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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

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thansk a lot for the back to back updates..
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hi.mushky thanks dear.😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: minnie_tweetie

wow awesome updates
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thanks dear...😛..
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks 4 ur support n comment dears...it left only 3 parts...2 of them ime post today.this patrs also long..last'll be long n soo hot..me will be surly tagged it 4 18+😆..but now enjoy this parts...😉

Part9

Just in front of her The gr8 Mr Brijbhushan Wadhwa...she just shocked...she wanted to hide...wanted to to ran fron their but..in fear she didn't do any thing...her body betrayed her...but he didn't see her...when just about to turn her side..someone covered her hear wid a dupatta... "Tum daro mat main hoon Geet..." She n Adis...took her home...in this stage she just not able to talk anything...Adis called Ran...

R: " Hello...Adis kya baat hai...ajj itni jaldi yaad agayi meri..."

A: "Ran...Mr. Wadhwa is here...in the village"

R: " WHAT?????"

A: " YES..."

R: " OK ...me n Maan...just out from here..wait haan...n called Sumit..."

A: " How yaar...he did not carry Mobile at his work place..."

R: " OK...hum jate hai...kuch karte hai...tum log ghar se mat nikalna ok..."

A: " Haan..."

immediately Ran called Maan...

M:" What dude kya huya...tere cahera utra huya kyu hai...??Adis se..."

R: " He is there..."

M: "WHAT..."

R: " Jaldi chal..."

M: "How...kyase...woha..."

R: "Ghadi me chal jate jate bolta hon..."

M : "Haan chal..."

Ran told Maan everything which Adi's tolk him...

M: " Woh sale uha kyase..kahi usse sab pata to nehi chala..."

R: " Pata nehi yaar...kuch karna hai..par un dono pe uch bhi nehi ane denge...khabhi kya chan se nehi rahne dega Sumit ko"

they reached the house...Adis just run towards them...

R: " Sab thik haina...??Kumkum Kaha hai...?"

A: "Thik to hai..par Kumkum ko bohot sadma laga ha...jise bhoolne lagithi wohi phir se samne agayi to..."

M: " To kya...thik haina...woh aur Sumit...koi usse koi khbar kiya yea nehi...??"

A: "Abhi tak to nehi..Maan tu ja...Ran yea rahe..sirf teen ladki hai ghar pe...jaldi Sumit ko bula ke le a..."

That time they heard scream of her...they ran ...Geet tried to support...but She held her belly tightly...n cried...

R: "Kya huya??"

G: "Let me chek poperly yaar..."

after check..

G: "Sayad...again start that pain..."

A: "Geet ab kya karenge...??"

G: "Jaldi se Hospital le chalo...kahi kuch ulta shidha na ho jaye.uska jo condition hai...main akeli nehi sambhal paungi..."

They didn't waste any time...n took her they hospital..n Maan went from there to reach him...he reached there within few time...

M: " Tu chal yea ha se...woh Kumkum hospital me hai..."

He guessed what happen...n asked permission from his boss...of timber factory...

S: "Utsad bhai...meri biwi... hospital..."

They ware about Kumkum...so they didn't stopped him...Maan just took his bike he sat behind him...they just back hospital only few minutes...but when they reach to Hospital...Maan called Ran to know where they...he informed they just outside of OT...They run towards the OT..when they came..Ran,Adis n Geet stood there...after almost 1 &1/2 hours...doctor just came out from OT...

S: " Doctor...Woh..."

D: "Humne bohot try kiya...but I'm sorry...unka miscarriage hogaya...jayse main appko bolatha...5-6 mounth's...upar se sayad unhe koi sadma laga hai...par unhe hosh agaye ai...aur unhe pata bhi hai..."

He just felt numb...

D: " App unse mil sakte hai...hum une room me sift kar diya hai...app mil lijiye..."

H slowly entered the room...she sat on the bed n looked outside...he came sat beside her...placed his hand on her...she looked him...there was tear into her eyes...looked him blankly..

S: " I...I..mmm...Sorryyy" ...He cupped her face n said...looked at her helplessly... "Main agar tumhe chod ke nehi ajta to aysa nehi hota...sorry..." ...hugged her tightly...n buried his face in her nape...

K: "Appke koi gati nehi ha..." This time through this shock...she tried to smooth him...

S: "Nehi meri galti...tumhe akela nehi choda hota...to ayse kuch neho hota..."he felt so helpless...

