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Posted: 14 years ago
Afterall, she is married to a human, not an angel.

So true dear
If every one understand this thing so no any problem left
I really loved the Update .Finally they start understanding each
End was quite mysterious
Thanks For Pm
cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

i just read last 3 parts n they were superb...

but very curious to knw abt the fact...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Best update so far 👏 this update had a lot of maturity involved from nupur's side😃 it's nice that she finally understands that it takes time for husband and wife to know one another in and out and that no relationship starts off perfect it gets perfect with time👍🏼 that without a doubt is the best message you've given through your FF's.😃The end has made me super curious and confused😛 wonder what he found out😕
really badly waiting for the next part and I know you will but update soon😆 thanks for the pm🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fabulous update Kinzu.
loved it.
both Mayank & Nupur are getting the hang of being married.
nice to see that.
also nice to see Nupur demanding the reson for Mayank's tension.
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Posted: 14 years ago
really nice kinzu...brilliant part...
this story is moving forward very welll...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update :)
amazingly written like always
wat made mayu stnned i to want to know plz updtae soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u guys ..
and ria sweet heart!! ,. i promise to write the romance you want ahead in the story! .. love uu!!

Chapter # 14:

Gunjan was going through her a novel which she had found during cleaning her cupboard, and a complete freak of novels, just like her best friend; she started reading it as soon as she was done with the cleaning.

She really liked the hero and so it increased her curiosity and she kept on reading. Samrat was on an off after an complicated By-Pass surgery so he was sleeping, while his wife was in the same room and she was the first sight he got after opening his eyes and a smile crept his lips.

He started observing her. She was looking beautiful in her pink and white shalwar suit, her duppatta was lingering over her shoulder, and her hair was carelessly bound in a clip.

He noticed the expressions as she read on, she smiled, blushed, she also got sad, but all of a sudden her eyes went wide and curious samrat started to observe more keenly.

She read on, and closed her eyes and placed her book away, with her face having a disgusted expression.

"kiya hua?", samrat had to ask and alarmed gunjan opened her eyes, "kkkuch nahi", she fumbled and got up, "ap uth gaye , main breakfast le k ati hon"

She rushed out of the room and samrat got up and opened the book.

**

"Haad ho gayi!, aisi book merey pass ayi kasiey!!, ye tu had ho gayi, aur main wo ander chor ayi hon, agr samrat ne parh li tu, I'll just throw it away!!", she was mumbling when was alarmed by someone's presence.

"ap kitchen main kyun aye?", she asked and samrat moved close and smirked, "bus kehne aya tha you have a great choice of books", he was pretending to read the novel when gunjan snatched it from his hands, "ap ne kyun parhi ye book?, ye meri hai na!", she tried being strict and samrat pulled her close, "mujhe tu pata nahi hai k meri wife aisey adult novels parthti hai", he winked and gunajn turned all red, "main nahi parthi, pata nahi ye koi puraani book hai",she said slowly,

" tu mtlb pehley parthi thi?", he winked again and gunjan huffed, "please haan!, main ne bus do lines parhin hain us part ki and I was so disgusted aur main ne band kar diya!

"kis part ki?", he inhaled her fragrance and gunjan closed her eyes, "ap ko mujh se ziyada pata hoga, ap ne pora parhi liya hoga wo part .. haina?", she raised her eyes and samrat giggled, "wo tu hai!, main ne tu pora parh liya, tum bhi parh lo .. then we can do it that way ,,.

'SAMRAT!!", she nearly gasped and giggling samrat hugged her , "tum itni cute kyun ho gunjan", he kissed her head and gunjan cuddled close.

They both were enjoying the hug and samrat was about to make it more intimate when gunjan's call phone rang

"nupur ho gi", she tried moving away but samrat snuggled, "koi baat nahi, my sweet saali can wait today', he winked and gunjan opened her eyes, "g nahi, it's a text msg, I need to see it", she extended her arm and held the cell phone while samrat was still snuggling to her.

"hey gunjaan!! Just incase jiju isn't hugging you tu meri taraf se *tiiight hugs* . kaisi ho? .. it's been so long we talked on texts pata hai .. SIGH! .. I miss our conversations which used to go the whole day .. but anyways .. today I am in a mood of full texting, tumhare jiju so rahe hain, and he is most probably gonna wake up late!! .. so tell me meri jaan kiya kar rahi hai?

A smile crept gunjan's face and she moved away from samrat, "samrat ap ..

"okay fine .. but I need a compensation when ur texts finish", he winked and left and gunjan blushed but got back to replying nupur.

**

It was after an hour that gunjan returned in the room and samrat was busy in news, she came by his side and cuddled close to her, "kia baat hai?", he pulled her close and gunjan cuddled more, "I am very happy!, ap ko pata tu hai na nupur ko kiya fazool insecurities hain apne complexion k bare main", she started speaking and samrat switched off the TV, this was one issue where gunjan was super sensitive and couldn't tolerate any negligence.

"haan tu?", he asked

"haan tu jab se us ki shaadi hui hai, she has stopped cribbing about it, I never feel that she is sad anymore, today again she was very happy, I think she is moving on from her fear, I am sooo happy", she said in a weak voice and samrat hugged her tight.

