Maaneet SS ~ Teri Yaaden ~ PT 14 PG 95 - Page 32

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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 9

Just then dadimaa came' Geet aap yahan.. kya hua aapko.. maan.. kya hua inhe..
Kuch nahi dadimaa wo bas geet gir gayi..
dadimaa- par kaise..
Maan controlled his laughter' dadimaa woh aap janna nahi chahengi..
Geet looked at him angrily.. still unsure of whatever just happened.

Dadimaa sat next to geet & asked maan to call dr' dadimaa mai bilkul theek hun.. aap itna tension kyun le rahe ho..
Dadimaa- Par bete..
Dadimaa agar woh keh rahi hai ki woh theek hai tho maan jayiye na.. aur waise bhi dr ki kya zarurat hai.. he smirked.. aap hatiye mai medicine laga dun..
Geet gave another angry look to him.. he smiled inwardly
Dadimaa understood that he wanted to be with her' Theek hai bete.. jaisi aapki marzi

After dadimaa left geet looked at him angrily. She wondered how to address him at the first place.. she hardly knew him.. his name was the only thing she knew abt him..
Or did she knew everything.. yah.. what not did she knew abt him.. just by looking into his eyes she could read his heart. She knew woh bahut gussa karte honge because that day when he saw me, what not did he said to me.. but haan woh dil ke bahut hi sache hain.. how he said sorry to me.. & maybe he was feeling really guilty tabhi tho when he was looking at me from behind the pillar.. jaise hi dekha that I saw him woh wahan se bhag gaye.. But mai unhe bulayun kya.. & woh jaise mujhse baatein kar rahe the aisa laga jaise I knew him.. no no.. how could that be.. I barely know abt him.. bas itna pata hai that he is dadimaa's grandson.. & his name is maan.. Maan.. that sent shivers down her spine.. this was the effect of his bare name on her..

She looked into his eyes.. she didn't knew why but she could relate him to herself. She kept gaping at him.. even she didn't knew for how long. He was enjoying this. He just didn't let her escape from his gaze. She was definately going mad for this person. First she wants to just have a glimpse of him & now she wants to lock him in her gaze.
Maan started teasing her' Geet agar tum mujhe aise dekhogi tho mai najane kya kar dunga..
She suddenly realized she had to be angry on him.. pehle tho mujhe zabardasti yahan le aaye aur phir dadimaa ke samne.. chi chi babaji..

He pulled her by her waist to him. she fell on him with a jerk making him roll on the bed twice such that now he was on top of her. His lips were inches away from hers.



She shivered tremendously' maan.. yeh aap kya
He closed her mouth with his hands' Geet.. itni jaldi bhul gayin na mujhe tum..
She looked at him confused.. bhul gayi matlab.. she wondered.. she tried to give voice to her thoughts but she just couldn't speak.. she couldn't just say anything..
Maan realized what he was doing & immediately left her. He pushed her hair back. She looked at him still confused.
He came near her & softly caressed her feet & then put the medicine. She immediately pulled back, twisted her lips & turned her back to him & murmured.. dadimaa ke samne tho pata nahi kya kya keh rahe the.. aur ab uff
He shook his head.. kar diya na naraz apni jaan ko.. ab manana padega..
He made her face him.. she still maintained an angry look
Jaa.. nahi nahi I can't call her jaan.. abhi tho use mai yaad hi nahi.. she doesn't even know what she feels for me.. aise me jaan bolunga tho tho pakkaa naraz ho jayegi..
Geet.. I'm sorry wo tho mai dadimaa ke samne mazak kar raha tha..
Geet looked at him in awe' how come he knew that mai kyun naraz hun.. babaji yeh sach me mujhe pagal kar denge.. she wondered..

He applied the medicine on her ankle. She pulled back but he held her tightly' geet plz dard hoga.. medicine lagva lo.. plz
The way he looked at her.. his eyes.. that plea in his eyes was making her loose herself. She just wanted to run away from there. She winced in pain while he applied the medicine. He caressed her foot' bahut dard ho raha hai..
She nodded her head
Geet apni aakhen band karo..
She did as he said. She closed her eyes tightly & held on to his shirt dugging her nails into his shoulder while he applied the medicine. She had still not opened her eyes. Maan looked at her in awe.. pyaar tho tumhe mujhse hai geet.. aur ab mai tumhe is baat ka ehsaas dilwakar hi rahunga.. he wondered.



