Just Because - SS MG *Pt 4&5 - Pg 3*

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey All My Favourite Peoples!
I have FINALLY decided to start a super short SS, the reas I call this an S4.. 😆
Now I would like to thank a lot of people that have encouraged me to write this.

Vini Di, Reya Di, Laila, and of course our beloved Sabsz!
I love you all!

And Dhara if you are reading, this is also for you!

The AR version is for you only Vini Di!

About me:
I am a simple fourteen year old you is in love with KaSh and MaanEet.
The name is Jinil, but I don't mind anything else... I am also called Bhatakti Aatma.

By The Way, I need to know if I should continue. Please tell me.
This is not my usual full on hard core intense stuff. It will a light S4.

Just Because

Prologue

I stared at the handsome man, more like gawking. This was crazy! Geet has never looked at a man in that way before. It was all so new. The whole concept of looking at the opposite sex seemed alien, and she felt like a teenager once again.

"Umm, excuse me are you alright?" he spoke gently, still a bit perplexed.

"Yeah, I am sorry' what is it that you wanted?" I asked, still amused at my own thoughts.

"I wanted a three scooped chocolate covered waffle cone with two scoops of rocky road, and one peanut butter and coffee. I want the peanut butter in the middle please! I would also like a Banana Float with chocolate and caramel syrup with walnuts and extra almonds. "

He only made me more confused; I stared at him, in horror this time. How much could a man eat? As soon as he looked up, he saw my face a chuckled.

"I have a 10 year-old sister, and she can eat!" I burst out laughing at his dilemma.

"Don't worry, I completely understand, my nephew is just the same!"

We mutually stared at each other, and instantly I knew this was not the last I would see of him.

This boy had sent frenzies down my body, he was different, and I was undoubtedly attracted to him. Was he the one I have been waiting for all my life? Was he my dream guy?


Index

Prologue - Look Up!

Part One - Look Down!

Part Two - Look Even More Down!

Part Three - Page Two

Part Four - Page Three

Part Five - Page Three

Edited by Klutszy_KaShian - 14 years ago

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mrk-1 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow nice start yaar !!!
loved it !!
do add me to ur pm list !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the beginning...
do cont.
add me in ur pm list too...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1

I, once again, gawked at him from afar. Turns out he works on the stall in front of mine. I work at an ice cream stall in the mall, and he works for the mobile stall. Life couldn't have been better. I would get the taste of his magnificently carved face from 9 to 5.

Today was just the same; when customers didn't come I bored my eyes out just to see him. I couldn't find him anywhere, the tension was building up! I almost panicked until I got tapped on the shoulder. Exasperated at another customer I turned around and meekly said, "Your order sir," without looking up of course.

"A date with the beautiful lady." He said with a hint of confidence. I looked up instantly as I recognized the godly voice of my man. Wait, what? Since when was he my man? It felt good to claim him. I was never the possessive types, but I would never let any girl get close to him. What the hell was wrong with me?

"I, umm, I don't even know you." I speedily replied after breaking out of my trance.

"Come one, if we don't spend time together how are we going to know each other? Anyways, it's not like I haven't seen you checking me out, and for your information I am very much into you! Let's give us a try."

There that was it. I was completely floored and I had this goofy smile across my face. This day couldn't be better, and this was amazing! I was about to go out with my first ever crush.

He took that as a yes and escorted me out of the ice cream stall. I locked it up, before he pulled me away. I didn't know anything about this guy. What was his name? How old was he? Where does he come from? Is he from good family? All I knew is that he has one heck of a sister! I had a good feeling about this. I just knew this was going to work! It all just felt perfectly perfect.


Short part, but the next one will be up in a couple of hours!


Jinszyy...


No copying please.

Edited by Klutszy_KaShian - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i likee i likeee
do add me to the pm list plz
cont soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Meee

hello...reya di is here now...so sorry abt the delay with the reading and commenting...oh lordy...yest..i went on a shopping spree to Vaughan Mills..Ouch...my body is still aching from all the shopping
but i am not cheating...reading a part at a time...and then commenting...

OMGGG...he asked her out 😲..already...i must say the boy is fast...and i laughed when he was like it's not i didn't notice u chking me out...😆...how good can life be?? she found a man working in a ice cream shop...lolz😆..that's it..i am gonna go to STC or Markville and get a job there 😆😳...

Let's see what happens next...
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2

I knew he was the one. The way he treated me, the way he acted like a true gentleman, the way he respected my views and my ambitions. I had just realized that I had fallen truly, deeply, madly and passionately in love with him.

"Hey, I forgot to tell you. My name is Maan, Maan Singh Khurana." He spoke as I sat in his car ready to reach an unknown destination.

"Geet, Geet Handa." I said trying to imitate his tone. We both chuckled as he started his the engine of the H2. I always had this thing for Hummers and guess what? He has a Hummer. What a coincidence!

He held onto my hand as we reached, Rotary Park. There weren't any people being a work day, and not once did he let go of my hand. We talked about almost everything. Turns out he is the same age as me, we are studying in the same University and his best friend is my brother. Brij Handa. My brother is his best friend.

"Oh my God, you are Maan. Brij veerji is always talking about you, don't be surprised but that means I know quite a bit about you! Your sister is Pari right? I have seen her picture, and she is epically cute! Your mother is very sweet, I remember when Brij veerji came home one day and he couldn't even drink water, he was so full of your mom's love. He also told me how you are on national Basketball team. That's so cool!" I gulped as I saw his face. His eyes bored down on my lips, and I couldn't help but blush.

"Did I ever tell you that Brij never told me that his sister talks like a machine," he whispered, and I gasped!

"Really now, is that so? Then you might as well dump me and go find a subtle chick for your elf. Geet Handa will never change!" I spoke slightly offended. I wanted him to like me, but I wanted him to like the real me. I couldn't fake myself. I can't be like the Bimbo's who giggle their self-respect away.

"You talk like a machine that is only mine." He whispered by my lips, holding me closer into him. I gasped at his intense words, as he pecked my forehead. My world stood still as his lips tortured my face. He kissed my chin and said, "I" pecking my eyes he whispered, "Love" and finally before giving into my lips, "You". I didn't want anything more. He had become my life in the matter of a day. I let out a single tear as he submitted himself to my lips. He feverishly kissed them as I parted them for a second; giving him full access to places no one had ever felt before. He continued to pleasure me as I dug on hands in his hair pulling him closer. We broke apart and I quickly hid my face in his neck. We were going to be together forever. My heart beat in unison with his as I gently whispered, "I love you more." Feeling his face break into a smile, I pecked his neck and chest feeling content in his embrace.


Fast na? Don't expect double updates. I had time on me, so I decided why not?

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Posted: 14 years ago
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i LOVED it
SOOO MUCH
don't forget to pm me PLEASEEE
hehehe cont soon :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😊meee again...

oh wowww...that was fast...not just the update but their love-estory...like love confession already 😳...hayyyeee...😍...do things really happen like this...cause i am considering the mall job for sure then 😆..but u know what they say...when it's right...it's right...some people find a person perfect for them in a day...sometimes...they spend their entire lifetime with no luck...
and talk about a small world...Maan is her brother's best friend...😃...woowww...that was kool...

okies...off to read the next part 😊
Edited by maankigeet4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

i LOVED it
SOOO MUCH
don't forget to pm me PLEASEEE
hehehe cont soon :D


heehee... thank you..
and I did PM you for the first part.,.. i didnt send PM's for the seconf part!!

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