My Only Mistake I'm A Female(MG) THREAD#3 - Page 38

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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update! Can't wait for Sameera-Geet conversation! Thanks for the update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
commenting after a long! sorry was busy with exams😔
finally done with the missed parts😃
amazing update👏
loved it..continue soon
and thanks a ton for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
wht will sameera talk abt to geet
will geet come to know that maan secretly loves her through sameera
will geets hesitation towards sameera will erase as maan told her before that sam is a good as a friend but not as a wife
lets see

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
sam was sweet
maan was gud
uff they fought agn
loved anni maan vicky bonding
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 50

Sameera approached Geet and as expected Geet was very conscious of her presence.

S: hi Geet, Angel just looks like you, and tell you frankly her nose is as straight as Maan's

G just nodded

S: you don't like me

G: pardon

S: hey Maan must have told you I wanted to meet you, I mean see you

G: yes, but you never turned out

S: yes, that day I were late and br the time the shoot finished it was already 6 pm, but I came next day before leaving

G: and you did not find me

S: no dear I found you, it was just that I were late and you were in the class, see I even took your picture

She showed her various pictures she took from her cell phone camera, they were of her (Geet) sitting in her class taking notes

G: how did you recognize me?

S: that was not difficult, Maan told me

G: as to how I looked

S: no, let me finish my sentence dear

G: sorry

S: the moment you will see her you will know that she is the one I fell for

G: fell for?

S: yes dear, he never proposed you

G: pardon

S: he never told you e loves you

G: he said so

S: no

G: then

S: Geet, I know he loves you, when I asked about his future plans he said that he has found a girl he was waiting for, but she was not yet ready

G: he said so

S: yes, and it seems you are not yet ready to move on

G: but

S: Geet, are you still in love with Dev?

G: I never loved him

S: then your pregnancy

G: did Maan not tell you?

S: listen Geet, Maan is a man of few words, he just says a sentence and leaves the rest to be understood, and he just said that the girl he was waiting for is a mother and is ditched by Dev, rest he left and I did not ask him

G: but Maan said he talked to you about me

S: this is all he said

G: oh

S: Geet, you too love him?

G: IDK

S: it is clearly written on your face, and if Maan has not yet proposed you then he might be waiting for you to hint him

G: me

S: Geet, if you love him, let him know, not that he will find someone else but he will wait for you till eternity

G: are you sure?

S: ask your heart you will know

G: I am sorry Sameera Di, can I call you Di

S: of course yes, waise bhi sautane bahene hi hoti hain

G: I am sorry for misunderstanding you

S: its ok I am use to it

The party finished on time and everyone including Sameera left, Maan took Angel and went to the nursery, as he slowly change her in to a night dress Geet watched him

M: Geet, you too change, while I'll make her comfortable, then you can take her

G: ok

Get went and changed into her night dress and came in to take Angel, she lifted the baby in her arms and Maan bend to kiss her Angel good night, as Maan lifted his face from Angel's cheek Geet took the opportunity and with thudding heart kissed Maan on his cheek.


hope you liked it😃 I mean the um um ☺️

i so much wanted them to discuss Maan in bed .. but as the story is based on the serial where such talks are banned so have to half heatedly settle for this
relax aisa kuch nahin hoga😕 dekha aisa kuch nahin hua😲... both had a clean talk😳... kaash Sam Geet ko batati Maan kya karne ke liye ☺️capable hain... kuch mere readers ko bhi pata chal jata😈... par nahin aisa nahin hua...


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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
yeah you really disappoint us, by not giving the details of his capabilities...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update dear!!

waiting for maans reaction!!

continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow... simply superb.. You did a wonderful job by making Sameera positive.. and Geet took the first step... really really great.. can't wait to see Maans reaction...please continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved it di
geet n sameera's talk was nice
loved when geet kissed maan's cheeks
n di sameera wouldnt tell geet she would want geet to find herself how maan was on bed 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

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