Arhi FF: '.. and they meet again'Part5 up on Pg11 - Page 3

I have thought about part 3 of this FF. But before posting it, i want your suggestions regarding my writing. As this is the first time i am creating story, please elaborate the points which you like and don't like in my story. So that i can understand areas of improvement. I am open for your comments and criticism.

And i will update next part soon 👍🏼

but can u please have english translations with the hindi dialouge...i am not good at reading them

its really good how you have also detailed what everyone is doing and thinking in their character. (good characterisation,lol)

i like the possibilities you ff holds, like in the next part arnav could get told by khushi who shyam is, but he doesn't believe her at first. this can bother him for a couple of nights ;) and he decides to investigate discretely for himself. etc, lol

the only criticism i have is...UPDATE MORE OFTEN,LOLOLOLOL! ;) love your ff and can't get enough. xxx

and oh thanks for the PM ;)😊

Recap: Khushi delivers the order of sweets to Arnav's aprty. Khushi realizes that Shyam and Anjali are married. Anjali forces Arnav to drop Khushi home as its too late.

Part 3 :

Khushi stumbles due to the darkness on the road and is about to fall, but she catches herself well in time. She jumps to hear the screeching sound of brakes when Arnav's car stops beside her. Arnav opens the other door of the car and orders "Car me baitho. Main tumhe ghar chhod deta hoon." Khushi can't believe that she heard those words. Her expressions are like "Arnav Singh Raizada wants to drop Khushi Kumari Gupta home. Impossible." 😲

But she recovers herself and says, "Koi zaroorat nahi hai, Hum chale jayenge." And she tries to take the next step and trips over a stone and she falls down. "Aah" she screams through her pain. Arnav is now getting angry. "Dikh raha hai ki kaise pohochogi ghar. Aur mujhe shouk nahi hai tumhe ghar chhodne ka. Di aur Nani ne mujhe kaha bas issiliye. Ab chupchap car me baitho." Khushi can't get taxi or auto at this point of time. So she picks up her bag which was lying down and unwillingly gets into his car.

Once they are in the car, Arnav tells Khushi to put on the seatbelt. She struggles with the seatbelt. So Arnav moves forward to help her. Now Khushi moves away so that he doesn't touch her. Arnav spits out, "Kya hua? Vaise bhi main pehli baar tumhe seatbelt nahi laga raha hoon." 😉 Khushi remembers that after the guesthouse incident Jiji had told her "Woh laya tha tumhe." She shot him furious look. Arnav smirked while fastening her seatbelt. 😍 He remembers how she rested on his shoulder while he carried her in his arms. She was so comfortable as if she belonged there. 😊

While Arnav is driving, Khushi is thinking "Devi Maiya ki kripa se aaj sab theek hogaya. Ab hamare Bauji ki pareshani thodi kam ho jayegi." Khushi hates to admit it, but somewhere deep down she was thankful to ASR for giving her the whole amount which she deserved. She had never expected that from him. She looks sideways as if thanking him silently. ASR turns at the same moment and their eyes meet. No words required to express their feelings. Arnav gives her comforting look. 😊 Suddenly Arnav's phone starts ringing. He puts the call on bluetooth and starts talking to his client regarding his next project. Meanwhile, Khushi is again lost in the mystery of shyam. She wondered if Arnav knows about Shyam staying at her Buaji's house. 😕

Arnav just finishes the conversation over phone when they reach in front of Khushi's house. Khushi removes the seatbelt and rushes to get out of the car. Arnav is now getting frustrated as everytime she runs away from him. Angrily he looks back to take reverse, and his sees Khushi's purse lying down in the car which might have slipped from her lap. He shakes his head and thinks how can she be so careless and moves out of car to return the purse.

Here, Khushi enters the house. Payal and Buaji starts asking her all questions as why she was late and if everything went well with the order. Arnav reaches at the doorstep but he stops there only to see Khushi excitedly explaining everything to her Jiji and Buaji. He had never seen such elegant and vibrant Khushi. 😊 She was always freaked out in front of him as she was scared of him. Khushi is holding her Jiji's hand and whirling around saying "Jiji, Aaj hum bahot khush hai. Ab sab kuch achha hi hoga." She stops and says "Pata hai jab hume pata chala ki woh party uss Arnav Singh Raizada ki hai, tab hum bahot darr gaye the. Lekin Devi Maiya ne humari baat sun li aur sab theek ho gaya. Aur toh aur unhone hume salary aur sarees ke paise bhi de diye." Payal and Buaji are surprised to hear that. "Jiji hum ne uss din tutate hue taare ko jo maanga tha, woh hume mil gaya."

Arnav remembers that when his Di had asked him to make a wish and he had thought of Khushi. Now he realized that even his wish was fulfilled as she didn't go to lucknow. 😊 "Stop thinking about her" Arnav tells to himself. Khushi says, "Ek minute, pehle hum woh cheque Devi Maiya ki charano mein rakhte hai." and Khushi starts searching for her purse and it strikes her that she forgot her purse in Arnav's car. Arnav is surprised to hear that she wanted to keep that cheque in front of God first. Khushi blurts out, "Arre baap re, humari purse toh car mein hi reh gayi."

Buaji scolds, "Hai re parmesuri, ek kam bhi theek se karna nahi aavat hai tumhe."

Khushi: "Nahi Buaji, hum uss khadoos ASR ke darr se jaldi nikle aur purse gir gayi."
Hearing that Arnav furiously moves into her house and says "Kya kaha tumne?"

Khushi is shocked to see Arnav. "Ji.. woh hum.. "

Arnav was amazed to see that excitement in her eyes has been replaced by fear after seeing him.

The landline phone starts ringing and payal picks it up. Here, Arnav and Khushi are getting into the argument.

Arnav: "Waise toh bahot badi badi baatein karti ho ki 'Hume paiso ki kadar hai' phir purse kaise bhul gayi? Ya phir, purse lene ke bahane phir se mere ghar aana chahti thi. Tum jaise ladkiyon ko"

Khushi cuts his sentence "Bas.. Hum maante hai ki hum se galti ho gayi. Lekin iska yeh matlab nahi ki aap humare hi ghar aake hume hi sunaye."
Arnav: "Achha, aur tum mere ghar pe aake mujhe sunake gayi uska kya?"
Khushi: "Woh hum.. "

Payal (placing hand on Khushi's shoulder): "Khushi, Khushi sun na, Shyam ji ka phone hai. Tujhse baat karna chahte hai." Arnav and Khushi both exchange looks and Khushi moves forward to take the call.

Thats it for now. Hit the like button or comment if you want me to continue 😳

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what's going to happen next???? please update soon

Thanks for the pm