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Part7
Almost one mouth...after...her pregnant ship was in only 3 months...but she had lots' mood swing...because of her age...but he did not complain...he always wid her...that day he had to go his construction site...but before went, he gave her a full box of chocolate n a rose...she made a baby face...scenes their close she didn't like he went anywhere leaving her...he understood it...
S: " Plz...ayse mat karo to main jaunga kyse...sunu kam to karna padega na...ajj mujhe thoda late ho jayega...khalena..."
K: "________________"
S: " Thik baba...jaldi ane ki koshish jaroor karunga...ok...a smile plz..."
n he pulled her cheeks... as she smiled cutely...before left he kissed on her nose tip...
S: " Appna khayal rakhna..."
At night...10:00 pm ...
"Abhi tak aye nehi...ayenge to main baat bhi nehi karungi dekhna...par sayad unhe bohot kam hoga ...tu h u tere itne khayal rakhte hai..." She talked herself...n thought about some indicident...
S: "Chalo ajj main tumhara baal bana deta hoon"
He started comb her hair...
S: "Chi...yea kitna stechy..hai ...kitne dino se sampoo nehi kiya tum ne..ine labbe aur kubsusuat hair hai...bilkul bhi khayal nehi rashte tum..chalo...main kar deta hoon..."
He make her sat on bath tub...n started wash her hair...n teached her about to use of the elements of bathroom...
S: " Ab woh bala..knob turn karo to hand shower start hoga...chalo karke dikhao...iss tumraha baal bhi tum..thik se dho paoge..."
K: "JI"
She tuned the knob...but forgot t turn shower's head to her hair...it faced him..when...it was started..water splashed his face...n he was all wet...she got frighten...that he sure scold her...but...just smiled..n said...
S: "It's ok...ab phir se thik se karo..."
That day she learned abt how to use bathroom necessaries...like hand shower...shower gel...condisaner...n many things...
"Par...main bhi unka help karne koushihs to karti hoon na..."
She thought abt...
One day she just sat on bed... when he in bathroom...as the door opened she saw that he tried to apply some white things on his face...she came near to him...
K: "Main kar doon..."
S: "Kar paougi...??"
K: "Try karti hoon...but yea hai kya??aur isse karte kya hai..??"
S: "Isse fome kahte hai..aur isko laga ke sheave karte hai...lo ab lagao.."
She pushed the bottom of bottle...then...her face covered wid white fome...he just stared laughing..
S: "Tum janti hoon...tum na ab bilkul..Santa jayse dikh raha hoon...Lady Santa"
She made a baby face..he cleared her face..n teach her how to pushed it...n placed some fore in her lil hand...
S: "Ab laga doon..."
But this time also she applied fome...all over his face..except that needed area...n he also again applied that on her face..they sated play wid it...
"Woh Kabhi mujhe nehi dante...aur nahi mujhe akela chod ke jate hai...par unka kam bhi jaroori hai na...nehi nehi main aysa nehi karugi...pata nehi din khana khyae yea nehi...par mujhe to bana bhi nehi ata...kal se na main metti chacha se sikh lungi...haan..."She talked herself...n though about him...
At that time door bell rang...
K: " Metthi Chacha...sayad woh aye hai..."
MC: " Haan...bachha..main dekhta hoon..."
Mitthe cahcha just shocked to watch that view...MR.BRIJBHUSAN WADHWA...just in front of him...
MW: "Meri chiz ...kaha hai..."
K: " Methi chacha...kon..."
She couldn't complete the sentence...her heart stopped beating...
MW: " To idhar hi hoon...mere bachhe ki honewali ma...bap ki bhi khush kar do abb"
He almost dragged her into his room...n here mithhi chacha...could not anything ...just immediately called Sumit...
S: "Hello...Sumit here..."
MC: "Sumit beta...bade sab...bachhe ko..."
His voice was shacking in fear what he done now wid her...he understood his word...MC always called her as bachha...
S: " Main..main abhi araha hoon chacha...abhi..."
He was now in fear...he wanted to reach home at that time..he started his car wid top most speed..his site 3 hours from his house..but he reached there almost in less the 1 hour...he anyhow parked his car ...n rushed towards door...
S: " Methhi chacha...kumkum..."
MC: " Room me..."
