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After 2 years...
3 couple stood outside register office n laughing...giggling...they looked so happy...
"Chalo abb chalte hai...atlast sadhi ho gayi hum 3 no ki...kya baat hai...haina..."
"R8...today...main bohot khush hoon..."
"Chalo bachho...ghar chate hai..."
"Methi chacha..." all shouted as kids did...
MC: "Maan Geet...Aditi Ranveer...aur Sumit Kumkum ek ho gaye main bohot khush hoon...chalo gar chalo..mujhe mere 3 bahuon ko ghraha prabesh bhi karana hai..."
All sat their respective cars...wid their partners...
She at wid him...her savior, her angle, her guide, her teacher, her guardian, her life, her love, her soul, her husband now...she blushed that thought of husband...
He always beside her...make feel her special...wid her weakness he made her him...in this two years she completed she 12th..wid A+ grade...he helped her a lot...this was her it was his success...she now doing BA in Arts... she loved to paints..she admitted fabric classes..yoga...which she like...he always supported...also his business became international now...in top 10...in other 5 years.it 'll be sure in top 2...she was very happy for him...but this business not only his..his frndz...also...Maan & Ranveer bhaiya...now partner of this business..Ranveer bhaiya..left his job...n concentrated on this...their hard work now made this success...Geet di completed her specialist in child n woman..she was now a famous doctor of big cities...Adi di..now a very popular criminal lawyer...specially. ..after won the Wadhwa case...she punished him...make sure he not able to come out from the hell...which after he did he deserve only this..govt. seal his all property..but they took permeation to carried that orphanage n old aged homes...her thought broke when car stopped wid jerk...all r standing in front of their house...they lived all together...the 3 man of this house made this huge place...they decorated as they wanted...
MC: "Chalo.iss khalash ko peko..."
they did everything as MC said...after this all enter house...they took blessing from MC..
MC: "Jao bachho appne naye zindegi ki suruyat karo..."
They 3 took their wives...into their arms...n said best of luck to another...
Randiti's Room:
Ran landed her on bed...n cupped her face...
A: "Main abhi ayi..."
R: "Kya hai..."
A: "Boli na..."
She went washroom...n after some time she came out...he just stood there wid open mouth..his breath struck in his throat to see his wife changed herself pant shirt to into a red lessy night dress...she smirk...
A: "What happened MR. Ranveer..."
He couldn't control any more...left her up..n laid her on bed...
R: "Iss din ke main kab se wait kar raha hoon...i can't control any more"
A: "To kis ne kaha app ko control karne ko...make urs now Ran..."
He removed her dress and kissed her on her shoulders and collar bone... she smiled and blushed.. ...he kissed her lips passionately... he removed her clothing as well as his own..simple jeans n t-shirt... it had been 8-7 years to wait... she kissed him back on his chest...his torso his face. ...he entered her...she moaned in pain...she never made love...she was not used to it... he didn't observe... he closed her whimper with a kiss... the kiss so passionate that she forgot about the pain... he moved faster n harder... she moaned in pleasure... bit his chest when she felt pain... she got used to the pain and pleasure... he moved more aggressively... after a while.. they reached the climax...panting waiting to compose there breath.
R: "I Lov U .."
A: "I Lov U..thanks 4 make my life so beautiful"
She smiled a tear came out of her eyes... he kissed it away as they started making love again...
Maaneet' s room:
Geet wore a white knee lenth shimmering..she loved this freary types dress...so..in her wedding she wore it...Maan in black...their frnds tease them...they looked like black n white TV...as soon as they reached their room...he landed her on her feet...n closed the door behind...n pushed her against wall..pinned her hand above her head...n kissed her hard...put all weight on her n rubbed himself'on her body...n..leave her hand..his hand busy to care her thigh... lifted her dress till her waist...next took off her panties...her free hand move towards his zip...n she rubbed it through cloths...n made his hardness more hard..unbluckled his belt...took of his pant..again placed his hand on her hip...n lifted her up... he looked at her once before entering...he went in with force...she hissed in pain..she was trying to merge in him...
G: "Ahh...Maan...someone is so desparate..."
M: "You know na...how many days...m waiting 4 it..i can't waste a single minute..."
