My First FF: Pyaar Hua.. Chupke Se, Part 24, Pg 84 - Page 23

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

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Its just 1 and a half month left for naksh to get married...both are goin to Udaipur for their marriage preparations the next day...

The night before...

Naitik msgs akshi.. (they have been busy packing and could not meet up... they have been keeping in touch through chats or calls...)

N; blank msgs... (they chatting through blank msgs... i will write wat they mean in brackets)

A; (blank msg???)

N; (h r u)

A; (i m fine... aap kaise ho?)

N; (mein theek hu... aapko miss kar raha hun)

A; [understands... blushes...] (mein bhi)

N; [smiles] (shayad hum kal flight mein aakhri baar milenge... fir seedha rasamon k waqt)

A; aapne kya kaha? Mujhe yeh text samajh nai aaya!

N; kya hum shaadi se pehle kal aakhri baar milenge?

A; nai naitik... kyun... Udaipur jaake hum milenge toh sahi na??

N; haan... lekin itna frequently not possible na??

A; haan naitik... woh toh hai... itna frequently hum nai mil paenge... aur kya pata.. humein sab milne de bhi ya nahi... shaadi se pehle ladka ladki nai mil sakte...

N; kya farak padta hai akshara... hum yeh rule pehle hi tod chuke hai! Toh hamare liye... yeh rule not valid!

A; haan naitik.. lekin tab hum Mumbai mein the,.. ab hum Udaipur jaenge na... wahan hamare buzurg humein yu man maani thodi karne denge!

N; kal ki hum kal dekh lenge... koi na koi bahana kar mil hi lenge!

A; hmm... toh... mujhe aap kuch bataiye...

N; boliye... aapko kya jaanna hai???

A; mujhe janna hai ki aapko is waqt kaisa mehsus ho raha hai...kal hum hamari shaadi ki tayyariyaan karne Udaipur jaa rahe hai... kuch hi dino mein aap aur mein hamesha ke liye "hum" ban jaenge... 2 mahino ke baad hum pati-patni kehlaenge... aap kya mehsus kar rahe hai naitik?

N; haan akshara,.. thode dino baad hum "hum" kehlaenge... hum hamesha ke liye ek ho jaenge! Mujhe samamjh nai aa raha mein kaise react karu? Mein kitna khush hu...yeh kitni different feeling hai na? Hamari zindagiyaan kuch hi dino mein badalne wali hai...kitni ajeeb feeling hai yeh...

A; haan naitik... yeh kitni ajeeb feeling hai na? Par mein bahut bahut bahut khush hu...

N; mein bhi :D

A; chalo ab hum so jaye? Kal train bhi pakadni hai na.. ya yahi rehna hai!!!

N; haan haan... gud night, sweet dreams, love you...

A; love you too!

The next day...

In the train...(for those who are confused y train... lol... thats coz i have already described a plane journey... so this time i thought to make them travel by train...; Now if u r thinking that do their families know? Well... varsha and dadi persuaded rj and ppl to allow naksh to come in train! And in the singhania parivar... bm and dj don't know... others are aware!)

Naksh get the upper berth seats... they sit in the lower berth...(2-tier compartment!)

They are happily staring at each other 😆 talking to each other in between!!!

Soon a recently married couple comes and sits beside them...

They sense that naksh are going to marry soon...

They, sailing in the same boat, instantaneously gel with each other...

The new couple [name... arnav and khushi... (lolz... my latest addiction!)] give naksh tips on how to adjust and "the do's and don'ts" of married life

After this, arhi and naksh decide to play cards... since they are 4 of them, they decide to play meindicoat (its an interesting card game, wherein there are teams of 2, and they have to collect 10's... again one of my favourites!!!)

After much discussion, it is decided that khushi and akshi will be in one team, and arnav and naitik in another! 😆 (ya ya... bechara naitik)

They adjust their places according to their teams... naitik and akshi sit beside each other, and arhi beside each other... they keep bags in between the 2 seats... and cover it with a shawl...

The game starts... in the first round itself a-k(akshi-khushi) win over(i mean collect all tens... plz tell me if u don't understand the game...) n-a(naitik-arnav)...

Arnav gets angry as if naitik had payed a bit of attention, they would haven't lost!

Ar; kya naitik, dhyan de na... kyun jeetne de raha hai...

N; sorry yr! Dhyaan nai tha!!!

Ar; oye... plz yr... dhyaan dena next game mein.. coat utarna hai!!!

N; hmm...

While arnav is distributing the cards..

A; naitik... aap dhyaan dijiye na...

N; kaise dhyaan du.. yaha kitne distractions hai...

A; distraction??? Kya keh rahe hai aap?

N; toh kya... jab aap baju mein baithi ho... toh mein dhyaan lagakar kaise khel sakta hun... samajh nai aa raha, aap par dhyaan du... ya patto par!

A; blushes... aap meri khatir patto par dhyaan denge... theek hai!!! Mujhe fair game khelkar aapko harana hai... 😆 aise nai!!!

N; achcha... aapko mujhe haraana hai...