He rushed to the room...but rooms view made his scenes blocked...he stood there almost scenes less...she laid on floor...her head only supported the bed edge...she had no scenes...also without any single thing...which covered her body...he went into the room n grabbed the spread...covered her... took her in his arms...but she murmured " Mujhe chod don...mere sath ayse mat kariya...mujhe chod do..."...but he cared her back...n slowly patted..."Main hoon...main tumhara sumit...akhey kholo...main hoon..dekhona..."but she still uneasy...he tried to calm her...after some time she collapsed...he placed her on bad..looked floor her dress were on floor...but no one was able to use...he again carried her to their room...n laid her on bad...opened her cupboard n took her nightdress...n changed her into that..after that he called doctor...
After 30 minutes doctor came...Methi chacha bout her that room...he sat on floor...but his head placed on her feet...
D: "Son..app thoder ke liye bahar jagenge..."
He nodded...n...went out of the room...before went he took a glance of her...he just sat on the floor just near of the room's door..methi chacha...came near to him...n tried to console him...but he just looked blank... n after check her...
D: "I thought she improved her health for ur care in this one month...in her last repost said that...but today...this is horrible...how Mr. Wadhwa do this??"
He just mum...looked at her face...which was again pale...he could not able to watch her like that...his eyes now filled wid tears...
D: " I know..u r not responsible dear...but all this improvement..only happened for ur care...but she is also now not able to tolerate this...i don't think she must be able to walk...take care her son...main appko medicine aur usska diet ki list bana deta hoon...iss baar pahle se jayada care karna padega...ok son..."
He nodded...after doctor's check up...he thought... "Mujhe kuch bhi karke Kumkum ko dad se dor rakhna padega..pata nehi kab ghar ajaye...kuch to soch Sumit..." ...he immediately called Maan ..n Ranveer...they talked long...
R: " Thik hai...hum appne bahen aur tere liye yea jaroor karenge..."
M: " Dekh yaar...yea plan thik hai..main kal appne frnd ke sath baat karke yea karta hoon.tu aat ko thik time pe nikal jana..."
S: " OK..."
R: "Par hum milenge kaha...???"
M: " Haan...yea to..."
S: "Yaar...humare adde pe...un dono ko hi sath lelena..."
Later at n8 almost 1 am...
MW: " Use mere pass bejhdo Son..."
S: " Nehi ajj main usske sath rahunga..."
MW: " Agaya beta line pe..bada satasavetra banke gumta tha...ajj issko dekhke sare phoor ho gaya..."
He just looked him..
MW: "Thik hai...kal bej dena...aur sun kal main raat ko usse lunga...tum din bhar enjoy kar...hehe"
He just couldn't believed that his dad...talk this rubbish..how could he think like that...shame on him... "Ajj to kuch na kuch karna hi hoga...pani sar ki upar se ja cuki hai..." he thought that...he went his room...went to bed where she laid...he touched her...felt she still shivering..he took her in his arms again...to comfort her... "Mu...mujhe ch...chod do...pl..plzz" ...she still sobbed... "Shhh...shhh main hoon..." he just cared her back...slowing patted to let her know that he...no other one...after some time he went to wash room...splashed water on his face...stood there some n back to room...watched... she turned restlessly not finding him around... he immediately lay beside her... she cuddled up hold his hand next to him in her sleep...he patted her back..let her know...he was...there'. even in her sleep not finding him next to her... a tear escaped in her closed eyes...he wiped it...wid his thumb...
After n8...
MW: " Mera chiz to de abb beta...aur kitna cahiye..."
S: " Main Party me ja raha hoon...uss bhi le Jaunga...kal main chala jaunga tab app ko jo karna hai karlena..."
MW: " Are mera beta sudhar gaya...ja enjoy kar..."
He hold her hand..n abt to go...when MW called him...
MW: " Are beta party me ja raha kuch dangka kapra to panlena chahiye na..."
Now he noticed that he n she just were home cloths...he got an idea...
S: " Woh mera cloths yea nehi hai...aur isske pass bhi nehi...jate time woha ki koi mall se kharid lunga...now m getting late...bye..."
They sat in car...
K: "Hum kaha ja rahe hai..."
S: "Pata nehi..."
She could see his tensed face...