"mayank jiju is just perfect!, he has erased that fear, us k zehan ab fazool batien nikal gayi hain"

**

"tumhare zehan kiya chal raha hai?",

Mayank asked as he found nupur staring blankly at a corner, "kuch nahi", she smiled immediately, and holding the shopping bag tight in her hands she went inside the room.

It was a Sunday so mayank was at home, and according to him, everything was perfect since morning, and she even talked to gunjan so was extra ecstatic, but it was since the past 15 minutes that he was sensing something amiss, and it was since she went to see Pooja bhabhi just now and returned in 5 minutes and on her return she was quiet.

"pooja bhabhi kyun bula rahin thi"?, he followed her in the room and she was placing the bag in the cupboard.

"kuch nahi, bus aisey hi, bhabhi kal shopping pe gayin thi tu she wanted to show me things",she tried to reply casually.

"tu 5 minute main sari shopping dekh ayi ho?', he asked moving towards her , making it difficult for nupur to answer, "nahi maine kaha main lunch bana lon, phir dekh lon gi", she said moving towards the door when she was pulled back and pinned against the cupboard.

Nnupur was stunned as mayank moved close and looked directly in her eyes, "now if we are done with playing the excuse game, how about we move on to truth"?, he caressed her cheek and nupur felt her eyes getting moist, but she had to control tears.

"I am not making excuses .. sach main kuch nahi hai,", she tried to smile but the love filled caress of his thumb on her cheek made her more vulnerable and finally tears flowed out of her eyes,

":hmmm,, kuch nahi hai is liye anknon se itney lambe lambe ansso gir rahe hain", he asked wiping them and nupur closed her eyes to let the remaining of them to flow too.

"pooja bhabhi bought me a gift", she started speaking slowly and mayank pulled her more close, "tu is liye khushi main ro rahi ho?', mayank asked seriously and nupur raised her eyes and hit him on the shoulder, "very funny!!", she said in a teary voice and mayank pulled her more close, "okay sorry!, continue", he giggled, wiping her tears.

She brought a sari, a white sari and she asked me to wear it on her anniversary function", she said slowly and mayank was intently listening, as till now he couldn't conclude anything from her statements which could lead to such crying.

"per main white aur aisey light colors nahi pehnti, tu main .."

"tu tum iss liye itna ro rahi ho?", he was amazed and nupur raised her eyes, "haan wo, un ko bura lag jaye ga ..",she said slowly , breathing sigh of relief that she was successful in diverting the talk.

"oho nupur, if u don't wear light colors tu ik din tu phen sakti ho, pooja bhabhi is such darling aur tum se kitna pyaar karti hain, you can wear it for her", he smiled and nupur got more scared, "per mujhe psnd nahi hain light colors" she insisted and mayank frowned, "tu bhabhi ne tumhain colors psnd karne k liye nahi kaha, she just brought you a gift, ik din tu phen sakti ho na!', his tone got strict and nupur's tears flowed with gushing speed,

"wo baat nahi, mian bus ..

"kiya bus nupur?", he softened his tone, "aur white tu mujhe bhi bht pasnd hai, you can wear it one day, please", he opened his eyes wide and nupur moved away, "I don't want to wear white and that is it!", she moved out of his grip and mayank was left stunned, "ruku nupur!", he said with authority and nupur stopped on the door of the room. She heard footfalls and wiped her tears vigorously,

"I am not getting the point, itna zid karne wali kiya baat hai, and you are not like this, I know that, tu is baat pe itna stubborn ho rahi ho?, he asked seriously looking in her eyes and nupur's patience finished, "ap ko kyun samjh nahi a raha .. I don't want to wear white", she finally said it in anguish and the frowns on mayank's forehead got deeper.

She almost stepped out of the room when she was again pulled back and this time she was pinned against the door and mayank just stared in her eyes. His eyes were searching and sacred nupur lowered them, "I need to make lunch, please mujhe ..

"it's fear .."

He said slowly and nupur raised her eyes and her lips started trembling with that expression in his eyes. "You fear wearing white!, you fear that you'll not look good!, right"?, he asked in low but yet stiff voice and tears flowed down her eyes.

She wanted to speak, wanted to say, but still always wanting to bury this fact in her heart, she was amazed at how did he come to know how did..

"damnit nupur you are complexed about your skin color!", this time his voice was amazed and shocked and nupur closed her eyes. She had never even said this all to herself in such clear words. She felt like a wave of hot burning air hit her face ' It really did hurt.

"Mujh pe white aur sare light colors ache nahi lagte hain, because ..

"because you are not fair right?", he completed her sentence, with tone now carrying a bit of bitterness and it cut her heart. Too hurt to be polite, she nodded her head with all the sternness.

"and that is why you try to hide yourself in all dark colors, they are not your favorites, you try to find solace right, that is what u mean when u say they can absorb!!", he scowled and again getting amazed at his judgemnet, she just nodded,

"I don't believe this nupur!!, you hate your skin?", he left her wrists and nupur breathed deep and just stood there like a statue, why did he have to read my eyes!. I dread the day when I wished this !

