, comedy,romance
complete package they delivered leaving no chance
Next week there is a lot to look forward to
As for the weekend there is enuf to hold a chat between me and you




Adits ye sab tumhari post pe aata see how yr visit to yr hometown saved you 🤣...and i no after this koi mujhse to chat karna nahin chahegaaa🤣

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Posted: 15 years ago
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👍🏼 well dun!

I guess Khushi will get her payback next week 4 calling ASR Kans wen Shyam's asliyat comes to the fore...look forward to that!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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"Is week to CV's deserve a pat on the back
Because the story is solidly back on track"

Right on!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Pooju kaunsa crap??!

Itna acha likha hai yaar
Yeh padhke mujhe ayye asr pe pyaar
Kya ghazab dhaya khushi ka suit
Story narrate karte hue she looked too cute

Mamiji roz kare new words invent
I miss her so much agar ek din bhi woh hoye absent
Bas thoda aur bitua mil jaye agar dekhne ko
Full maza aa jayega payalia ko

The entire week was filled wiyh awesomeness
Kare koi complain toh maru main unhe chapeds
Story badhi forward and track pe aayi kahani
Yeh hai different types ke pyaar ki kahani

Compete with this-isse kehte hain crap!:P
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww...my poor baby Rdpoo...meri wajeh se itni takliff huyi sabko...lolzzz...
on a serious note u r a fab writer n poet ..
...fr me u mk ur own post or post in apna common emoti post i love it either way...
i lubju ya...
geetu tekko bhi lubju...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww..such an amazing post!u have written it so beautifully! amazing!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet.a

Pooju kaunsa crap??!

Itna acha likha hai yaar
Yeh padhke mujhe ayye asr pe pyaar
Kya ghazab dhaya khushi ka suit
Story narrate karte hue she looked too cute

Mamiji roz kare new words invent
I miss her so much agar ek din bhi woh hoye absent
Bas thoda aur bitua mil jaye agar dekhne ko
Full maza aa jayega payalia ko

The entire week was filled wiyh awesomeness
Kare koi complain toh maru main unhe chapeds
Story badhi forward and track pe aayi kahani
Yeh hai different types ke pyaar ki kahani

Compete with this-isse kehte hain crap!:P



Agar isse kehte hain crap , to meri lines ko kya kahenge garbage?
u r too good with words be it fun stuff or a deep message
I am to one crazy gal who writes only bakwaas lines
mujhe kissi din eggs and tomato padhenge i feel at times🤣

Edited by rdfan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice work pooja I guess that's ur name I am assuming.
You and geet are so good with ur poetry. Love to read
it everyday.

Though the dream was kinda cute they could
have done without it. But no complains.

The best part for me was Arnav not reacting to
Khushi. That's a big change in him.
Yes he is doing it for his Di but still.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely

Nice work pooja I guess that's ur name I am assuming.
You and geet are so good with ur poetry. Love to read
it everyday.

Though the dream was kinda cute they could
have done without it. But no complains.

The best part for me was Arnav not reacting to
Khushi. That's a big change in him.
Yes he is doing it for his Di but still.




Thankyou so much and i guess both are tolerating each other bec of their families ...and i guess they did the dream to emphasize how much it affects khushi and how her view is totally negative when it cums to asr ...but i guess as she cums to know the gud things abt him thru Anjali she will begin to have that conflict within
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: adits7

awww...my poor baby Rdpoo...meri wajeh se itni takliff huyi sabko...lolzzz...

on a serious note u r a fab writer n poet ..
...fr me u mk ur own post or post in apna common emoti post i love it either way...
i lubju ya...
geetu tekko bhi lubju...




Jab humein takleef hoti hai to hum usse akele nahin jhelte ...duniya pe daal dete hain🤣...but i so missed yr post ...meri creativity ke liye woh perfect platform hai 😆😉...

Geetu to itna deep likhti hai mujhe sharam aati hai uske post pe crap likhte hue 😆...teri post to mast hoti hai naa isliye uspe chalta hai😆

But me lubj you and Geetu 🤗

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