K: "App kab tak ayse mujhe bachenge...ajj bhi bahana kar diya..par kal kya...?"
She just tried to hold her tear...he just one person cared her so much...
S: "Ajj ke baad yea sab nehi hoga...yea hume dundh bhi nehi payega..."
K: "App kya bol rahe hoon...aur kya karnewale hoon..."
S: "Tumhe mujhpe bhaosa hai...???"
Looked strength in her eyes...she nodded +vely...
S: "Bus barosa banye rakhho..."
Looked at house...n said
S: "Bye dad...bye forever...god bless that we never meet again..."
n he started car...
Part8
After 3 months from that day...in one evening...
"Maine kaha na padai karo...kaha main bana dunga..."
"App pura din kam karte hai...phir khana bhi banyange...mujhe achha nehi lagta hai.."
" Chup chap pado...kahi padai nehi ki iss liye bahana to nehi dund rahe hoon haan...achha to main ne thik samjha..."
"Nehi...main sari complete ki hai..."
"Ok...miain main khana banake dekhti kitna pada hai..."
"Phir main karti hoon na..."
"Appne app ko dekh hai...khud ko sambhalti nehi...khana banayigi...chupchap bayke pado...Aur dudh bhi pilo..."
"Plzzz..App..nehi Sumit"
"Exam hai...do din baad no plzzz...jao study karo..aur dudh to pina hi padega.tumhare liye aur humare bachhe ke liye jarrori hai...Kumkum jao..."
That was that everyday's usual fight 4 them...n their fandz enjoyed this when they visited then at evening...after 3 months their relation found a new direction...she was more talkative...teases him..enjoy her every single moment... that he liked more...that she found herself...they came this place that very day when day escaped from that house..before that thy he talked his frndz n planned everything well...in this village...at ran place ... they lived like hubby n wiefy...that's why they married in a temple...for saving her...he did anything..he did some work...but change after few days..like a week her worked 4 gas office...next he became worker on a timber company...he had no problem for money..he transferred his all money from his account...wid his frndz help to his new account...like a net...that's because his father couldn't found it...but he didn't want to anyone found out that..his father printed their pics on news paper..n telecasted on TV...but he consulted the sarpunch of that village...so, now they hav no problem abut it...she also made a kitchen garden...n sold the berries which she get from her garden n also made woolen sweater...as she lean them when she was in home...one day he asked her...
S: "Kaha tak padi hoon..."
K: "Ji..."
S: "Mere matlab hai konsi class tak padi hoon..."
K: "Ji...10th tak..."
S: "Kal ready rahna...hum collage ja rahe hai...kya padna...hai soch ke rakhna..."
he admitted her to a open university on Arts..to complete her education..he help her to lean...n check her doctor every week...doctor was his one of frnd..he told her all story abt her pregnancy...but there was a bad news...doctor told that...she must be loss her baby nearly when she about 5-6 mounths...n he told her every thing...few days she became sad but now she recover it...she knew...that she couldn't able to bring it hold...n she did want to make him sad...so, she tried fully...n their frndz...Maan Ranveer Geet & Aditi...they gave them full support..Maan n Sumit stared their new business...also as well Ran joined it...Sumit was MD n Ran n Maan were the joint CEO...but know none except that sarpanch knew abt their real identity...that's 4 he worked...now he 5 mounts..he cared a lot..he buyed almost all types of pickle 4 her..every searched net n read abt pregnancy..he gave her all nececities..she also tied to lreand everything..how to care baby..n all...as they know they couldn't able to save they baby..but they tried full...her health improve a lot...but in this very young age..many times her feet n hands...belly had so much swollen..but he then cared her..put bum..n washed it wid warm water..many time he gave her bath...n through all the abuse...she was too week inside...but he ever did felt her that...
Almost 1 month before he confused abt his feeling towards her...he thought that's sympathy...or guilt that attracts towards her...but slowing her understood that not this..in this time he love her...but he not able to tell her...how could he..he almost 10 elder than her...his dad..did most worse wid her...how he...but he gave her all love n care...as he knew how much se hungry of love as well he...But his frndz secretly told her abt his feeling..n why not he told her...she also loved him..because he was the first very person...who cared her...loved her..tried to make her happy...why she not loved him..yes he was quite older than her...but he did everything just 4 her sake...left his home his place...married her...4 saved her...why don't she loved him...
