My Only Mistake I'm A Female(MG) THREAD#3 - Page 25

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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 47

she noticed few man dressed in black entering the restaurant, they were walking in same pace surrounding a man, and then they stopped in front of her table, she looked at them with confusion and when the men moved, the man in center turned and signaled them, all of them stepped back and took positions on every corner and that man turned to face Geet.

The rest six men surrounding him went to far corners of the restaurant and two went near the entrance, he approached her with a smile she nodded and sighed, then he said "is my Angel sleeping?"

G: yes, Maan you are late

M: not at all, when you called I were a little far, I was deciphering we had lunch at The Taj but had to come here as you said.

G: but you reserved the table

M: yes, as soon as you called, I have to; I can't take my ladies feeling uncomfortable

G: yes if you care

M: you are starting it again

G: sorry, BTW who are these men, the two at the entrance look quite familiar

M: my bodyguards, and s for those two, the one on right is Aman, your security guard and the one on left is Prithvi, Angel's security guard

G: what? I have a security guard

M: yes

G: since when?

M: since you came to Delhi

G: you appointed

M: no, DM did, even mine are appointed by her

G: but

M: actually they are detectives her detectives, its her way of keeping herself informed about our whereabouts

G: do they have names

M; yes, the one at my right corner is Iqbal, he's been there since my birth, the one on left is Raghav, he is with me since I were 12, the one at far end on Iqba;'s side is Victor, he is with me since I went to do my MBA and the last is Rupinder, he is with me since I joined KC

G: and what they do

M: IDK, you should ask DM, as far as I know they are her detectives and tell her of my each and every movement, it was because of them that DM thought that I love Sameera

G: pardon

M: you heard me; BTW they would have told DM that we are here

G: do you ever ditch them

M: of course I do, last I ditched them when I went to HSPur

G: how did you manage?

M: I am their boss and they know I am far more intelligent then them

G: but

M: I have ordered Indian cuisine is it ok with you

G: yes

As the food arrived Iqbal stopped the waiter, and took out a spoon and one by one tasted all the dishes, Geet wondered at his gesture, then he waved the waiter to leave and Raghav came forward and served the meals. When they resumed their positions

G: do they always do this?

M: no, but when ever I visit a place for first few times they are adamant, but when I go their frequently they give up, like at my favorite coffee shop, they dare not do this.

G: I have a lot to learn about you

M: there's not much, it is just because you don't know what I am for the outside world.

As they finished their meal, Angel woke up, he looked around for something to wash his hands as he wanted to hold her, Raghav instantly came up with a hot bowl and he washed his hands, he then gave him a clean towel, Iqbal did the same for Geet. Then Maan scooped Angel in his arms and the two played.

M: Good Morning Angel

A: giggled

M: say good morning to my bachcha also (turned the baby to Geet)

A: ah' ah'

G: good morning Angel

M: Angel, had a good sleep, Papa missing you

A: tries to hold his nose

M: kisses her palm and makes her hold his nose

G: laughs

A: turns to look at her

M: bachcha don't disturb my Angel

G: how dare I?

As they were playing, Maan noticed the screen on the TV that was on the wall the news was running, he stiffened the reporter was saying "as you can see we are here at the Broadway, and as our sources say MSK is in here having lunch with his wife and daughter, no one knows who is wife is? We gadbad tv are the first ones to tell you who she is? No we will go inside and see who is this Mrs. MSK and their daughter?" the 6 men rushed and covered them, they held out their pistols, Maan indicated them to stop and called the manager

MSK: what the hell is this manager?

M: sir we are sorry, we don't know how did this'.

MSK: this is the first and the last time we are coming here, remember, you better tell me who leaked this or your restaurant will be not here tomorrow, start packing

Maan was very angry and the manager was shivering, he called the receptionist and admitted that she dropped the news, but not to the media but her friend, Maan gave them a stern look and looked at the guards

Geet by now was panicking, she did not know hat Maan was such a big name or rather say a celebrity, Maan covered her head and veiled her face, he gave the crib to her and held Angel in his arms almost hiding her in his chest, then with his free hand he encircled Geet and the 6 men covered them out of any body's sight, Nakul was told to leave the place immediately, and Maan's car was sparked n front of the entrance, when the three sat down in the car, Raghav and Victor sat in the front Jeep while Iqbal and Rupinder in the Jeep parked behind the car, Aman and Prithvi were on bikes on either sides of the car. And they left.

Geet came out of shock

G: Maan what was this?

M: nothing, that stupid receptionist leaked that I was out with my family for a lunch

G: and

M: that's why I never try new places, these media people do not let me rest in peace

G: I am sorry Maan

M: no bachcha in fact I am sorry, I ruined your lunch

G: we already finished it (and smiled)

M: mera bachcha, now one more problem waiting at KM, ready to face it

G: may be

And they laughed

hope you liked it😃 sorry no Arjun fiasco


now that Arjun is there will he also come to know about Geet's case

lets' see


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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ha...enjoyed it...all the thrill of MSK is there in this update😃...his security,his body guards,his celebrity status...wonderful description...loved it how he took care not to come in to the eyes of media even though they cornered him n Geet...continue soon...

oh n yeah nice name...Gadbad TV😆...sab gadbad kar diya...😆😆
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Edited by esha143 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
actually i like it when he calls her bacha...
well their first fight and they didnt even talk abt it...
geet getting to know the other maan whom she never met...
pl cont soon shruti...cant wait for next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was really Interesting ...awesome update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update dear!! continue sooon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
no words speechless
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Posted: 13 years ago
i was thinking if media would broadcast geets photo as MSKs wife and brij would see that then what would b happened???????? the bodyguard explanation was too good..that means in every special turn over of maans life dadima appoints a bodyguard for him...when he will get married will then he get number 5 bodyguard?????????????
Edited by paponecon - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
u dint pm me the earlier part...
pls pm me..
luvd both the parts...
liked maan's protectivenes...and maan toh geet manane ke pehle hi maan gaya..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
loved it
loved maaneet moments
loved maaneet angel moments
so beautiful
geet slowly slowly come to know about MSK.
don't know y m liking the reporter when he addressed maaneet and angel as husband .
but they done it wrong to maaneet. every one needs their privacy
I just wonder y people doing that
now they heading towards KM
let's see what will be store for them
continue soon

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