Geet aankhen khol lo.. maine medicine laga di..
She immediately opened her eyes to find herself holding on to his shirt. She immediately pulled back' woh.. I'm sorry..
Geet ab tumhe ghar nahi jana kya..
Ji woh..
Chalo.. mai tumhe drop kardeta hun..
Par aap kaise.. agar dad ko pata chala ki aap mujhe drop karne aaye tho woh mujh par gussa karenge.. mai khud chali jayungi.. plz aap nahi
Geet.. woh gussa nahi karenge.. spl jab mai tumhe drop karne ja raha hun..
She looked at him confused.. par aisa kyun..
Geet.. tum apna gk quiz band karo.. aur chalo ab

She got down from the bed & tried walking.. but a single step was also like million of steps. She just couldn't & sat on the bed again out of pain. He inched closer to her..
Yeh aap kya..
He looked at her.. why do u worry so much.. mai bas tumhe car tak le jane ke liye utha raha hun
He carried her in his lap.. she looked at him in awe..

Dadimaa asked geet whether she was ok now.. but geet was continuously gaping at maan.. she didn't even heard a word let alone answering to dadimaa
Maan smiled inwardly.. which got unnoticed by geet..
He made her sit in the car. It was a pure silent drive. All the while she kept staring at him like a fool. maan finally broke the silence when they reached the handa haveli' Geet ab mujhe ghurna band karo.. ham pahuch gaye hain.. he smirked while she felt really embarressed.. but a slight blush formed on her face which did not went unnoticed by him.. he smiled inwardly.

Maan carried geet inside in his lap. Geet felt really conscious. For once Mohinder got angry seeing his daughter like this but just another sec when he saw it was maan.. he was the most happiest person!
But then he became conscious' Geet bete kya hua tujhe..
Bade papa.. woh geet.. gir gayi thi..
Geet looked at him feeling confused & wondered why was maan calling her dad bade papa.. pehle he said ki dad gussa nahi karenge.. & now bade papa.. I'm sure I'm missing out something very big.. mujhe dad se baat karni padegi..
She was snapped out of her thoughts listning to her mamma' Geet bete tu theek hai na.. zyada zor se tho nahi lagi na..
Ji mamma I'm ok now.. aur maan ne medicine bhi laga di..
Rano sighed in relief' Bete pakka naa
Haan mamma.. pakka
Mohinder- Maan tum ek kaam karo geet ko uske room me lejayo..
Ji bade papa

He carried her to her room & made her lie on the bed. When he was abt to go.. she called him
Maan.. woh.. woh.. mujhe kuch puchna tha..
Haan geet bolo..
Woh.. aapne dad ko bade papa kyun bulaya..
He smirked.. kyunki woh mere bade papa hain..
He left her alone making her really confused.. woh mere bade papa hain.. iska kya matlab hua.. dad ne tho aisa kabhi nahi bola.. aur agar dad maan ke bade papa hain tho maan mera bhai... chi chi chi.. par geet tujhe kya.. tu uske bare me kyun soch rahi hai.. uff.. She looked up.. babaji.. yeh maan tho mujhe aur bhi confuse kare jaa rahe hain.. I'll have to talk to dad.. varna mai tho aise pagal ho jayungi..

PRECAP
Maan & Mohinder.. serious wala talk..

Ok guys.. this was really a long update.. haina..
So I want lots of comments & likes this time..
So plz give me my comments & likes..
Thanks for all the love & support
Love u all..
Mahima

Edited by mahimak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb dear
so soon she ll know who is maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!!!
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update continue soon dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u so much 4 another lovly update... Ya it is quite long one...

Oh God what hell geet is thinking abt her jaan... Bhai ... Chi chi chi chi...
But i also loved this confussed geet and this naughty maan...

Plz reveal the truth very soon not only 4 us bt also 4 geet as well...

The concept of this story is so gud bt if u want 2 increase ur like then u have 2 update quite long parts almost daily... Then i am sure the repose will much more positive...😉😊

Anywayz thanks 4 pm😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update.
geet gaping at maan...congused.lol
do continue
chao
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update. I just loved it. The way geet was gaping at maan oh god its fanfastic. Realy eager to know about the serious talk of maan n mohindra. Update soon n love u
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
hope she comes to know abt maan soon...
continue soon...:)

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