In this situation...one day she had very bad pain in her stomach...she cried, screamed, yelled helly...but he couldn't do any thing...outside heavily rain...as they lived in a hill area that dangers to go out in rain..he didn't want to put her life in danger..but he couldn't able to see her in this pain...that day...he 1st time did that...he went near to her held her very close to him..n cupped her face in his plum..she tried to not scream but she couldn't control...that time she about to scream to part her lips...n sealed her lips wid his...she just shocked his action..he slowly nibbled her lower lip ... rolled his toung into her mouth..cares every bit of it..but she started kissed him back hungrily..played hers among wid his..encircled her arms around his nape..through very much pain...she felt pleasure...n when she felt badly pain she bit his lips n blood filled his mouth...but he didn't complain..kissed her like there was no tomorrow..wanted to suck out her all pain..wanted to took off her from herself..in this pain she felt going to a new world...he then put his hand on her back to hold her more close to him..none of them able to miss the passion...they also not able to talk anything...but their tongue talked tougher their own language...through the pain tears rolled out from her eyes..he kissed them away...kissed her till then..she felt low pain..n felt some relax..he hold her closed to his heart like he fared to loss her...that's kiss 1st 4 them...that before he didn't look a women...n the gr8 wadhwa never kissed her..only did sex...that's why it was her 1st...she felt like heaven...she rested her head on his chest...n placed her plum on his face...
"I LOVE U SUMIT"...that word she said after the kiss...
K: " Main janti hoon...app bhi mujhe se bohot pyar karte hai...par sayad kisi baat ko lekar parisan hoon iss liye...par main nehi hoon...janti hoon ki main appse bohot pyar karti hoon...aur appne appko nehi roka jata hai...app mere pati hoon...to appko pyar karne haq mujhe pura hai haina..."
he looked at her...how innocently she confessed...
K: "App kuch bol kyu nehi rahe hai...?" she now confussed...
S: " Tum kyase mujhe pyar kar kakte hoon yea jante huyi bhi...woh mere dad..."
she didn't let him complete his sentence..kissed him again to shut him up...
K: "Main kuch nehi janti...woh appke dad hai...iss me appke kya galti..aur...aur achha huya ki woh appke dad...nehi to app mujhe kyase milte...bus appko pyar karna hai...aur kuch nehi chahiye mujhe...app mujhese pyar karte haina...??"
She made him looked into her eyes...pleased through it...he couldn't hide his emotion any more...
S: " Haan..main tumse bohot pyar karta hoon...bohot jayada..khabhi mujhse dur mat jana...plz..."
This time again he kissed her..a full mouth... He groaned as...this time more depended...n wid more position...
S: "Tumhe yea to nehi agena ki tumhe koi budhha mil gaya hai...tumhe pata hai na tumse main kam se kam 10 saal bada hoon..."
K: "Achha hi huya...na...Mujhe ek pati ke sat Baap bhi mil gaya..." she giggled...
S: "Achha to main tumhara baap hoon...??"
K: "Hummm"
He kissed again...n bit her lip...
S: "Baap hoon...??"
Wid the responce of his kiss..
K: "Nehi..."
They just smiled through that kissed..4 their childness...
After this confess they come more closed..his frndz were very happy 4 him...at last he found someone woh loved him...they teases him that he married a minor...if police know it...he get arrested..but all time she answered..she didn't let anything wrong wid him...she will saved him...by the way that was a village this thing happened any village to...nothing to worry...also tease her..kya tujhe budda mila gaya...bla bla...but she loved them also..but always supported him only...he filled her every demand..but he demand from her something...par day 3 kisses...good morn, good n8 & good bye before he went to work...that his only demand...
like every day...he ready for work...n she made his tiffin...before going to work...that the she asked him 4 some money...that she wanted to some sopping 4 cooking...n asked him to drooped her to market...n before got out of house his kissed her hard...she blushed like every time...her turned pink to dark pink ...he liked that very much...they went to market ride by bicycle..now he used it 4 travel...he drooped her market n before went kissed her on her r8 cheek...n said bye...she also said bye...after then she happily shopped...but when she about to went from there n turned...n socked to see the view...
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