My First FF: Pyaar Hua.. Chupke Se, Part 24, Pg 84 - Page 28

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Posted: 14 years ago

omg! stuts..lov yuh for adding arhi!😃

i lov dem sooo muchh..!😃 thanks baby..nd yeah update is nyc so dunb sry!😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
arhiii 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 mar dala n naksh n arhi ne...wow...awesome part stuti di luv yaa for this 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago



Yup... aapki nazre dhokha nai khaa rahi!!! its "Pyaar Hua... Chupke Se... "being updated!!! lolzz!!!
chalo chalo... ull want my bhashan or the part???
lolzz!!! i hope both😛 coz i m speaking so much after sooo long!!! i mean after collg started i became less active!!! missed ull very much!! love you'll

waise.. i wanted to put a song.. but didnt happen!! net was slow.. got bugged

advance mein warning:: the part is not dat good... expert advice suggested to edit the part...
but i was wanting to show how naksh have began to think alike... even their dreams have started becoming similar!!! thats y didnt edit... (and ofcourse i was lazy😆) ok... i hope u dnt hate the part!!

happy reading!!!

PART 19

Naitik and akshi reach home...

They are very happy to reach home... ghar ka khaana... maa ka pyar... they had been missing all this... (though each other's company didn't remind them that they were missing all this 🤣 )

Finally they were at their homes... rj and g3 pampered akshi and naitik to no extend... they both... for some time completely forgot bout each other!

In the evening...

Ss hall...

G3; daddaji... ab munna aa gaya hai.. hum kal uski shaadi ki shopping karne jaye?

Dj; haan haan chhoti dulhan.. tu munna k saath shopping karne chali jaana...

While the family members are talking bout naksh marriage... naitik goes into his dreamland.. where.. only he and akshi are der...

Similarly, akshi also goes into her dreamland!

Naitik's dream...

He is standing in the SS hall...

He smells his favourite food... he turns towards the dining table... he sees akshi dressed in a saree, with sindoor in her maang... holding a plate...

He moves towards the smiling beauty... when he is bout to move her latt... she runs from der!

Akshi's dream...

She is running (dressed as a suhaagan) and naitik is running behind her... they both run around the tulsi, naitik trying to catch her...

The run around the full ss hall... when finally akshi is trapped... she cant move anywhere... as wherever she'll go... he would catch her... she hides her face while blushing...

Naitik's dream...

They reach their room while running... he has trapped her... wherever she woud move, he could catch her... she hides her face.. naitik removes her hands... and plants her a kiss on her cheeks... she runs away... naitik holds her hand, brings her closer... and lifts her... she blushes...

Akshi's dream...

Naitik lifts her and places her on their bed... akshi kisses him on his cheek... and blushes... naitik smiles his best smile.. she is very very happy... she hugs him... naitik hugs her back... and then he he removes something from his pocket... akshi is surprised...

Naitik's dream...

Naitik makes her sit on the bed... and kisses her on her hand... he then removes a ring from his pocket.. and makes her wear the ring... she cries out of happiness... he wipes her tears.. and they start talking...

Akshi's dream...

Naitik removes a ring from his pocket... she is very happy... a tear comes out from her lids.. naitik soothingly wipes it off... and they both start talking...

Naksh's dream (both dream the same thing :D)

They are talking and talking till morning.. their stomachs are paining due to continuous laughter.. they talk till late night... then they lie down on their bed and start talking...

While talking.. they both sleep early in the morning! Soon akshi's alarm rings.. she gets up, gets ready... prepares breakfast.. and gets it up in their room...

Akshi kisses naitik and wakes him up.. they both have their breakfast staring into each others eyes..

After breakfast... naitik gets ready for office... he calls akshi to fix the button on his shirt... akshi comes, and starts stitching the button... while akshi is working... naitik is continuously staring akshi.. akshi finishes her stitch, but naitik dusnt finish his stare 😆...

Akshi snaps her finger in front of his face...

And *snap*

And naitik comes to his senses... and sees mohit snapping his fingers in front of naitiks face...

M; kya naitik.. "kiss"ke khayalo mein kho gaya tu???

N; kisike nai mohit.. bas kuch soch raha tha...

M; kuch kya haan? Mujhe toh bata hi sakta hai...

N; (he smiles hard.. and says like an idiot...) akshara k...

M; mujhe pata tha... !

N; (gets angry) toh pucha kyun! Tu bhi na!!!! 😆

M; ok baba... sorry... aa gale mil...

They both are hugging each other... when g3 comes...

N; maa... mein kal akshara se milne hau?

G3; kisse?

N; akshara se...

G3; tu pagal toh nai hua hai na munna! Shaadi se pehle ladka ladki nai milte,.. tujhe pata nai hai kya?

