Another Cinderella Story S&DF || Ch12/pg55 - Dec 12 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting
do continue
it was amazing
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Originally posted by: sweet cherry

interesting

do continue
it was amazing


thank you :)

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Chapter 2


Saturday at 2:01pm...

Pari was honking her car's horn outside Geet's house,

Geet yells to her step-mom, "I am going to Flea market to buy some groceries."

Naina who so easily believed her, as she have no idea of how to cook food, or even if its time to get more groceries as she has never in her life entered the premises of the kitchen.

Naina: "Be back soon...you have other things to do too."

Too bad, Geet had already picked up her bag and had run out with a big smile on her face.

Breaking in front of the back window on the studio; Pari said, "Dancing is waiting for you princess," and smiles at Geet.

Geet shrugging her shoulders lightly, "Well, I am always ready." Looking towards Pari she says, "Thank you!"

Pari: "No problem...Any thing for my best friend'Now go before everyone starts filling in."

Geet bids her friend, "Bye...and yes I will walk home. So, you don't have to come to pick me up."

Pari asks, "You Sure?"

Geet smiles as if she has never been this sure in her life, "Totally!!!" and saying so she makes her way towards the window throws her bag in and than jumps inside'turning around she ways good bye to Pari.

After about five minutes everyone starts coming in through the main door. Geet was behind those huge mirrors of the studio, form where of course she could see the rehearsal room but no body can see her through the mirrors.

As Maan enters all the girls are just starring at him, while all the guys are whishing why can't they be as dashing as Maan. He smiles his ever so cute smile and then, what else? Everyone is just admiring him. He is looking so dashing and handsome. He is looking so sweet that for a minute even Geet lost her senses.

Maan says breaking everyone's awe bubble, "Okay everyone are you all ready?"

All of them reply at the same time, "Yes!!!!!"

From behind the mirrors Geet says to herself, "Yeah...Dance here I come."

Maan turned his back towards the group and facing the mirrors he said, "Look at your steps in the mirror and don't look anywhere else," emphasizing on the last part.

Everyone nodded and Maan gave a nod to the music player to play the song and says, "Here it goes...5, 6, 7 and 8," and starts with basic steps and gets deep. All of them are paying close attention and following his steps. Behind the mirrors Geet was facing the back of mirrors. So, if the mirrors were not there she would be practically facing Maan. She knows every step perfectly well. They were doing break pop combine modern contemporary.

Maan moved towards the mirrors and so did Geet. They both raised their hands and kept it on the same place. So, yup if the mirror was not there they both might be touching each other and feeling the warmth of each others hand, Geet's soft, delicate hand over Maan's big, rough palm. Geet could surely feel him on the other side, and as if Maan could feel her too he turned his head to the mirror and was looking straight. He kept on starring at his own face in the mirror for a sometime. Then both of them continued on with the dance. They ended the dance smoothly after about 5 minutes. Everyone clapped and cheered at the accomplishment, when suddenly the cell-phone in Geet's bag started ringing... The actual coach of the dance classes said, "What have I said about cell-phones in class."

Geet on the other side, "Shoot!" and slides to her bag and pulls out the phone and receives the call. Maan looks towards the mirror and was sure that some one was there.

Maan said, "Don't worry!" to the coach, "Classes are over," and to group, "You all did a good job," saying so he leaves the hall.

***

Geet and Pari were sitting on Geet's bed. Pari had asked her best friend about the dance classes, thus as always Geet told her everything and after that they started chatting about some other junk. After about 15 minutes...Intercom in Geet's room goes off.

Pari frowned, "Now what does she wants?"

Geet sighs as she pushes the button and says, "Yes..."

Naina: "Come down stairs need to talk with you...Hurry-up! It's important."

Geet replies getting off the bed, "I am on my way." Before opening the door she turns to Pari, gives a faint smile and leaves the room.

Pari comments to herself after Geet leaves, "My poor girl," and makes her way out the other door to her car.

Downstairs in the living room, Naina was engrossed in a talk over the phone. After hanging up the call she turns towards Geet and says, "Listen-up closely."

Geet says in a sarcastic tone, "I am!" But Naina least got the sarcasm; forget getting it she is way far than that. So many people in her life have given her sarcastic comments and she has taken them as seriously as she can.

Naina: "Tomorrow Khurana family is coming for dinner...So you better behave nicely and don't do anything stupid," says stressing on the last word.

Geet rolls her eyes at her step-mom and says, "Yes..." continues in her mind, 'it would be better if you give that comment to yourself because as it happens to be, every time guests come over you are the one making stupidity of yourself.' Well she least knew what the tomorrow night held for her or any one else.

Naina said "You can go now," when she saw Geet still standing over.

Geet coming out of her thoughts, walks away and again starts thinking, 'that was the important thing she wanted to tell' and rolls her eyes at the thought that 'but then again my little step family is crazy why can't they make any small and the least un-important thing important.'

On Sunday afternoon, Pari had come straight to Geet's after her work period as she does on every Sunday. At the moment Pari was lying on Geet's bed and Geet was sitting comfortable on the loveseat in her room with both legs flopped up and crossed over on her bed.

Pari exclaims, "Are you serious...You mean Maan Singh Khurana is coming too?" her exclamation turning in to a rhetorical question.

Geet getting a chip from the packet and munching over it she says, "I am not sure...She just said that Khurana family is coming."

Pari squealed, "Oh mi Gosh! You are so lucky!"

Geet said rolling her eyes for the what seemed to be tenth time in last two hours, "Stop exclaiming and please can we talk about something else that doesn't involve my stupid step family or some famous Khurana's?"

Pari said grinning as widely as she can, "Okay than let's talk about the prom," after all she has been waiting till now to get this particular topic started.

Geet biting her lip, "Talking about the prom...Pari, I am sorry but, I guess I will not be going to the prom."

Pari exclaimed again, seems like around her best friend she can't help it but exclaim more often; "Geet! You have to. This is the Senior Prom...a last prom during our High School Years."

Geet makes a face and says in a matter of fact tone, "Actually sweetie, this is the only one prom we have during High School Years"

Pari agrees, "Exactly...and before we both go to different colleges...I want both of us to go and enjoy till we are together."

Geet sighs, "I know but still, and besides it's on Valentines Day, means everyone will have a date, and on top of all I don't even fit in...It feels so odd and we have to wear those masks."

Pari said in a authentic tone, "Look this is not about if you fit in or not...I have been looking for our dresses since last two weeks...We both are going and that's final."

***

Precape...

Pop star and Cinderella face to face; finally - What an ironic meeting?


Next Part : Chapter 3


I guess that was the next chapter 😉 Hope you guys like it; Press Like/Comment and for PM notifications also press Buddy :)


Edited by Kasurbest - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
thanks for the update!! jeje they felt the presence of each other.Can't wait for the meeting!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -divya-

thanks for the update!! jeje they felt the presence of each other.Can't wait for the meeting!


all my pleasure divya ;)
hahah will upd nxt in abt a day or two..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
part 2
wow this is interesting...
cant wait for the face to face of Maan and Geet...
thanks for the pm and cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Awesomeee Monal for a moment i thoUght geet told HER step mom abt her stupidity seriously it was awesomeee waiting for price charming n cindrella'S meeTing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful update
love maaneet feeling each other
presence
love it
cont soon
precap sounds good
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Simply awesome...
Arghh i hate Geet's family...

Wow...their first meeting...

Updt soon.

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update. loved it sooo much. pari is really nice friend geet have. hopefully geet gets what she wishes😉😉😆😆😆😆

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