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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nneeiill

oye tu abhi update karne jaa rehi hai kya

if yes..i will wait
if no i will go ahead and sleep
coz tmrw i will be coming to IF very late

right now me in college 😭 ...will update in evening or at night
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arti07

right now me in college 😭 ...will update in evening or at night




ok dear...i guess i will be last person then to read ur FF...

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^ owww i wish i could par lecture start hone waala hai😭😭😭😭...hey lets pakau piyu maybe she bring the chapii...her story is so interesting 😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
are you online arti? missing ur ff.
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Posted: 13 years ago
piu ko dekho kitni jaldi update karti h... o lazy dear kaha ho...
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Chapter 38

The pre wedding preparation started in modi house...gulaal kesar panba and other family members engaged themselves in the wedding preparations...

Kesar and gulaal took rewa for shopping kesar and yogesh also accompanied them

Rewa kesar gulaal and yogesh were shopping in the mall rewa was selecting her sarees and lehengas gulaal and yogesh were giving their suggestion and kesar was quietly standing there

Yogesh was suggesting her the dresses rewa got irritated and they had a sweet fight

Yogesh said "yeh waala lehenga ache lagega"

Rewa said "nahi tumhe kuch bhi malum kitna stupid lehenga hai?tum ladko ko kuch akkal nahi hoti"

Yogesh said "ofcourse not ladke jyada smart hote"

Rewa said "nahi bikul budhu hote hai"

kesar interrupted in between "Yogesh bhaa jaane dijeye rewa sahi kah rahi hain..hum ladke wakai mein stupid hote hain...hume humare govt ne certified bhudhu ka tag diya hai"

Yogesh was puzzled he asked "ceritifed budhu aur government ne diya hai how????"

Kesr replied "yogeshbha hum ladko ko driving licence 18 years mein mil jaata hai...hum bank accounts company 18 saal mein operate kar sakte hain infact hume desh k neta ko chose karne ka right bhi mil jaata...par shaadi ka nahi...kyunki govt ko lagta humare pass akkal nai hai sirk gals k pass hai isliye unhe yeh right milta hai aur hume teen saal tak intzaar karna padta hai..tab tak hum underage hote hai to hue na hum Certified bhudhu"

"Kyu gulaal sahi haina" and he looked at gulaal

gulaal couldn't answer him

Yogesh smiled and said "yeh baat to tumne bilkul sahi kahi yeh to injustice hai ladko par...hum ladko ko govt k khialaf strike karne chahiye haina" and they laughed

After sometime rewa asked kesar gulaal and yogesh to go down to the lower mall

Rewa and yogesh took the lift and asked gulaal and kesar to come down by escalator

Kesar stepped onto the escalator and looked behind gulaal was coming she was lost in the words kesar had just said here...As she entered the escalator she lost her balance...she was about to tumble and kesar grabbed her quickly and placed his arm around her shoulder and pulled her close gulaal was scared she closed her eyes...she rested her head on his chest and placed her arm around his waist..her embrace brought a smile on his face...he wrapped her in side hug and held her securely...she was safe in his armour...some ppl on the escalator looked at them in amusement...kesar looked at them and whispered them "my wife "

and they smile back .as the escalator went down they were rising in love...kesar was lost in her charm and innocence, his sadness instantly melted away and she was melting in his arms like thin ice melts in the blazing sun...as they reached down kesar step out of the escaltor carefully...but gulaal and kesar still held each other...now kesar gently put both his arm around here and properly embraced her...they hugged as if they two were alone in this world... their love intoxicated them they were lost in each other...she stood still in his arms and he soflty whispered in her ears said " gulaal...I love u more than anything in this world...I cant live without u"

his words tinkled her senses

Gulaal opened her eyes and looked at him the love shone from his eyes into hers at that moment

and then she looked around and slowly parted with him

as she parted his tabbez got stuck in her sequinced duppatta...gulaal was struggling to free her duppatta from the tabeez

Kesar looked at her he freed her duppatta and said in low voice "gulaal tumne is tabeez mein apna vishwaas aur pyaar bandha (tie) tha ab yeh tabeez tumhe baandh (tie) raha hai."