K: "Hota..." he looked her immediately... ."Yea app bhi jante haina...aysa hona hi tha...jise main 5 mahine godh me sicha...woh to mujhe chod ke jayega...yea to hum jante the na..."she cupped his face.. "Hum jante thena..ki woh nehi rahge...hume chod ke chal jayega...jante thena.."

He kissed her forehead...her eyes...

S: "Main promise karta hoon...isske baad aur kuch galt nehi hoga...nehi hoga.."he madly kissed her face...

K: "App ayse kuch mat bliye..agar kuch huya...to main ko guilt main nehi dekha sakti...aur meri zindegi me kuch galat na hoon aysa to nehi haina..."

S: " Tum..." he could not finish his sentence...Doctor interrupted...

D: "Excuse me..."

S: " Yes..."

D: "Plzz come wid me... kuch baat krani hai..."

S: "Ji..." turn towards her.."Main jao..." she blinked... "Abhi aya haan.."

He went Doctors cabin...Maan came along wid Him..

M: "Doc kya hum usse le ja sakte hai...??"

D: "Nehi...but kal sure..humme unka ek through ceack up ...Ok Ap yae rahiye hum usse cheackup karke ate hai...aur haan report bhi mil jayenge to paicent keware me baat karne asani hogi..."

S: "Ok..."

Doctor went her room...to check her up...n after few time she came back...he became restless about her..

S: " Doc..woh...Kumkum...I mean meri patni..."

D: "Yes...Sumit...appki Patni thik hai...But...one more sad news 4 u...i know...but apppe permition ke bina yea hume karna para...appke dost hote huyi...yea..."

S: " Kya huya...???Use koi khtra to nehi haina..."

D: " Dekho Sumit...is pregnancy me usske ovary me kuch infection ho gayi thi..upar se miscarriage...to yea infection bad sakti thi..aur usske jaan pe aa sakte the...iss liye humne usske ovary remove kar diya hai..."

He looked at her in confusion...she continue

D: "Isska matlab...ab usse body me ovary nehi hai...jiskaa saff saff matlab yea hota hai..ki woh dobara khabhi bhi MA nehi ban payegi..."

He was more shocked...not abt him...how he told that to her...that she never became a mother...

D: "Sumit yea baat usko pata nehi hai...aur appko hi batana hoga..."

Maan also shocked as him...He tried to console him...but he himself in scock stage...

M: "Su..tu Kk ke paas ja...use tera jaroorat hai ab plz ja yaaar..."

He looked at doctor then Maan blankly...how he now faced her...He slowly came towards her room...she stood near window...n Geet n Adi's stood her side...when they saw he came ...they gave them space...n left the room...he didn't how he faced her..also didn't wanted to face he...give her that news... "How...how..." .the question in his mind...that...

K: "App kya soch rahe hoon...yahi na..ki mujhe yea kyse bataoge ki main phir khabhi bhi ma nehi ban paungi..."

He shocked wid her sudden words..."how she know that..."he didn't looked at her...also wonder How she knew he was there...

K: "Ab app yea soch rahe hoon na ki mujhe kayse pata...??"He again shocked how well she read his mind...

K: "Miane app ke aur doctor ki baat sunli thi..jab Geetdi mujhe lobby me walk ke liye le gayi thi..." till then she faced back..but now she faced him..but he looked down... "App agar caho to mujhe chod sakte hoon...main khabhi appko parisan..."

He just ran swiftly towards her and sealed her lips again...didn't want to hear the word which she told him...he Kissed her...just kissed her...show her how much he cared her...how much loved..nothing was between...

S: "Dobara kabhi bhi yea baat mat bolna..."he wispered in her mouth...but she broke that kiss...

K: " App samjhne ki koushish ki jiye..." cupped his face.."Main...main appko ek bachha bhi nehi de paungi...jo appka hoon...Pahle hi appko Bohot parisan kar cuki hoon...aur nehi karna cahiti...app samjh rahena..."he didn't say anything...just leaned forward...n took her lips into his...this time more demanding...nibbled...sucked hers...his hands supported her from back..n held her very close to him...

S: " Jab tumse sabdhi kiya tha..tab kya bachhe ke liye kiya tha...bolo..." said in her mouth...She nodded 4 no... "jab tumse pyar kiya tab bachhe ke kiya..." she didn't say anything... "bolo" ...he kissed more aggressively..."Main kuch puncha hai...bolo" ..almost shouted..she slowly nodded no...he broke "then why now...mujhe sirf tum chahiye samjhe...bachpan se...koi nehi tha mera...jab se tum mili...mere appna ho gayi hoon...meri zindegi ka hissa...meri sarir hissa...aur tum cahate hoon..ki main tumhe chod doon...appne zidegi ke sath chod don...thik hai..."he took the knife which laid in beside table to cut fruits..."Humhe mar doon..."pointed his heart wid knife...she scared that time...grabbed it from his hand...n threw it away...

