Oh my... i dreamed it once. and now I wish...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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On 6th june 2010.. i wrote a janmashtami episode... my first FF...today, i saw a part of it...

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The flute scene from Janmashtami part...
Swamiji: I have a request, even though it is not announced earlier, I request Dev Raj Purohith to play any Bhajan with this flute' as your daadi told us you play it very well..

Dev looked at Daadi and saw her teasing smile'... Radhika was so excited to hear the request.. she looked at him proudly... Dev came up and took the flute from the Swamiji, and took his blessing'

Dev held the flute in his hand, did the pranam in front of the Lord, bowed imagining Goddess Saraswathy in front of him and slowly, looked at Daadi once and then slowly brought the flute near to his lips' ...the sound of music just started filling the air' Radhika just went in trance, .

http://www.youtube.com/watch#!v=rKTpKq7bh_U&feature=related

she started circling' the music was getting into her nerve, she started singing along with the flute' Dev, who got immersed in his role, opened his eyes as he heard her voice, Radhika forgot the world'...

Dev felt so happy that he went strong on his side, made Radh to circle faster, she went arond him with a devine smile on her face with the most beautiful voice... and finally she fell in his arm' ...
she closed her eyes tight, As she felt the circling strength around her waist, supporting her, She slowly opened her eyes, met his loving happy eyes' ... they forgot the world' ...
but then suddenly the applause of the audience brought them back to reality'. Dev helped her to balance on her feet, but made her to stand close to him, by holding onto her shoulder'''

Swamiji came upon the stage: Bhakth janom... What else we can request from this beautiful couple. Kanha basuri bejaye aur Radha na nache'.. aise kaise ho saktha hei.. esmei en donom ke bhakthi aur prem sammalith huva hei' bilkul Kanha aur Radha jaise' Kanha ne he donom ko milaya hei... Both came and took his blessing and went to the audience side, to meet Daadi, DM, Vaisali,Sathriji and Devki.. they all hugged them.. their eyes felt wet , so did many from the audience' ..

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wish once she circled and fell in his arms...
Devika.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Your FF scene was beautiful---I can still visualize that scene.
The scene today was also well done---Dev and his basuri, drawing his Radha with the melody from his heart;
Radhika is drawn to the bansuri ki dhun...unable to hold herself back...
Will we see her dancing?...probably not in this coming episode..but there is power in imagination...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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di yesterday when i watched the episode i got ur ff in my mind.

kaash cv's aapka ff padey aur cb2 ko aise hi bane

the most ever dreamy ff of mine ur first ff dreamgirl1

jisko padkar humesha main emotional hoti hun. don't know why but i am attatched a lot to ur first ff which i can never forget
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yes.i remember that scene,u wrote is so well that it kept engraved in my mind...i too wish she would have embraced him
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey di what u wished for,u are making us thirsty and i think we should not expect much from cvs,only to accept what they give us.bcoz they very well know to cut out radev scenes.

and part was really greatfull.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congratulations, Devika is great, your literary creation! I like very much how Radhika was attracted by the sound of whistle, Dev skill with which he played and managed to bring with him Radhika, immense happiness when he saw Radhika's bright smile and kind face, the way that fell into Dev's arms , feeling breathless, so much emotion overwhelming.

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