G: "Let me change..."
M: "Jab dress ki koi jaroorat nehi to tum dress change karke kya karoge dear...chalo main help karta hoon..."
He tore all their belongings...n laid her on bed...now he was top on her...his hands moved roughly to breast...teasing her nipple roughly...his mouth not leaving hers breast..sucked them hard...sat between her legs...he hit his thrush her hard...again and again...let out her soft moans...the passion which he kept control for so many days...made him wild...his hits getting stronger...harsher...after some time they collapsed...
G: "Maan...don't leave me ever..."
M: "How can I...u r my life dear...I Love U so much..."
G: "I Love U too...Maan...thanks 4 complete me..."
After some minute they redo...He processed her..again n again..made their 1st night special to each other...
He placed her on bed...looked at his angle ...look beautiful wid red salowar kamiz...he also in his casuals...
S: "Ajj bohot kuch huya na..."
She felt shy...today was big day 4 her...she became someone's...she called wife...
S: "Thak gay hogi na ...ek kam karo...change karke so jao..."
She just shocked...what she just heard... "so jao" ...she didn't understood...but just nodded...he changed into vest n pant... n came to bed...n laid...as everyday...she laid rested her head on his chest...n switch off the lights...later n8...he felt that his chest was getting wet...he looked at her...tear drops flooded from her closed eyes..she tried to control...but they rolled down...he immediately switched on the lights..sat on the bad n also made her sat on his lap...
S: "Kya huya...tum...ro rahi hoon..."
He tried to read those tears..but as he removed the tear drop wid his thumb...a new set of tear replace them...
S: "Kya huya bolona...mere koi baat tumhe bura lag gayi kya??..bolona ...Kumkum..."
He tried to understand her...what bothered her...
K: "App..aapp.mujhse pyar nehi...karte na..."
S: "What...??"
Now he shocked...
K: "Haan...app mujhe pyar nehi karte..." between her sobbed... "App sirf mere liye sympathy hoon...pity feel karte hoon...par pyar nehi karte hoon..."
S: " Kya?? Kis ne kah yea sab tumhe??" cupped her face... "Haan...Main tumse bohot pyar karta...aur yea baat tum jante hoon...koi pitybity nehi hoon main...bohot pyar karta hoon...bus..."
He tried to console her...but didn't understand why she talk like that...
K: " Nehi..iss liye to appne ajj kuch bhi nehi kiya...ajj humare suhag raat hai...aur app so gaye...ajj to har jodi ke liye...ek inpotant din hai...har koi usse...aur app soo rahe hai...mujhe...mujhe...appne app kyu nehi banya..."
Now..he understood ..but he just smiled at her innocence...she was ..so pure..out off the world...he again cupped her face...made her to look into his eyes...
S: "Tumhe kya laga main nehi pyar karta tumhe...in akhon main dekho...tumhe sirf pyar hi pyar nazar ayega...aur jaha tak..tumhe appna neka sawal...uto mai bohot pahle kar chuka..hoon...ek baat dhyan se sunu..pyar ka matlab...sirf physical intimasy nehi hota hai...pyar to biswas,varosha,sachhi hai..aur jo hum dono ke bich hai..."
K: " Nehi.woh sab appne jaga...thik hai...par humare shadhi to do saal ho cuki hai.ajj to sirf registerd huya hai...tab ki baat main samjh sakti hon.main ..main ma bannewali thi.upar se weak thi..phir miscarage...aur main 18 ki bhi nehi thi...par abb...kahi appko...mujhe chune se..meri ateet to appko nehi rok rahi hai..."
She chocked...he just numb...how did make her understand...he didn't want to hurt her..just for her sake...now also she was very young...
S: "Tum..tum...ayse mat kaho...tum janete hoon na ayse kuch nehi hai...main tumhe aur dard nehi dena chahiti...tum jante hoon.tum ab bhi weak hoon...main sirf pyar jatane ke liye...kyase tumhe...aur ateet..woh to mere waja se hai na..."
She looked at him..wid her teary eyes...she understood now...why he didn't do anything..only for her...think...only about her n her health..after two years...he blame himself for her past...rather he did nothing...she came forward..n hugged him tight...