K: "Yea app kya kar rahe the..."she took him into his arms... "Ayse mat karna..plz..."she stood her toe...n rested her forehead on his..."Plzz ayse mat kijiye"...their tears mingling together...she slowly kissed every part of his face...

Sudden knock of the room door..he wiped her n slef tears...she then rested her head on his board chest...Maan came In...

M: "Tere se baat karna tha...tu thoda bahar ayega..."

S: "Hmm"

M: "Main bahar Hoon..."

He carried her to the bad n palced her there...n fixed the pillow...covered her wid blanket...

S: "Main abhi aya...tum thodi der rest karlo...phir main ata hoon..tthik hai...calo achhe bachhe ki tarah..."

She obeyed...he went out of room...at lobby maan waits for him...

S: "Kya huya tu itna restless kyu ho raha hai..."

Maan didn't from where to start...

M: " Woh...woh yhan agaye..jise dekh sis ko scock laga..."

Him understood...what he meant...

S: "Kyase..i mean dekh ussne KK ko..."

M: " Nehi sayad...Geet ne to ayi bola...woh aur adis ne...usse uha se leke aye the..."

He got angry...

S: " Jab bhi main khush hota hoon...woh jate hai...mere sari khushiyan cinne ke liye...Par abb bohot ho gaya...abb main unko nehi codunga...Maan Tu pata laga woh yeahan aye kisliye..."

M: "Thik hai..." He went from there...

S: "Bohot kar liya dad...appne appna...ab mere bari...ab main appko meri koi bhi khushi cinne nehi dungi...na ki Kumkum ki...aur na meri doston ki...ajj tak jo appne kiya na usske bohot bade kimat appko chukana hoga...ajj tak kuch nehi kaha...par ajj jo kk sath huya..usske jamedar sirf app hoon...aur main appko isske liye khabhi maff to chodo itna bada saza dunga na...app yaad rakhenge..."

Previous Part8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/45959106

Next Part9: Below
Edited by sukklover - 13 years ago
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Part10

"Bhaiyaon...yea MR.BrijBhusan Wadhwa...humare yeahan ki jangle cut ke yihan..factory banana chahate hai...abb app log boliye...yea parbat ilaka hai...app sb jante hai.yehan pudon ko cutne ka matlab kya hote hai...yea darti ma humse itna naraz ho jayenge ki...khabhi bhi vukamp..yea baar bhi asayte hai...yea bada log to yea rahte nehi na...jo hoga..hum hi bugat na padaga...kya app log cahate hai...humare ma,bahen...n bachhe bina baat ki saza bungte...mar jaye...boliye...aur sirf yea hi nehi yea carbite factory banega jiski dhuya.yea jisse nilkle huya har ek ciz khatarnak ..hai humare liye..aur bachho ke liye jayada...kya app log appne bachho ki zindegiyan khatre main dalna chahenge...boliye...app log..."

"Nehi Maanji..RanveerJi...app dono sahi hoon.hum ayse nehi hone denge..."Sarpang declared...in front of all village people

M: "To chale uha jaha woh yea sab kar rahe hai...haan woh app logo pe hath bhi utha sakte hai...kya phir bhi applog raji hoon..."

"Haan Hum sab jaenge..."all villagers said together...

R: "To Chalo..."

They reach...Phoolmati Jangal...where mr wadhwa n his team...waited to meet the Sarpang...

VS: "Main iss gaon ki sarpang...aur humne sab valai ke liye yea fayla liya hai.ki hum yea jangle appko nehi bechenge...aur yea na koi fartory banega..."

MW: "Oye Sarpung...tujhe maine kitne rupiya dunga bola hai..phir bhi...ohh jayda chahiye...thikhai..."

VS: "Bilkul bhi nehi...hum is gao ki sarpung hai...sirf pyason ke liye appne gaobashi ke jiban khatre main nehi ja sakta..."

Now Maan n Ran came forward to Mr.Wadhwa...they knew he never met them...n also as he was a short tempered person so, that's easy to make him get up his hand...

M: "Haan...hum humare bachhonka...humara zindegi khatre main kyu dale...hote kon hai app???"

