A slap to remember part 2 page 1

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the sound of slap echoed in entire office...her head was lowered in shame...never in her life she experienced such a thing..she was a princess in her house...she was adored and loved by all...no one ever dared to speak a word against her...but today...she got the shock of her life...she was slapped..that too ..by him...whom she hates to the core...maan...tears welled up in her eyes...due to pain that winced on her cheek...all office staff were looking at them with their mouths wide opened...

"now i think u got my answer" said maan and walked to his cabin...without feeling bad even for once...for what he did...

geet closed her eyes in pain and hurt...she wiped her tears and moved out of the office silently...

she reached home...and went silently into her room...the whole night she kept thinking about herself...she looked herself in mirror...a tear rolled down her eye when looked at herself...there was nothing special in her ...she was just a normal girl...

"thats why maan never liked me...i have nothing special in me..nothing...neither beauty..nor education...iam nothing..." she cried ...bitterly whole night...

she came to know herself after that incident...everything changed after that day...

next day morning..she herself requested her father..to join her in good college...which otherwise she was opposing to enjoy the life with friends and parties...her father happily agreed nad all the family members rejoiced when they saw her finally showing interest in studies...

Initially it was very difficult for her to cope up with studies...but she was determined to study well...she studied with full concentration...forgetting everything...every enjoyment in life...that year she passed with just average marks...which was a big blow to her...her confidence weakened...she decided to quit...but then again the same slap...flashed in her mind...reminding about herself again...thats it all her weakness and fears disappeared...she studied...as if there is no alternative...and that hard work..didn't go waste...nothing stopped her from becoming topper of the college for the next two consecutive years...but still she was not satisfied..her education became her life...after graduation...she aimed for business administration studies...destiny bowed before her hard work and dedication...she topped in every examination she wrote...her name was first in any interview she attended...

she worked for top companies in world..and started her own company too...she achieved everything she wished for...she became so busy that she never bothered about personal life...if anything she could remember was...the slap..which maan gave 10 years back...that too only during the times of weakness and fear of future...

maan came to his room and sat on the couch...thinking about her...which he was doing past 10 years...

to be continued...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wowww amazing loved it cont soon dear pm me
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Part 2

maan came to his room and sat on the couch...thinking about her...which he was doing past 10 years...He glanced through entire room...It was full of her photographs...A tear drop fell from his eyes... reflecting his pain of separation. He closed his eyes in hurt and pain...and recalled all the events that happened 10 yrs back...

"Maan I love u...i love u...i love u..." said geet hugging maan...Maan gave a frustrating look to geet and threw her away from him...saying..

"Geet..mein ne..tumse kithni baar kaha...aisa mere saath behave math karo..Be in your limits..."

Geet rolled her eyes...and sighed...this made maan more angry and he started leaving ...

"Maan..maan..maan..iam sorry..." said geet holding her ears..."dubara aisa nahi hoga..ab tho ruk jao..."

maan gave..."i don't care" look to geet and walked outside without giving any attention to geet's plea...

"lagtha hey office mein koi problem hey..isliye woh pareshan hey...aur mujhpe gussa kar raha hey...koi baath nahi agar mujh per gussa nahi kiya tho kis per karega..." said geet ...and went back to her room with a smiling face...

Maan sat in his car...cursing his fate ...

"yeh baddimag ladki subah subah saamne agayi...aur peeche padgayi...kithne baar kaha maine unse..ki mujhe tum pasand nahi ho..phir bhi besharam ki tarah mere hi peeche pad rahi hey...kaise avoid karu use...agar kuch kahu tho...daadi ko bura lagega...kya karu samaj mein nahi aaraha hey...agar iss baar apni had paar kiya tho...mein usko unki jagah dikha detha hu..."

maan entered his cabin and got surprised to see preethi waiting for him...A smile came upon his face...

" Preethi...hi...aap yaha?"

preethi stood up and came near maan blusshing...and said.." woh...aaj holiday hey na..isliye...aapko dekhne aaya tha..."

Maan smiled...and said...

"agar tum chaho tho..hum bahar chale"

Preethi smiled..and nodded...As they were walking out of the office geet came infront of them wearing a pair of shorts and t-shirt with icecream in one hand...accidentally her foot got slipped and she fell on the floor before maan...and the whole icecream fell on her dress...tears rolled down her eyes due to pain...

maan looked at her in anger...whispering.."oh...not again..yeh phir se mere saamne agaya...ab gaya mera date baad mein..."

geet started crying aloud...She looked at maan and extended her hand for help from maan ..

Maan gave a disgusting look and said...

:aankhe sir pe rakhe chalthe ho kya...tume saamne kay hey diktha nahi hey...?

geet made a baby face...saying.."nahi maan woh mein ice cream kha raha tha..isliye...mujhe...

"maan..aap arahe hey ya nahi...nahi tho..iss pagal ladki ke wajah se aaj poora din yahi pe chala chayega" said preethi in anger and walked towards parking lot giving a disgusting look to geet...

"Preethi..preethi..." called maan in an attempt to stop her...he turned towards geet in anger...but when he saw her struggling to get up he felt pity and came near to help her...he lifted her in his arms...his touch made geet to forget all the pain ...she closed her eyes enjoying his proximity...

"Maan...because of this nature of urs...i am falling in love with u again and again..." said geet almost kissing him...

thats it...maan's anger reached heights...he mercilessly threw her on the couch aside saying...

"geet...agar dubara mere office premises mein aisa mere saath cheaply behave kiya tho mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...samjhi.." said maan and walked outside...

geet sighed...as she was almost accustomed with such type of behaviour from maan...she thinks that it is his way of showing love...but little she knew that he hates her to the core...

to be continued...





Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
namita25 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww moi waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice
when r u continuing d ss
when d night ends?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome want to know why maan slapped her
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow loved it...plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW amazing...please contniue soon...is it a FF, SS or OS?

Why did Maan slap geet? Want to know about what happened and what happens next? do they meet again and how?

Please please please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey that really a nice one
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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he slapped?
and how he knew Geet?

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