"OH MY GOD!, you have left me stunned to react nupur, absolutely stunned, I don't know what to say .. I don't believe I have married a racist!", he closed his eyes as if in disgust and nupur felt earth shrinking beneath her feet.

"racist ..", she barely uttered the word and mayank nodded, "yes Nupur, racist!!, you are a racist!"

"main ne kia kiya hai ..",she was speaking in broken words and mayank felt his anger rising even more, "kia kiya hai?, you think yourself inferior just on the basis of ur skin color , and that is racism, and ofcourse, every one you see dark around you according to you is inferior right?, you think people with fair skin have some sort of extra blessings upon them and you look upto them, right?", he was fuming in anger and nupur had no answer. He was right.

"mera kiya qasoor hai, It's from God ,..

"exactly!, it from God, why the hell do you think you are inferior!"

"you won't understand, no one does",s he said in a teary voice and was about to go out when mayank pulled her back, "don't you dare try to gain sympathy!, what do you mean that I won't understand?, what IS there to understand?, absolutely nothing, you are just an ungrateful person and that is it!", he said and tears flowed down her eyes even more.

"you don't value any blessings you have, all you do is just crib about your skin!! Now I realize why is gunjan so sensitive about you, poor girl has tolerate all this non sense thinking of yours'!!", he left her with a jerk and nupur closed her eyes tight.

"I thought I married an educated, broad minded and modern girl, but I never knew your mentality is worse than illiterate people!", he was speaking with a disappointed tone and nupur opened her eyes ,

"trust me nupur, If I would have known that you think like this, I would have never married you!", he stormed out of the room, shutting the door behind and nupur felt everything spinning around her.

Chapter 15 - Page 72

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i wont lie, i had a different coment for this update...the sajan and gunur scenes made me smile and i guess u knw why but the end made me lose all my words..

i have tears in my eyes, mostly bcz once i thought about the same thing as mayank did... about Nupur not realising but being a racist and i realisd this when ever i remember a project me and my besties worked on... u may rememebr it too.. about racial issues...

but well i wont ever say those words bcz for me its easy to pamper and remove those fears, thn mking thm visible in such stark words and hurting other one... specially when unlike Mayank i feared of losing soemone whom i love beyond everything else! <3

but anyways a superb update! i m waiting for teh next part eagerly.. as Gunjan said i wish this time these fears will indeed be eliminated for eever!! once and for all!!!

i cant call this update beautiufl... but well well writn and amazing!! waiting for teh next part eagerly!!! <3

p.s. love u princess! <3
Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
resss😳 *EDITED*
Oh god..yeh kya ho gaya???
After reading this update...the frst thought that came to my mind is "Is he like Mad??"...true, his words, each n every word he was saying was correct, the intention was ok..but there is a polite n a normal way to say each and everything...u cant get Impulsive n all...
he read her fear, but cudnt read her dispair n nervousness...I am glad he understood her fear , her insecurity but he needed to b polite! yet again he proved to b an insensitive fellow...
i dont say he was wrong but hes mad! he hasnt understood her ...Cant he see she is so sensitive..and control his anger n temper..I feel bad for Nupur, but may be THIS makes her realise she is no less than anyone...He needs to Love her n take out her fear n not SHOUT on her!!
waiting how u shape up the story ahead...I wont lie..u made me teary..But Nupur is NOT a RACIST...
really want M to apologise..not for his words, for his rude behaviour...there always a certain manner to say things n he should understand that...its high time...
You write amazingly awesome Angel...reading nupur's helplessness in front of Mayank's words...it really pricked me...hats off to you..You are Mindblowing!!
Take care...🤗
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gosh SG were sooo cute! <333
Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago
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thoroughly shocked as well numb after reading the update...everything should and must hv some limit,and that applies 4 temper as well..i m out n out disgusted with mayank's insensivity and callousness...if he really would hv loved nupur dearly,then atleast 4 heaven's sake he should hv been there right beside her whenever she needed him the most as an emotional support..by far we hv noticed enough understanding 4m nupur's side..but what about mayank?conjugal relationship is based on mutual understanding,and mayank till now didnt even care to take a step forward to understand nupur's innerself...but all he has, just extreme expectations 4m nupur in each n every aspect... he should hv atleast understood the fact that this goddamn insecurity hasnt been injected by nupur herself..its the hypocrite society and its features that imposed it on nupur forcibly...doesnt he hv a minimum heart to feel all that?his intention was good,but the words he mouthed, in order to wash away nupur's fears r extremely offensive and insulting...and instead he ended up making things worse 4 nupur...

to b very honest, i wouldnt hv forgiven mayank or got scared of his anger if those words were 4 me..instead its time she should b a little more steady and stiff rather than fearing his anger and crying,if mayank at all has minimum sensibility and he hasnt lost it completely, he atleast should b extremely guilty 4 his behaviour...and should...i repeat 'should' apologize to nupur 4 his ill manners...
Edited by palz_ArTi4ever - 14 years ago

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