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Originally posted by: crazymayurian

amazingly written

devdas lol

Originally posted by: Bidz_cutegal

fizaa...such a fantastic ending...loved it to infinity...thanx for such an awesome ending...it was a masti-bhara ending...great job dear...fabulous...⭐️⭐️
The best part was obviously the ending...MN fun-filled union...haha...their last dialogues totally cracked me up...😆
bestest dialogue award goes to the forensic doctor samrat shergill... haha loved this one... "devdas ko chinibabu ki zaroorat hai ..meri bhai" 🤣
u just wont bliv...i woke up n read ur update n i was laughing like crazy...😆
in the midst of all this masti...the lil romance ka tadka in the end made me blush..☺️
overall...totally rocking ending...🥳

thank u so much for such writing such a beautiful yet thrilling story...every time u made me despo for the next update...from the first till the end...u managed to attract the readers n that's the best part...👏👏

first time,i have read a crime-based story..n kasam se...i thoroughly enjoyed it...😃.. plz do cum up with something else ASAP...really soon...wanna read more from u...😊

love
bidushy<3

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

lovely ending dear...it was really off bit and unique in its own way...finally my mayur r together..gr8 job🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Ayesha_LuvSaJan

awesome update !!
Gonna to miss your updates !!

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

Superb ff Fiza..
It was a murder mystery but then a cute,funny and romantic story too..😳
Write more ffs like this

Originally posted by: chandu-mayu

amazing. plz write one more romantic mayur ff fiza

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

ye khatam ho gayi...😒...b/w the ending was as usual best...choose nehi kar pa rahi hoon kaun jaida assa tha mayank ki hero ki tarah entry ya phir uska confession...jo bhi ho tu khud decide kar lena...aga r ye story khatamna hote toh mujhe assa lagta par kya kare har assa cheez ek din khatam hota hey...waiting for ur next laughing bomb...aur ha doosri joo ffs heyt uska bhi update de dena...love u