Gulaal was speechless...meanwhile rewa and yogesh came they saw what happened few second ago

Yogesh said playfully "kyu kesar yeh kya ho raha tha...yeh mall hai iska to khayal karna chahiye"

Kesar smiled shyly

Then yogesh said "common kesar hum dunno chalte hain in ladkyion ko akele hi dresses select karne dete hain humara yanha kya kaam..tab tak hum kuch shopping kar lete hain"

Kesar and yogesh went in the other shop for shopping and rewa and gulaal wen to other shop

In between gulaal said "woo...escalatoe mein achanak fisal gayi thi isliye"

Rewa looked at her and said "koi baat nahi bhabhi u never know wen u fall"

And she stopped gulaal looked at her

Rewa and gulaal did their shopping and yogesh and kesar did theirs in between kesar and yogesh stopped in the jewellery shop and bought some neck pieces for rewa.

After shopping gulaal kesar and rewa returned home?.took rest

Kesar was tired so he asked gulaal to bring his food there in the room

Gulaal went inside the the kitchen she was serving the food in the plate and then she saw panba standing there

Panba asked "kya kar rahi ho gulaal"

Gulaal said "kesar k liye khana le jaa rahi hun...uusne room mein mangwaya hai"

Panba looked at her and said "koi jarurat nahi hai gulaal lao mein le jaati hun..waise bhi tum kuch hi din k liye ho bekaar mein kesar ko aadat pad jayegi...aur tum bhi tired ho...tum jao aaram karo"

And she took the plate from her and served the food and went inside kesar room gulaal looked quitely at her

Panba went inside kesar's room kesar got up and asked "panba aap?apne kyu takleef ki"

Panba came and sat beside him and said "isme takleef kaise...tujhe bhuk lagi thi naa...le mein khana lekar aayi hun "

Kesar took plate and started eating...panba said "kesar kuch din k baad rewa k shaadi ho jayegi aur phir gulaal apne ghar waapas chali jaayegi tujhe apne baare mein kuch sochna chahiye kesar tujhe aage badhna chahiye"

Kesar didn't said anything

Panba then took out some photographs and said "kesar yeh kuch ladkiyoon k photo hai...dekh lena...mein yeh nahi kah rahi ki to abhi shaadi kar...teri umar bhi nahi hai...par dekhna shuru kar...agar koi pasand aayi to engagement kar denge shaadi baad mein ho jaayegi"

She kept the snaps in the side table...kesar didn't said he stopped eating and was getting up

Panba asked "kya hua kesar khana kyu nahi kha raha"

Kesar replied "panba aapne achaar nahi rakha mein achaar k bina khana nahi khata"

Panba looked at the plate and said "koi baat nahi mein laa deti hun"

She saw rewa was passing by she called her and asked her to bring pickles

Kesar said "rewa mirchi ka achar lana aaj wahi khane ka man ho raha hai"

As rewa turned around she saw gulaal was standing outside

Gulaal came and said "panba aap kesar k thali mein achar rakhna bhul gayi thi kesar achar k bina khana nahi khata"

Panba looked at her surprisingly...strange now gulaal knew her son more than she knew him

Rewa said "bhabhi kesar ko mirchi ka achaar khaana hai"

Gulaal replied haan rewa wahi laayi hun"

Panba was speechless she quietly left the room kesar looked at gulaal

Rewa said "waah bhabhi aapko kesar k pasand bade ache se malum infact apko yeh bhi malum hai usko kab kya chaiye"

And then rewa left

Gulaal served him achaar as she walking away

Kesar called "gulaal"

Gulaal looked back

Kesar said "gulaal yeh panba ne kuch ladki k photo di hai meri shaadi k liye inme se koi ek chun lo"

Gulaal was shocked

Gulaal asked "kya"

Kesar said firmly "panba chahiti hain mein aage badhu aur tum bhi mujhse pyaar nahi karti...mein janta hun mein kitni bhi koshish karlu par tumse kanha jeet paunga isliye mujhe lagta hai mujhe aage badhna (move ahead ) chahiye...koi ek photo chose kar lu"

Gulaal was uncomfortable she felt uneasy

She said "tum pasand kar lu"

Kesar looked at her and said "mujhe kanha akkal hai..meine koi aisi waisi pasand karli to is ghar ka kya hoga?aur tumhe humare ghar k kitni parvah hai..common chose kar lo..mujhe kya pasand hai tumhe ache se malum hai haina" he smircked

Kesar handed her the pics..gulaal took it but her heart ached and her hand trembled...she was in deep pain to look at the pics and kesar was quietly reading the uneasiness in her eyes

Gulaal was looking at one pic though she was lost in her own thought kesar looked at the pic and asked "gulaal tumhe yeh pasand hai?.mein isese shaadi karlu"