K: "I..I.m.sorry...main to huyi buddhu...kuch nehi samjhti...yea bhi nehi samjh payi ki app yea sab sirf mere liye kar rahe honge...mujhe maff kar dijiye..."
She kissed him all over his face...
K: "App ne mujhe maff kar diya na..???.."
She made a pleased face..n said in very low n request tone...how could he deny that as he wanted that same..he leaned forward...n kissed her...just kissed her...made her to struggle for breath...he enveloped her in one arm while with the other tucked her hair behind her ear...He took out her ear-ring with his free hand...n then moved behind her..not letting his other hand off her... as he moved behind...his hand moved to her front...caressing her below the neck between her shoulders...he moved her hair to one side...he first licked her earlobe... his hand caressed her soft hair..n then wandered through it to find her other ear...he took off her other ear ring...but he stopped...
K: "Main thik hoon...jab tak app hoon..mujhe kuch nehi hoga...ajj bus mujhe app appna banalo..."
He just looked at her...he knew ...how she hungry 4 his love..today he had to fulfilled that...he untied the dori of her kurti and unzipped the kurti slightly...it was enough to allow him to slide the kurti off her shoulder..n he planted a kiss on her bare shoulder..her eyes were closed...n that he saw her face wid closed eyes ..that encouraged him to continue... he started kissing her shoulder...moving up towards her neck as she tilted her head on the other side to give him access...his hands moved about on her bare neck..nape.. shoulder'n' front...while his kisses became more passionate'n urgent...breathing became shallow'n heavy..he lifted..her kurti n she lifted her hand to help him..then he removed that fully..she shied...laid down..faced her back to him...he bend down to her..cared her back..n first licked n then kissed through..she felt 1000 volt of current run through her body...he rubbed his thumb on her br* strap..n unhooked that..n then turned her to face him...n travelled his fingers on her stomach...then placed wet kisses on her navel...she moaned...she could do was cling to the bed railings to keep herself from shaking uncontrollably...n he made her sat in front of him...freed her from it...her inner...her hand crossed over her curves..felt shy...faced down...sat half nude in front of him..as he watched her nude many times..but not this way...he looked at her wid passion which seduced her...then he removed his vest...
S: "Ab main bhi...look at me..."
He placed her hand on his bare boby...
S: "Feel me..."
She looked at him..then slowly moved her hand on his body..feels his each n every muscles...after some time she stated kissing him...on his abs...his belly..when he felt...she going down...pulled her up to him..she just couldn't believed that what she done...what not...she hugged him tightly...his hands now caressed ever so softly her bare back below the nape...through her bare spine...seduce her more...she moaned..he slowly removed her hand...n admired them for a minute...she blushed in embarrassment...n he planted a passionate kiss on her lips to help her forget her embarrassment...his lips left hers...her pink lips became red wid his demand in passion...he noticed some marks on her body...but they were faded..as they were old but these deep to marks were still there...that remember him...what's she going through...then he cupped the carves in his palms..n begin to feel them...she shivered with his touch..curled her teos..she arched backward giving him more room to access... he bend forward ..n kissed them one after the other...he rubbed n pressed them..then...he planted kisses from her chin...on her jaw line...n went towards her earlobe..n...bit it..but didn't give her any marks..as he didn't want to hurt her.."ummm" she moaned...rubbed her lips with his thumbs...n trace it till her upper chest..he travel his fingers from her lips to her throat...n stop in her cleavage...rubbed her cleavage through his fingers and made circle on it...he pulled..played..licked..sucked...bit..it... making her dark pink ni**les to erect...she shuddered in his touch... n clutch the bed sheet tight...wid one hand...n other hand..clutch his hair... pressing him to her...sucked strongly at her curve...n...her moans became whimpers...he bend down n removed her salower among wid his pants...he started exploring her entire body with his hands and mouth..not leaving any part of her body untouched.. he tried so gentle with every touch of his'like he was scared of hurting her'.but he did not realize how rough he was being...discovered tastes of her body...he wanted to remove all the memories of her past..all the pain she going through...ripped them apart...n also last cotton they had...he moved all away...she was confused about how to react...so she decided to trust him...n unknowingly she stared react wid his touch...his hand moving her thighs apart...opening her legs to him...she obeyed the demanding touch...he place her one leg on his shoulder...which gave him full view of her feminity...she just closed her eyes...when his fingers finally touched her between her legs...playing wid his finger tips all around her softly seducing her..she gasped...made her breathing quick..n shallow...arching for him...she felt..she was all wet...she moaned when she could no longer take it..n her moans made it impossible for him to wait for even a second longer...rested her leg on bed..n he entered her wid a force... she could not deal with his roughness...her fingers dug into his biceps..let out a slight cry...immediately bit her lips...hoped that he had not noticed...but he had...suddenly brought him back to his senses...he gently withdrew from her worried that he had hurt her...she opened her eyes when she felt the sudden loss and looking at his worried eyes...
