DHADKAN_ MANNEET FF NOTE PG 133

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navya

@navyanissi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

Oyee hoyee keenu... Started new ff !!! Nice concept... Congo shongo 👏
Loved all the updates... Geet got good friends amy ridz who cares for her 😊
Liked GEET spirit.. Like the way she gave reply to MAAN 😉
Oh wat an explanation btwn luck n hardwork 👏
Wow she won the test... Poor msk lost 😃 Omg she completed the work within no time where it took two days for msk... GOOD GOING GEET
I love GEET in dis ff... So much confidence.. Multi talented... Attitude... Everything 😊
Part 5 is superb... HOW MUCH U ADJUST THAT MUCH U CAN LIVE HAPPILY. Ya its true... I think its frm Mr. Perfect...
Love vicky... Heid he's flirting with his bhabhi... He found a mother in her 😭
Love bhabi devar relation... Hehe poor msk feeling j 😔
But y Geet is behaving differently with maan... Wait wait .. She loves maan ?!?! Then y she is going to leave ???? She joined kc on purpose???? Uff so confusing... I know once Geet past got revealed v'll get answers for all the Q
Waiting eagerly for the story to unfold... One more thing m warning u... Till now dis ff is going good.. If u include any mu I'll kill u 😛 n let the past b good.. I mean less pain
Ahh dats it for now...
ALL THE BEST N GOOD LUCK FOR UR FUTURE 😊

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

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thanks 4 PM me dear...😃

ur update as usual...

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#233

EID MUBHARAK FRDS

sorry for delay frds

u ll get the both the updates tommrow frds pucca

LOVE,

ABI

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#234

O I thought u updated neways

Eid Mubarak to u too Abi

love-Piya

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#235

PART:8

maan can see happy in vicky eyes he want to be like that for him but he cant be becoz of many matters in his life but he thanked geet in his heart for making him like that

he called geet and say thanx and sorry

sorry for what?

actually he calls u senorita i know he flirts a lot so

sir! he is a harmless flirt and i knew he wont do anything which makes other feelings to be hurted so dont be sir

if he makes any disturbance in work pls let me know dont think he is my brother

i think u said me before and onemore think is i know how to handle him so dontworry i wont give any complaint about him to u

so may i leave !

yes u can!

he just stares a geet ! while she is going !

whay she always run from me the way she speak with vicky says she is comfortable with him then why not me!

i dont no when she ll be comfortable with me!

vicky is listening everything what he said what tehy spoke he felt happy that his bhabi is perfect

so bro want to spend sometime with bhabi ha then i m here to help them !

vicky makes the office mess so that they both can go late to the home so that he can implement his plan

he waited for them to leave once only so that he can start about his luck both at a time are in lift and vicky cuts the power so that lift will stop ...

maan and geet nudges themselves becoz of the sudden stop of lift they dont no what to do they compltely stare in to eachother eyes

and geet come of the trance but sees maan catching her hand and he sees that and geet sees him with smile

actually geet i !

sir i knew current gone so we came near so pls !

what she never feels anything when i m near her how can that be possible why she cant feel me when i feel much for her

did she knew how much i control my desire before her but she says she dont feel anything

everygirl want one glimpse of mine where i m giving my whole attention to her but she did not even feel that it ached in his heart but he thought he should give sometime

why he comes near me! do he know how mych i control myself not to see his eyes i cant take this

i want to be with him everyomoment but i cant now i m feeling sorry for me why i came here why i should think that i should love him but i thought he wont love me

but unwantedly he started loving me he not even dont no whenever i see his eyes what happens to me! i control myself ...pls maan be away from me!

sir ! shall we sit down i dont think current come now

what where u want me to sit !

here down !

what geet r u on nuts how can we sit here !

sir it is ur wish i m sitting down she sat down he cant take more so he also sat down

so sir ! do u love anyone!

he dont no why she asked that ? but he just stare at her he thinks she want to know from him so he sees her questiongly

geet dont no why she asked that question but she thought now why?

no geet he said

she felt bad but she is happy that he did not say he loves me or what else i can say now!

geet i knew my feelings and i m sure i have my style to say so wait till that time

so geet u say me do u love anyone!

no sir i dont think i have seen a correct guy still !

he checks himself after listening to her words what he is not correct how can that is possible!

geet can see that he is checking himself seeing that she laughs herself but control

she dont no that she takes her words so seriously and she stares at him...

he can see that she is staring but he thinks she is staring becoz he is checking himself

geet !

sir i think i m sleep now so i ll sleep but pls wake me up when current comes ok sir

at the same time she keeps her head towards the left side and close her eyes

he just stare at her

how beautiful she is ! so pure she is ! he thinks he has mobile at that time but it is not reachable he dont no what he can do

he saw she is not confortable that side so she just go near and keeps her head on his shoulder so that she can rest

she knew he came near her heart beating is raising so much but she control herself and when he kept her head on his shoulder she felt she is so safe

but she wanted to sleep in his lap when she saw him he closed his eyes so she made the movement as if she is falling and kept her head on his lap

he just sees that and he feels that she is on his lap and he cares her hair while she is sleeping

that is the best sleep ever she slept ...she want to be like that whole life with him but that cant happen

and where maan thought the same that time should stop now

precap:princess!

i love u

sorry for delay dear ...

i ll try to update soon

i m sending 270 pms hope i can get back that much

pls do comment and press the like button

pls do comment plsss

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HAPPY GAURI GHANSHA TO ALL MY FRDS

Edited by abisamratgunjan - 13 years ago

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poongs123

@poongs123

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#236

Awesome update dear :) i am speechless :) i felt so pleasant after reading this part 😊😊

Edited by poongs123 - 13 years ago

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#237

hey nice n cute scenes yaar...
but how geet know maan n y she is avoiding maan??????????????
poor maan😆...he is unaware of that na...n vicky master mind😉...i love his idea😳...looking fwd.....