A; haan... fair game khelkar! 😛

N; theek hai.. dekhte hai... mein meindicoat master reh chukka hu bachpan mein...

A; haan haan dekh lenge...

The cards are distributed, but naksh are in their convo... khushi interrupts...

K; *ahem ahem* kya dekh lenge?

A; kuch nai khushi... chalo.. khelna shuru kare?

They start playing... they get sooo engrossed in their cards, that they notice that it is dinner time!

They all share their dinner, and then take their berths...arhi are in the lower berth, and naksh in the upper berth...

(Does anyone think that naksh are sleeping??? 🤣 i hope not... coz, those who know me quite well... can gess that i wont make them sleep widout their face to face chat 😆 )

A; kitne sweet hai na yeh log?

N; haan... unki love story bhi interesting hai na?

A; haan... kaise, kab do insaan dushman se dost, aur dost se lovers ban jaate hai.. pata hi nai chalta na? Na unhe, na unke doston ko...

N; haan... unhone advices bhi kamala ki di... sahi hi kehte hai.. relationship mein ek dusre ke liye thodi space toh rakhni hi chahiye...

A; haan... thanx to them, shayad hamare shaadi k baad k bade bade jhagde nai honge!

N; "shayad" matlab? Abhi se jhagadne ka plan hai madam?

A; na baba na... bilkul nai... hum nai jhagdenge!

N; hmm...aaj hum jitni baatein kar le utna achcha hai... kal se kya pata kab milna ho... shaadi ko poore 44 days baki hai...itne din hum ek dusre ke bina...

(he looks at her while saying this line, and observes that she has already slept...)

He stares at her for some time,

N; aap sote waqt kitni sundar lagti hai...

Naitik stretches his hand to her berth, and puts a lock of her hair that had come on her face, behind her eyes...

N; i love you akshara... love you loads!

p.s. tamatar not accepted!!! Plz... tamatar mat maarna... kuch mat maarna... gaaliyon bhari comment chalegi 🤣 ... lekin comment karna!!! Rofl!!

p.s.s. any1 has any confusion regarding this confusing part... plz (pm mat karna) ask them here only!! I will reply asap!

About meindicoat... well... i love this card game... usmein na... 4 ppl (6 or 8 can alsoplay, par 4 ppl mein best fun) play... they sit in a square... the opposite people are a team... like...

1 3

4 2

In this,.. 1 and 2 are a team, and 3 and 4 are a team... the main obj of the game is that the team has to collect 10's (meindicoast mein u can also play like... u dnt have to collect 10's.. its the same... just the objective reverses)... the team which collects all 10's passes on a "coat" on the opposite team! And the other team has to collect all 10's to remove that coat.. its a fun game, tp game...

TO BE CONTINUED...

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@ss... i noe u will like the part... dnt tell me u didn't like it 🤣 i also liked the part! Just that i dnt know bout others! Lolzz!!!

hey stuti finally u have updated the part...👏kitna intezaar karvaya tune but uske baad itna cute part likha ki maze hi aa gaye...🤗loved the part very much...😊it is sooo sweet...😃

first their conversation on messages was too gud...😳then flight ki jagah train superb(flight se to jaate rehte hain kabhi train se bhi jaana chaiye,jo train mai maza hai woh flight mai kahan hoga)aur acha hua dj ko nahi pata chala warna to kya hota...😡

in train unka arhi se milna was so nice...😊then plying mendicoat lovely game me too used to play the game i also love the game very much)aur bechara naitik usko dusri team mai kar diya aur akshara ke bagal mai bitha diya bechare ka concentration...😆

phir unki night chit chat aur beech mai teri entry ki tu shaanti se un logon ko sone nahi degi...🤣waise agar woh bina chit chat ke so jaate to hame bhi maza nahi aata...😛naitik ka as always uske hairs uske face se hatana...😃aur usk awoh use dekhte rehna so cute...😳

ab woh log ghar jaake ek dusre se kaise milenge that going to be interesting...😍so plzz plzz write ur next part soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: preksha_naksh

wow arhi and naksh kya update hai i knw i am bit fast in reading as itne lambe lambe answers padhne ki aadat se i read this also fastly lolzzz

Originally posted by: saru.g

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chotu..🤗. this time me first me first... because u r updating after a long time naa... so I want to be first... update soon yaar... its not fair that u make to wait for such a long time... but then intazaar ka phal meeta hota hai... (adjust with my hindi... 😉😆)...

this part is so soo sooo sweet... I loved it... u guessed it right... I loved this part so much... u know I love train journey so much than flight because they r long n also we can have many sweet memories... loved arhi part tooo... I thought when I read arhi... who is this arhi... but later in the part came to know that this is khushi n Arnav... sweet n cute part... bechara naitik... akshi on one side n card on other side... its ture... on whom should he concentratee???...lol... 😉😆😆...

n loved the blank messages part... its soo sweet... akshi asking about his feelings is very nice... I loved that one... n haa make to meet chupke chupke se in udaipur... love to see the preparations along with naksh secret meetings...

continuee sooonnn... pleasee... once again awesome part chotu... 😃