S: "Tumhe dard ho raha hai...tum thik to hoo na..."
He patted her cheeck...n caresed it... she said with all the love she possessed...
K: "Hmm...App mujhe kabhi bhi chot nehi de sakte hai...mujhe pata hai...app mujhse kitna pyar karte...main thik hoon...appke pyar ne aur jayda thik kar diya hai...plzz...appne appko mat rokiye..."
S: "Main bohot heavy hoon na...tumhare liye..."
K: "Nehi to...woh bus...woh do saal ke baad..."
Tear agin came out from her eyes...he understand why...he kissed it...
S: "Ussko bhool jao...mujhe pata hai..bohot muskil hai...par main appne pyar se ussko tumhare zindegi se mita dungi..yea mera wada hai..."
K: "Mujhe pata hai.main bhi wada karti un sab baat ko main bhi ab hum dodno ki bich me nehi ane dungi..."
she pulling him along with her...he slowly entered her again..making sure.. also not wanting to hurt her at all...tears escaped her eyes...but he kissed them away..but every passing second he increased the pressure..she began to breath faster as he licked her collarbone n kissed her... continued thrust deep inside...she could feel her body heating up...n trembling beneath his manly force...she never imaged making love to him would feel so good...soon he started pounding into her...he set up an unimaginable rhythm...n she slowly picked up on it..she hold him with her hands...n her heels dug into his back...pulling him closer...fulfilling each others desire and giving as much as they could...It was sweet...It was tender...It was passionate... It was love...only love...she let out a light scream...n grabbing his shoulder...as he forced her to climax...he smiled and kissed her before laying his head back on her chest...she sighed happily as their lay there together as one..after some time..their hands were tied around each other...legs twined...then he got up..n cover them wid a spread..
K: "Appko pata hai...uss din ki baad main khabhi bhi nehi socha tha...ki mere din me bhi ayse din ayegi...appne mujhe sare khushiyan de di hai..."
Tears welled up...but again her kissed them away...
K: "Appe mere zindegi main sare riston ki kami mita di...ek ma ki tarah...khyal rakkha...baap ke tarah sambhala..ek dost ke tarah...sath diya har mode pe...ek premi tarah...pyar kiya...ek pati ki tarah izzad dithai...aur Maan Bhai...Ranveer Bhai ki tarah bhai bhi diya.aur..aur Geet di...aur Aditi di tarah do do didi bhi...aur main appko..sirf parisani bhi hai..."
S: "Kisne kaha...mere liye to tum meri duniya hoon...Kumkum nehi to Sumit nehi..."
K: "Sumit nehi to Kumkum bhi nehi..." she gave him...a full mouth kiss... "Appne phir se ajj iss sharir ko...pabitra kar diya..."
S: "Tum to mere liye humesha hi paritra the...aur ajj bhi hoon..."
K: "Mujhe Kabhi chod ke mat jana..."
He kissed her forehead..
S: "Khabhi nehi...I Lov U ..."
K: "I Lov U..too..."
He kissed her again...n they started making love again...over that n8 they repeated it'over n over..they didn't even realize when they fell asleep still kissing passionately...
Their business now running...super fast speed...Ran n Adi's had their twines girl and boy named Navneet & Kriya...Maan n Geet had their one 3 years aged girl named Mahi ...n 2 years aged boy ,Sammaan..n Sumit n Kumkum...adopt a baby..only now 6 months she was named Ashka..but their lov their frndship still same..also their romance wid their partners...now they all happy...n happily lived together...
The End
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