N; par maa... yeh 21st century hai! 12th century nai!

G3;l chup kar munna,.. nai kaha na! Kal hum shopping jaa rahe hai waise bhi... abhi toh baat ki na!

M; (whispers) lekin yeh toh mentally kahi aur hi tha na...

Naitik nudges mohit!

N; theek hai maa,,, sadly!

Here akshi comes to her senses when varsha shakes her!

V; kahan kho gayi madam?

A; nai yr... kahi nai..

V; teri best frnd hu madam... tujhe jaanti hu... malum hai tu "kiss"ke khalayo mein khoyi thi...

A; dhatt varsha... (blushes)

V; khee khee khee khee 🤣

A; 😆

Just then rj comes...

Rj; lo.. aayi nai aur khee khee chalu...

A; maa... 🤗

Ab aayi maa ki yaad... Mumbai mein toh nai aati thi...

V; (whispers) aayigi bhi kaise...

Akshara nudges her...

A; maa... hum kal kaha jaa rahe hai?

Rj; hum kal shopping karne jaenge...

A; wow... shopping! Inke parivaar walon ke saath jaenge hum? Naitikji honge? (expectantly)

Rj; nai nai.. hum saath kaise jaenge... dulha dulhan shaadi se pehle nai milte.. tu sochna bhi mat!

A; maa... sad!

TO BE CONTINUED...

Sorry if i forget to PM anybody...

Hope u'll like the part...

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Please do comment!! half century part 20 tak complete karni hai!!!


Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
stuti darr mat kyonki it was a great part...👏very nice and sweet part...😃lagta hai tu marriage ke baad waale track ke liye itni excited hai ki shaadi se pehle hi unke dream mai unki marriage ke baad ke scenes...🤣waise it was a cute part with naksh dreams and both dreams are same superb...😛mil nahi sakte to tune dream mai hi romance dikha diya well done...😆hame to naksh romance chaiye haine...😳gayatri aur rj to hamesha se hi sabse bade kaante hai naksh life ke milne thode denge unhe...😡but mohit and varsha teasing scene was fantastic...👏aur in starting u wrote na ki although they have each other company then also missing home ghar ka pyaar jo thehra yaar...😉it was a great part plzz keep writing like this and try to post next part soon not in months yaar...🤗
Edited by shweta31 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haiii chinky 🤗
thum aise kyu socha ke hume e part ache nahi lagi hogi muje tho a part bahut acha laga 😊 their dream sequence is awsome 😉 nd both of them thinking alike even in dream lolzzz nd yeh kya ye dono shaddi thak nahi milsakte 😭 jaldi se undono ki shaadi digadena yar aur intazar nahi hoga hume 😳 aur jaldi update karo i dont know now e days u r taking long time to update before u used u update weekly cont soon waiting for next part 😍 thanks for pm 😊
LVU
rachu 🤗 🤗
Edited by Rachana_naksh_ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nyccc part stuti welldone mind blowing
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Posted: 14 years ago
edited...

swttt part yarrr 😛 nd itna dream dekha dono ne hayee ram 5min me pura din!😳... 😆
i was feeling lyk k iske dream me se uske dream me ghus rahi hu 😳 🤣
nyc part do cont...
thnx 4 dpm
Edited by shriya_naksh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta31

stuti darr mat kyonki it was a great part...👏very nice and sweet part...😃lagta hai tu marriage ke baad waale track ke liye itni excited hai ki shaadi se pehle hi unke dream mai unki marriage ke baad ke scenes...🤣waise it was a cute part with naksh dreams and both dreams are same superb...😛mil nahi sakte to tune dream mai hi romance dikha diya well done...😆hame to naksh romance chaiye haine...😳gayatri aur rj to hamesha se hi sabse bade kaante hai naksh life ke milne thode denge unhe...😡but mohit and varsha teasing scene was fantastic...👏aur in starting u wrote na ki although they have each other company then also missing home ghar ka pyaar jo thehra yaar...😉it was a great part plzz keep writing like this and try to post next part soon not in months yaar...🤗

🤗
thanx for the lovely comment!!!
thank god u liked the part!!! 😃
i will try to write better yr!!!

waise.. im waiting for their marriage too!!! lolzz!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Finally I got the net back to unreserve my post... this net became really irritating now...

n coming to the update... finally u have updated after a long time... Its very Beautiful n awesome part chotu... I think u edited the repeatable parts which I didn't find I read it noww... its very beautiful... the dream u explained it nice... n it was cute too... well done... 👏👏...

continue it soon... please soon haa... now a days ur soon is day by day increasing... make it less... 😉😆😆😆... eagerly waiting for ur next part... 😃
Edited by saru.g - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

you seem to be on update spree😆

very nice update😉

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