R: "Pyasa hai...to appne app ko kya pp Sahensa akbar samjhte hai..jo kuch bhi karenge..."

M: "Haan...Pyase kya humme bhi kharidenge app ...jab sar pung ne bola nehi to nehi..."

MW: "Kon hai be tu...itna kyu parpara rahe ha.tu.."

VS: "Yea humare subha chintak hai...Humahare gao ke vale ke liye bol rahe hai..."

MW: "Dekhne me to twon ka lagta hai..."

VS: "Haan yea log pade likhe hai...sahar me nukri karte hai...iss sab ke ware me jayada jankari to hogi na...to hum inke baat hi manege..."

M: "Hum yea sab jante hai.app appne fayde ke liye sab ki jaan khatre main bhi da sakte hai..."

R: "Aur app gao me ake gaobashi se unka pyada jangale hi lena chahte hai.jinke bal par woh roj ke gujara karte hai..."

M: "App ke yea payse hume nehi cahiye...Kyu bhaion..."

All villagers said... "Haan hume nehi cahiye...hum jayse hai...thik hai..."

M: "Suna ...ab ja sakte hai..."

MW: "Oye sun.main iss project main core laga ya hai...Sun tujhe payse cahiye.main deta hoon...use leke ja ihanse..."

R: " Dekha bhaion...ab yea hum logo pyason se kharidana chahte hai..ki hum bhi unke sath mil jaye...aur app logo ko barbad kar sakhke...dekha dekha"

MW: "Oye tere to..."

His security...1st him Ran then Maan...they didn't stop him...as this was part of their...but Ran slipped on a rock...n his head hit it...n started bleed...Maan tied his rumal on his head...to stop bleed...n

M: "Dhekha bhaiyon...yea kuch bhi karsakte hai...inho issko mara...app log kuch to kijiye..."

Then all villagers attemed to attack him..but that moment he came wid Police...

S: "Inspector...main appko bola tha na...yea kuch bhi kar sakte hai.dekh aissko mara...aur upar se jangale cutke yea factory banana cahate hai..."

I: "U r under arrest Mr. Wadhwa..."

MW: "Mujhe tu arreste karega...pata hai.main kon hoon..."

I: "App jayse bande bohot dekhe hai...chale...hilbar...hathkada..."

MW's Lawyer: "App ayse nehi kar sakte appke paas arrest warrant hai..."

I: "Hume pata tha.iss liye pure taiyari ke sath ayehai...humbildar dikha iss..ki kya kya carge se hum isse under kar rahe hai..."

Constable handed that warrant to Lawyer...n he dam shocked to check the charges...

1. Rape a minor.

2. Make pregnant her.

3. Abuse Her.

4. Physical Mentally torture.

5.Black money business.

6. Wanted to destroy forest.

7. Make unregistered factories.

8. Forcefully try to purchase govt. property.

9. try to murder innocent public...n more

I: " Kya ab hum inhe le ja sakte hai..wakil ji..."

MW's Lawyer: "Ji...hum abhi kuch nehi kar sakte"

MW: "Kya kah rahe hoon...kya main iss liye tumhe pyasa di hai..."

S: "Payson ho hi sab nehi hota hai...Mr.Wadhwa...Abb appka waqt khatam..."

MW: "Tuje kya lega..kal hi main nikal jaunga..."

S: "Ayse sapne mat hi dekha...iss baar koi nehi bacha payega...yea puri gao..wit.ness hai...itne ogo ki baat koi bhi adlat nakar nehi sakta...aur prove bhi hai...so..u r finished...just get lost...inspector plz.ise le jayiye..mere samne hoga pata nehi ya karunga..."

Kumkum came forward n slapped hard...

K: "Appne jo mere sath kiya na...usske saza appko milke rahe ga..."

MW: "Teri too..."

He just tried to hit her..he came n hold his hand...

S: "Koushish bhi mat karna usse chuna ka...warna...saza usse bhi batar hoga..."

He hold her hand tightly..to support her...Police take him away...

me don't abt Law much...plz bother this...small law section...😕

bannar added at page 1..check out n tell me howz it...😃
next update only one big n hot update..be ready 4 it dears...😉
Previous Part9: Up

Next Part 11: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/46296997

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Edited by sukklover - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely!
awesome!
just loved it... pls continue soon...
atleast he is getting punishment... bt i think u should have made S beat him... i would have loved it...
conti soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
both the parts are nice tama...:):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow
loved both parts yaar
do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely!
awesome!
just loved it... pls continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superbbb!
Loveee the update!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxxx for the pm.



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