Maaneet SS ~ Teri Yaaden ~ PT 14 PG 95 - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it awesome part
hmm so both in love
whats mystry is behind
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum upd dear
do make more
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏awesome update👏
loved it😊
maan remembered geet⭐️
but when will geet remember
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update! Jst loved it. Wow they are in love 4rm childhood n they even talked abt their marriage. What will be geet's reaction when she recognise her childhood love? Xtied 4 precap n take care of ur health
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful story.
Plz add me into ur pM 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ajenn

Wonderful story.

Plz add me into ur pM 😊



thanks a lot..
added u..
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update Mahima...

so Maan knows who Geet is and that she is his childhood sweetheart...

great going...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi guys.. me really sorry for a late update.. actually some function was going on there in my home.. so just thats why.. I'll pakka try to update more regularly..
Thanks for all ur love & support..
It really motivates me a lot..

love u all..
Mahima

-PART 8-



He immediately got up. After few mins he realized it was just a dream. He laughed at his plight. And then dozzed off again.. in her dreams.. even he didn't knew when..

HANDA HAVELI
Geet quickly got dressed up & rushed to have her breakfast. She avoided doing any conversation because she knew if she would start talking, she would definately get late. She munched her breakfast in a hurry.
Mohinder- Geet beta kha tho aaram se le..
Brij- Haan geet agar tu insanon jaisi harkatein karegi tho tera kuch bigad nahi jayega..
Dad.. mama.. dekho na veerji ko..
Rano- Bilkul sahi keh raha hai wo.. tu dhang se breakfast kyun nahi kar rahi hai..
She finsihed her last bite & took her bag' Ok mama.. mai jaa rahi hun
Rano- Arre geet baat tho sun..
She quickly made her way out' mama aapki baatein baad me I'm getting late

KHURANA MANSION
Maan got up looking restless. Just then dadimaa entered his room' Maan bete kya baat hai..
Dadimaa woh gee.. he suddenly paused.. wohh.. nahi dadimaa kuch nahi..
Dadimaa- Bete aap hame bata sakte hain.. plz batayiye naa
Dadimaa woh.. geet.. geet.. dadimaa woh meri geet hai.. haina.. a tear escaped his eye
She looked at him in surprise.. awe' Bete aapko yaad hain geet..
dadimaa how can I forget her.. mai apni geet ko bhala kaise bhul sakta hun.. haan use mai yaad nahi par mujhe woh yaad hai dadimaa..
Dadimaa- Maan par aapko shayad yeh nahi dhyan ki patiyala me kya hua tha.. ham delhi me kyun shift hue the.. aur usi dauran aapke ma papa.. She couldn't complete.. a tear escaped her eyes..
Dadimaa.. mujhe yeh tho nahi pata ki kya hua tha par main woh janna bhi nahi chahta.. jis karanm maine apne ma papa ko khoya mai woh nahi janna chahata dadimaa..
Dadimaa cupped his face' Nahi maan aisa mat kahiye.. woh tho ek mehaj accident tha.. she turned her back to him.. par haan hamare delhi shift hone ka karan.. woh bahut bada tha bete.. She again turned back & cupped his face.. aur bete apne zehan me aisa khayal bhi aane den ki us kaaran se aapke ma papa is duniya me nahi rahe..
Dadimaa ab aap yeh baatein chodo.. mujhe college ke liye late ho raha hai.. mai jayun..
Dadimaa wiped both his & her tears' hmm

He reached his class just in the nick of time. Her gaze went on him until he finally sat on his seat.. behind her. She wanted to turn back.. once look at him.. but she stopped herself. Her heart was beating with loud thudding sounds. She felt as if it will just come out. She already felt so hollow. She had to see him. Butterflies were running in her stomach. She immidiately turned back to see parul sitting there. She felt her heartbeats rising even more. She almost shouted at parul' tu yahan kyun bethi hai.. then realized & lowered her voice.. I mean yeh teri seat nahi hai naa.. phir tu kaise yahan..
Parul- Shant geet.. arre ham koi school me hain kya jo ek hi seat pe baithen.. tu bhi na..
She twisted her lips & turned back.



Maan thanked parul from the back.. she whispered' anytime yaar
Maan smiled seeing his geet.. the way she shouted at parul.. the way she was restless to once see him.. her cute sa gussa.. Oh god.. he almost fell for his jaan all over again..
Abhi bhi gussa karne ki aadat nahi gayi.. abhi bhi.. without even knowing I'm HER maan.. she loves me.. but kaun us budhu ko yeh baat samjhayega.. he wondered.

She ran from the class as soon as she collected some papers from parul. parul asked her tu itni jaldi me kyun hai.. but she just made some silly excuse. Ab kaun parul ko samjhata ki geet tho apni jaan ko dekhne ke liye mare jaa rahi hai..

As she descended the last stair.. & was about to enter the corridor, she fell on his broad chest. All her papers flew away.. He catched her.. his strong arms resting on her waist. He was lost in her.. how he wanted to feel her.. touch her.. kiss her.. but just whispered' geet..



She felt a weird sensation inside her as he took her name. She broke the eye lock & straightened herself. But her foot again slipped & she fell on him making him fall on the ground. Her hand rested on his chest & his hand travelled to her back. He pulled her closer to him & went close to her ear. His hot breath fanned on her bare skin making her shiver. He whispered lovingly in her ears' kyun baar baar mujhse takrati ho tum.. hmm..



She couldn't get anything.. she was so lost in him. She almost forgot how to breathe.. her heart thudded like anything..
Tum saans le sakti ho.. he whispered in a husky tone..
She realized & tried to get up but again fell on him, this time hurting her foot. She screamed because of the pain. He made her stand & then carried her in his lap.
Yeh aap..
He closed her mouth' shh.. chup bilkul chup
He made her sit in the car & drove to KM.. all the while she looked at him with thousand questions in her heart..

He carried her to his room & made her sit on the bed. He applied medicine on her ankle. His touch made her shiver badly. She felt as if her heart will come out any moment..
Just then dadimaa came' Geet aap yahan.. kya hua aapko.. maan.. kya hua inhe..
Kuch nahi dadimaa wo bas geet gir gayi..
dadimaa- par kaise..
Maan controlled his laughter' dadimaa woh aap janna nahi chahengi..
Geet looked at him angrily.. still unsure of whatever just happened.

PRECAP
Geet angry at maan

Ok was it short guys..
If so.. me really sorry..
I'm really busy..
Plz forgive me guys.. me really really sorry..
But plz give me my likes & comments.. plz plz
Love u lots..
Mahima

Edited by mahimak - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
short but sweet update
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa

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