Gulaal couldn't take it anymore she stood and said " yeh photos tum select kar lena yeh tumhari life hai tum chose karo"

and tears rosed in her eyes and she left with teary eyes

Kesar stood still in his room

Next day yogesh's parents arranged a small party for rewa and yogesh they invited panba rewa kesar and gulaal to attend the function

In the evening rewa was getting ready for the function gulaal came in her room and saw rewa was quite puzzled

Gulaal asked "kya baat hai rewa kuch problem hai"

Rewa said "haan bhabhi bahoot problem hai yogesh and kesar ne kal mere liye necklace khareeda tha...yogesh chahta hai k mein uska necklace pehen kar party mein jau... par mujhe nahi malum in dunno (out of two ) mein se kaun sa necklace yogesh ne khareeda hai "

And she showed the two necklaces that yogesh and kesar bought for her

She continued "ab naa yogesh ka phone lag raha hai aur na kesar dikhayi de raha hai mujhe kaise pata chalega yogesh ne kaun sa diya hai"

Rewa then got engaged in dialing yogesh number

Gulaal looked at the two necklaces and then within a sec said "rewa yeh ruby waala set kesar ne diyaa hai...yeh dusara waala set shayyad yogesh ji ne diya hoga"

Rewa looked at her and said "par bhabhi aapko kaise malum kal to aap mere saath thi kesar aur yogesh ne saath mein shopping kit hi..apko kesar ne bataya"

Gulaal replied "nahi kesar ne kuch nahi bataya par mujhe lagta hai yeh set kesar laya hai"

Then rewa received yogesh call and he confirmed that he bought the diamond necklace

Rewa looked at gulaal and said "wow bhabhi I m amazed aapko kesar k har baat uske bina kahe kaise pata chal jaati hai?kal bhi uuse mirchi ka achaar chahiye thi yeh baat bhi apko malum thi uus din aapne aur kesar ne mujhe bilkul ek jaisa mandap aur flowers ka suggestion diya tha jabki aap donno ne ek dusare se kuch bhi discuss nahi kiya?aur aaj bhi aapko uske bina kahe yeh pata hai k woo kaun se jewellery lekar aa gaya?.amazing bhabhi"

Gulaal didn't said anything she hung her head down

Rewa said waise "bhabhi kesar bhi aapki saari baatein samaj jaata hai..apko pata hai apka khana wo bina taste kiye pehchaan jaata...sach mein kaise kar lete hai aap donno"

Kesar was standing outside near the door he replied "rewa kabhi kabhi man ki baat janane k liye shabdo (words) k jarurat nahi padti"

Rewa smiled and gulaal stood up she was leaving the room as she passed kesar

Kesar said soflty "jab koi kissi ki maan k baat bina kahe jaan le to use pyaar kehte hain"

Gulaal looked at him she was speechless

Soon everyone got ready and left to attend the function at yogesh house

They reached yogesh house and yogesh and his parents welcomed them

After a while kesar and gulaal settled themselves kesar was sitting quietly staring his gulaal

Then panba came there...kesar stood up panba introduced him to a girl

Panba said kesar "yeh rinki Mehta hai mr and mrs Mehta k ladki she is doing BBA and CAT k preparation kar rahi hai"

Kesar was frustrated he know panba was rooting a possible marriage alliance

In anger and frustration he looked at gulaal...gulaal hung her head down and pretended to overlook him...kesar was irritated he took a deep breath and changed his expression quickly

He met the girl charmingly

Gal said "so aap kesar modi hai?apke bare meine magazine mein padha hai u r the young entrepreneur of the year...so glad to meet u"

Kesar said playfully "pleasure is all mine..btw lovely dress u look pretty ih this dress"

Gulaal was quietly watching kesar and rinki...she was uneasy as kesar was very playful with rinki

Soon kesar took rinki to dance floor he did it purposely to make gulaal jealous. And the uneasiness in gulaal was increasing...she was upset as she was watching kesar was laughing and dacing with a someone else...she felt ache in her heart she was restless...she couldn't bear it and tears roused in her eyes and she left the function and stood outside in the garden area

Kesar came behind her...he stood besides her and said "gulaal yanha garden mein kyu aa gayi"

Gulaal looked at him with wet eyes and said in low voice "bas aisa hi.."she wanted to avoid him

Kesar looked at her wet eyes and asked "kya ankhon mein kachra chala gaya hai..kafi wet hain"

Gulaal hung her head and said "h..haan"

Kesar purposely talked about rinki he said "waise tumhe rinki mehta kaisi lagi...mujhe lagta hai panba mere aur uski jodi banana chahiti kyu?tumhe kya lagta hai"

Gulaal didn't said anything

Kesar continued "ladki achi hai...ab tumhari tarah beautiful to nahi hai but she is pretty..long hairs beautiful eyes and height bhi achi hai..infact she is quite beautiful"

She nodded her head

Kesar continued "aur dress bhi achi thi shocking pink. mein to ekdum shocked ho gaya tha...aur uska dance wow I must say she is great dancer"

Gulaal felt bad...tears welled in her eyes and she decided to leave

As she walked...kesar grabbed her hand and came near her

He gently wiped her tears and said softly"gulaal jab kisi k door jaane k khayal se woo ghabra jaaye bardasht naa kar sake to uuse pyaar kehte hain"

He smiled

But gulaal was hurt she was looking in other direction avoiding his eye contact his kesar was flirting and dancing with someone else...she was deeply hurt

Kesar looked at her and then he put his arm around her waist and pulled her close to his body

Gulaal struggled to free herself... the pain that kesar had given her by dancing with someone else was slowly seething into irritation and anger she said "kesar chodo mujhe"

Kesar held her firmly and said "no"

Gulaal said in anger "kesar chodo warna"

Kesar smiled naughtily and said "warna kya marogi mujhe"

Gulaal looked at him and said "haan"

Kesar replied "maar lo I don't mind"

Gulaal still struggled to free herself and kesar was holding her?not letting her go

He then caressed her face with his hand and said in low and husky voice "tum jealous hokar aur sundar lagti ho doctor"

Gulaal said "mein jealous nahi hun"

Gulaal didn't looked at him she was still hurt kesar looked at her silent tears and said firmly " kesar sirf tumhara hai gulaal...us par sirf tumhara haq hai"

Gulaal looked at him and stood still in his arm...kesar continued "gulaal aaj bahot acha laga...ek ladke ko sabse jyada khushi tab milte jab uska pyaar uske liye possessive feel karta ho...bahoot acha laga yeh dekh kar ki tum meri liye possessive ho"

Gulaal freed herself and said "mein koi possessive nahi hun"

Kesar hold her hand back

Gulaal said "kesar jaane do mujhe..mera haath chodo"

But kesar flirted with her and said the chessy lines playfully " woo stupid romantic movies mein hero kya kehtein haan...pakadange agar haath to phir zindagi bhar nahi chondege"

He said "sorry honey yeh haath to nahi chutega (leave) "

gulaal controlled her smile and said "shut up ok"

And kesar smiled blissfully

While kesar hold her hand panba came outside and saw them holding hand..panba was upset

Edited by arti07 - 13 years ago
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res res res res res 🤣 thenga thenga thenga sab ko thenga hehahahaha


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wah wah wah fantastic chappi arti, kya likha hai wah superb, i love u yar, aray bohot hi acha chapi hai šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

aik baat bata, yeh aakhir gullu ko pata kaisay chala k ruby set kesu ji laaye? kesu ruby deewana hai kya? n chinki minki rinki bhi agayi šŸ˜† wah kesu making gullu jealous, aha superb, yippyyy n gullu toh jal bhun k omlete ban gayi, ok kabab purana hogaya yar, omlete is new now 🤣 aha kya jala hua omlete ban gaya gullu ka šŸ˜†
Edited by kiran_trudecent - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

ok guys here comes chapter 38 full of tirvial matters though i personally dont like fall and catch and jealous track but was so plainly disgusted with the show that wrote useless stuff...siree dance aaya par kesar ne gulaal k saath nahi kiya

guyz do comment and tell me kaisa thašŸ˜‰

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG i'm speechless šŸ˜ i loved that escalator scene...it was amazing ā˜ŗļø

Lovely chappi...thanks arti...Can't wait for ur next chapter 😳



Edited by Geeshani - 13 years ago
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Lovely chappi dear...😊
Kesu tho gulaal ko pyaar mein pagal bana raha hai...😳
n tu daily ek fall n catch la...hamein koi problem nahi hogi...😳
Escalater scene...waah...šŸ˜‰
N gullu jal rahi hai...so sweet...m loving it...😳
Yaar yeh rinki in shocking pink kahi durgesh tho nahi tha...?😲
Loved ur chappi...next ke liye waiting...😊
Edited by Keithuu - 13 years ago

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